Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Never
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading. I love your poem and can relate to it. Why we lose our temper and say what we don\'t want too. I always wait being attacked three times before I defend myself. If I can hold without say anything I will walk alway before it is too late to apologize. Thanks for this beauty
August 5th, 2017 08:45
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading. I love your poem and can relate to it. Why we lose our temper and say what we don\'t want too. I always wait being attacked three times before I defend myself. If I can hold without say anything I will walk alway before it is too late to apologize. Thanks for this beauty
August 5th, 2017 08:45
Never
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
August 5th, 2017 08:42
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
August 5th, 2017 08:42
Looking for my Mind
Night Owl said:
Wow Fred- I want to see this film! Full of creative imagery--love that! Immersed in the birth of the universe >>delicious! Yep that monkey mind... as I get older, even my shadows become old friends...
August 5th, 2017 07:26
Night Owl said:
Wow Fred- I want to see this film! Full of creative imagery--love that! Immersed in the birth of the universe >>delicious! Yep that monkey mind... as I get older, even my shadows become old friends...
August 5th, 2017 07:26
Never
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests and priorities to recognise the feelings of others. Love the way you have worded this Fred.
August 5th, 2017 06:15
Michael Edwards said:
Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests and priorities to recognise the feelings of others. Love the way you have worded this Fred.
August 5th, 2017 06:15
Tropical Rain
Christina8 said:
This poem is beautiful and uses such magnificent description, it almost felt like I was there. Absolutely amazing poem!
August 4th, 2017 19:47
Christina8 said:
This poem is beautiful and uses such magnificent description, it almost felt like I was there. Absolutely amazing poem!
August 4th, 2017 19:47
Tropical Rain
Bibbeck said:
Wow, wow, wow! Excellent expressive write FP; I can hear it coming down. Your words could easily be the introduction of a great novel, or someone reading an opening to the setting of a movie. I only wish I could use this description when it rains in UK, but it\'s rarely like this.
August 4th, 2017 13:19
Bibbeck said:
Wow, wow, wow! Excellent expressive write FP; I can hear it coming down. Your words could easily be the introduction of a great novel, or someone reading an opening to the setting of a movie. I only wish I could use this description when it rains in UK, but it\'s rarely like this.
August 4th, 2017 13:19
Tropical Rain
malubotelho said:
Fred, from now on every time I look up to the sky I will check on the clouds to see if they are pregnant. Loved your so delicately written verses about nature. So beautiful.
August 4th, 2017 10:13
malubotelho said:
Fred, from now on every time I look up to the sky I will check on the clouds to see if they are pregnant. Loved your so delicately written verses about nature. So beautiful.
August 4th, 2017 10:13
Tropical Rain
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place to live, but somebody has to do it. Kudos!
August 4th, 2017 07:49
Louis Gibbs said:
You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place to live, but somebody has to do it. Kudos!
August 4th, 2017 07:49
Tropical Rain
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so real I was cringing with you under that waterfall shawl of dense wet - a first class write Fred.
August 4th, 2017 05:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so real I was cringing with you under that waterfall shawl of dense wet - a first class write Fred.
August 4th, 2017 05:19
Tropical Rain
burning-embers said:
Tis a week of rainfall in my Cornwall excursion. Rainfall can keep u indoors and peering out thru windows of meditation.
August 4th, 2017 04:06
burning-embers said:
Tis a week of rainfall in my Cornwall excursion. Rainfall can keep u indoors and peering out thru windows of meditation.
August 4th, 2017 04:06
Tropical Rain
kevin browne said:
my nostrils are filled with your poem FredPeyer and that along side this piece is a very rainy achieving pleasurable moment. good work FP.
August 4th, 2017 02:07
kevin browne said:
my nostrils are filled with your poem FredPeyer and that along side this piece is a very rainy achieving pleasurable moment. good work FP.
August 4th, 2017 02:07
Tropical Rain
whisperingquill said:
First of all you are lucky as hell getting to reside in Hawaii I\'m on the east coast
So you are lucky
\"The heavens opening up
Dropping the gift of life\"
\"The cloud’s wet offspring\"
\"Dark clouds pregnant with water\"
Very great lines
Enviable
Really great piece Fred 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 01:33
whisperingquill said:
First of all you are lucky as hell getting to reside in Hawaii I\'m on the east coast
So you are lucky
\"The heavens opening up
Dropping the gift of life\"
\"The cloud’s wet offspring\"
\"Dark clouds pregnant with water\"
Very great lines
Enviable
Really great piece Fred 👍🏼
August 4th, 2017 01:33
Tropical Rain
Michael Edwards said:
Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love \'the clouds wet offspring\' - simply a great piece.
August 4th, 2017 00:55
Michael Edwards said:
Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love \'the clouds wet offspring\' - simply a great piece.
August 4th, 2017 00:55
Tropical Rain
FredPeyer said:
You are making me blush! So stop it!
But thank you anyway for your kind comment.
August 4th, 2017 00:46
FredPeyer said:
You are making me blush! So stop it!
But thank you anyway for your kind comment.
August 4th, 2017 00:46
Class Reunion
malubotelho said:
After so long time it is odd to meet people you are not connected anymore. Nice theme writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:11
malubotelho said:
After so long time it is odd to meet people you are not connected anymore. Nice theme writing.
August 3rd, 2017 17:11
Class Reunion
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem Fred
Just brilliant.....
I have been asked many
Time to attend my school
Reunion, but have never gone
Your poem reminded me why..
Thank you....
August 3rd, 2017 13:34
P.H.Rose said:
Really good poem Fred
Just brilliant.....
I have been asked many
Time to attend my school
Reunion, but have never gone
Your poem reminded me why..
Thank you....
August 3rd, 2017 13:34
Class Reunion
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for the bald heads and wrinkles - -but it did not matter as we discussed the paths our lives had taken. Great reminder of the fun we all that memorable night. Thanks Fred.
August 3rd, 2017 13:12
Fay Slimm. said:
I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for the bald heads and wrinkles - -but it did not matter as we discussed the paths our lives had taken. Great reminder of the fun we all that memorable night. Thanks Fred.
August 3rd, 2017 13:12
Class Reunion
WriteBeLight said:
Those are tough events. Good news and sad news. But, still something you should attend if you can, or deep down really want to. Otherwise, just blow it off. :) Great idea for a poem Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 12:25
WriteBeLight said:
Those are tough events. Good news and sad news. But, still something you should attend if you can, or deep down really want to. Otherwise, just blow it off. :) Great idea for a poem Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 12:25
Class Reunion
kevin browne said:
I love reunions and it\'s great fun. I love your poem here Fed. great reminder we should never forget those school days friends.
August 3rd, 2017 11:07
kevin browne said:
I love reunions and it\'s great fun. I love your poem here Fed. great reminder we should never forget those school days friends.
August 3rd, 2017 11:07
Class Reunion
Goldfinch60 said:
The class reunion is on of those things that is not on my Bucket List. Very good write Fred reminding me why it is not there.
August 3rd, 2017 07:58
Goldfinch60 said:
The class reunion is on of those things that is not on my Bucket List. Very good write Fred reminding me why it is not there.
August 3rd, 2017 07:58
Class Reunion
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo Michael\'s comment. Your poem sums it up very well, Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 07:00
Louis Gibbs said:
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo Michael\'s comment. Your poem sums it up very well, Fred!
August 3rd, 2017 07:00
Class Reunion
Michael Edwards said:
Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate with folk who might just as well be complete strangers. Not something I would relish and the poem sums it all up so well for me.
August 3rd, 2017 04:51
Michael Edwards said:
Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate with folk who might just as well be complete strangers. Not something I would relish and the poem sums it all up so well for me.
August 3rd, 2017 04:51
My Motorcycle
Heather T said:
The passion felt leaks gloriously through your words. I remember my dad \"tucking\" me in to ride with him. He looped our belts together, and mom would push my hands down deep in his jean\'s pockets. I begged him to go faster, but mom said no, which meant wait until we got out of sight!
All of my friends ride Harleys. Including my girlfriends, who make regular wind therapy dates. My sweet uncle RJ loved his ride so much (I think he owned four bikes) that upon his way too early death, his favorite bike was brought in to the funeral parlor. That says much.
Super enjoyed your write.
August 2nd, 2017 10:20
Heather T said:
The passion felt leaks gloriously through your words. I remember my dad \"tucking\" me in to ride with him. He looped our belts together, and mom would push my hands down deep in his jean\'s pockets. I begged him to go faster, but mom said no, which meant wait until we got out of sight!
All of my friends ride Harleys. Including my girlfriends, who make regular wind therapy dates. My sweet uncle RJ loved his ride so much (I think he owned four bikes) that upon his way too early death, his favorite bike was brought in to the funeral parlor. That says much.
Super enjoyed your write.
August 2nd, 2017 10:20
My Motorcycle
Louis Gibbs said:
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing like it! I find any excuse, like a three hour ride this week just to have lunch in another town. A \"parallel universe\" ... good description, Fred, and a good poem!
August 2nd, 2017 07:56
Louis Gibbs said:
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing like it! I find any excuse, like a three hour ride this week just to have lunch in another town. A \"parallel universe\" ... good description, Fred, and a good poem!
August 2nd, 2017 07:56
My Motorcycle
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, well worth the wait my friend.
Have you ever read the book \" zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance\" you reminded me of this with you great wisdom in this post and others about corners ;)
August 2nd, 2017 06:38
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, well worth the wait my friend.
Have you ever read the book \" zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance\" you reminded me of this with you great wisdom in this post and others about corners ;)
August 2nd, 2017 06:38
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