Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



The Actor
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FRED ~ The whole World\'s a stage and we poor souls merely \"extras\" in life\'s great Epics ~ Triumphs & Tragedies ~ we have to make the most of each art we are called on to play ~ Angela & I are enjoying \"Love Story\" ! Yours BRIAN. Please \"Send Someone Flowers\" using my latest FUSION and enjoy a cyber massage in my Aromatherapy Poem ~ Thanks B.

November 7th, 2017 05:43

The Actor
Accidental Poet said:

Expressing your feelings is what poetry is all about Fred. And done here so well.

November 7th, 2017 04:51

The Actor
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, you may well be an actor without a play but you certainly are a poet with a fine pen.

November 7th, 2017 02:05

The Actor
Michael Edwards said:

Simple straight and punchy - a superb work Fred

November 7th, 2017 01:14

Realization
orchidee said:

I\'m gonna clear off and leave KP to it! lol. In my case \'Better not to have loved (?) KP at all\'. doh! lol.

November 6th, 2017 12:37

Realization
SorrowfullyHappy said:

beautiful write

November 6th, 2017 12:18

Realization
Louis Gibbs said:

So much truth about us all in this fine poem, Fred.. Being thrust out of a relationship can result in an empowering spurt of growth. Painful, but often productive.
Good and insightful write here!

November 6th, 2017 09:47

Roses
myself and me said:

Sex and love, he and she, simple, straight and fun. Roses, the compromise.

November 6th, 2017 09:42

Realization
Anna Marg said:

Great poem as allways!

November 6th, 2017 09:19

Realization
myself and me said:

\"Though sad and hurt she realized
She was now free to live HER life \"
This is wonderful, free again.


November 6th, 2017 09:06

Realization
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Fred, living your own life is a dream to which we must all aspire.

November 6th, 2017 09:00

Realization
WL Schuett said:

Very good poem Fred , uplifting and inspiring

November 6th, 2017 08:44

Realization
Christina8 said:

This is such a fabulous write. So many poets on MPS and just folks in real life ought to see this poem! It\'s empowering! Great job!

November 6th, 2017 07:20

Realization
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FRED ~ Your excellent Poem mirrors my MANTRA ~ \"Better to have Loved and lost ~ than never to have Love at all\" I am an optimist ~ so I consider all LOSS as RELEASE to enable me too \"To be free to live MY life again ! Yours BRIAN

November 6th, 2017 04:51

Realization
Accidental Poet said:

This is SOOOO good Fred. An understatement when I say excellent. Job well done.

November 6th, 2017 03:53

Roses
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Fred, the stereotypical male it may be but as you and I know when love happens it has nothing to do with sex.

November 6th, 2017 01:45

Roses
WL Schuett said:

Fun poem , can I just get some roses ... that’s hilarious

November 5th, 2017 18:58

Roses
Christina8 said:

A very good lighthearted write, Fred! I enjoyed it very much. Sounds like a conversation between a couple that just met. Nevertheless, a great write!

November 5th, 2017 11:28

Roses
Louis Gibbs said:

This one captures the stereotypical male quite well, Fred ... sadly. But then, offsetting that stereotype, there are male poets who can think beyond the animal instincts we all are born with. Such is nature\'s design.
Well written piece, my friend.

November 5th, 2017 11:04

Roses
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. Slap and tickle? A bit of the \'other\'? Too swoony for me, I bet! heehee.

November 5th, 2017 09:21

Roses
Accidental Poet said:

aah yes, the compromise between spouses. But it doesn\'t have to be that way if the mutually love and want each other.

November 5th, 2017 08:37

Innocence Lost
skyebellasario said:

Wonderful write Fred!

November 4th, 2017 15:32

Innocence Lost
WL Schuett said:

Nice Fred , I think everyone could relate to this poem .....

November 4th, 2017 08:39

Innocence Lost
Louis Gibbs said:

Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed here, Fred! Good write.

November 4th, 2017 08:13

Innocence Lost
ShannonXx said:

Love the story within this poem!!

November 4th, 2017 07:01

Innocence Lost
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. I wish she (KP) would go from my life. No chance! lol.

November 4th, 2017 02:45

Innocence Lost
Mugsdaddy said:

thought you were writing about your first time.great write

November 4th, 2017 01:22

Innocence Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

What a very good write Fred, did she ever come back?

November 4th, 2017 00:59

The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
rrodriguez said:

Fred, this is indeed a well and thoughtful poem. Enjoyed it. I had a smile as I read it.

November 3rd, 2017 17:23

At the Party
Syd said:

Ha ha very funny. Great poem Fred

November 3rd, 2017 15:35



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