Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Transfer (Jabberwocky)
Ha ha - - original thinking on the over-use of cyber-offers. Love the last...
February 5th, 2019 07:08 - Posturing (Jabberwocky)
The sentiments underlying these words touch the heart when last lines...
February 5th, 2019 07:05 - Words (Lorna)
Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for...
February 5th, 2019 07:02 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause Brian for this well written look-back at my girlhood\'s...
February 5th, 2019 06:26 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Jun Kenshi - - What a transcendent place to achieve Neville - - love the...
February 5th, 2019 06:22 - Forecast (Netashi)
A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set...
February 4th, 2019 14:49 - I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne)
Such an original conception of repetitious use Kevin - - great read
February 4th, 2019 06:42 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - such a good description of a cat\'s aloof air - a feline reproof in...
February 4th, 2019 06:37 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -another clever poetic angle you easily give to that racist-word...
February 4th, 2019 03:59 - Glass Lips (Lee Renard Caspian)
Powerful write Lee - an apt word is \"contortionist\" where vulnerablity...
February 4th, 2019 03:54 - Something Rises (CindyB)
The form and line-length add their own pace to this intriguing write Cindy...
February 4th, 2019 03:51 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
Fine thoughts in this read Orchi.
February 4th, 2019 03:46 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Agree wholeheartedly - comfort comes from clothing that has warmed the...
February 4th, 2019 03:42 - Virus (Neville)
Fro just the one word sprung all these images that so expertly leads the...
February 4th, 2019 03:39 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Good style and flow to this intriguing piece Neville - Ink blobs on paper...
February 3rd, 2019 10:53
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