Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Groom
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
kevin browne said:
God, help me if ever I had to sleep in that room. you have scared the shit of me, Fred Peyer and now I have to go to bed, with the light on.
October 24th, 2017 19:14
The Groom
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
Christina8 said:
Well written but quite the dark scene, hopefully imaginative. Sometimes us poets just go off into another world. Hopefully the sadness, if that\'s what it is, doesn\'t linger for long. Great write!!
October 24th, 2017 16:41
The Groom
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
The Groom
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
One more Night
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
One more Night
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
One more Night
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
One more Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
Virgin White Sheet
Louis Gibbs said:
Does your wife approve of this hot affair? Well done expression of the passion of a poet, Fred. Have a safe and fun time with the grandkids!
October 17th, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Does your wife approve of this hot affair? Well done expression of the passion of a poet, Fred. Have a safe and fun time with the grandkids!
October 17th, 2017 08:46
Virgin White Sheet
Christina8 said:
Very creative write! Go enjoy those grandkids! :-) We will miss your poetry!
October 17th, 2017 07:13
Christina8 said:
Very creative write! Go enjoy those grandkids! :-) We will miss your poetry!
October 17th, 2017 07:13
Virgin White Sheet
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sure that eternity waits in this one, enjoy the grandkids.
October 17th, 2017 02:44
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sure that eternity waits in this one, enjoy the grandkids.
October 17th, 2017 02:44
Virgin White Sheet
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hot kisses of letters be back with us soon Fred. Enjoy your time with the grandchildren, grandchildren are wonderful to be with.
October 17th, 2017 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hot kisses of letters be back with us soon Fred. Enjoy your time with the grandchildren, grandchildren are wonderful to be with.
October 17th, 2017 02:05
New Start
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful exploration of rhyme here, Fred! A touching poem of lost love. Well done!
October 16th, 2017 12:26
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful exploration of rhyme here, Fred! A touching poem of lost love. Well done!
October 16th, 2017 12:26
New Start
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we fall. I say dangerous territory, but the heart never listens, it blindly follows on its own less traveled path. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:38
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we fall. I say dangerous territory, but the heart never listens, it blindly follows on its own less traveled path. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:38
New Start
Christina8 said:
It may be imagination but it was a beauty of a write! It\'s vivid in my mind. Great job!
October 16th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
It may be imagination but it was a beauty of a write! It\'s vivid in my mind. Great job!
October 16th, 2017 07:48
New Start
WL Schuett said:
Good imaginative write Fred , a lovelorn poem conveyed very convincingly ! 😎
October 16th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Good imaginative write Fred , a lovelorn poem conveyed very convincingly ! 😎
October 16th, 2017 07:43
New Start
Seek said:
One of my favorite songs by Nat King Cole went \"Love is lovelier the second time around\". It certainly seems that way with you Fred. An uplifting ending of a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2017 05:37
Seek said:
One of my favorite songs by Nat King Cole went \"Love is lovelier the second time around\". It certainly seems that way with you Fred. An uplifting ending of a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2017 05:37
New Start
Accidental Poet said:
Oh how this speaks to my memories of my love. I suppose this is my fantasy also. Always wishing to see her face again, and not from just an old photograph. Great write Fred. ; )
October 16th, 2017 05:13
Accidental Poet said:
Oh how this speaks to my memories of my love. I suppose this is my fantasy also. Always wishing to see her face again, and not from just an old photograph. Great write Fred. ; )
October 16th, 2017 05:13
New Start
Mugsdaddy said:
I been right there with you the one that got away steps back in and all\'s well. The heart wants what it wants.
Great piece,
Mugsdaddy
October 16th, 2017 02:45
Mugsdaddy said:
I been right there with you the one that got away steps back in and all\'s well. The heart wants what it wants.
Great piece,
Mugsdaddy
October 16th, 2017 02:45
New Start
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, love the kind of hug when you can feel the sadness leaving the body. Thanks for the picture painted in my mind
October 16th, 2017 02:24
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, love the kind of hug when you can feel the sadness leaving the body. Thanks for the picture painted in my mind
October 16th, 2017 02:24
New Start
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You would have heard my \'cooeeee\' if I had turned up!
October 16th, 2017 02:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You would have heard my \'cooeeee\' if I had turned up!
October 16th, 2017 02:02
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