Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Raising the Bar
WL Schuett said:

A poem with some fine wisdom , well done Fred

October 14th, 2017 09:01

Raising the Bar
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - this explains in a few simple lines what brings us enlightenment Fred - -a fantastic reminder and into my favs goes this little gem.

October 14th, 2017 05:35

Together Again
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! Loved it all the way through. I\'ll stick around a bit longer but the ending was wonderful!

October 13th, 2017 14:01

Together Again
Tony36 said:

Great writen

October 13th, 2017 13:41

Together Again
MendedFences27 said:

Missing someone who has been lost, and you\'ve captured it exquisitely, finding remembrances in things they favored and in your daily life, and still holding on gently to the hope of tomorrows together. A lovely poem and tribute, really, to the love you once had and still have for each other. Beautiful poem. - Phil A.

October 13th, 2017 12:27

Together Again
WL Schuett said:

Very nice Fred , a wonderful poem lots of garden imagery equating to love . I relate

October 13th, 2017 06:51

Together Again
Poetic Dan said:

Nicely done! I\'ve been looking up like this for over half my life, and the tingling I may felt thinks you are right. But like you said I\'ll still stick around for a while ;)

October 13th, 2017 02:40

Together Again
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred.

October 13th, 2017 01:39

Together Again
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write Fred, love \'the garden of memories\' it brings such a vivid picture into my mind.

October 13th, 2017 01:00

Together Again
Louis Gibbs said:

Indeed! All of our loved ones await us. Something I really look forward to, as I\'m sure you do too, Fred. A beauty of a poem!

October 13th, 2017 00:09

Fast Lane
poetboy123 said:

Very relatable, great piece!

October 12th, 2017 18:04

Fast Lane
WL Schuett said:

Deep and thoughtful Really nice poem Fred

October 12th, 2017 08:46

Fast Lane
malubotelho said:

Great writing Fred. A lot of people takes the fast lane. I never. I enjoy the ride.

October 12th, 2017 08:05

Fast Lane
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like advice on the proper way to ride a motorcycle? Just kidding. Fine metaphor on how not to live one\'s life! It usually takes one a while to figure that out. Good poem, Fred!

October 12th, 2017 07:47

Fast Lane
orchidee said:

Good write Fred.

October 12th, 2017 01:28

White Lie
lasergraph said:

One should never lie if he can\'t remember what it was, that is one reason I don\'t. No memory for it.

October 11th, 2017 15:08

White Lie
WL Schuett said:

So much truth in a poem about lies , good poem

October 11th, 2017 07:47

White Lie
Fay Slimm. said:

A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished discreetly as the verse says is the better way Fred methinks.

October 11th, 2017 05:57

White Lie
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. Unfortunately my white lie has gone too far. I only said originally \'I would like to marry KP\'. doh! heehee.

October 11th, 2017 01:58

White Lie
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the problem with lying is that you have to remember which lie you have told and memory can fail.

October 11th, 2017 01:10

White Lie
Louis Gibbs said:

This can\'t be a reference to the current political stage, a such situations aren\'t ended discreetly that I\'ve noticed. At any rate, an intriguing poem, Fred!

October 11th, 2017 00:22

Still House
dusk arising said:

Superb opening line. At such times you can almost wear that silence like a cloak. Love this piece. into my fav\'s

October 10th, 2017 11:47

Still House
Poetic Dan said:

This was so powerful for me!
To many words to put in any story of order, so I\'ll just give thanks for help you are giving me.

October 10th, 2017 10:13

Still House
Louis Gibbs said:

Ouch! That would cut deep. Glad it came from your fertile imagination. Well done, Fred!
P.S. Welcome back, Kat!

October 10th, 2017 09:49

Still House
malubotelho said:

Very great write Fred. Youโ€™ve captured that moment so well. Very deep and sad. I could feel the emptiness of the house right on my heart.

October 10th, 2017 08:05

Still House
WL Schuett said:

Good write I can feel his rejection being left with a note , very cold

October 10th, 2017 07:50

Still House
orchidee said:

Good write Fred. I wish it was true of KP, that she\'s had enough of me. I\'ve had enough of her since day one! doh! lol.

October 10th, 2017 01:44

Still House
Goldfinch60 said:

I do hope this is not true, it is a very powerful write Fred.

October 10th, 2017 00:49

Recognition
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. There are many wonderful experiences in our past lives of which we no longer have any knowledge.

October 10th, 2017 00:36

Recognition
tanvir H said:

nice man๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

October 9th, 2017 21:36



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