Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Discontent (Dusk arising)
Thank you Hood. High praise from a respected songwriter/poet.
I think...
January 28th, 2018 09:44 - Discontent (Dusk arising)
Ha ha ha does god get re-elected? Puzzles me how you could read a God...
January 28th, 2018 06:54 - Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to you my friend. I think you show us here the torture...
January 28th, 2018 06:10 - ON NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
Look, just push the hills out of view and place a block of flats there...
January 28th, 2018 05:56 - Look at the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
Great sentiment. Uplifting.
January 27th, 2018 15:25 - THE KNOWING. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed, to experience a truth beyond all we are taught or hope for...
January 27th, 2018 15:21 - I Am Here. (Goldfinch60)
I knew you were in there somewhere! Dare i begin to think your...
January 23rd, 2018 05:44 - Unending Light? (Goldfinch60)
Inner light ... is it the strength held in our knowledge/belief in...
January 21st, 2018 05:52 - Paradise Party (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchidee. I\'m not a christian believer but i think your words...
January 21st, 2018 05:39 - When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne)
Truly beautifully put together. Words which echo within us all, calling to...
January 21st, 2018 05:33 - \"Where Are My Glasses?\" (Goldfinch60)
i have a habit of pushing my reading specs up above my forehead which of...
January 19th, 2018 19:51 - Visions of Hope. (Goldfinch60)
Hope and positivity go hand in hand i feel. Luckily they both hold my hand...
January 15th, 2018 04:48 - Be Your Best... (W c)
Your writing actually gave me a positive boost just when i needed it....
January 11th, 2018 18:25 - THE BEAST (Louis Gibbs)
I know this beast well from many inner conversations and failures. Your...
January 11th, 2018 18:23 - Cook (Tony36)
If its sizzling and hot i\'ll eat it..... any chance of seconds?
Whats...
January 9th, 2018 17:01 - Monster (Olivergreenwood19)
Yep, the world doesnt look too kindly on monsters does it? Adolf Hitler,...
January 9th, 2018 16:55 - Beyond Ahead. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Somewhere, over the rainbow, skies are blue and the dreams, that you...
January 9th, 2018 16:46 - The Moon - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for reminding me you are a loony. It doesn\'t show. Fortunately for...
January 9th, 2018 16:31 - IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards)
Pure joy to read. Less is more and there is soooo much more here.
January 9th, 2018 15:52 - The mess of words from depression (Elliemarie)
Very strong emotive writing. Difficult to read without becoming...
January 9th, 2018 14:06 - Double Doors (FredPeyer)
Inner strength, determination and self worth. Great strong positive and...
January 9th, 2018 14:01 - GROWING OLD - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
His brow was moderately wrinkled
as he sat in the cold and he...
January 8th, 2018 21:41 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
Amazes me too, positively. When i get chance to look at MPS these...
January 8th, 2018 21:35 - \"PASSIONATELY\" (Andrew Guzaldo)
hmmm.... your words left me thinking of that wonderful feeling of...
January 8th, 2018 20:58 - games (Shadowbox15)
erm..... i\'m 65. after a while you really get fed up with those...
January 8th, 2018 20:55 - Bullish Dreams (Its Raskolnikov)
Lovely thoughts which most of us poets have tried to express at one time...
January 8th, 2018 20:53 - Accents (Niallprideaux)
Language, pronunciaton and grammar are a thing we are taught. Taught to...
January 8th, 2018 20:49 - Life (Willow_Wander)
Life is like a well thumbed book you left on the shelf long ago, one day...
January 8th, 2018 20:44 - Worst enemy (Renzi)
Hello Renz old pal. Sad to read your hurt here. Being moved to write for...
January 8th, 2018 19:15 - The Chapel Of You (Edthepoet)
Ed truly an amazing write. love the use of hijack my mind and chapel of...
December 20th, 2017 18:35 - I can’t sleep alone (Theglassman)
great examle of \'less is more\' - gives the reader their own canvas on...
December 20th, 2017 18:29 - A Shadow Of The Sunrise (Edthepoet)
lovely words on which to dwell and wonder. i conjure up a story of...
December 13th, 2017 19:00 - writing in the moon (Frank Prem)
Stunning dramatic writing again. i read this aloud to my partner at first...
December 10th, 2017 12:08 - District Line – The Acton Town to Upminster Connection (FineB)
Memories of early 70\'s travelling on the district line to wimbledon, the...
November 21st, 2017 17:50 - Chemical Reaction (Whisky Vandal)
Yep dopamine wins the day. A naturally produced chemical messenger in our...
November 20th, 2017 17:32 - Blind me so (Melchman50)
Dont get too blind, you might miss some important signals. Nice writing
November 20th, 2017 17:22 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes you\'re right, they are awesome structures. I haven\'t seen any for...
November 20th, 2017 04:11 - A New Ending. (Goldfinch60)
So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays...
November 20th, 2017 03:49 - ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards)
I could hear the mournful tones of a cracked bell ringing. Very evocative...
November 20th, 2017 03:45 - A BEAUTIFUL FRIENDSHIP (Louis Gibbs)
This is quite exquisite. Goes into my fav\'s.
November 20th, 2017 03:36 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
This is a sneaky trick..... publishing three masterpieces in one...
November 19th, 2017 13:39 - Sleeping Shadows (FredPeyer)
You are so right, your words can conjure up allsorts of images and in my...
November 19th, 2017 13:37 - Fervour. (Fay Slimm.)
Yeay tho i didst first see etchings of my forebears which didst portray...
November 19th, 2017 13:29 - Wonder (Edthepoet)
Superb writing again Ed. In a case like you describe you\'d better say...
November 19th, 2017 13:17 - Love Can\'t Buy Me Money (Seek)
You\'ve got this dubject covered from all angles sir! Erm.. does money...
November 18th, 2017 18:12 - Sunshine Streets Of Gold (Edthepoet)
Yes, we\'re all held back by our upbringing, background and the words of...
November 18th, 2017 18:09 - Salvator Mundi. (Goldfinch60)
You think thats bad?? I paid over a hundred grand for a dirty painted...
November 18th, 2017 18:03 - Cut three times and still too short (FredPeyer)
Alternatively, making the same mistake three or more times and realising...
November 18th, 2017 18:00 - More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit (Poetic Dan)
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my
November 18th, 2017 17:54 - The Inventor (FredPeyer)
This is great! It reads like something i put myself through recently.... ...
November 16th, 2017 19:46 - Praying For Grandfather (Frank Prem)
Your theatrical poetry at its best again.
November 16th, 2017 19:43 - IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards)
I remember that butter being patted and cut with a wire for my mum....
November 16th, 2017 19:41 - In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
Claude Debussy is one of my favourites in the classical genre and this a...
November 16th, 2017 19:33 - Writer\'s Block (Christina8)
Writers block as it is known is a contrivence. When a writer has something...
November 12th, 2017 21:54 - Herosim (Goldfinch60)
Let not a man be judged by the wealth he has amassed troughout his life...
November 12th, 2017 21:51 - Shadow (FredPeyer)
Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten...
November 12th, 2017 21:46 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh the joys of home wine making, the pleasures, and disappointments too...
November 12th, 2017 15:39 - Cracked Window (WL Schuett)
No matter what you write the reader sees it their way. I love the way you...
November 10th, 2017 20:59 - THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs)
Ho-ho right on brother! Boy do I love this. Less is more and this is so...
November 10th, 2017 17:31 - 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne)
You\'ll always fly higher without a parachute. The parachute will weigh...
November 10th, 2017 17:25 - Not Your Type Of Perfect (Broken_kingdom)
Beauty is only skin deep -a hackneyed old phrase. But within lies the...
November 10th, 2017 17:19 - singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem)
As a natural born singer / songwriter and ex frontman i am always singing....
November 10th, 2017 13:11 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
Forever chanting to her tidal cadence she draws us to the shoreline of our...
November 10th, 2017 13:05 - my place in nothing (Frank Prem)
if the beauty and wonderment is not for me then for whom??? for i cannot...
November 10th, 2017 08:42 - Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.)
You do paint such wonderful pictures for me when reading your words.
So...
November 10th, 2017 08:04 - My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60)
Quite beautiful, and from your heart, you\'re a lucky man.
November 10th, 2017 07:51 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
Your ability to find words which reach into our very soul and tingle the...
November 6th, 2017 18:36 - Pain (BeeGee)
You\'ve really conveyed the sadness, pain and loss here. I felt it and...
November 5th, 2017 12:18 - Death Of A Warbler (W c)
If only all gods little creatures had similar feelings for all other of...
November 5th, 2017 12:07 - Let it Sink (A__pott)
I love this... and it\'s so clever. Makes me smile each time i read it. A...
November 5th, 2017 12:02 - FUCK YOU (Olivergreenwood19)
Good unpretentious writing.. no waffle, succinct. Gutsy.
November 5th, 2017 12:00 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
oh my god..... so true.
one of lifes great mysteries, love and what...
November 2nd, 2017 13:13 - Body Clock. (Goldfinch60)
Timeless ! simply timeless... or... hang on, do i mean less time?...
November 2nd, 2017 13:10 - Still House (FredPeyer)
Superb opening line. At such times you can almost wear that silence like a...
October 10th, 2017 11:47 - Perception. (Goldfinch60)
What an aura we create through self knowledge...... but people need to...
October 10th, 2017 11:34 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
Yep, his sense of humour is wicked! Once you learn to accept what...
October 9th, 2017 20:12 - perfect time (Frank Prem)
Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are...
October 7th, 2017 00:44 - What Could Be....... (MaddieJ)
Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness,...
October 7th, 2017 00:37 - Now (Its Raskolnikov)
Great expression of those risks we know we are taking when our hearts are...
October 7th, 2017 00:19 - KIPPERED (Michael Edwards)
Oh my... This reminds me of being picked up by a certain lady after a...
October 7th, 2017 00:04 - The Honey Moon Phase (Adrianna Kjeld)
Nice writing. Lovely sentiment here, long may it last for you both.
October 7th, 2017 00:01 - PTSD (Christina8)
Thank you for bringing this lesser understood area of ptsd into the light....
October 6th, 2017 18:49 - The Ten (H.cole23)
Nice writing. Don\'t underestimate yourself. Fly !
October 6th, 2017 18:38 - Chains (FredPeyer)
When those chains are heavy and youve dragged them around through your...
October 6th, 2017 17:06 - The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60)
Your amazing ability to reach out and touch your reader is astounding. Ive...
October 6th, 2017 16:59 - sweeping (Frank Prem)
Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey...
October 6th, 2017 16:41 - Sometimes. (RickyMcG)
Winning? Sometimes we need to win. But losing teaches us more and with...
October 6th, 2017 16:35 - So strong most dont see (Joseph M Marion)
Nice words to compliment a wonderful subject. Yes they\'re amazing aren\'t...
October 6th, 2017 16:16 - Blue eyes (Malubotelho)
Look into my eyes sweet lady.
October 6th, 2017 15:25 - These Days. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful. into my favourites
October 6th, 2017 04:07 - A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho)
We seek comfort in closeness and harmony with a friendly soul when our...
September 28th, 2017 18:33 - Something a lot like love (Edthepoet)
Oh absolutely superb writing! Could nave been written for me. Goes into my...
September 28th, 2017 18:30 - FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards)
i stopped being able to thunk about stuff the day i graunched to a halt...
September 28th, 2017 18:27 - Calliope. (Goldfinch60)
Is this the lady who gave you first the confidence to write and then the...
September 28th, 2017 18:05 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words again Fay. Seems your writing is chiming loud with me of...
September 28th, 2017 17:57 - Sand Crabs (FredPeyer)
i love this Fred. i feel exactly the way you describe we should be...
September 28th, 2017 17:42 - The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Such a lovely idea to compare a marriage to a lifetimes journey on a...
September 26th, 2017 06:46 - Seeing (FredPeyer)
The poet in us all here looks, perceives things in all manner of differing...
September 25th, 2017 18:19 - NEVER (Lasergraph)
This is so sad Lasergraph. Makes me think of a person who is so special to...
September 25th, 2017 18:10 - Life is rhythm (Malubotelho)
I printed it off and put it under my pillow. Now when that alarm...
September 25th, 2017 18:04
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