Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Recognition
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m struggling with the last four lines, here. Don\'t recognize why yet, can\'t put my finger on it. It is a beauty of a poem for sure, Fred!
October 9th, 2017 18:57
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m struggling with the last four lines, here. Don\'t recognize why yet, can\'t put my finger on it. It is a beauty of a poem for sure, Fred!
October 9th, 2017 18:57
Recognition
Poetic Dan said:
I took such a deep breath at the end my friend, letting go of some inner pain. It was even more intense reading it backwards! As If I understand it better ;/ thank you for sharing this and the energy it brings.
October 9th, 2017 16:47
Poetic Dan said:
I took such a deep breath at the end my friend, letting go of some inner pain. It was even more intense reading it backwards! As If I understand it better ;/ thank you for sharing this and the energy it brings.
October 9th, 2017 16:47
Last Row
Goldfinch60 said:
To know a person you must be able to look inside them. Good meaningful write.
October 9th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
To know a person you must be able to look inside them. Good meaningful write.
October 9th, 2017 00:22
Last Row
malubotelho said:
This was unexpected Fred. This is what I call a good heart. No one never saw her and still she loved them. That is rare. Great thoughts of you to write this little piece.
October 8th, 2017 18:54
malubotelho said:
This was unexpected Fred. This is what I call a good heart. No one never saw her and still she loved them. That is rare. Great thoughts of you to write this little piece.
October 8th, 2017 18:54
Last Row
Michael Edwards said:
Bully for her - I\'m on her side - well writ Fred.
October 8th, 2017 05:39
Michael Edwards said:
Bully for her - I\'m on her side - well writ Fred.
October 8th, 2017 05:39
Last Row
Fay Slimm. said:
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can only be seen by those who look deeper. Super read.
October 8th, 2017 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can only be seen by those who look deeper. Super read.
October 8th, 2017 04:50
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
We often miss trains in our life but we must always remember that another one will soon be coming. Good write.
October 8th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
We often miss trains in our life but we must always remember that another one will soon be coming. Good write.
October 8th, 2017 00:51
Missed
MendedFences27 said:
I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with \"ticket to his heart,\" and all. Or was it just a symbolic train (of love) that he missed and it will never return. A lot said in 5 lines and a lot of choices to be made. Good poetry. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:44
MendedFences27 said:
I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with \"ticket to his heart,\" and all. Or was it just a symbolic train (of love) that he missed and it will never return. A lot said in 5 lines and a lot of choices to be made. Good poetry. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:44
Missed
malubotelho said:
How many times I\'ve missed that train.
Nice write Fred. Sometimes to miss the train is your best luck.
October 7th, 2017 12:54
malubotelho said:
How many times I\'ve missed that train.
Nice write Fred. Sometimes to miss the train is your best luck.
October 7th, 2017 12:54
Missed
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of life\'s many missed opportunities. But yes, many more lives and many more opportunities will come along. A splendid poem, Fred!
October 7th, 2017 12:04
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of life\'s many missed opportunities. But yes, many more lives and many more opportunities will come along. A splendid poem, Fred!
October 7th, 2017 12:04
Missed
WL Schuett said:
Yeah I have missed the boat on many things myself ... good write
October 7th, 2017 08:58
WL Schuett said:
Yeah I have missed the boat on many things myself ... good write
October 7th, 2017 08:58
Missed
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh now this I can relate to Fred - - a missed train stands for so much in our busy lives. Great read.
October 7th, 2017 08:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh now this I can relate to Fred - - a missed train stands for so much in our busy lives. Great read.
October 7th, 2017 08:38
Missed
orchidee said:
Doh! Missed again. A fine write Fred. A meta-wotsit train. Oh, I can\'t say any words over 3 syllables. It\'s the sherry does it. lol.
October 7th, 2017 05:48
orchidee said:
Doh! Missed again. A fine write Fred. A meta-wotsit train. Oh, I can\'t say any words over 3 syllables. It\'s the sherry does it. lol.
October 7th, 2017 05:48
Chains
dusk arising said:
When those chains are heavy and youve dragged them around through your lacklustre life.... along comes an opportunity..... safety of more lacklustre years or a chance of happiness and joy.... wouldn\'t you risk it?
October 6th, 2017 17:06
dusk arising said:
When those chains are heavy and youve dragged them around through your lacklustre life.... along comes an opportunity..... safety of more lacklustre years or a chance of happiness and joy.... wouldn\'t you risk it?
October 6th, 2017 17:06
Chains
malubotelho said:
If it is literally to jump in the see, I would get a floater before jumping or would not jump at all once I cannot swimming. If is metaphoric I always jump to see what happens. I love adventures. Great writing Fred.
October 6th, 2017 13:34
malubotelho said:
If it is literally to jump in the see, I would get a floater before jumping or would not jump at all once I cannot swimming. If is metaphoric I always jump to see what happens. I love adventures. Great writing Fred.
October 6th, 2017 13:34
Chains
lasergraph said:
Our fear of the unknown always hinders forward progress. Well expressed
October 6th, 2017 09:00
lasergraph said:
Our fear of the unknown always hinders forward progress. Well expressed
October 6th, 2017 09:00
Chains
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem Fred and I never even thought of using the phone as a recorder
October 6th, 2017 06:39
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem Fred and I never even thought of using the phone as a recorder
October 6th, 2017 06:39
Chains
Christina8 said:
Very good metaphorical write! Loved how you left this open to interpretation. Very very good!
October 6th, 2017 06:37
Christina8 said:
Very good metaphorical write! Loved how you left this open to interpretation. Very very good!
October 6th, 2017 06:37
Chains
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the chains must be discarded then when he jumps he will float into a wonderful life.
October 6th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the chains must be discarded then when he jumps he will float into a wonderful life.
October 6th, 2017 02:13
Chains
Louis Gibbs said:
Those chains could well tip the scale of buoyancy, Fred. I\'d hesitate too. Nice piece!
October 6th, 2017 00:15
Louis Gibbs said:
Those chains could well tip the scale of buoyancy, Fred. I\'d hesitate too. Nice piece!
October 6th, 2017 00:15
Chains
Michael Edwards said:
An enigmatic message here - I do like poetry that males you think and leaves it to the reader to interpret - great work Fred.
October 6th, 2017 00:15
Michael Edwards said:
An enigmatic message here - I do like poetry that males you think and leaves it to the reader to interpret - great work Fred.
October 6th, 2017 00:15
Scarred
malubotelho said:
Fred, you are one of the most beautiful and talented person here. Actually you are awesome. And I truly believe you make all the difference in this world. For me just for the fact that you are a positive thinker, a happy soul, it is enough.
October 5th, 2017 14:52
malubotelho said:
Fred, you are one of the most beautiful and talented person here. Actually you are awesome. And I truly believe you make all the difference in this world. For me just for the fact that you are a positive thinker, a happy soul, it is enough.
October 5th, 2017 14:52
Mortality
malubotelho said:
A great write Fred. I believe in return so I think for many lives death is just a decay of our body to come back in a new one. The spirit remains. Beautiful poem. I once dreamed about one of my deaths. Was very real. Was a scary but nice dream.
October 5th, 2017 09:55
malubotelho said:
A great write Fred. I believe in return so I think for many lives death is just a decay of our body to come back in a new one. The spirit remains. Beautiful poem. I once dreamed about one of my deaths. Was very real. Was a scary but nice dream.
October 5th, 2017 09:55
Mortality
WL Schuett said:
Very nice Fred a fine poem , sorry for your losses . This poem serves as both your thoughts on your own mortality and as a tribute to loved ones
October 5th, 2017 07:42
WL Schuett said:
Very nice Fred a fine poem , sorry for your losses . This poem serves as both your thoughts on your own mortality and as a tribute to loved ones
October 5th, 2017 07:42
Mortality
Christina8 said:
I too have been thinking about mortality. Not my own but have lost someone recently. It\'s almost like the opposite of a birth...some are easy, some are hard. You did an excellent job on this poem! You wrote what I have been unable to . Thanks for sharing! Christina
October 5th, 2017 06:26
Christina8 said:
I too have been thinking about mortality. Not my own but have lost someone recently. It\'s almost like the opposite of a birth...some are easy, some are hard. You did an excellent job on this poem! You wrote what I have been unable to . Thanks for sharing! Christina
October 5th, 2017 06:26
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