Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Groom
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going around nowadays, with all the heroin ODs. Good write, Fred!
October 24th, 2017 16:24
The Groom
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
Michael Edwards said:
Agree with Diamond - that last line is quite inspired - well written Fred.
October 24th, 2017 16:16
One more Night
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
Christina8 said:
Wow, sneaky! Loved this write! I did not expect that at all! Great job on this!
October 18th, 2017 12:33
One more Night
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
Louis Gibbs said:
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good write, Fred!
October 18th, 2017 11:09
One more Night
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Very good poem Fred , easy to read and relate to .
October 18th, 2017 07:43
One more Night
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34
Virgin White Sheet
Louis Gibbs said:
Does your wife approve of this hot affair? Well done expression of the passion of a poet, Fred. Have a safe and fun time with the grandkids!
October 17th, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Does your wife approve of this hot affair? Well done expression of the passion of a poet, Fred. Have a safe and fun time with the grandkids!
October 17th, 2017 08:46
Virgin White Sheet
Christina8 said:
Very creative write! Go enjoy those grandkids! :-) We will miss your poetry!
October 17th, 2017 07:13
Christina8 said:
Very creative write! Go enjoy those grandkids! :-) We will miss your poetry!
October 17th, 2017 07:13
Virgin White Sheet
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sure that eternity waits in this one, enjoy the grandkids.
October 17th, 2017 02:44
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sure that eternity waits in this one, enjoy the grandkids.
October 17th, 2017 02:44
Virgin White Sheet
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hot kisses of letters be back with us soon Fred. Enjoy your time with the grandchildren, grandchildren are wonderful to be with.
October 17th, 2017 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May those hot kisses of letters be back with us soon Fred. Enjoy your time with the grandchildren, grandchildren are wonderful to be with.
October 17th, 2017 02:05
New Start
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful exploration of rhyme here, Fred! A touching poem of lost love. Well done!
October 16th, 2017 12:26
Louis Gibbs said:
A masterful exploration of rhyme here, Fred! A touching poem of lost love. Well done!
October 16th, 2017 12:26
New Start
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we fall. I say dangerous territory, but the heart never listens, it blindly follows on its own less traveled path. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:38
MendedFences27 said:
Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we fall. I say dangerous territory, but the heart never listens, it blindly follows on its own less traveled path. Loved this poem. - Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:38
New Start
Christina8 said:
It may be imagination but it was a beauty of a write! It\'s vivid in my mind. Great job!
October 16th, 2017 07:48
Christina8 said:
It may be imagination but it was a beauty of a write! It\'s vivid in my mind. Great job!
October 16th, 2017 07:48
New Start
WL Schuett said:
Good imaginative write Fred , a lovelorn poem conveyed very convincingly ! 😎
October 16th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Good imaginative write Fred , a lovelorn poem conveyed very convincingly ! 😎
October 16th, 2017 07:43
New Start
Seek said:
One of my favorite songs by Nat King Cole went \"Love is lovelier the second time around\". It certainly seems that way with you Fred. An uplifting ending of a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2017 05:37
Seek said:
One of my favorite songs by Nat King Cole went \"Love is lovelier the second time around\". It certainly seems that way with you Fred. An uplifting ending of a beautiful write.
October 16th, 2017 05:37
New Start
Accidental Poet said:
Oh how this speaks to my memories of my love. I suppose this is my fantasy also. Always wishing to see her face again, and not from just an old photograph. Great write Fred. ; )
October 16th, 2017 05:13
Accidental Poet said:
Oh how this speaks to my memories of my love. I suppose this is my fantasy also. Always wishing to see her face again, and not from just an old photograph. Great write Fred. ; )
October 16th, 2017 05:13
New Start
Mugsdaddy said:
I been right there with you the one that got away steps back in and all\'s well. The heart wants what it wants.
Great piece,
Mugsdaddy
October 16th, 2017 02:45
Mugsdaddy said:
I been right there with you the one that got away steps back in and all\'s well. The heart wants what it wants.
Great piece,
Mugsdaddy
October 16th, 2017 02:45
New Start
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, love the kind of hug when you can feel the sadness leaving the body. Thanks for the picture painted in my mind
October 16th, 2017 02:24
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, love the kind of hug when you can feel the sadness leaving the body. Thanks for the picture painted in my mind
October 16th, 2017 02:24
New Start
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You would have heard my \'cooeeee\' if I had turned up!
October 16th, 2017 02:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. You would have heard my \'cooeeee\' if I had turned up!
October 16th, 2017 02:02
All of the Above
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, this is a beautiful and well executed. Very expressive and thought -out. Thank you for sharing it.
October 15th, 2017 20:11
rrodriguez said:
Indeed, this is a beautiful and well executed. Very expressive and thought -out. Thank you for sharing it.
October 15th, 2017 20:11
All of the Above
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write Fred! We know you have a big heart!
October 15th, 2017 08:26
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write Fred! We know you have a big heart!
October 15th, 2017 08:26
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