Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE GREAT DECEPTION
WL Schuett said:
Nice look at time , Be Here Now was quite the mantra when I was younger
September 6th, 2017 09:21
WL Schuett said:
Nice look at time , Be Here Now was quite the mantra when I was younger
September 6th, 2017 09:21
THE GREAT DECEPTION
lasergraph said:
Time is a continual feast and we each get served our own slice. The pieces are not all the same size however. Thanks for the write.
September 6th, 2017 09:19
lasergraph said:
Time is a continual feast and we each get served our own slice. The pieces are not all the same size however. Thanks for the write.
September 6th, 2017 09:19
THE GREAT DECEPTION
orchidee said:
A fine write L. A bit of rubbish now...
Oohh, time elusive
Is it now, not yet, or some time past?
Oh I careth not
As long as there\'s time for sherry! heehee.
September 6th, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
A fine write L. A bit of rubbish now...
Oohh, time elusive
Is it now, not yet, or some time past?
Oh I careth not
As long as there\'s time for sherry! heehee.
September 6th, 2017 08:42
THE GREAT DECEPTION
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is a fallacy, all we have is now.
September 6th, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is a fallacy, all we have is now.
September 6th, 2017 08:02
BITTERSWEET
Alf W said:
Hi Louis... thank you for your poem. There is a nice positivity here despite the bitter/sweet times. A lovely poem.
September 6th, 2017 06:09
Alf W said:
Hi Louis... thank you for your poem. There is a nice positivity here despite the bitter/sweet times. A lovely poem.
September 6th, 2017 06:09
BITTERSWEET
malubotelho said:
Wise Santita. Without the bitter, the sweet is not so sweet. One night without sleep makes the other night great. And the next day, even greater. Life is so good if we know how to appreciate the good and wonder with the bad. Amazing. You got an awesome writing here. Bitter or sweet it is all good.
September 2nd, 2017 22:06
malubotelho said:
Wise Santita. Without the bitter, the sweet is not so sweet. One night without sleep makes the other night great. And the next day, even greater. Life is so good if we know how to appreciate the good and wonder with the bad. Amazing. You got an awesome writing here. Bitter or sweet it is all good.
September 2nd, 2017 22:06
BITTERSWEET
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis. Tasting both is what life is about and going forward is the only way to go, never give up.
September 2nd, 2017 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis. Tasting both is what life is about and going forward is the only way to go, never give up.
September 2nd, 2017 00:46
BITTERSWEET
myself and me said:
\"Though barely surviving the bitter,
The deepest pain accompanied the sweet.\"
My favorite lines.
Beautiful writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:55
myself and me said:
\"Though barely surviving the bitter,
The deepest pain accompanied the sweet.\"
My favorite lines.
Beautiful writing.
September 1st, 2017 19:55
BITTERSWEET
sue.evans said:
Part of life\'s roller coaster- they say the bitter makes us stronger - sometimes that\'s hard to see. Love your poem.
September 1st, 2017 13:08
sue.evans said:
Part of life\'s roller coaster- they say the bitter makes us stronger - sometimes that\'s hard to see. Love your poem.
September 1st, 2017 13:08
BITTERSWEET
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Louis, I really like (not rike) it!
When the \'bitter\' happens, you are already down on the ground, fighting. When the \'sweet\' happens, it lifts you up to lofty heights.
And then, if you fall from these lofty heights, it hurts a lot more than the ground fighting did.
September 1st, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Louis, I really like (not rike) it!
When the \'bitter\' happens, you are already down on the ground, fighting. When the \'sweet\' happens, it lifts you up to lofty heights.
And then, if you fall from these lofty heights, it hurts a lot more than the ground fighting did.
September 1st, 2017 12:43
BITTERSWEET
Michael Edwards said:
And I rike (really and like) it - good read Louis
September 1st, 2017 09:20
Michael Edwards said:
And I rike (really and like) it - good read Louis
September 1st, 2017 09:20
BITTERSWEET
Fay Slimm. said:
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to work within the framework of willingness to fit into the present scheme of things. A most engaging read.
September 1st, 2017 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to work within the framework of willingness to fit into the present scheme of things. A most engaging read.
September 1st, 2017 05:26
BITTERSWEET
Frank Prem said:
The one is compliment to the other - if you can survive it. Good job Louis.
September 1st, 2017 05:18
Frank Prem said:
The one is compliment to the other - if you can survive it. Good job Louis.
September 1st, 2017 05:18
GENIUS
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, all geniuses verge on the edge of madness. Good write Louis.
August 31st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, all geniuses verge on the edge of madness. Good write Louis.
August 31st, 2017 01:10
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
George C. Biester said:
Love it. I find the idea of Iminent death to be comforting, and blissful. Perfect note to sleep on.
August 30th, 2017 20:52
George C. Biester said:
Love it. I find the idea of Iminent death to be comforting, and blissful. Perfect note to sleep on.
August 30th, 2017 20:52
GENIUS
malubotelho said:
For me I\'m still such a very normal person. But I recognize that if you think you are mad is because you are not. The really, really mad person don\'t know they are mad. So we are only on the early stage. We still need to work hard. I love your words and got them for me. Brilliant write.
August 30th, 2017 20:33
malubotelho said:
For me I\'m still such a very normal person. But I recognize that if you think you are mad is because you are not. The really, really mad person don\'t know they are mad. So we are only on the early stage. We still need to work hard. I love your words and got them for me. Brilliant write.
August 30th, 2017 20:33
GENIUS
dusk arising said:
Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
August 30th, 2017 18:31
dusk arising said:
Profound words! Really good read. Goes into my favourites
August 30th, 2017 18:31
GENIUS
charlotte black said:
you caught me in such few words- beautiful work!
August 30th, 2017 18:28
charlotte black said:
you caught me in such few words- beautiful work!
August 30th, 2017 18:28
GENIUS
myself and me said:
I love this new definition about \"Genius\".
A \"mad\" writing.
August 30th, 2017 14:09
myself and me said:
I love this new definition about \"Genius\".
A \"mad\" writing.
August 30th, 2017 14:09
GENIUS
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Louis!
And I think you are right, we all must be at least a little bit mad spending untold hours writing and reading poems. Then patting each other on the back for a job well done! But you know what? I like being mad this way! :-)
August 30th, 2017 13:45
FredPeyer said:
Love your poem, Louis!
And I think you are right, we all must be at least a little bit mad spending untold hours writing and reading poems. Then patting each other on the back for a job well done! But you know what? I like being mad this way! :-)
August 30th, 2017 13:45
GENIUS
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure about madness but I\'m called eccentric - and I quite like it but I don\'t know why ...!
August 30th, 2017 09:46
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure about madness but I\'m called eccentric - and I quite like it but I don\'t know why ...!
August 30th, 2017 09:46
GENIUS
lasergraph said:
Thin line between genius and madness. I see it crossed a lot. Thanks for sharing.
August 30th, 2017 09:26
lasergraph said:
Thin line between genius and madness. I see it crossed a lot. Thanks for sharing.
August 30th, 2017 09:26
GENIUS
orchidee said:
The fine line between genius and madness? Now, I reckon you had me in mind for one, when writing this. heehee. Good write L.
August 30th, 2017 08:56
orchidee said:
The fine line between genius and madness? Now, I reckon you had me in mind for one, when writing this. heehee. Good write L.
August 30th, 2017 08:56
THE PRICE
FredPeyer said:
Socrates supposedly said: I know that I don\'t know anything. There is no proof though in Plato that he actually said it. Maybe we should say it differently: The more I understand, the more I want to know.
Love your poem, Louis!
August 29th, 2017 02:05
FredPeyer said:
Socrates supposedly said: I know that I don\'t know anything. There is no proof though in Plato that he actually said it. Maybe we should say it differently: The more I understand, the more I want to know.
Love your poem, Louis!
August 29th, 2017 02:05
I\'LL LET YOU KNOW
FredPeyer said:
Love it so far, but will let you know for sure when I see where it goes!
August 28th, 2017 18:14
FredPeyer said:
Love it so far, but will let you know for sure when I see where it goes!
August 28th, 2017 18:14
THE PRICE
malubotelho said:
This is very true. I stop to understand things long ago so now I only accept it. Whatever it is, it is.
August 28th, 2017 16:20
malubotelho said:
This is very true. I stop to understand things long ago so now I only accept it. Whatever it is, it is.
August 28th, 2017 16:20
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