Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
lasergraph said:
Great write and I could identify with a lot of this in my own worship routine.
November 3rd, 2017 14:08
lasergraph said:
Great write and I could identify with a lot of this in my own worship routine.
November 3rd, 2017 14:08
Aftermath
Anna Marg said:
That was a great poem! It rhymed perfectly and had a great message in it!
November 3rd, 2017 10:02
Anna Marg said:
That was a great poem! It rhymed perfectly and had a great message in it!
November 3rd, 2017 10:02
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well. Cute poem on a fine marriage, Fred! You are a fortunate man.
November 3rd, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well. Cute poem on a fine marriage, Fred! You are a fortunate man.
November 3rd, 2017 08:48
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write, Fred! This is a light poem but so beautiful to see that you are in love. Thanks for sharing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:51
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful write, Fred! This is a light poem but so beautiful to see that you are in love. Thanks for sharing!
November 3rd, 2017 06:51
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Brilliant FRED a perfect analogy ~ although I speak from ANTICIPATION ~ not EXPERIENCE ! However your Poem perfectly mirrors my observation of my parents when I was domiciled for 18 carefree years ! Please check my tribute to ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Brilliant FRED a perfect analogy ~ although I speak from ANTICIPATION ~ not EXPERIENCE ! However your Poem perfectly mirrors my observation of my parents when I was domiciled for 18 carefree years ! Please check my tribute to ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Church be filled with love and light. Good write.
November 3rd, 2017 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Church be filled with love and light. Good write.
November 3rd, 2017 02:46
Aftermath
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write.
In Africa at one of the shops there is a sign above a curtain. The sign says \"If you open this curtain you will see the most dangerous animal in the world!\" On pulling the curtain back there is a mirror!
November 3rd, 2017 02:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write.
In Africa at one of the shops there is a sign above a curtain. The sign says \"If you open this curtain you will see the most dangerous animal in the world!\" On pulling the curtain back there is a mirror!
November 3rd, 2017 02:40
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Meanwhile, with my KP \'wedding\' I\'m having anything but matrimonial bliss! I got me ball and chain on. It will never be removed, cos she has the key to the chain! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:37
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Meanwhile, with my KP \'wedding\' I\'m having anything but matrimonial bliss! I got me ball and chain on. It will never be removed, cos she has the key to the chain! lol.
November 3rd, 2017 02:37
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
Michael Edwards said:
Written with great sensitivity and love - a tribute to a great couple.
November 3rd, 2017 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Written with great sensitivity and love - a tribute to a great couple.
November 3rd, 2017 00:34
Aftermath
Louis Gibbs said:
Wouldn\'t make a good nursery rhyme, but a powerful commentary here, Fred! Looks kinda like we\'re heading down the same road as Atlantis, doesn\'t it. I\'m sure there will be enough left for the old Phoenix to rise again for another try.
November 2nd, 2017 16:51
Louis Gibbs said:
Wouldn\'t make a good nursery rhyme, but a powerful commentary here, Fred! Looks kinda like we\'re heading down the same road as Atlantis, doesn\'t it. I\'m sure there will be enough left for the old Phoenix to rise again for another try.
November 2nd, 2017 16:51
Aftermath
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh such a powerful poem with rhyming to add to its dire expression - an arid and sad world indeed my friend.
November 2nd, 2017 15:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh such a powerful poem with rhyming to add to its dire expression - an arid and sad world indeed my friend.
November 2nd, 2017 15:22
Aftermath
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write sooo glad you left out the aliens and zombies.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 13:59
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write sooo glad you left out the aliens and zombies.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 13:59
Aftermath
myself and me said:
Such a sad fact, we human beings will wipe ourselves off from the earth before any nature disaster do that to us.
November 2nd, 2017 13:02
myself and me said:
Such a sad fact, we human beings will wipe ourselves off from the earth before any nature disaster do that to us.
November 2nd, 2017 13:02
Aftermath
Michael Edwards said:
Great write fired from the pen - the best weapon of them all.
November 2nd, 2017 12:36
Michael Edwards said:
Great write fired from the pen - the best weapon of them all.
November 2nd, 2017 12:36
Aftermath
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much, Kat. I do worry where this world is going!
November 2nd, 2017 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much, Kat. I do worry where this world is going!
November 2nd, 2017 12:19
Dark Mood
lasergraph said:
Our mood can change in an instant, given the right reason. When washed away we can be uplifted
November 1st, 2017 16:05
lasergraph said:
Our mood can change in an instant, given the right reason. When washed away we can be uplifted
November 1st, 2017 16:05
Dark Mood
myself and me said:
Rainbow only showed up in the sky after rain. Love the contrast in this poem.
November 1st, 2017 10:38
myself and me said:
Rainbow only showed up in the sky after rain. Love the contrast in this poem.
November 1st, 2017 10:38
Dark Mood
Louis Gibbs said:
With rain comes the gift of life on this planet. I try to hold onto that thought when all is wet and gloomy ... not easy is it, as your fine poem describes. Well done, Fred!
November 1st, 2017 10:04
Louis Gibbs said:
With rain comes the gift of life on this planet. I try to hold onto that thought when all is wet and gloomy ... not easy is it, as your fine poem describes. Well done, Fred!
November 1st, 2017 10:04
Dark Mood
kevin browne said:
and may your rainbows remain to bring you the peace and beauty you so deserve. this is a great poem, FredPeyer.
November 1st, 2017 05:08
kevin browne said:
and may your rainbows remain to bring you the peace and beauty you so deserve. this is a great poem, FredPeyer.
November 1st, 2017 05:08
Dark Mood
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ You have hit on one of my uplifting Mantras ! In times of stress I always say \"After the Rain come the Rainbow ~ You can\'t have the SPECTRUM without the SPECTRE ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing ~ thanks for your comment on my New York Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ You have hit on one of my uplifting Mantras ! In times of stress I always say \"After the Rain come the Rainbow ~ You can\'t have the SPECTRUM without the SPECTRE ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing ~ thanks for your comment on my New York Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
November 1st, 2017 04:38
Dark Mood
orchidee said:
Well, it is a good write Fred. Not that it\'s particularly \'dark\'. Though \'dark\' is rarely my genre, it helps folk, we know, if they can express dark things.
Meanwhile - I wish I would express something without singing it. It only torments folk when I say \'And now a song from me\'. That\'s fairly dark and horrific. lol.
November 1st, 2017 04:28
orchidee said:
Well, it is a good write Fred. Not that it\'s particularly \'dark\'. Though \'dark\' is rarely my genre, it helps folk, we know, if they can express dark things.
Meanwhile - I wish I would express something without singing it. It only torments folk when I say \'And now a song from me\'. That\'s fairly dark and horrific. lol.
November 1st, 2017 04:28
If Life is...
orchidee said:
I thought this was about my wedding! oohh lol. I dunno about utter delight. It sure is utter misery for me now! heehee.
November 1st, 2017 02:40
orchidee said:
I thought this was about my wedding! oohh lol. I dunno about utter delight. It sure is utter misery for me now! heehee.
November 1st, 2017 02:40
Dark Mood
Goldfinch60 said:
Rain can be a cleanser for both outside and within. Good write.
November 1st, 2017 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Rain can be a cleanser for both outside and within. Good write.
November 1st, 2017 01:59
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