Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
White Lie
Fay Slimm. said:
A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished discreetly as the verse says is the better way Fred methinks.
October 11th, 2017 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished discreetly as the verse says is the better way Fred methinks.
October 11th, 2017 05:57
White Lie
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Unfortunately my white lie has gone too far. I only said originally \'I would like to marry KP\'. doh! heehee.
October 11th, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Unfortunately my white lie has gone too far. I only said originally \'I would like to marry KP\'. doh! heehee.
October 11th, 2017 01:58
White Lie
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the problem with lying is that you have to remember which lie you have told and memory can fail.
October 11th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the problem with lying is that you have to remember which lie you have told and memory can fail.
October 11th, 2017 01:10
White Lie
Louis Gibbs said:
This can\'t be a reference to the current political stage, a such situations aren\'t ended discreetly that I\'ve noticed. At any rate, an intriguing poem, Fred!
October 11th, 2017 00:22
Louis Gibbs said:
This can\'t be a reference to the current political stage, a such situations aren\'t ended discreetly that I\'ve noticed. At any rate, an intriguing poem, Fred!
October 11th, 2017 00:22
Still House
dusk arising said:
Superb opening line. At such times you can almost wear that silence like a cloak. Love this piece. into my fav\'s
October 10th, 2017 11:47
dusk arising said:
Superb opening line. At such times you can almost wear that silence like a cloak. Love this piece. into my fav\'s
October 10th, 2017 11:47
Still House
Poetic Dan said:
This was so powerful for me!
To many words to put in any story of order, so I\'ll just give thanks for help you are giving me.
October 10th, 2017 10:13
Poetic Dan said:
This was so powerful for me!
To many words to put in any story of order, so I\'ll just give thanks for help you are giving me.
October 10th, 2017 10:13
Still House
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! That would cut deep. Glad it came from your fertile imagination. Well done, Fred!
P.S. Welcome back, Kat!
October 10th, 2017 09:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Ouch! That would cut deep. Glad it came from your fertile imagination. Well done, Fred!
P.S. Welcome back, Kat!
October 10th, 2017 09:49
Still House
malubotelho said:
Very great write Fred. You’ve captured that moment so well. Very deep and sad. I could feel the emptiness of the house right on my heart.
October 10th, 2017 08:05
malubotelho said:
Very great write Fred. You’ve captured that moment so well. Very deep and sad. I could feel the emptiness of the house right on my heart.
October 10th, 2017 08:05
Still House
WL Schuett said:
Good write I can feel his rejection being left with a note , very cold
October 10th, 2017 07:50
WL Schuett said:
Good write I can feel his rejection being left with a note , very cold
October 10th, 2017 07:50
Still House
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I wish it was true of KP, that she\'s had enough of me. I\'ve had enough of her since day one! doh! lol.
October 10th, 2017 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. I wish it was true of KP, that she\'s had enough of me. I\'ve had enough of her since day one! doh! lol.
October 10th, 2017 01:44
Still House
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope this is not true, it is a very powerful write Fred.
October 10th, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope this is not true, it is a very powerful write Fred.
October 10th, 2017 00:49
Recognition
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. There are many wonderful experiences in our past lives of which we no longer have any knowledge.
October 10th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. There are many wonderful experiences in our past lives of which we no longer have any knowledge.
October 10th, 2017 00:36
Recognition
Accidental Poet said:
Really makes you wonder of our earliest of memories from infancy. Are we even capable of remembering at so young an age? Great write Fred. ; )
October 9th, 2017 19:02
Accidental Poet said:
Really makes you wonder of our earliest of memories from infancy. Are we even capable of remembering at so young an age? Great write Fred. ; )
October 9th, 2017 19:02
Recognition
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m struggling with the last four lines, here. Don\'t recognize why yet, can\'t put my finger on it. It is a beauty of a poem for sure, Fred!
October 9th, 2017 18:57
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m struggling with the last four lines, here. Don\'t recognize why yet, can\'t put my finger on it. It is a beauty of a poem for sure, Fred!
October 9th, 2017 18:57
Recognition
Poetic Dan said:
I took such a deep breath at the end my friend, letting go of some inner pain. It was even more intense reading it backwards! As If I understand it better ;/ thank you for sharing this and the energy it brings.
October 9th, 2017 16:47
Poetic Dan said:
I took such a deep breath at the end my friend, letting go of some inner pain. It was even more intense reading it backwards! As If I understand it better ;/ thank you for sharing this and the energy it brings.
October 9th, 2017 16:47
Last Row
Goldfinch60 said:
To know a person you must be able to look inside them. Good meaningful write.
October 9th, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
To know a person you must be able to look inside them. Good meaningful write.
October 9th, 2017 00:22
Last Row
malubotelho said:
This was unexpected Fred. This is what I call a good heart. No one never saw her and still she loved them. That is rare. Great thoughts of you to write this little piece.
October 8th, 2017 18:54
malubotelho said:
This was unexpected Fred. This is what I call a good heart. No one never saw her and still she loved them. That is rare. Great thoughts of you to write this little piece.
October 8th, 2017 18:54
Last Row
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fred. Bet they took notice of her now. ; )
October 8th, 2017 05:49
Accidental Poet said:
Beautiful write Fred. Bet they took notice of her now. ; )
October 8th, 2017 05:49
Last Row
Michael Edwards said:
Bully for her - I\'m on her side - well writ Fred.
October 8th, 2017 05:39
Michael Edwards said:
Bully for her - I\'m on her side - well writ Fred.
October 8th, 2017 05:39
Last Row
Fay Slimm. said:
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can only be seen by those who look deeper. Super read.
October 8th, 2017 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can only be seen by those who look deeper. Super read.
October 8th, 2017 04:50
Missed
Goldfinch60 said:
We often miss trains in our life but we must always remember that another one will soon be coming. Good write.
October 8th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
We often miss trains in our life but we must always remember that another one will soon be coming. Good write.
October 8th, 2017 00:51
Missed
MendedFences27 said:
I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with \"ticket to his heart,\" and all. Or was it just a symbolic train (of love) that he missed and it will never return. A lot said in 5 lines and a lot of choices to be made. Good poetry. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:44
MendedFences27 said:
I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with \"ticket to his heart,\" and all. Or was it just a symbolic train (of love) that he missed and it will never return. A lot said in 5 lines and a lot of choices to be made. Good poetry. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:44
Missed
malubotelho said:
How many times I\'ve missed that train.
Nice write Fred. Sometimes to miss the train is your best luck.
October 7th, 2017 12:54
malubotelho said:
How many times I\'ve missed that train.
Nice write Fred. Sometimes to miss the train is your best luck.
October 7th, 2017 12:54
Missed
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of life\'s many missed opportunities. But yes, many more lives and many more opportunities will come along. A splendid poem, Fred!
October 7th, 2017 12:04
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of life\'s many missed opportunities. But yes, many more lives and many more opportunities will come along. A splendid poem, Fred!
October 7th, 2017 12:04
Missed
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll go with Angel\'s comment of the next train is on the way. Better late than never. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:19
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ll go with Angel\'s comment of the next train is on the way. Better late than never. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:19
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