Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards) I could hear the mournful tones of a cracked bell ringing. Very evocative...
  November 20th, 2017 03:45
• A BEAUTIFUL FRIENDSHIP (Louis Gibbs) This is quite exquisite. Goes into my fav\'s.
  November 20th, 2017 03:36
• THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards) This is a sneaky trick..... publishing three masterpieces in one...
  November 19th, 2017 13:39
• Sleeping Shadows (FredPeyer) You are so right, your words can conjure up allsorts of images and in my...
  November 19th, 2017 13:37
• Fervour. (Fay Slimm.) Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray...
  November 19th, 2017 13:29
• Wonder (Edthepoet) Superb writing again Ed. In a case like you describe you\'d better say...
  November 19th, 2017 13:17
• Love Can\'t Buy Me Money (Seek) You\'ve got this dubject covered from all angles sir! Erm.. does money...
  November 18th, 2017 18:12
• Sunshine Streets Of Gold (Edthepoet) Yes, we\'re all held back by our upbringing, background and the words of...
  November 18th, 2017 18:09
• Salvator Mundi. (Goldfinch60) You think thats bad?? I paid over a hundred grand for a dirty painted...
  November 18th, 2017 18:03
• Cut three times and still too short (FredPeyer) Alternatively, making the same mistake three or more times and realising...
  November 18th, 2017 18:00
• More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit (Poetic Dan) So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my
  November 18th, 2017 17:54
• The Inventor (FredPeyer) This is great! It reads like something i put myself through recently.... ...
  November 16th, 2017 19:46
• Praying For Grandfather (Frank Prem) Your theatrical poetry at its best again.
  November 16th, 2017 19:43
• IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards) I remember that butter being patted and cut with a wire for my mum....
  November 16th, 2017 19:41
• In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60) Claude Debussy is one of my favourites in the classical genre and this a...
  November 16th, 2017 19:33
• Writer\'s Block (Christina8) Writers block as it is known is a contrivence. When a writer has something...
  November 12th, 2017 21:54
• Herosim (Goldfinch60) Let not a man be judged by the wealth he has amassed troughout his life...
  November 12th, 2017 21:51
• Shadow (FredPeyer) Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten...
  November 12th, 2017 21:46
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) Oh the joys of home wine making, the pleasures, and disappointments too...
  November 12th, 2017 15:39
• Cracked Window (WL Schuett) No matter what you write the reader sees it their way. I love the way you...
  November 10th, 2017 20:59
• THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs) Ho-ho right on brother! Boy do I love this. Less is more and this is so...
  November 10th, 2017 17:31
• 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne) You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh...
  November 10th, 2017 17:25
• Not Your Type Of Perfect (Broken_kingdom) Beauty is only skin deep -a hackneyed old phrase. But within lies the...
  November 10th, 2017 17:19
• singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem) As a natural born singer / songwriter and ex frontman i am always singing....
  November 10th, 2017 13:11
• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our...
  November 10th, 2017 13:05
• my place in nothing (Frank Prem) if the beauty and wonderment is not for me then for whom??? for i cannot...
  November 10th, 2017 08:42
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words. So...
  November 10th, 2017 08:04
• My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60) Quite beautiful, and from your heart, you\'re a lucky man.
  November 10th, 2017 07:51
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) Your ability to find words which reach into our very soul and tingle the...
  November 6th, 2017 18:36
• Pain (BeeGee) You\'ve really conveyed the sadness, pain and loss here. I felt it and...
  November 5th, 2017 12:18
• Death Of A Warbler (W c) If only all gods little creatures had similar feelings for all other of...
  November 5th, 2017 12:07
• Let it Sink (A__pott) I love this... and it\'s so clever. Makes me smile each time i read it. A...
  November 5th, 2017 12:02
• FUCK YOU (Olivergreenwood19) Good unpretentious writing.. no waffle, succinct. Gutsy.
  November 5th, 2017 12:00
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) oh my god..... so true. one of lifes great mysteries, love and what...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:13
• Body Clock. (Goldfinch60) Timeless ! simply timeless... or... hang on, do i mean less time?...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:10
• Still House (FredPeyer) Superb opening line. At such times you can almost wear that silence like a...
  October 10th, 2017 11:47
• Perception. (Goldfinch60) What an aura we create through self knowledge...... but people need to...
  October 10th, 2017 11:34
• God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60) Yep, his sense of humour is wicked! Once you learn to accept what...
  October 9th, 2017 20:12
• perfect time (Frank Prem) Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are...
  October 7th, 2017 00:44
• What Could Be....... (MaddieJ) Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness,...
  October 7th, 2017 00:37
• Now (Its Raskolnikov) Great expression of those risks we know we are taking when our hearts are...
  October 7th, 2017 00:19
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a...
  October 7th, 2017 00:04
• The Honey Moon Phase (Adrianna Kjeld) Nice writing. Lovely sentiment here, long may it last for you both.
  October 7th, 2017 00:01
• PTSD (Christina8) Thank you for bringing this lesser understood area of ptsd into the light....
  October 6th, 2017 18:49
• The Ten (H.cole23) Nice writing. Don\'t underestimate yourself. Fly !
  October 6th, 2017 18:38
• Chains (FredPeyer) When those chains are heavy and youve dragged them around through your...
  October 6th, 2017 17:06
• The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60) Your amazing ability to reach out and touch your reader is astounding. Ive...
  October 6th, 2017 16:59
• sweeping (Frank Prem) Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey...
  October 6th, 2017 16:41
• Sometimes. (RickyMcG) Winning? Sometimes we need to win. But losing teaches us more and with...
  October 6th, 2017 16:35
• So strong most dont see (Joseph M Marion) Nice words to compliment a wonderful subject. Yes they\'re amazing aren\'t...
  October 6th, 2017 16:16
• Blue eyes (Malubotelho) Look into my eyes sweet lady.
  October 6th, 2017 15:25
• These Days. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. into my favourites
  October 6th, 2017 04:07
• A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho) We seek comfort in closeness and harmony with a friendly soul when our...
  September 28th, 2017 18:33
• Something a lot like love (Edthepoet) Oh absolutely superb writing! Could nave been written for me. Goes into my...
  September 28th, 2017 18:30
• FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards) i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt...
  September 28th, 2017 18:27
• Calliope. (Goldfinch60) Is this the lady who gave you first the confidence to write and then the...
  September 28th, 2017 18:05
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of...
  September 28th, 2017 17:57
• Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) i love this Fred. i feel exactly the way you describe we should be...
  September 28th, 2017 17:42
• The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) Such a lovely idea to compare a marriage to a lifetimes journey on a...
  September 26th, 2017 06:46
• Seeing (FredPeyer) The poet in us all here looks, perceives things in all manner of differing...
  September 25th, 2017 18:19
• NEVER (Lasergraph) This is so sad Lasergraph. Makes me think of a person who is so special to...
  September 25th, 2017 18:10
• Life is rhythm (Malubotelho) I printed it off and put it under my pillow. Now when that alarm...
  September 25th, 2017 18:04
• What a wonderful time (Renzi) All the time she spenz on hols with her frenz you gotta make...
  September 25th, 2017 17:55
• Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
  September 25th, 2017 17:50
• Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60) You do realise you\'re absent mindedly eating biscuits while its still...
  September 25th, 2017 17:46
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.
  September 25th, 2017 17:40
• Two Smiles (FredPeyer) Let me greet you with a smile as i pass along the way. For the smile is...
  September 24th, 2017 17:43
• From the unknown (Poetic Dan) Creating a good musical sound is a great gift and shouldnt be kept hidden...
  September 24th, 2017 17:37
• Fall From Grace (Christina8) Thats beautiful. Becoming totally smitten.... everything going...
  September 24th, 2017 17:25
• He played as a monster (Malubotelho) I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and...
  September 24th, 2017 17:19
• The Becoming (Noah) Youre scarey u know that? Nice writing.
  September 24th, 2017 16:56
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Amen. Lovely words. Spread a little love around.
  September 24th, 2017 16:47
• Mind Games (FredPeyer) Oh so true.... but when we do are we blinkered?... aha.... ...
  September 24th, 2017 04:29
• Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) Oh fay... sheer delight in reading your piece today. You\'ve done it yet...
  September 24th, 2017 03:31
• DORCAS (Michael Edwards) Village life has so much to offer if you join in rather than just live to...
  September 24th, 2017 03:00
• El Bandito (Edthepoet) And if i ever have a son i\'m gonna name him Sue Yours is a great tale...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:57
• No More.. (Fay Slimm.) And today we see two nations leaders posturing... ready to commit young...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:48
• I Got Wood (G84) May you two enjoy many hours of good plucking G84. A nice little...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:15
• About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho) Beautifully and openly worded Malu. Surprises me how awful some peoples...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:09
• The Man at the Door. (Goldfinch60) A lady phones me up and makes an arrangement for me to call at a specific...
  September 23rd, 2017 08:06
• FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards) Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love...
  September 23rd, 2017 07:55
• Smoke and Mirrors (Edthepoet) Daft isn\'t it...you meet someone who amazes you in the way you feel about...
  September 22nd, 2017 17:36
• THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph) LOL lasergraph... u want old?, boy have we got old ! ....... come...
  September 22nd, 2017 17:29
• Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho) And you are a wonderful warm and loving person because of your gallery...
  September 22nd, 2017 16:03
• Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60) Oh the blinkers of our own limited reality. Each day we set a mood for...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:48
• Missing You (FredPeyer) An imagined tragedy in the midst of a flaming love. Really the stuff of...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:41
• Green. (Wallace) When i was a boy my parents moved me around the country, new school, new...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:36
• FAIR WARNING (Louis Gibbs) Who let that pussycat in here? Everything must change, tis one of the laws...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:31
• () NOW you\'ve done it! I\'m blushing.
  September 22nd, 2017 15:26
• RING RING (Michael Edwards) There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:23
• Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.) Whatever heaven means to the individual. Some seems to want to claim their...
  September 21st, 2017 17:16
• Pondering the Question (Noah) Do we con ourselves into believing we know the answers? The more you think...
  September 21st, 2017 17:13
• The End. (Wallace) All is dark! And you leave your reade hanging in suspense..... wanting...
  September 21st, 2017 17:10
• Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy) You turned this around nicely and quite surprised me. This is a hero gets...
  September 21st, 2017 17:07
• For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho) Yes Malubotelho, love is everything and is the acceptance of everything,...
  September 21st, 2017 16:48
• Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60) Quote \"mmm mmm another fine mess you\'ve gotten me into orchi\" ...
  September 21st, 2017 15:22
• The Door (FredPeyer) Yes we continually move e away from the comfortable room to the next but...
  September 21st, 2017 15:14
• A day (Myself and me) How does she feel about it? or would she rather bring someone else...
  September 20th, 2017 19:48
• A Poem For All (Christina8) Wherever beauty leaps out fro my screen i will give thanks and praise in...
  September 20th, 2017 18:17
• Inner debate (Malubotelho) oooh such pain and anguish ! where is the love ? love doesn\'t dance...
  September 20th, 2017 18:12