Comments received on poems by myself and me
Bloom
L. B. Mek said:
there is no place, oxygen doesn\'t trace
but not all corners, allow
for sunrays and nourishing rain, to invest
instead, oft: we\'ve learnt to survive
on far, far less
than those buzzing Bee\'s, passing-by obliviously
while complaining: endlessly
May 28th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
there is no place, oxygen doesn\'t trace
but not all corners, allow
for sunrays and nourishing rain, to invest
instead, oft: we\'ve learnt to survive
on far, far less
than those buzzing Bee\'s, passing-by obliviously
while complaining: endlessly
May 28th, 2021 04:48
Bloom
dusk arising said:
Out of place, unidentified but not overlooked. A sole beauty enlightening an otherwise dull place.
Epic faith in natures will.
May 28th, 2021 04:28
dusk arising said:
Out of place, unidentified but not overlooked. A sole beauty enlightening an otherwise dull place.
Epic faith in natures will.
May 28th, 2021 04:28
Long Night-Sedoka
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely . I’ve not heard of a Sedoka before
May 14th, 2021 01:23
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely . I’ve not heard of a Sedoka before
May 14th, 2021 01:23
Sleepless night
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
All that life outside ... the moon and the wind and yet you feel so alone and empty . A very good poem ! Enjoyed reading
May 14th, 2021 01:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
All that life outside ... the moon and the wind and yet you feel so alone and empty . A very good poem ! Enjoyed reading
May 14th, 2021 01:05
Rain
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a soulful poetic way to draw conclusions metaphorically. Rain , wind and tears depicting the feel. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 9th, 2021 02:50
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a soulful poetic way to draw conclusions metaphorically. Rain , wind and tears depicting the feel. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 9th, 2021 02:50
Lake
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely ) nice choice of words
May 8th, 2021 01:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very lovely ) nice choice of words
May 8th, 2021 01:16
Last dance
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely ) sad but beautiful
May 8th, 2021 01:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely ) sad but beautiful
May 8th, 2021 01:13
Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Three very telling stanzas mandm.
Good to see you back.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Three very telling stanzas mandm.
Good to see you back.
Andy
May 8th, 2021 00:49
Rain
jarcher54 said:
How did you do this? It\'s so understated, bare like a haiku, profound, and keenly insightful! I don\'t know why but I love it! Tears glue up the broken heart... so memorable.
May 7th, 2021 22:31
jarcher54 said:
How did you do this? It\'s so understated, bare like a haiku, profound, and keenly insightful! I don\'t know why but I love it! Tears glue up the broken heart... so memorable.
May 7th, 2021 22:31
Sleepless night
Bragee said:
sometimes life can feel so empty....
Good Write!
October 23rd, 2020 11:49
Bragee said:
sometimes life can feel so empty....
Good Write!
October 23rd, 2020 11:49
Mere exist
jarcher54 said:
Most of us have a wound or two like that. Quite an observant, tender little piece.
October 18th, 2020 01:45
jarcher54 said:
Most of us have a wound or two like that. Quite an observant, tender little piece.
October 18th, 2020 01:45
Loneliness 2
Poetic Dan said:
Like random hidden spider webs! Our thoughts keep us there!
Great write
May 13th, 2020 01:21
Poetic Dan said:
Like random hidden spider webs! Our thoughts keep us there!
Great write
May 13th, 2020 01:21
Blue of May
Goldfinch60 said:
May that blossom come your way once more mandm.
Andy
May 11th, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that blossom come your way once more mandm.
Andy
May 11th, 2020 00:21
Today
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great poem with fine twist and wordplay ,true to life the here and now, yes we should live now.. Kudos for this fab one!
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 12:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Great poem with fine twist and wordplay ,true to life the here and now, yes we should live now.. Kudos for this fab one!
Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 8th, 2020 12:22
Today
orchidee said:
Yes - what Goldfinch said.
Also - I can\'t find tomorrow. It never comes. When it gets here, it\'s today. Doh! lol.
May 8th, 2020 01:39
orchidee said:
Yes - what Goldfinch said.
Also - I can\'t find tomorrow. It never comes. When it gets here, it\'s today. Doh! lol.
May 8th, 2020 01:39
Today
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
May 8th, 2020 01:06
How I wish
dusk arising said:
Initially reading this had me confused but on reflection, spot on theres little logic in how we long for what was.
May 7th, 2020 17:54
dusk arising said:
Initially reading this had me confused but on reflection, spot on theres little logic in how we long for what was.
May 7th, 2020 17:54
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