Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE BROKEN
Fay Slimm. said:
Broken but writing the pain away - a good description and tribute to the finest of poets dear Louis
September 8th, 2017 02:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Broken but writing the pain away - a good description and tribute to the finest of poets dear Louis
September 8th, 2017 02:07
THE BROKEN
FredPeyer said:
Thank you, thank you, thank you, Louis, you just put some duct tape on me!
September 8th, 2017 00:59
FredPeyer said:
Thank you, thank you, thank you, Louis, you just put some duct tape on me!
September 8th, 2017 00:59
THE BROKEN
Michael Edwards said:
A great tribute indeed - to our merry band of scribes.
September 8th, 2017 00:26
Michael Edwards said:
A great tribute indeed - to our merry band of scribes.
September 8th, 2017 00:26
THE GREAT DECEPTION
myself and me said:
\"here and now\"
where we belong.
Deep insight.
September 6th, 2017 20:05
myself and me said:
\"here and now\"
where we belong.
Deep insight.
September 6th, 2017 20:05
THE GREAT DECEPTION
Fay Slimm. said:
Time is as we here on earth see it but really the moment is all we ever need - good read Louis.
September 6th, 2017 13:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Time is as we here on earth see it but really the moment is all we ever need - good read Louis.
September 6th, 2017 13:28
THE GREAT DECEPTION
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this poem speaks to me, not yesterday, not tomorrow, but right now, and forevermore!
No choice, had to make it a favorite!
I have been grappling with the concept of time, and the more I think of it, the less I understand it. But it is fascinating and one day I will hopefully reach your level!
September 6th, 2017 11:25
FredPeyer said:
Louis, this poem speaks to me, not yesterday, not tomorrow, but right now, and forevermore!
No choice, had to make it a favorite!
I have been grappling with the concept of time, and the more I think of it, the less I understand it. But it is fascinating and one day I will hopefully reach your level!
September 6th, 2017 11:25
THE GREAT DECEPTION
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece and so well expressed Louis.
September 6th, 2017 10:11
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece and so well expressed Louis.
September 6th, 2017 10:11
THE GREAT DECEPTION
WL Schuett said:
Nice look at time , Be Here Now was quite the mantra when I was younger
September 6th, 2017 09:21
WL Schuett said:
Nice look at time , Be Here Now was quite the mantra when I was younger
September 6th, 2017 09:21
THE GREAT DECEPTION
lasergraph said:
Time is a continual feast and we each get served our own slice. The pieces are not all the same size however. Thanks for the write.
September 6th, 2017 09:19
lasergraph said:
Time is a continual feast and we each get served our own slice. The pieces are not all the same size however. Thanks for the write.
September 6th, 2017 09:19
THE GREAT DECEPTION
orchidee said:
A fine write L. A bit of rubbish now...
Oohh, time elusive
Is it now, not yet, or some time past?
Oh I careth not
As long as there\'s time for sherry! heehee.
September 6th, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
A fine write L. A bit of rubbish now...
Oohh, time elusive
Is it now, not yet, or some time past?
Oh I careth not
As long as there\'s time for sherry! heehee.
September 6th, 2017 08:42
THE GREAT DECEPTION
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is a fallacy, all we have is now.
September 6th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is a fallacy, all we have is now.
September 6th, 2017 08:02
BITTERSWEET
Alf W said:
Hi Louis... thank you for your poem. There is a nice positivity here despite the bitter/sweet times. A lovely poem.
September 6th, 2017 06:09
Alf W said:
Hi Louis... thank you for your poem. There is a nice positivity here despite the bitter/sweet times. A lovely poem.
September 6th, 2017 06:09
BITTERSWEET
malubotelho said:
Wise Santita. Without the bitter, the sweet is not so sweet. One night without sleep makes the other night great. And the next day, even greater. Life is so good if we know how to appreciate the good and wonder with the bad. Amazing. You got an awesome writing here. Bitter or sweet it is all good.
September 2nd, 2017 22:06
malubotelho said:
Wise Santita. Without the bitter, the sweet is not so sweet. One night without sleep makes the other night great. And the next day, even greater. Life is so good if we know how to appreciate the good and wonder with the bad. Amazing. You got an awesome writing here. Bitter or sweet it is all good.
September 2nd, 2017 22:06
BITTERSWEET
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis. Tasting both is what life is about and going forward is the only way to go, never give up.
September 2nd, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis. Tasting both is what life is about and going forward is the only way to go, never give up.
September 2nd, 2017 00:46
BITTERSWEET
myself and me said:
\"Though barely surviving the bitter,
The deepest pain accompanied the sweet.\"
My favorite lines.
Beautiful writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:55
myself and me said:
\"Though barely surviving the bitter,
The deepest pain accompanied the sweet.\"
My favorite lines.
Beautiful writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:55
BITTERSWEET
sue.evans said:
Part of life\'s roller coaster- they say the bitter makes us stronger - sometimes that\'s hard to see. Love your poem.
September 1st, 2017 13:08
sue.evans said:
Part of life\'s roller coaster- they say the bitter makes us stronger - sometimes that\'s hard to see. Love your poem.
September 1st, 2017 13:08
BITTERSWEET
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Louis, I really like (not rike) it!
When the \'bitter\' happens, you are already down on the ground, fighting. When the \'sweet\' happens, it lifts you up to lofty heights.
And then, if you fall from these lofty heights, it hurts a lot more than the ground fighting did.
September 1st, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Louis, I really like (not rike) it!
When the \'bitter\' happens, you are already down on the ground, fighting. When the \'sweet\' happens, it lifts you up to lofty heights.
And then, if you fall from these lofty heights, it hurts a lot more than the ground fighting did.
September 1st, 2017 12:43
BITTERSWEET
Michael Edwards said:
And I rike (really and like) it - good read Louis
September 1st, 2017 09:20
Michael Edwards said:
And I rike (really and like) it - good read Louis
September 1st, 2017 09:20
BITTERSWEET
Fay Slimm. said:
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to work within the framework of willingness to fit into the present scheme of things. A most engaging read.
September 1st, 2017 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to work within the framework of willingness to fit into the present scheme of things. A most engaging read.
September 1st, 2017 05:26
BITTERSWEET
Frank Prem said:
The one is compliment to the other - if you can survive it. Good job Louis.
September 1st, 2017 05:18
Frank Prem said:
The one is compliment to the other - if you can survive it. Good job Louis.
September 1st, 2017 05:18
GENIUS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, all geniuses verge on the edge of madness. Good write Louis.
August 31st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, all geniuses verge on the edge of madness. Good write Louis.
August 31st, 2017 01:10
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
George C. Biester said:
Love it. I find the idea of Iminent death to be comforting, and blissful. Perfect note to sleep on.
August 30th, 2017 20:52
George C. Biester said:
Love it. I find the idea of Iminent death to be comforting, and blissful. Perfect note to sleep on.
August 30th, 2017 20:52
GENIUS
malubotelho said:
For me I\'m still such a very normal person. But I recognize that if you think you are mad is because you are not. The really, really mad person don\'t know they are mad. So we are only on the early stage. We still need to work hard. I love your words and got them for me. Brilliant write.
August 30th, 2017 20:33
malubotelho said:
For me I\'m still such a very normal person. But I recognize that if you think you are mad is because you are not. The really, really mad person don\'t know they are mad. So we are only on the early stage. We still need to work hard. I love your words and got them for me. Brilliant write.
August 30th, 2017 20:33
GENIUS
dusk arising said:
Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
August 30th, 2017 18:31
dusk arising said:
Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
August 30th, 2017 18:31
GENIUS
charlotte black said:
you caught me in such few words- beautiful work!
August 30th, 2017 18:28
charlotte black said:
you caught me in such few words- beautiful work!
August 30th, 2017 18:28
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