Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Mortality
Louis Gibbs said:
\"From confinement to freedom\", used herein to describe coming into this life from the womb, also describes quite well an out-of-body experience I once had. That felt like I had left the confinement of the body into an indescribably wonderful new freedom. Interesting that the phrase fits both the birth and the death experiences.
Good, thought-provoking poem, Fred!
October 5th, 2017 04:40
Louis Gibbs said:
\"From confinement to freedom\", used herein to describe coming into this life from the womb, also describes quite well an out-of-body experience I once had. That felt like I had left the confinement of the body into an indescribably wonderful new freedom. Interesting that the phrase fits both the birth and the death experiences.
Good, thought-provoking poem, Fred!
October 5th, 2017 04:40
Mortality
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sorry to hear that such a wise writing came from sorrow.
This is an interesting pattern of thought, I\'m told by others that we do know our other lives but just like you I\'ve not been shown this so I\'ll have to wait and find out!
Such a hard subject that you\'ve spoken of so well. It reminded me of something I once read \" if animals do not fear death as we do, it\'s because they\'re not burdened with the sense of time\"
October 5th, 2017 02:58
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m sorry to hear that such a wise writing came from sorrow.
This is an interesting pattern of thought, I\'m told by others that we do know our other lives but just like you I\'ve not been shown this so I\'ll have to wait and find out!
Such a hard subject that you\'ve spoken of so well. It reminded me of something I once read \" if animals do not fear death as we do, it\'s because they\'re not burdened with the sense of time\"
October 5th, 2017 02:58
Mortality
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a sign that you\'re living
when the bladder is calling.
Yes you\'re okay at the moment Fred thankfully - enjoyed the read.
October 5th, 2017 02:28
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a sign that you\'re living
when the bladder is calling.
Yes you\'re okay at the moment Fred thankfully - enjoyed the read.
October 5th, 2017 02:28
Mortality
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you are still with us and will stay with us and we will meet as we go towards eternity.
October 5th, 2017 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, you are still with us and will stay with us and we will meet as we go towards eternity.
October 5th, 2017 01:42
Mortality
orchidee said:
A nice tribute within the poem Fred. Not going too soon, are you? Meanwhile - I\'m millions of years old, so I say, in me dafter moments!
October 5th, 2017 01:33
orchidee said:
A nice tribute within the poem Fred. Not going too soon, are you? Meanwhile - I\'m millions of years old, so I say, in me dafter moments!
October 5th, 2017 01:33
Scarred
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred, the world is always a better place as you have gone through life trying to do your best and if in that life you have made even just one person smile or laugh that will always be with them, without you that joy may never have happened.
October 5th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred, the world is always a better place as you have gone through life trying to do your best and if in that life you have made even just one person smile or laugh that will always be with them, without you that joy may never have happened.
October 5th, 2017 00:40
Mortality
kevin browne said:
Amen, to your wonderful attribute towards the unfortunate.
October 5th, 2017 00:31
kevin browne said:
Amen, to your wonderful attribute towards the unfortunate.
October 5th, 2017 00:31
Scarred
MendedFences27 said:
This world will go on without us and the billions who have gone before.We need not make it a better place, or be remembered after we leave. Just give it our best go and close the door on the way out. The only effect we have is on those with whom we inter-react. If that makes a small piece of this world better, then so be it. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2017 14:46
MendedFences27 said:
This world will go on without us and the billions who have gone before.We need not make it a better place, or be remembered after we leave. Just give it our best go and close the door on the way out. The only effect we have is on those with whom we inter-react. If that makes a small piece of this world better, then so be it. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2017 14:46
Scarred
Louis Gibbs said:
I think we all will be surprised at the many positive ways we touched the lives of others when we get to the \'instant replay\' on the other side. Good, thought-provoking write, Fred!
October 4th, 2017 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
I think we all will be surprised at the many positive ways we touched the lives of others when we get to the \'instant replay\' on the other side. Good, thought-provoking write, Fred!
October 4th, 2017 10:00
Scarred
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write, I agree with you it\'s the little things that make us or break us those things we do when nobody else is looking because we know it\'s the right thing to do. Those little things that keep us true to our nature or to make us the better person we all want to be.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 04:17
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write, I agree with you it\'s the little things that make us or break us those things we do when nobody else is looking because we know it\'s the right thing to do. Those little things that keep us true to our nature or to make us the better person we all want to be.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 04:17
Scarred
orchidee said:
Oh I\'m sure you have. I won\'t say \'did\' as you\'ve not departed yet! doh! Why, there\'s your poems for a start! And you\'ve not killed anyone, blown anyone up, acted monstrously, etc. Nor have millions of others.
October 4th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh I\'m sure you have. I won\'t say \'did\' as you\'ve not departed yet! doh! Why, there\'s your poems for a start! And you\'ve not killed anyone, blown anyone up, acted monstrously, etc. Nor have millions of others.
October 4th, 2017 01:48
Sweet Memories
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down memory lane with your poem. My question is, \"What was the song?\" I guess we all have our own personal favorites. I\'ve noticed that with each passing year, the Dragons get bigger.
A well written, nostalgic poem. I loved it. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:51
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down memory lane with your poem. My question is, \"What was the song?\" I guess we all have our own personal favorites. I\'ve noticed that with each passing year, the Dragons get bigger.
A well written, nostalgic poem. I loved it. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:51
Sweet Memories
WL Schuett said:
Really like this Fred till the last line \" to slain \" just stop the flow , even to be slain would work better , cool poem though !
October 3rd, 2017 09:33
WL Schuett said:
Really like this Fred till the last line \" to slain \" just stop the flow , even to be slain would work better , cool poem though !
October 3rd, 2017 09:33
Sweet Memories
kevin browne said:
Ah, you are such a sweet poet, Fred, I can\'t help falling in love with your pen.
October 3rd, 2017 08:56
kevin browne said:
Ah, you are such a sweet poet, Fred, I can\'t help falling in love with your pen.
October 3rd, 2017 08:56
Sweet Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
October 3rd, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
October 3rd, 2017 07:55
Sweet Memories
Louis Gibbs said:
When \"The song is over\", is a good time to go. Been the story of my life, it seems. Well phrased reflections in this one, Fred!
October 3rd, 2017 06:41
Louis Gibbs said:
When \"The song is over\", is a good time to go. Been the story of my life, it seems. Well phrased reflections in this one, Fred!
October 3rd, 2017 06:41
Sweet Memories
Poetic Dan said:
What a great start to my day, no worries now if a dragon gets in my way. I shall recall these words and move on from that place!
October 3rd, 2017 02:22
Poetic Dan said:
What a great start to my day, no worries now if a dragon gets in my way. I shall recall these words and move on from that place!
October 3rd, 2017 02:22
Wine Soaked Kisses
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
October 3rd, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
October 3rd, 2017 01:32
Wine Soaked Kisses
Michael Edwards said:
Written by a real poet - well done Fred
October 2nd, 2017 22:21
Michael Edwards said:
Written by a real poet - well done Fred
October 2nd, 2017 22:21
Wine Soaked Kisses
Louis Gibbs said:
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this tale of chivalry, Fred!
October 2nd, 2017 20:23
Louis Gibbs said:
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this tale of chivalry, Fred!
October 2nd, 2017 20:23
Wine Soaked Kisses
Christina8 said:
I love this write! It\'s hard to imagine that it\'s fantasy! Great job! Flowed very well!
October 2nd, 2017 18:47
Christina8 said:
I love this write! It\'s hard to imagine that it\'s fantasy! Great job! Flowed very well!
October 2nd, 2017 18:47
Wine Soaked Kisses
rrodriguez said:
Interesting write. It flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2017 18:46
rrodriguez said:
Interesting write. It flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2017 18:46
The Phone
Christina8 said:
Very well done poem. Glad you aren\'t in the \"dog house\". But it is a great write of fiction!
October 2nd, 2017 10:17
Christina8 said:
Very well done poem. Glad you aren\'t in the \"dog house\". But it is a great write of fiction!
October 2nd, 2017 10:17
The Phone
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
October 2nd, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
October 2nd, 2017 01:24
The Phone
Michael Edwards said:
The mark of a good poet is to write from experiences - the mark of a great poet is to write from imagination. This is a shortie from a rather controversial set of shorties which I\'m trying to pluck the courage to post. Anyway this applies here Fred. Well written.
October 2nd, 2017 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
The mark of a good poet is to write from experiences - the mark of a great poet is to write from imagination. This is a shortie from a rather controversial set of shorties which I\'m trying to pluck the courage to post. Anyway this applies here Fred. Well written.
October 2nd, 2017 01:14
The Phone
WL Schuett said:
Great write Fred well written first and foremost, but also a great read I could really feel the pain and regret ...
October 1st, 2017 21:30
WL Schuett said:
Great write Fred well written first and foremost, but also a great read I could really feel the pain and regret ...
October 1st, 2017 21:30
The Phone
Mugsdaddy said:
Great account of regret so glad it is fiction. Lol
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 21:22
Mugsdaddy said:
Great account of regret so glad it is fiction. Lol
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 21:22
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