Comments on community poems by G84
- We rage against the norms (Jade Wolf)
love this, i feel the same ive wrote similar poems too. good job with the...
July 8th, 2022 12:19
- The path to enlightenment (Sophenia)
You are at a point in your life that I was at in mine many years ago your...
March 31st, 2022 09:22
- Fateful Morn (Jennifer Martin)
I love the rhythm of this I’m in the uk I was sat watching the videos...
September 11th, 2021 16:35
- Awakend? or Decived? (Prettygirl412)
This reminds me of the theme of a rap song by Hopsin - the ill mind of...
August 18th, 2021 14:35
- coffee (Hazel Kaye)
i like the analogies taking a usual comparitive phrase and flipping it on...
April 27th, 2020 03:54
- It’s okay (Jackeggz)
Simple truth - not enough of it!
January 28th, 2020 18:26
- Better Place (Tiffany_Arnold)
a negative situation, a positive attitude and a rhyming style that could...
December 30th, 2019 18:55
- Simply death (Mcassie)
The single guarantee that life holds in how inevitably it ends!
In a...
November 3rd, 2019 13:35
- Serenity (Clara)
Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn...
September 26th, 2019 18:23
- Serenity (Clara)
Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn...
September 26th, 2019 17:57
- Deep Brown (Clara)
it would be interesting to know your preferred genre of music, as it has...
September 3rd, 2019 14:35
- The Girl Before (Clara)
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place...
September 1st, 2019 11:55
- The Girl Before (Clara)
Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place...
September 1st, 2019 11:50
- Open Letter To My ABuser (IndisClaire)
I applaud you for your strength and bravery, as the father of a one year...
August 26th, 2019 15:56
- The Climb (G84)
Thanks Neville :)
May 7th, 2019 07:38
- Moving On (Part 0) (Nafis Light)
happiness is the best medicine, a nice write :)
May 6th, 2019 13:12
- My business (Ariel Perez)
I have to agree with tepo, the fanciest looking buildings will collapse...
April 12th, 2019 15:40
- Bigotry (G84)
Thanks Laura, I’ve calmed down a little now :)
October 12th, 2018 00:24
- Watching from above (WildMoonChild)
Awesome rhyming, a cousin was once killed and people who barely knew him...
October 10th, 2018 14:31
- Hangover (G84)
of course, it’s a balanced diet after all haha
October 8th, 2018 05:14
- Mondays part 2 (G84)
Sooo envious!
If you’re in the uk and the north east area pick me...
October 8th, 2018 03:30
- Mondays part 2 (G84)
Sooo envious!
If you’re in the uk and the north east area pick me...
October 8th, 2018 03:06
- Hangover (G84)
Thanks Andrew, us humans are crazy really poisoning ourselves for that...
October 7th, 2018 16:17
- Tell them (Marilyn McKenzie)
Wow ... such a sad but poignant write yet I rhymed so easily which tells...
October 4th, 2018 10:26
- Life’s a gift (MojoFreewrite)
A subject I often obsess about - the effects of society and expectation...
October 4th, 2018 10:22
- The working class man (G84)
Thanks for the comment Santita, passionate about this subject for some...
September 27th, 2018 17:48
- Live (G84)
Just seen this comment, thank you Santita
September 27th, 2018 17:45
- The Story Of Procrastination (MissileOfUncertainty)
It always fascinates me the concept of time, it always existed yet we...
September 27th, 2018 17:38
- Adulting (MaddieJ)
A thought I’ve pondered many a time they say hatred and negativity...
September 21st, 2018 14:29
- These days (OldPine)
Couldn’t agree more, internal freedom removes the cloud and everything...
July 18th, 2018 14:56
- Look Around Child (Clarita)
Awesome right a powerful use of words that conjure powerful imagery -...
May 24th, 2018 04:27
- GIVE THANKS for EVERYTHING & THINK POSITIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
My kind of writing!
Positivity is vastly underestimated, state of mind...
May 22nd, 2018 06:45
- Depression (Whitepearl)
Nice poem, I’ve been there and writing actually helped me through...
May 16th, 2018 07:25
- I See in a Thousand Colors (MrNobody40)
Many people look but don’t completley see
You understand the beauty...
May 15th, 2018 06:14
- I Got Wood (G84)
Thanks dusk, appreciate the love and innuendos haha
September 23rd, 2017 09:29
- Theft (G84)
Thanks Outback
September 21st, 2017 11:04
- Sea Therapy (G84)
Thanks for the review and positive comments 🙂
September 19th, 2017 00:55
- Sea Therapy (G84)
Thanks for the love hood 👍🏻
September 18th, 2017 10:52
- Limitless (G84)
Thanks for the review diamond
September 17th, 2017 12:59
- Limitless (G84)
Thanks for the comment santita, nice to meet people on my level 😊
September 17th, 2017 11:08
- You are (Myself and me)
If only everyone spoke true words this direct & simple yet, utterly...
September 17th, 2017 01:26
- Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Better to give someone your all and lose them, than hold back and risk...
September 16th, 2017 08:08
- Winter (G84)
Yup summer still has its place although seldom seen
Thanks for the...
September 16th, 2017 07:02
- Winter (G84)
Yup summer still has its place although seldom seen
Thanks for the...
September 16th, 2017 06:44
- My Anxiety Battle (Chloe Rachel Flisher)
Good words, flows well and rhymes with a steady rythym, I also started...
September 15th, 2017 00:37
- Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows)
If you aren\'t musical you should be, I say this because your writing has...
September 14th, 2017 12:38