Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• PTSD (Christina8) Thank you for bringing this lesser understood area of ptsd into the light....
  October 6th, 2017 18:49
• The Ten (H.cole23) Nice writing. Don\'t underestimate yourself. Fly !
  October 6th, 2017 18:38
• Chains (FredPeyer) When those chains are heavy and youve dragged them around through your...
  October 6th, 2017 17:06
• The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60) Your amazing ability to reach out and touch your reader is astounding. Ive...
  October 6th, 2017 16:59
• sweeping (Frank Prem) Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey...
  October 6th, 2017 16:41
• Sometimes. (RickyMcG) Winning? Sometimes we need to win. But losing teaches us more and with...
  October 6th, 2017 16:35
• So strong most dont see (Joseph M Marion) Nice words to compliment a wonderful subject. Yes they\'re amazing aren\'t...
  October 6th, 2017 16:16
• Blue eyes (Malubotelho) Look into my eyes sweet lady.
  October 6th, 2017 15:25
• These Days. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. into my favourites
  October 6th, 2017 04:07
• A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho) We seek comfort in closeness and harmony with a friendly soul when our...
  September 28th, 2017 18:33
• Something a lot like love (Edthepoet) Oh absolutely superb writing! Could nave been written for me. Goes into my...
  September 28th, 2017 18:30
• FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards) i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt...
  September 28th, 2017 18:27
• Calliope. (Goldfinch60) Is this the lady who gave you first the confidence to write and then the...
  September 28th, 2017 18:05
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of...
  September 28th, 2017 17:57
• Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) i love this Fred. i feel exactly the way you describe we should be...
  September 28th, 2017 17:42
• The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) Such a lovely idea to compare a marriage to a lifetimes journey on a...
  September 26th, 2017 06:46
• Seeing (FredPeyer) The poet in us all here looks, perceives things in all manner of differing...
  September 25th, 2017 18:19
• NEVER (Lasergraph) This is so sad Lasergraph. Makes me think of a person who is so special to...
  September 25th, 2017 18:10
• Life is rhythm (Malubotelho) I printed it off and put it under my pillow. Now when that alarm...
  September 25th, 2017 18:04
• What a wonderful time (Renzi) All the time she spenz on hols with her frenz you gotta make...
  September 25th, 2017 17:55
• Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful and really moving. Into my favourites.
  September 25th, 2017 17:50
• Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60) You do realise you\'re absent mindedly eating biscuits while its still...
  September 25th, 2017 17:46
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Bootiful sir! I only wish my dreams were so placid.
  September 25th, 2017 17:40
• Two Smiles (FredPeyer) Let me greet you with a smile as i pass along the way. For the smile is...
  September 24th, 2017 17:43
• From the unknown (Poetic Dan) Creating a good musical sound is a great gift and shouldnt be kept hidden...
  September 24th, 2017 17:37
• Fall From Grace (Christina8) Thats beautiful. Becoming totally smitten.... everything going...
  September 24th, 2017 17:25
• He played as a monster (Malubotelho) I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and...
  September 24th, 2017 17:19
• The Becoming (Noah) Youre scarey u know that? Nice writing.
  September 24th, 2017 16:56
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Amen. Lovely words. Spread a little love around.
  September 24th, 2017 16:47
• Mind Games (FredPeyer) Oh so true.... but when we do are we blinkered?... aha.... ...
  September 24th, 2017 04:29
• Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) Oh fay... sheer delight in reading your piece today. You\'ve done it yet...
  September 24th, 2017 03:31
• DORCAS (Michael Edwards) Village life has so much to offer if you join in rather than just live to...
  September 24th, 2017 03:00
• El Bandito (Edthepoet) And if i ever have a son i\'m gonna name him Sue Yours is a great tale...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:57
• No More.. (Fay Slimm.) And today we see two nations leaders posturing... ready to commit young...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:48
• I Got Wood (G84) May you two enjoy many hours of good plucking G84. A nice little...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:15
• About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho) Beautifully and openly worded Malu. Surprises me how awful some peoples...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:09
• The Man at the Door. (Goldfinch60) A lady phones me up and makes an arrangement for me to call at a specific...
  September 23rd, 2017 08:06
• FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards) Cor! So sweet and charming. Wasn\'t like that for me in the first love...
  September 23rd, 2017 07:55
• Smoke and Mirrors (Edthepoet) Daft isn\'t it...you meet someone who amazes you in the way you feel about...
  September 22nd, 2017 17:36
• THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph) LOL lasergraph... u want old?, boy have we got old ! ....... come...
  September 22nd, 2017 17:29
• Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho) And you are a wonderful warm and loving person because of your gallery...
  September 22nd, 2017 16:03
• Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60) Oh the blinkers of our own limited reality. Each day we set a mood for...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:48
• Missing You (FredPeyer) An imagined tragedy in the midst of a flaming love. Really the stuff of...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:41
• Green. (Wallace) When i was a boy my parents moved me around the country, new school, new...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:36
• FAIR WARNING (Louis Gibbs) Who let that pussycat in here? Everything must change, tis one of the laws...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:31
• () NOW you\'ve done it! I\'m blushing.
  September 22nd, 2017 15:26
• RING RING (Michael Edwards) There\'s a hole in the bucket dear Lisah dear Lisah, There\'s a hole in...
  September 22nd, 2017 15:23
• Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.) Whatever heaven means to the individual. Some seems to want to claim their...
  September 21st, 2017 17:16
• Pondering the Question (Noah) Do we con ourselves into believing we know the answers? The more you think...
  September 21st, 2017 17:13
• The End. (Wallace) All is dark! And you leave your reade hanging in suspense..... wanting...
  September 21st, 2017 17:10
• Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy) You turned this around nicely and quite surprised me. This is a hero gets...
  September 21st, 2017 17:07
• For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho) Yes Malubotelho, love is everything and is the acceptance of everything,...
  September 21st, 2017 16:48
• Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60) Quote \"mmm mmm another fine mess you\'ve gotten me into orchi\" ...
  September 21st, 2017 15:22
• The Door (FredPeyer) Yes we continually move e away from the comfortable room to the next but...
  September 21st, 2017 15:14
• A day (Myself and me) How does she feel about it? or would she rather bring someone else...
  September 20th, 2017 19:48
• A Poem For All (Christina8) Wherever beauty leaps out fro my screen i will give thanks and praise in...
  September 20th, 2017 18:17
• Inner debate (Malubotelho) oooh such pain and anguish ! where is the love ? love doesn\'t dance...
  September 20th, 2017 18:12
• Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.) You allowed me to recall the morning i was out looking for mushrooms and...
  September 20th, 2017 17:41
• Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60) Ha ha ha your wit doesn\'t need sharpening does it!
  September 20th, 2017 15:44
• Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer) Great writing Fred in both your literary style and of course content....
  September 20th, 2017 15:35
• You May Say I\'m A Dreamer (Edthepoet) < the crowd raised Ed onto their shoulders amidst rapturous applause and...
  September 19th, 2017 21:52
• I Am Free (Christina8) Sc many times i am caught out by somethig which was said or happened in my...
  September 19th, 2017 19:37
• Always know just enough (Poetic Dan) Older Ladies of grace. I now that serenity of which you speak. Nostalgic...
  September 19th, 2017 19:16
• Monstichs by Fred (inspired by Michael Edwards) (FredPeyer) Each one a thriller waiting to be written..... so many plots... so...
  September 19th, 2017 19:11
• Stalled. (Fay Slimm.) Yes indeed for all is ready for the roaring fire of passionate love..... ...
  September 19th, 2017 19:08
• Void of Life (Mugsdaddy) Lived like that for ten years till May this year when i took my size 11...
  September 19th, 2017 18:40
• Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60) Though a rainbow has no end Goldfinch, I think you found the fabled...
  September 19th, 2017 18:06
• Money Grabber. (Wallace) Ha ha ha.... did the young lady teach you anything? Great story i loved...
  September 19th, 2017 18:01
• THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Reminded me of the man who ran up expenses of $2 million digging up old...
  September 19th, 2017 17:59
• Yesterday (Myself and me) Great piece of writing. Made me think back to younger days and ponder upon...
  September 18th, 2017 20:33
• THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph) Here in UK there are still a few of the really old windmills which still...
  September 18th, 2017 17:20
• Love for love (Malubotelho) Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on ...
  September 18th, 2017 16:45
• The Gambler (FredPeyer) sings:- i used to be a big shot long time ago had a cadillac and whole...
  September 18th, 2017 16:38
• Brian (Nicki Jackson) Wot no text message yet.... hmmm i\'m worrying now..... do you...
  September 18th, 2017 16:15
• Spain (Renzi) Wear ya smile Lose that frown The place is kikkin Renzi\'s in...
  September 18th, 2017 16:13
• Shine A Light (Edthepoet) Sometimes it just cuts through all the crap we build around ourselves. The...
  September 18th, 2017 15:57
• Mortal Hellfire (Noah) In my mind i had you writing this as if you were a tomato on a plate of...
  September 18th, 2017 13:12
• Thinnest Divide. (Fay Slimm.) Go on Fay... dive in... you know you want to! Swim with those...
  September 18th, 2017 13:07
• Followed in the Night. (Goldfinch60) Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you?...
  September 18th, 2017 12:44
• SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) A plot in every one of them.... oh ye of multi talents.... only 24...
  September 18th, 2017 06:55
• DayDreaming ❤ (Karla) Just read your poem and time on my watch is 2.12 am here in UK - good...
  September 17th, 2017 20:14
• Brian (Nicki Jackson) This is magical writing before my eyes. You see i am in my sixties and...
  September 17th, 2017 20:10
• Without You (Ron parrish aka wordman) Beautiful words of love for someone special. Will she see them, will she...
  September 17th, 2017 20:03
• I Wish I Could (Mugsdaddy) Thats when it really hurts isn\'t it. All the love you feel, the one-ness,...
  September 17th, 2017 19:57
• Moment (Myself and me) Wow yes soooo true. This is quite a deep subject for not only does it...
  September 17th, 2017 19:41
• Life of love (Poetic Dan) Great poem, and wicked pic. Reading all comments before i make mine i say...
  September 17th, 2017 17:14
• Why? (FredPeyer) Do you really want a diaper already Fred? Is there something you\'re not...
  September 17th, 2017 16:38
• Singing. (Goldfinch60) I share your taste in shirts. Actually we do have quite a bit in common....
  September 17th, 2017 16:34
• MORE THAN. (Fay Slimm.) WOW Fay that is tremendous! Held me breathless as i read it thru (cept i...
  September 17th, 2017 16:29
• Electric Blue. (Wallace) Sad loss shouts out from your words. Well written piece of loss grief. If...
  September 17th, 2017 16:05
• Space (Kailie Jackson) How unimportant do you want to be??? Man goes to opticians, optician...
  September 17th, 2017 12:10
• Make Us Laugh (W c) Yes i agree.... i know i\'m already doing my bit. Good to read.
  September 17th, 2017 12:06
• LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I used to visit the Gower every month of the year, a favourite area with...
  September 17th, 2017 11:28
• Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan) To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved...
  September 16th, 2017 21:34
• One (Arazimus) Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to...
  September 16th, 2017 11:02
• Humanities Redemption (John Prophet) The answer is of course \'yes\'. Provokative writing there. Please comment...
  September 16th, 2017 10:53
• The first time (Pr3ttyshad0ws) LOL i really enjoyed your first time you poetic minx. You are a fine...
  September 16th, 2017 06:36
• Slave (FredPeyer) All too easily the ladies forget that inside every gentleman is the lusty...
  September 16th, 2017 06:28
• Winter (G84) Winter is my time too, but here in UK it would have been nice to have had...
  September 16th, 2017 06:14
• Buzzard (Noah) \"Stuck like blood on the sheet\" and \"Keep them all from loving...
  September 16th, 2017 06:11