Comments on community poems by swyndell

• Ghouls and Ghosts (Shi no hakobi te) This poem is really great, a nice flow and great message. Keep up the...
  September 26th, 2018 14:13
• My dreams vanish (Javiilicitano) Quite melancholic but strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting....
  September 21st, 2018 11:43
• She saw through eyes of the blind (Shi no hakobi te) Very strong, and though free verse, it has great flow. Great write, Shi.
  September 20th, 2018 13:57
• Life (Shi no hakobi te) Strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting. Great first write Shi....
  September 20th, 2018 07:35
• To Save (Alahna) Interesting poem, the future is a hard topic to write about but you\'ve...
  August 30th, 2018 09:41
• The end (Georgiarous101) Great writing, strong feelings have been poured into it. I hope you find...
  August 30th, 2018 09:25
• Dogs (Netashi) I love this, it\'s so cute, but it speaks the truth. Great write. Jinxy~
  August 27th, 2018 12:53
• Goodbye friend (Agiel) Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a...
  August 27th, 2018 11:34
• spectacle of the knowing (RiverJordan) Beautiful, well written, it\'s depth is overwhelming but constant and...
  August 27th, 2018 11:14
• My social anxiety (Sup) Great first poem! Strong vocabulary, and pretty consistent. I found the...
  August 27th, 2018 10:27
• Time to Diet (The Retired Bloke) Amazing, very clever
  August 21st, 2018 11:43
• Let me be.... (Netashi) Truly beautiful, I find love poems so enchanting sometimes.
  August 21st, 2018 11:27
• Death of a child (Netashi) This poem is relatable. I\'ve had to grow up quick. My parents believe in...
  August 21st, 2018 10:52
• Confused (Carmine) Wow..amazing. Great write, you definitely have talent, and I can see...
  May 15th, 2018 09:01
• A Mask Worn (W c) Very impressive...great write. JJ
  May 14th, 2018 10:14
• levels of life (Jakey (minako)) Well compose and brings on a great deal of thought. I do believe in line...
  May 14th, 2018 09:53
• How dare you (Lovely_rose) This is really beautiful, you can feel the pain. Great write. JJ
  May 13th, 2018 09:17
• Snowed In (Noah Malice) This is beautiful, great write.
  March 15th, 2018 14:41
• No Explination (The Fallen) This is really strong, there really isn\'t an explanation for many...
  March 15th, 2018 12:29
• Strings (Ginkotrock) This is beautiful, there is often little keeping us from giving up, and...
  March 15th, 2018 11:54
• Dear Suicide. (Poetic emo) Wow, strong message. Great write and inspiring read. I see the point...
  February 26th, 2018 18:38
• Wear Your Smile (\"Carter Wills\") I often wear a fake smile as to not disappoint others, this actually made...
  February 26th, 2018 16:36
• Miscommunication (Ajon4wheels) This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a...
  February 26th, 2018 15:43
• Me, Her, Old Her and New her (Writings From The Unknown13) This is just...amazing. Such heart felt pain, such anger expressed in calm...
  February 26th, 2018 13:15
• The Beginning Of The End (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent work, and great fluency. Very enjoyable and amazing read.
  February 26th, 2018 13:02
• The Devils Paintbrush (SandMan) Quite the thought provoking write, and an honest portrayal of...
  February 13th, 2018 12:32
• Am Are (Marie Braden) This is beautiful.
  February 13th, 2018 12:17
• Just A Carpenter\'s Son (Pldabbs) This is really just an amazing write. The use of expression through two...
  February 13th, 2018 11:31