Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Procrastination
onepauly said:
ill have to agree with Michael.
fred, keep on writing.
July 30th, 2017 00:16
onepauly said:
ill have to agree with Michael.
fred, keep on writing.
July 30th, 2017 00:16
Procrastination
Michael Edwards said:
My oldest son says \'Procrastination is a virtue - if you leave it long enough the problem usually resolves itself\' - great work Fred.
July 30th, 2017 00:09
Michael Edwards said:
My oldest son says \'Procrastination is a virtue - if you leave it long enough the problem usually resolves itself\' - great work Fred.
July 30th, 2017 00:09
Fear
burning-embers said:
I felt fear overtake me very recently. Horrible, it had me shaking and pumped with adrenaline. Was an unfounded fear fortunately and a good friend talked me out of my imagined situation. But just as u say, it was all over me at one stage.
July 29th, 2017 18:54
burning-embers said:
I felt fear overtake me very recently. Horrible, it had me shaking and pumped with adrenaline. Was an unfounded fear fortunately and a good friend talked me out of my imagined situation. But just as u say, it was all over me at one stage.
July 29th, 2017 18:54
Fear
orchidee said:
I fear that I\'m not following all this Outback! heehee. I\'ve not stopped to unravel all you\'ve said!
July 29th, 2017 14:21
orchidee said:
I fear that I\'m not following all this Outback! heehee. I\'ve not stopped to unravel all you\'ve said!
July 29th, 2017 14:21
Fear
Louis Gibbs said:
I can\'t imagine such hopeless fear, but you managed to quite well. Well done exercise in imagining, Fred!
July 29th, 2017 11:22
Louis Gibbs said:
I can\'t imagine such hopeless fear, but you managed to quite well. Well done exercise in imagining, Fred!
July 29th, 2017 11:22
Fear
kevin browne said:
I feel my own fear and that\'s it. when you start feeling the fear for others or other things then a weakness may be shown. same thing goes for life. people blame life for their problems, mistakes etc when in fact its all down to the self to stay in control. don\'t play the game but live it as human and stand strong through it all. a fascinating write.
July 29th, 2017 11:21
kevin browne said:
I feel my own fear and that\'s it. when you start feeling the fear for others or other things then a weakness may be shown. same thing goes for life. people blame life for their problems, mistakes etc when in fact its all down to the self to stay in control. don\'t play the game but live it as human and stand strong through it all. a fascinating write.
July 29th, 2017 11:21
Fear
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the results of succumbing to fear Fred - - a terrible state to take over a mind - -imagined maybe but by your pen made to feel very real.
July 29th, 2017 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture so well the results of succumbing to fear Fred - - a terrible state to take over a mind - -imagined maybe but by your pen made to feel very real.
July 29th, 2017 11:08
Kaleidoscope
burning-embers said:
Yes Fred, coloured beads and mirrors. Shake em up and they look pretty. Life can be like that too... depends how u look at it, shake it up a bit, or shake ones self up a bit and the picture changes.
July 28th, 2017 15:00
burning-embers said:
Yes Fred, coloured beads and mirrors. Shake em up and they look pretty. Life can be like that too... depends how u look at it, shake it up a bit, or shake ones self up a bit and the picture changes.
July 28th, 2017 15:00
Kaleidoscope
Michael Edwards said:
One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.
July 28th, 2017 11:44
Michael Edwards said:
One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.
July 28th, 2017 11:44
Kaleidoscope
malubotelho said:
So I remember now. The kaleidoscope is like very interactive with us. It is playfull for our mind. Thanks Fred.
July 28th, 2017 10:53
malubotelho said:
So I remember now. The kaleidoscope is like very interactive with us. It is playfull for our mind. Thanks Fred.
July 28th, 2017 10:53
Kaleidoscope
Louis Gibbs said:
\"A new exciting world in a cardboard tube,\" indeed ... and the one outside ain\'t all that dull either! Fine, memory-provoking poem, Fred.
July 28th, 2017 08:02
Louis Gibbs said:
\"A new exciting world in a cardboard tube,\" indeed ... and the one outside ain\'t all that dull either! Fine, memory-provoking poem, Fred.
July 28th, 2017 08:02
Kaleidoscope
Goldfinch60 said:
Our imagination can see all and all it needs is a twist on that tube called life. Goo write.
July 28th, 2017 07:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Our imagination can see all and all it needs is a twist on that tube called life. Goo write.
July 28th, 2017 07:57
Kaleidoscope
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant and so true, if only they knew the places your mind can take you to. If you have never seen what it\'s like through that cardboard tube!
July 28th, 2017 06:31
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant and so true, if only they knew the places your mind can take you to. If you have never seen what it\'s like through that cardboard tube!
July 28th, 2017 06:31
Kaleidoscope
Fay Slimm. said:
A great read as you opened that cardboard tube again to me to show how wonderful a kaleidoscope can be
- -thanks for the memory Fred.
July 28th, 2017 05:09
Fay Slimm. said:
A great read as you opened that cardboard tube again to me to show how wonderful a kaleidoscope can be
- -thanks for the memory Fred.
July 28th, 2017 05:09
Looking for my Mind
malubotelho said:
I can see that you had fun with this one. You too have a scattered soul. You are all over the place. Fun reading. Thanks
July 27th, 2017 08:57
malubotelho said:
I can see that you had fun with this one. You too have a scattered soul. You are all over the place. Fun reading. Thanks
July 27th, 2017 08:57
Looking for my Mind
Louis Gibbs said:
Say, if you happen to stumble across my missing mind while you are looking, please send it home. Thanks. Truly enjoyed this brilliant piece, Fred!
July 27th, 2017 08:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Say, if you happen to stumble across my missing mind while you are looking, please send it home. Thanks. Truly enjoyed this brilliant piece, Fred!
July 27th, 2017 08:30
Looking for my Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be split and hide the pieces but it can always be reformed to write poems kplike this on.
July 27th, 2017 07:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The mind can be split and hide the pieces but it can always be reformed to write poems kplike this on.
July 27th, 2017 07:56
Looking for my Mind
kevin browne said:
you\'re not the only one FredPeyer. I believe we have all lost our mind and the world is going crazy with it. lets all sit in that library and open up a few more books to see where we all went mad. brilliant write and you make sure you come back.
July 27th, 2017 06:04
kevin browne said:
you\'re not the only one FredPeyer. I believe we have all lost our mind and the world is going crazy with it. lets all sit in that library and open up a few more books to see where we all went mad. brilliant write and you make sure you come back.
July 27th, 2017 06:04
Looking for my Mind
burning-embers said:
Hmm i can see why your writings are so diverse and interesting Fred - you\'re all over the place mate! LOL kiddin you. This is great, great idea you\'ve had and humourous. A really entertaining read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
burning-embers said:
Hmm i can see why your writings are so diverse and interesting Fred - you\'re all over the place mate! LOL kiddin you. This is great, great idea you\'ve had and humourous. A really entertaining read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55
Another Glass of Whiskey
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Drink can ruin families, a member of our family hada drink problem who is trying to recover, they go to Alcoholics Anonymous which helps a lot. Drink free since November last year.
July 27th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. Drink can ruin families, a member of our family hada drink problem who is trying to recover, they go to Alcoholics Anonymous which helps a lot. Drink free since November last year.
July 27th, 2017 00:53
Another Glass of Whiskey
ShannonXx said:
A excellent write, with a real message attached!
July 26th, 2017 15:25
ShannonXx said:
A excellent write, with a real message attached!
July 26th, 2017 15:25
Another Glass of Whiskey
Michael Edwards said:
This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as such I is so refreshing. A really superb work.
July 26th, 2017 10:42
Michael Edwards said:
This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as such I is so refreshing. A really superb work.
July 26th, 2017 10:42
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