Comments received on poems by myself and me
Today
dusk arising said:
This rings a bell.Nice play on words and delghtfully short. Short pieces allow so much more freedom of visualiation for the reader which gets high score in my book.
May 7th, 2020 17:11
dusk arising said:
This rings a bell.Nice play on words and delghtfully short. Short pieces allow so much more freedom of visualiation for the reader which gets high score in my book.
May 7th, 2020 17:11
How I wish
Goldfinch60 said:
Those open arms will bring your life back to you and will be full of love.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those open arms will bring your life back to you and will be full of love.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:13
Don\'t
Goldfinch60 said:
You are within yourself and that self will appear one day and you will find yourself.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
You are within yourself and that self will appear one day and you will find yourself.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:30
Last dance
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The last dance is such a wonderful sentiment love the link to nature such a wonderful medium so many meaning here
Very well expressed BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2020 09:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The last dance is such a wonderful sentiment love the link to nature such a wonderful medium so many meaning here
Very well expressed BRAVO!
May 3rd, 2020 09:57
Last dance
Fay Slimm. said:
An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I could see those fluttering petals saying their soft goodbyes.
May 2nd, 2020 02:26
Fay Slimm. said:
An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I could see those fluttering petals saying their soft goodbyes.
May 2nd, 2020 02:26
Last dance
Goldfinch60 said:
That last dance is always so special being left with the hope that another dance will come your way.
Andy
May 2nd, 2020 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That last dance is always so special being left with the hope that another dance will come your way.
Andy
May 2nd, 2020 01:16
Sakura rain
Goldfinch60 said:
The rain of petals can be so wonderful and so inspiring.
Andy
May 1st, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
The rain of petals can be so wonderful and so inspiring.
Andy
May 1st, 2020 00:50
Sakura rain
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful petally picture you pen of the time when pink covers the ground - -- it must be great to stand and watch that waltz in the breeze.
April 30th, 2020 16:50
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful petally picture you pen of the time when pink covers the ground - -- it must be great to stand and watch that waltz in the breeze.
April 30th, 2020 16:50
Sakura rain
myself and me said:
I have one Sakura tree in my front yard. I would lost myself when watching the petals falling, Thank you.
April 30th, 2020 14:10
myself and me said:
I have one Sakura tree in my front yard. I would lost myself when watching the petals falling, Thank you.
April 30th, 2020 14:10
Sakura rain
Michael Edwards said:
At the gated entry to our local titled member of the village there is a Prunus which is shedding its petals right now. Walked past it today and despite the drizzle the scene was stunning - a gravelled roadway turned pink. Love the poem which took me right back there.
April 30th, 2020 13:44
Michael Edwards said:
At the gated entry to our local titled member of the village there is a Prunus which is shedding its petals right now. Walked past it today and despite the drizzle the scene was stunning - a gravelled roadway turned pink. Love the poem which took me right back there.
April 30th, 2020 13:44
Wind
FredPeyer said:
well said m&m! Lately we had some stormy weather rather than the gentle trade winds.
March 4th, 2020 12:31
FredPeyer said:
well said m&m! Lately we had some stormy weather rather than the gentle trade winds.
March 4th, 2020 12:31
Loneliness
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woahh deep abstract muse in brevity. Kudos for the inking.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woahh deep abstract muse in brevity. Kudos for the inking.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:59
Loneliness
Michael Edwards said:
Totally inspired - I love it and the first fave for a couple of months.
February 21st, 2020 01:13
Michael Edwards said:
Totally inspired - I love it and the first fave for a couple of months.
February 21st, 2020 01:13
Tonight
Barry Hodges said:
Tonight
I am sittimg on the loo
But it\'s too late
I have crapped in my pants.
Wheeeee!
February 20th, 2020 20:19
Barry Hodges said:
Tonight
I am sittimg on the loo
But it\'s too late
I have crapped in my pants.
Wheeeee!
February 20th, 2020 20:19
Tonight
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write M.
Meanwhile - \'OK, I\'ll come back; I\'ll stay; I\'ve not gone far; I wish I never went away in the first place! (heehee).
February 18th, 2020 02:55
orchidee said:
A thoughtful write M.
Meanwhile - \'OK, I\'ll come back; I\'ll stay; I\'ve not gone far; I wish I never went away in the first place! (heehee).
February 18th, 2020 02:55
Tonight
Goldfinch60 said:
The sadness in your words is very powerful mandm.
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The sadness in your words is very powerful mandm.
Andy
February 18th, 2020 02:17
The Dance of Butterfly
Goldfinch60 said:
May those butterflies dance throughout our lives.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May those butterflies dance throughout our lives.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:56
Snowing night
Goldfinch60 said:
Good dark write, I am sure that your light will shine with your words.
January 22nd, 2020 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good dark write, I am sure that your light will shine with your words.
January 22nd, 2020 02:17
Winter
Goldfinch60 said:
All the seasons disappear but we know that the glory of them all will always be with us.
January 7th, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
All the seasons disappear but we know that the glory of them all will always be with us.
January 7th, 2020 01:52
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