Comments on community poems by swyndell
- Ghouls and Ghosts (Shi no hakobi te)
This poem is really great, a nice flow and great message. Keep up the...
September 26th, 2018 14:13 - My dreams vanish (Javiilicitano)
Quite melancholic but strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting....
September 21st, 2018 11:43 - She saw through eyes of the blind (Shi no hakobi te)
Very strong, and though free verse, it has great flow. Great write, Shi.
September 20th, 2018 13:57 - Life (Shi no hakobi te)
Strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting. Great first write Shi....
September 20th, 2018 07:35 - To Save (Alahna)
Interesting poem, the future is a hard topic to write about but you\'ve...
August 30th, 2018 09:41 - The end (Georgiarous101)
Great writing, strong feelings have been poured into it. I hope you find...
August 30th, 2018 09:25 - Dogs (Netashi)
I love this, it\'s so cute, but it speaks the truth. Great write.
Jinxy~
August 27th, 2018 12:53 - Goodbye friend (Agiel)
Interesting, the pain is so prominent but is expressed beautifully. Like a...
August 27th, 2018 11:34 - spectacle of the knowing (RiverJordan)
Beautiful, well written, it\'s depth is overwhelming but constant and...
August 27th, 2018 11:14 - My social anxiety (Sup)
Great first poem! Strong vocabulary, and pretty consistent. I found the...
August 27th, 2018 10:27 - Time to Diet (The Retired Bloke)
Amazing, very clever
August 21st, 2018 11:43 - Let me be.... (Netashi)
Truly beautiful, I find love poems so enchanting sometimes.
August 21st, 2018 11:27 - Death of a child (Netashi)
This poem is relatable. I\'ve had to grow up quick. My parents believe in...
August 21st, 2018 10:52 - Confused (Carmine)
Wow..amazing. Great write, you definitely have talent, and I can see...
May 15th, 2018 09:01 - A Mask Worn (W c)
Very impressive...great write.
JJ
May 14th, 2018 10:14
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