Comments on community poems by Pearcemelville ๅ
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- ๐๐ฎ๐ช๐ฝ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ข๐ฝ๐ช๐ท๐ญ๐ฒ๐ท๐ฐ ๐ฃ๐ช๐ต๐ต (Pearcemelville ๅ
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Thank you LB, Heather is in transition to become female.
I asked if I may...
August 8th, 2022 05:31
- Black Mercedes (Pearcemelville ๅ
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ๆด่ตฐๆ Bousouzoku means
running wildly gang,
many in Japan, all...
August 3rd, 2022 17:14
- Journey to the West Poem๏ผTranslation (Pearcemelville ๅ
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ๅJoy to translate. Am working on chapter 2.
One original translation I...
July 29th, 2022 23:19
- Anniversary of Love (Pearcemelville ๅ
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Thank you Bella. She is extraordinary. Her ex husband and his father...
July 29th, 2022 11:38
- immeasurable certainty (Pearcemelville ๅ
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two years private turmoil
any one needing to talk
message me
July 21st, 2022 00:34
- THEPLAGIARIST (Pearcemelville ๅ
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This poem was inspired by the rudeness with which I was treated so I...
June 7th, 2022 05:27
- Cotter Dam extension (Pearcemelville ๅ
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I worked as a labourer and dogman on the building of the viewing platform,...
May 28th, 2022 14:55
- Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
Your thoughts laid out well
Smooth flow
Ageing can be fraught with duch...
May 20th, 2022 06:04
- 6pack ๅ
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not ME ANTicipated
May 17th, 2022 10:37
- The Music Wraps Around Me (Bella Shepard)
Really like this. I am captured in the first verse and lead through each...
April 21st, 2022 17:01
- crow over (Arobot)
Aha then I read in a different light
Your translation is fine
If you...
April 18th, 2022 11:26
- crow over (Arobot)
Nice writing
If I may be bold and suggest
a couple of Chinese...
April 17th, 2022 17:02
- Colour (Pearcemelville ๅ
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Like musical coda taking us to
a previous moment
Therapeutic colours ...
April 16th, 2022 13:55
- The Maze. (Chris Duffy)
took me by the hand and
lead me along a rhythmic
trail
I was not...
April 15th, 2022 18:28
- Middle (DestinysPerspectives)
The Middle Path
The Way
the dao
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April 15th, 2022 17:59
- Maybe. (Fay Slimm.)
studied metaphors that engaged
me with images
Tucked away yearning...
April 13th, 2022 20:37
- Afternoon Tea (Bella Shepard)
frolicking playful fun !
April 13th, 2022 20:12
- Teen romance (AlexDaBaDee)
simple fun sadcute
enjoyed!
April 13th, 2022 20:05
- Linford the fugitive tortoise, (Chris Duffy)
Nice rhythmic flow and humour that dampened my eyes
If I may offer...
April 13th, 2022 17:55
- Colors (Weee)
Really like this
I know editing is like cutting off a limb Feel greater...
April 12th, 2022 19:07
- Redhead (Kitty the naughty poet)
strong imagery
I really like it
Your introduction is as
provocative as...
April 12th, 2022 15:10
- Gooder than Good Even (Neville)
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
April 12th, 2022 15:00
- Rainbow Bridge (Jane Walker)
I like how you subtly
invoke the realization
of humans...
April 12th, 2022 14:52
- -run or stay- (Dean langmuir)
simple and shared by all
making your poem effective
With some there is...
April 12th, 2022 14:45
- Intelligence (Sorenbarrett)
the arrogant human
the arrogance of
Humanity
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I like how you...
April 12th, 2022 14:28
- The kid in the back of the room (Picklesthecat)
brings out strong emotions of worry regret spectre of the past looming
April 12th, 2022 13:59
- One Way Window (Dafodilgirl8)
sense of separation detachment is convincing
final rejection seals
April 12th, 2022 13:53
- Pilbara Cyclone (Pearcemelville ๅ
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thank you, used to live there
April 10th, 2022 15:33
