Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
At the Party
myself and me said:
I hope it is NOT you, but the poem did come out of your mind. :). What an end. Love it.
October 27th, 2017 07:47
myself and me said:
I hope it is NOT you, but the poem did come out of your mind. :). What an end. Love it.
October 27th, 2017 07:47
At the Party
Christina8 said:
Oh man! Great poem and really great ending! LOL Enjoyed it very much!
October 27th, 2017 06:35
Christina8 said:
Oh man! Great poem and really great ending! LOL Enjoyed it very much!
October 27th, 2017 06:35
At the Party
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a surprise ending here Fred - a fantastic read which had all the trimmings of a one night stand and then - wow - such a clever ending.
October 27th, 2017 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a surprise ending here Fred - a fantastic read which had all the trimmings of a one night stand and then - wow - such a clever ending.
October 27th, 2017 03:25
At the Party
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Fred. Maybe he knew all along that the she was really a he and not horrified at all! Enjoyed reading it!
October 27th, 2017 02:42
Laura🌻 said:
Great write Fred. Maybe he knew all along that the she was really a he and not horrified at all! Enjoyed reading it!
October 27th, 2017 02:42
At the Party
orchidee said:
Oh no lol! A fine write Fred. There\'s a \'Carry On\' film where similar things happens. One says: \'How did you find out (that she was a he?)\'. The reply is: \'I\'d hate to tell you!\'
October 27th, 2017 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh no lol! A fine write Fred. There\'s a \'Carry On\' film where similar things happens. One says: \'How did you find out (that she was a he?)\'. The reply is: \'I\'d hate to tell you!\'
October 27th, 2017 01:45
All we can be
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind is always free and goes on to infinity. Good write Fred.
October 27th, 2017 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind is always free and goes on to infinity. Good write Fred.
October 27th, 2017 01:08
At the Party
Michael Edwards said:
Urrrgh - I\'ve heard of this happening - and you\'ve turned it into a great poem - nice one Fred.
October 27th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
Urrrgh - I\'ve heard of this happening - and you\'ve turned it into a great poem - nice one Fred.
October 27th, 2017 00:36
All we can be
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I\'m at more free with your words. Amazing
October 26th, 2017 17:23
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I\'m at more free with your words. Amazing
October 26th, 2017 17:23
All we can be
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love the rhyming and meaning put into this posting Fred - -a perfect reminder to be all we can be then experience peace without restriction.
October 26th, 2017 13:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love the rhyming and meaning put into this posting Fred - -a perfect reminder to be all we can be then experience peace without restriction.
October 26th, 2017 13:08
All we can be
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Keeping it (the mind) a prisoner of our own comfort zone\" ... describes well the malady that afflicts most and retards our progress as a species, sadly. Your wonderful poem says it well, Fred! Congratulations on this fine contribution for consideration.
October 26th, 2017 09:12
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Keeping it (the mind) a prisoner of our own comfort zone\" ... describes well the malady that afflicts most and retards our progress as a species, sadly. Your wonderful poem says it well, Fred! Congratulations on this fine contribution for consideration.
October 26th, 2017 09:12
All we can be
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I seek to go \'into\' my mind more at times, e.g. meditation. Whether I find anything there, or draw a blank and find only sawdust in there, is another matter! lol.
October 26th, 2017 08:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I seek to go \'into\' my mind more at times, e.g. meditation. Whether I find anything there, or draw a blank and find only sawdust in there, is another matter! lol.
October 26th, 2017 08:05
All we can be
A.C Doomcraft said:
Sadly there\'s so many distractions from freedom and happiness that keep us bound the mind is the last truly free space
October 26th, 2017 07:58
A.C Doomcraft said:
Sadly there\'s so many distractions from freedom and happiness that keep us bound the mind is the last truly free space
October 26th, 2017 07:58
All we can be
myself and me said:
How wonderful would that be, fly free in the sky, run free in the ocean, be what we can be, be what we want to be.
October 26th, 2017 07:42
myself and me said:
How wonderful would that be, fly free in the sky, run free in the ocean, be what we can be, be what we want to be.
October 26th, 2017 07:42
All we can be
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
The last stanza so true.
Unfortunately we get there too late because it’s the first two stanzas
that drive the force of the
first half of our lives!
We, as senior citizens, come to this realization a bit too late!
So let’s enjoy what we have left...
...if that’s at all possible!
A well written reminder to live this life on earth to the fullest!
Thank you for your thoughts!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2017 06:04
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
The last stanza so true.
Unfortunately we get there too late because it’s the first two stanzas
that drive the force of the
first half of our lives!
We, as senior citizens, come to this realization a bit too late!
So let’s enjoy what we have left...
...if that’s at all possible!
A well written reminder to live this life on earth to the fullest!
Thank you for your thoughts!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2017 06:04
Quiet, so quiet
myself and me said:
The quiet took my breath away. Hope everything is fine in Hawaii.
October 25th, 2017 10:34
myself and me said:
The quiet took my breath away. Hope everything is fine in Hawaii.
October 25th, 2017 10:34
Quiet, so quiet
Louis Gibbs said:
A timely tribute to nature\'s power after this terribly destructive hurricane season, Fred! I like the clever way the lead line kept shifting to the right, drawing us in. Nice touch!
October 25th, 2017 09:51
Louis Gibbs said:
A timely tribute to nature\'s power after this terribly destructive hurricane season, Fred! I like the clever way the lead line kept shifting to the right, drawing us in. Nice touch!
October 25th, 2017 09:51
Quiet, so quiet
WL Schuett said:
Great poem Fred love the structure and the anticipation of the impending storm
October 25th, 2017 07:39
WL Schuett said:
Great poem Fred love the structure and the anticipation of the impending storm
October 25th, 2017 07:39
Quiet, so quiet
ShannonXx said:
Great poem! love the repetitiveness really paints a picture!
October 25th, 2017 07:24
ShannonXx said:
Great poem! love the repetitiveness really paints a picture!
October 25th, 2017 07:24
Quiet, so quiet
poetboy123 said:
Created a wonderful picture in my mind, keep it up!
October 25th, 2017 06:10
poetboy123 said:
Created a wonderful picture in my mind, keep it up!
October 25th, 2017 06:10
Quiet, so quiet
Laura🌻 said:
We certainly are nature’s pawn! My favorite line in this powerful write! Can painfully feel that hurricane coming! Nicely done Fred!
October 25th, 2017 04:15
Laura🌻 said:
We certainly are nature’s pawn! My favorite line in this powerful write! Can painfully feel that hurricane coming! Nicely done Fred!
October 25th, 2017 04:15
Quiet, so quiet
kevin browne said:
a gorgeous poem with your words and winds getting stronger, you hold you weight here, Fred, love your work.
October 25th, 2017 03:02
kevin browne said:
a gorgeous poem with your words and winds getting stronger, you hold you weight here, Fred, love your work.
October 25th, 2017 03:02
Quiet, so quiet
Michael Edwards said:
This paints the picture so well - I can feel the impending - Well writ Fred.
October 25th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
This paints the picture so well - I can feel the impending - Well writ Fred.
October 25th, 2017 00:36
The Groom
kevin browne said:
I was making light of your beautifully worded and rare poem. I love the depth and the thoughts of it. it is very acute indeed.
October 24th, 2017 19:29
kevin browne said:
I was making light of your beautifully worded and rare poem. I love the depth and the thoughts of it. it is very acute indeed.
October 24th, 2017 19:29
The Groom
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
The Groom
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
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