Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Scarred
orchidee said:
Oh I\'m sure you have. I won\'t say \'did\' as you\'ve not departed yet! doh! Why, there\'s your poems for a start! And you\'ve not killed anyone, blown anyone up, acted monstrously, etc. Nor have millions of others.
October 4th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh I\'m sure you have. I won\'t say \'did\' as you\'ve not departed yet! doh! Why, there\'s your poems for a start! And you\'ve not killed anyone, blown anyone up, acted monstrously, etc. Nor have millions of others.
October 4th, 2017 01:48
Sweet Memories
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down memory lane with your poem. My question is, \"What was the song?\" I guess we all have our own personal favorites. I\'ve noticed that with each passing year, the Dragons get bigger.
A well written, nostalgic poem. I loved it. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:51
MendedFences27 said:
I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down memory lane with your poem. My question is, \"What was the song?\" I guess we all have our own personal favorites. I\'ve noticed that with each passing year, the Dragons get bigger.
A well written, nostalgic poem. I loved it. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:51
Sweet Memories
WL Schuett said:
Really like this Fred till the last line \" to slain \" just stop the flow , even to be slain would work better , cool poem though !
October 3rd, 2017 09:33
WL Schuett said:
Really like this Fred till the last line \" to slain \" just stop the flow , even to be slain would work better , cool poem though !
October 3rd, 2017 09:33
Sweet Memories
kevin browne said:
Ah, you are such a sweet poet, Fred, I can\'t help falling in love with your pen.
October 3rd, 2017 08:56
kevin browne said:
Ah, you are such a sweet poet, Fred, I can\'t help falling in love with your pen.
October 3rd, 2017 08:56
Sweet Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
October 3rd, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was there in bell bottoms and platform shoes.
October 3rd, 2017 07:55
Sweet Memories
Louis Gibbs said:
When \"The song is over\", is a good time to go. Been the story of my life, it seems. Well phrased reflections in this one, Fred!
October 3rd, 2017 06:41
Louis Gibbs said:
When \"The song is over\", is a good time to go. Been the story of my life, it seems. Well phrased reflections in this one, Fred!
October 3rd, 2017 06:41
Sweet Memories
Poetic Dan said:
What a great start to my day, no worries now if a dragon gets in my way. I shall recall these words and move on from that place!
October 3rd, 2017 02:22
Poetic Dan said:
What a great start to my day, no worries now if a dragon gets in my way. I shall recall these words and move on from that place!
October 3rd, 2017 02:22
Wine Soaked Kisses
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
October 3rd, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, your imagination is very creative.
October 3rd, 2017 01:32
Wine Soaked Kisses
Michael Edwards said:
Written by a real poet - well done Fred
October 2nd, 2017 22:21
Michael Edwards said:
Written by a real poet - well done Fred
October 2nd, 2017 22:21
Wine Soaked Kisses
Louis Gibbs said:
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this tale of chivalry, Fred!
October 2nd, 2017 20:23
Louis Gibbs said:
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this tale of chivalry, Fred!
October 2nd, 2017 20:23
Wine Soaked Kisses
Accidental Poet said:
Fiction? Or non-fiction? That seems to be the question. But what\'s important is the answer in the outcome from this meeting of hearts. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 19:09
Accidental Poet said:
Fiction? Or non-fiction? That seems to be the question. But what\'s important is the answer in the outcome from this meeting of hearts. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 19:09
Wine Soaked Kisses
Christina8 said:
I love this write! It\'s hard to imagine that it\'s fantasy! Great job! Flowed very well!
October 2nd, 2017 18:47
Christina8 said:
I love this write! It\'s hard to imagine that it\'s fantasy! Great job! Flowed very well!
October 2nd, 2017 18:47
Wine Soaked Kisses
rrodriguez said:
Interesting write. It flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2017 18:46
rrodriguez said:
Interesting write. It flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2017 18:46
The Phone
Christina8 said:
Very well done poem. Glad you aren\'t in the \"dog house\". But it is a great write of fiction!
October 2nd, 2017 10:17
Christina8 said:
Very well done poem. Glad you aren\'t in the \"dog house\". But it is a great write of fiction!
October 2nd, 2017 10:17
The Phone
Accidental Poet said:
Glad to hear it is in fact fiction Fred. It did feel very real, so a excellent write here from your imagination. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 03:17
Accidental Poet said:
Glad to hear it is in fact fiction Fred. It did feel very real, so a excellent write here from your imagination. ; )
October 2nd, 2017 03:17
The Phone
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
October 2nd, 2017 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
October 2nd, 2017 01:24
The Phone
Michael Edwards said:
The mark of a good poet is to write from experiences - the mark of a great poet is to write from imagination. This is a shortie from a rather controversial set of shorties which I\'m trying to pluck the courage to post. Anyway this applies here Fred. Well written.
October 2nd, 2017 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
The mark of a good poet is to write from experiences - the mark of a great poet is to write from imagination. This is a shortie from a rather controversial set of shorties which I\'m trying to pluck the courage to post. Anyway this applies here Fred. Well written.
October 2nd, 2017 01:14
The Phone
WL Schuett said:
Great write Fred well written first and foremost, but also a great read I could really feel the pain and regret ...
October 1st, 2017 21:30
WL Schuett said:
Great write Fred well written first and foremost, but also a great read I could really feel the pain and regret ...
October 1st, 2017 21:30
The Phone
Mugsdaddy said:
Great account of regret so glad it is fiction. Lol
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 21:22
Mugsdaddy said:
Great account of regret so glad it is fiction. Lol
Mugsdaddy
October 1st, 2017 21:22
The Phone
Accidental Poet said:
Fred, I too hope this is not of your present status with your wife. Sometimes misunderstandings happen. This is a very honest and heartfelt write. Take care my friend. ; )
October 1st, 2017 19:49
Accidental Poet said:
Fred, I too hope this is not of your present status with your wife. Sometimes misunderstandings happen. This is a very honest and heartfelt write. Take care my friend. ; )
October 1st, 2017 19:49
The Phone
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you blew it big-time ... assuming this is true, which I doubt. You are much too wise. Great write, Fred!
October 1st, 2017 19:29
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you blew it big-time ... assuming this is true, which I doubt. You are much too wise. Great write, Fred!
October 1st, 2017 19:29
Musings
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
A very nice write Fred! Deep in so many ways. I used to think that money could buy you happiness and thought that this was the first day of the rest of your life... Now, you have me thinking SO differently! Thanks for the write Fred!
October 1st, 2017 07:54
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
A very nice write Fred! Deep in so many ways. I used to think that money could buy you happiness and thought that this was the first day of the rest of your life... Now, you have me thinking SO differently! Thanks for the write Fred!
October 1st, 2017 07:54
Musings
orchidee said:
Good thoughtful writes Fred. To attempt the chicken and egg thingy. I believe animal species were created first, i.e. there were two chickens that made an egg. I can\'t see how an egg could just make a chicken all by itself.
Ohh, they\'re easy questions. You know, such as: \'What is the meaning of life?\' And \'What is the point of me; why do I waste taking up so much space?!\' heehee.
September 30th, 2017 08:42
orchidee said:
Good thoughtful writes Fred. To attempt the chicken and egg thingy. I believe animal species were created first, i.e. there were two chickens that made an egg. I can\'t see how an egg could just make a chicken all by itself.
Ohh, they\'re easy questions. You know, such as: \'What is the meaning of life?\' And \'What is the point of me; why do I waste taking up so much space?!\' heehee.
September 30th, 2017 08:42
Musings
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out Fred , I enjoyed reading some of your philosophies
September 30th, 2017 06:42
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out Fred , I enjoyed reading some of your philosophies
September 30th, 2017 06:42
Musings
kevin browne said:
beautiful piece of poetry her Fred. I fell completely into your poem which really left me feeling sublime. thank you.
September 30th, 2017 05:02
kevin browne said:
beautiful piece of poetry her Fred. I fell completely into your poem which really left me feeling sublime. thank you.
September 30th, 2017 05:02
Musings
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, never thought of each day being my last day but I do treat each day as special and do as much as I can in it, but I know that my Spiritual days will go on to eternity.
September 30th, 2017 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, never thought of each day being my last day but I do treat each day as special and do as much as I can in it, but I know that my Spiritual days will go on to eternity.
September 30th, 2017 01:20
Musings
Michael Edwards said:
I love this - each one a great poem in its own right (write) - so well crafted Fred.
September 30th, 2017 00:27
Michael Edwards said:
I love this - each one a great poem in its own right (write) - so well crafted Fred.
September 30th, 2017 00:27
Musings
rrodriguez said:
Got me thinking in the last stanza. Every day is the last day until all the days run out. Nicely done!
September 29th, 2017 22:30
rrodriguez said:
Got me thinking in the last stanza. Every day is the last day until all the days run out. Nicely done!
September 29th, 2017 22:30
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