Comments on community poems by G84



  • We rage against the norms (Jade Wolf) love this, i feel the same ive wrote similar poems too. good job with the...
    July 8th, 2022 12:19
  • The path to enlightenment (Sophenia) You are at a point in your life that I was at in mine many years ago your...
    March 31st, 2022 09:22
  • Fateful Morn (Jennifer Martin) I love the rhythm of this I’m in the uk I was sat watching the videos...
    September 11th, 2021 16:35
  • Awakend? or Decived? (Prettygirl412) This reminds me of the theme of a rap song by Hopsin - the ill mind of...
    August 18th, 2021 14:35
  • coffee (Hazel Kaye) i like the analogies taking a usual comparitive phrase and flipping it on...
    April 27th, 2020 03:54
  • It’s okay (Jackeggz) Simple truth - not enough of it!
    January 28th, 2020 18:26
  • Better Place (Tiffany_Arnold) a negative situation, a positive attitude and a rhyming style that could...
    December 30th, 2019 18:55
  • Simply death (Mcassie) The single guarantee that life holds in how inevitably it ends! In a...
    November 3rd, 2019 13:35
  • Serenity (Clara) Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn...
    September 26th, 2019 18:23
  • Serenity (Clara) Sleep and dreaming has always intrigued me, I believe its where we learn...
    September 26th, 2019 17:57
  • Deep Brown (Clara) it would be interesting to know your preferred genre of music, as it has...
    September 3rd, 2019 14:35
  • The Girl Before (Clara) Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place...
    September 1st, 2019 11:55
  • The Girl Before (Clara) Its easy to believe we are to be fixed beings with fixed morals and place...
    September 1st, 2019 11:50
  • Open Letter To My ABuser (IndisClaire) I applaud you for your strength and bravery, as the father of a one year...
    August 26th, 2019 15:56
  • The Climb (G84) Thanks Neville :)
    May 7th, 2019 07:38
  • Moving On (Part 0) (Nafis Light) happiness is the best medicine, a nice write :)
    May 6th, 2019 13:12
  • My business (Ariel Perez) I have to agree with tepo, the fanciest looking buildings will collapse...
    April 12th, 2019 15:40
  • Bigotry (G84) Thanks Laura, I’ve calmed down a little now :)
    October 12th, 2018 00:24
  • Watching from above (WildMoonChild) Awesome rhyming, a cousin was once killed and people who barely knew him...
    October 10th, 2018 14:31
  • Hangover (G84) of course, it’s a balanced diet after all haha
    October 8th, 2018 05:14
  • Mondays part 2 (G84) Sooo envious! If you’re in the uk and the north east area pick me...
    October 8th, 2018 03:30
  • Mondays part 2 (G84) Sooo envious! If you’re in the uk and the north east area pick me...
    October 8th, 2018 03:06
  • Hangover (G84) Thanks Andrew, us humans are crazy really poisoning ourselves for that...
    October 7th, 2018 16:17
  • Tell them (Marilyn McKenzie) Wow ... such a sad but poignant write yet I rhymed so easily which tells...
    October 4th, 2018 10:26
  • Life’s a gift (MojoFreewrite) A subject I often obsess about - the effects of society and expectation...
    October 4th, 2018 10:22
  • The working class man (G84) Thanks for the comment Santita, passionate about this subject for some...
    September 27th, 2018 17:48
  • Live (G84) Just seen this comment, thank you Santita
    September 27th, 2018 17:45
  • The Story Of Procrastination (MissileOfUncertainty) It always fascinates me the concept of time, it always existed yet we...
    September 27th, 2018 17:38
  • Adulting (MaddieJ) A thought I’ve pondered many a time they say hatred and negativity...
    September 21st, 2018 14:29
  • These days (OldPine) Couldn’t agree more, internal freedom removes the cloud and everything...
    July 18th, 2018 14:56
  • Look Around Child (Clarita) Awesome right a powerful use of words that conjure powerful imagery -...
    May 24th, 2018 04:27
  • GIVE THANKS for EVERYTHING & THINK POSITIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) My kind of writing! Positivity is vastly underestimated, state of mind...
    May 22nd, 2018 06:45
  • Depression (Whitepearl) Nice poem, I’ve been there and writing actually helped me through...
    May 16th, 2018 07:25
  • I See in a Thousand Colors (MrNobody40) Many people look but don’t completley see You understand the beauty...
    May 15th, 2018 06:14
  • I Got Wood (G84) Thanks dusk, appreciate the love and innuendos haha
    September 23rd, 2017 09:29
  • Theft (G84) Thanks Outback
    September 21st, 2017 11:04
  • Sea Therapy (G84) Thanks for the review and positive comments 🙂
    September 19th, 2017 00:55
  • Sea Therapy (G84) Thanks for the love hood 👍🏻
    September 18th, 2017 10:52
  • Limitless (G84) Thanks for the review diamond
    September 17th, 2017 12:59
  • Limitless (G84) Thanks for the comment santita, nice to meet people on my level 😊
    September 17th, 2017 11:08
  • You are (Myself and me) If only everyone spoke true words this direct & simple yet, utterly...
    September 17th, 2017 01:26
  • Fake Love (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Better to give someone your all and lose them, than hold back and risk...
    September 16th, 2017 08:08
  • Winter (G84) Yup summer still has its place although seldom seen Thanks for the...
    September 16th, 2017 07:02
  • Winter (G84) Yup summer still has its place although seldom seen Thanks for the...
    September 16th, 2017 06:44
  • My Anxiety Battle (Chloe Rachel Flisher) Good words, flows well and rhymes with a steady rythym, I also started...
    September 15th, 2017 00:37
  • Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows) If you aren\'t musical you should be, I say this because your writing has...
    September 14th, 2017 12:38