Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
All we can be
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I seek to go \'into\' my mind more at times, e.g. meditation. Whether I find anything there, or draw a blank and find only sawdust in there, is another matter! lol.
October 26th, 2017 08:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I seek to go \'into\' my mind more at times, e.g. meditation. Whether I find anything there, or draw a blank and find only sawdust in there, is another matter! lol.
October 26th, 2017 08:05
All we can be
A.C Doomcraft said:
Sadly there\'s so many distractions from freedom and happiness that keep us bound the mind is the last truly free space
October 26th, 2017 07:58
A.C Doomcraft said:
Sadly there\'s so many distractions from freedom and happiness that keep us bound the mind is the last truly free space
October 26th, 2017 07:58
All we can be
myself and me said:
How wonderful would that be, fly free in the sky, run free in the ocean, be what we can be, be what we want to be.
October 26th, 2017 07:42
myself and me said:
How wonderful would that be, fly free in the sky, run free in the ocean, be what we can be, be what we want to be.
October 26th, 2017 07:42
All we can be
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
The last stanza so true.
Unfortunately we get there too late because it’s the first two stanzas
that drive the force of the
first half of our lives!
We, as senior citizens, come to this realization a bit too late!
So let’s enjoy what we have left...
...if that’s at all possible!
A well written reminder to live this life on earth to the fullest!
Thank you for your thoughts!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2017 06:04
Laura🌻 said:
Fred,
The last stanza so true.
Unfortunately we get there too late because it’s the first two stanzas
that drive the force of the
first half of our lives!
We, as senior citizens, come to this realization a bit too late!
So let’s enjoy what we have left...
...if that’s at all possible!
A well written reminder to live this life on earth to the fullest!
Thank you for your thoughts!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2017 06:04
Quiet, so quiet
myself and me said:
The quiet took my breath away. Hope everything is fine in Hawaii.
October 25th, 2017 10:34
myself and me said:
The quiet took my breath away. Hope everything is fine in Hawaii.
October 25th, 2017 10:34
Quiet, so quiet
Louis Gibbs said:
A timely tribute to nature\'s power after this terribly destructive hurricane season, Fred! I like the clever way the lead line kept shifting to the right, drawing us in. Nice touch!
October 25th, 2017 09:51
Louis Gibbs said:
A timely tribute to nature\'s power after this terribly destructive hurricane season, Fred! I like the clever way the lead line kept shifting to the right, drawing us in. Nice touch!
October 25th, 2017 09:51
Quiet, so quiet
WL Schuett said:
Great poem Fred love the structure and the anticipation of the impending storm
October 25th, 2017 07:39
WL Schuett said:
Great poem Fred love the structure and the anticipation of the impending storm
October 25th, 2017 07:39
Quiet, so quiet
ShannonXx said:
Great poem! love the repetitiveness really paints a picture!
October 25th, 2017 07:24
ShannonXx said:
Great poem! love the repetitiveness really paints a picture!
October 25th, 2017 07:24
Quiet, so quiet
poetboy123 said:
Created a wonderful picture in my mind, keep it up!
October 25th, 2017 06:10
poetboy123 said:
Created a wonderful picture in my mind, keep it up!
October 25th, 2017 06:10
Quiet, so quiet
Laura🌻 said:
We certainly are nature’s pawn! My favorite line in this powerful write! Can painfully feel that hurricane coming! Nicely done Fred!
October 25th, 2017 04:15
Laura🌻 said:
We certainly are nature’s pawn! My favorite line in this powerful write! Can painfully feel that hurricane coming! Nicely done Fred!
October 25th, 2017 04:15
Quiet, so quiet
kevin browne said:
a gorgeous poem with your words and winds getting stronger, you hold you weight here, Fred, love your work.
October 25th, 2017 03:02
kevin browne said:
a gorgeous poem with your words and winds getting stronger, you hold you weight here, Fred, love your work.
October 25th, 2017 03:02
Quiet, so quiet
Michael Edwards said:
This paints the picture so well - I can feel the impending - Well writ Fred.
October 25th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
This paints the picture so well - I can feel the impending - Well writ Fred.
October 25th, 2017 00:36
The Groom
kevin browne said:
I was making light of your beautifully worded and rare poem. I love the depth and the thoughts of it. it is very acute indeed.
October 24th, 2017 19:29
kevin browne said:
I was making light of your beautifully worded and rare poem. I love the depth and the thoughts of it. it is very acute indeed.
October 24th, 2017 19:29
The Groom
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
The Groom
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
The Groom
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
The Groom
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
One more Night
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
One more Night
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
One more Night
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
One more Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
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