Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
My Motorcycle
orchidee said:
That you on that bike there?! You about to ride off on it?! A fine write Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 05:21
orchidee said:
That you on that bike there?! You about to ride off on it?! A fine write Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 05:21
Secret Place
S.louise said:
My special place is my bedroom with my ipod on and pen in my hand.
Its the only time I can feel truly at peace and away from the madness in the world.
Like you said its like a secret room away from it all.
Great write.
Thanks for sharing.
August 2nd, 2017 04:17
S.louise said:
My special place is my bedroom with my ipod on and pen in my hand.
Its the only time I can feel truly at peace and away from the madness in the world.
Like you said its like a secret room away from it all.
Great write.
Thanks for sharing.
August 2nd, 2017 04:17
My Motorcycle
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand your love of two wheels. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Totally understand your love of two wheels. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
My Motorcycle
whisperingquill said:
I never rode one in my life bro
but this write has me pondering I have thought about it recently. You make it seem otherworldly you make it seem like being really alive. Great description really surreal.
August 2nd, 2017 01:50
whisperingquill said:
I never rode one in my life bro
but this write has me pondering I have thought about it recently. You make it seem otherworldly you make it seem like being really alive. Great description really surreal.
August 2nd, 2017 01:50
My Motorcycle
kevin browne said:
love your passion for the two wheeler\'s Fred. I too was brought up around road and motocross bikes. my father owned and ran a bike shop for 15 yrs so I know the sounds of bikes pretty well.
August 2nd, 2017 01:49
kevin browne said:
love your passion for the two wheeler\'s Fred. I too was brought up around road and motocross bikes. my father owned and ran a bike shop for 15 yrs so I know the sounds of bikes pretty well.
August 2nd, 2017 01:49
My Motorcycle
Michael Edwards said:
Do you know I\'ve never ridden a motorcycle but I can well imagine the freedom of it - like this one very muck Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 01:20
Michael Edwards said:
Do you know I\'ve never ridden a motorcycle but I can well imagine the freedom of it - like this one very muck Fred.
August 2nd, 2017 01:20
On the Bus
orchidee said:
Now, now - surely you\'re not THAT old! Erm, I was gonna write a similar poem (was I?! heehee) but I missed my bus! lol.
August 1st, 2017 12:52
orchidee said:
Now, now - surely you\'re not THAT old! Erm, I was gonna write a similar poem (was I?! heehee) but I missed my bus! lol.
August 1st, 2017 12:52
On the Bus
WriteBeLight said:
That is pretty darn good! Although poignant. Love how you put that he resembles the condition of the flowers.
August 1st, 2017 12:29
WriteBeLight said:
That is pretty darn good! Although poignant. Love how you put that he resembles the condition of the flowers.
August 1st, 2017 12:29
On the Bus
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant ... you had me from the time he got on the bus all the way to the grave yard! This one is a favorite for sure. Your work continues to inspire me, Fred.
August 1st, 2017 07:56
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant ... you had me from the time he got on the bus all the way to the grave yard! This one is a favorite for sure. Your work continues to inspire me, Fred.
August 1st, 2017 07:56
On the Bus
burning-embers said:
A sad part of life recounted here in mournful colors.
August 1st, 2017 07:33
burning-embers said:
A sad part of life recounted here in mournful colors.
August 1st, 2017 07:33
On the Bus
Heather T said:
Your last lines were felt in my stomach. The sad condition of both man and bouquet speaks volumes about his lonesome days. Bravo.
August 1st, 2017 06:47
Heather T said:
Your last lines were felt in my stomach. The sad condition of both man and bouquet speaks volumes about his lonesome days. Bravo.
August 1st, 2017 06:47
On the Bus
Renzi said:
Ahhhh i read this and imagined ever ouce of it in my head. Sad and beautiful, thankyou x
August 1st, 2017 04:57
Renzi said:
Ahhhh i read this and imagined ever ouce of it in my head. Sad and beautiful, thankyou x
August 1st, 2017 04:57
On the Bus
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this really takes you there - so full of sadness yet so beautifully written - a favourite for sure
August 1st, 2017 02:52
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this really takes you there - so full of sadness yet so beautifully written - a favourite for sure
August 1st, 2017 02:52
On the Bus
Fay Slimm. said:
A picture painted so well here of many left now on their own and not knowing what to do with life any more - a sad fact but appealingly written from a poet\'s caring observation.
August 1st, 2017 02:09
Fay Slimm. said:
A picture painted so well here of many left now on their own and not knowing what to do with life any more - a sad fact but appealingly written from a poet\'s caring observation.
August 1st, 2017 02:09
Secret Place
niallprideaux said:
Thank you for sharing these graceful words with us! I believe everyone has a secret place they go to and wish to build, I spend too much time there haha
July 31st, 2017 21:40
niallprideaux said:
Thank you for sharing these graceful words with us! I believe everyone has a secret place they go to and wish to build, I spend too much time there haha
July 31st, 2017 21:40
Secret Place
malubotelho said:
What a lovely inspiration Fred. I have a place similar to that. Not so organized as yours though. It is so secret that sometimes I can not find it myself but when I do, it is where I feel safe and happy and relaxed or I just feel nothing like you said. Thanks for sharing these adorable words.
July 31st, 2017 14:41
malubotelho said:
What a lovely inspiration Fred. I have a place similar to that. Not so organized as yours though. It is so secret that sometimes I can not find it myself but when I do, it is where I feel safe and happy and relaxed or I just feel nothing like you said. Thanks for sharing these adorable words.
July 31st, 2017 14:41
Secret Place
Heather T said:
Aaahhh...the space where all creative souls run on secret feet. It\'s the only place in mothering for 21 years that I am alone. I couldn\'t even escape the babies in the bathroom! That must be a daddy-only privilege, lol. Lovely lines, nice rhymes. I thought of the grandfather clock as a heartbeat. Beautiful, Fred.
July 31st, 2017 12:15
Heather T said:
Aaahhh...the space where all creative souls run on secret feet. It\'s the only place in mothering for 21 years that I am alone. I couldn\'t even escape the babies in the bathroom! That must be a daddy-only privilege, lol. Lovely lines, nice rhymes. I thought of the grandfather clock as a heartbeat. Beautiful, Fred.
July 31st, 2017 12:15
Secret Place
kevin browne said:
indeed, a top secret place to be alone. they say nobody should ever be alone but by your reckoning here i say it\'s a must to follow in your footsteps. nice writing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 11:50
kevin browne said:
indeed, a top secret place to be alone. they say nobody should ever be alone but by your reckoning here i say it\'s a must to follow in your footsteps. nice writing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 11:50
Secret Place
Louis Gibbs said:
All good poets, as yourself, must have such a room in their mind to retreat into to connect with their muse. Interesting that Fay\'s poem this morning describes this same process. You have nailed it well with this poem, Fred. Kudos!
July 31st, 2017 07:29
Louis Gibbs said:
All good poets, as yourself, must have such a room in their mind to retreat into to connect with their muse. Interesting that Fay\'s poem this morning describes this same process. You have nailed it well with this poem, Fred. Kudos!
July 31st, 2017 07:29
Secret Place
Fay Slimm. said:
A delectable description of the secret place we all need Fred - your pen aptly expresses its draw - - first rate writing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 05:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A delectable description of the secret place we all need Fred - your pen aptly expresses its draw - - first rate writing my friend.
July 31st, 2017 05:34
Secret Place
Poetic Dan said:
I have that place when my pen hits the paper or I\'m on my bike making my own lane. And now I\'m learning to go there with my guitar too
Fantastic work
July 31st, 2017 05:06
Poetic Dan said:
I have that place when my pen hits the paper or I\'m on my bike making my own lane. And now I\'m learning to go there with my guitar too
Fantastic work
July 31st, 2017 05:06
Secret Place
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have a place like this but it\'s not entirely secret - my wife sometimes comes out to say there\'s a phone call for me or to tell me lunch is ready or ask if I\'m ready to go shopping. In fact, coming to think of it it\'s not secret at all.
July 31st, 2017 04:55
Michael Edwards said:
Well I have a place like this but it\'s not entirely secret - my wife sometimes comes out to say there\'s a phone call for me or to tell me lunch is ready or ask if I\'m ready to go shopping. In fact, coming to think of it it\'s not secret at all.
July 31st, 2017 04:55
Procrastination
malubotelho said:
Very nice poem. I really think I\'m exactly like this. If I don\'t have a lot to do I get busy doing nothing. When I have a lot, I do everything on time. And feel good. Thanks Fred
July 30th, 2017 20:39
malubotelho said:
Very nice poem. I really think I\'m exactly like this. If I don\'t have a lot to do I get busy doing nothing. When I have a lot, I do everything on time. And feel good. Thanks Fred
July 30th, 2017 20:39
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