Comments received on poems by dusk arising
tide has turned
Paul Bell said:
The tide has turned. The words speak for themselves, and we\'ve all felt it. You tell it well.
November 21st, 2021 04:53
Paul Bell said:
The tide has turned. The words speak for themselves, and we\'ve all felt it. You tell it well.
November 21st, 2021 04:53
tide has turned
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is a beautiful poem and a compelling read. Well written. I love it.
November 20th, 2021 18:29
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is a beautiful poem and a compelling read. Well written. I love it.
November 20th, 2021 18:29
tide has turned
MDStone said:
Great writing. Speaks to both my passion and my pain.
November 20th, 2021 12:09
MDStone said:
Great writing. Speaks to both my passion and my pain.
November 20th, 2021 12:09
tide has turned
Neville said:
... I gotta hand it to you DA .. tis very bloomin good sir ... and then some
... Neville
November 20th, 2021 10:18
Neville said:
... I gotta hand it to you DA .. tis very bloomin good sir ... and then some
... Neville
November 20th, 2021 10:18
tide has turned
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly penned - fantastic imagery and a read to remember my friend. Top drawer writing
November 20th, 2021 09:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfectly penned - fantastic imagery and a read to remember my friend. Top drawer writing
November 20th, 2021 09:35
dont ask me why
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions can always be with us d a.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions can always be with us d a.
Andy
November 20th, 2021 01:42
dont ask me why
Neville said:
the blue font is my new favourite colour ..
six of the best was always meant to hurt and to teach us a lesson ..
the gift of six perfect stanzas here succeeds in doing both I fear ..
for some this page will undoubtedly be an eye opener .. whilst others will undoubtedly flinch with personal insights and knowing ..................
Top notch DA ... Neville
November 19th, 2021 07:53
Neville said:
the blue font is my new favourite colour ..
six of the best was always meant to hurt and to teach us a lesson ..
the gift of six perfect stanzas here succeeds in doing both I fear ..
for some this page will undoubtedly be an eye opener .. whilst others will undoubtedly flinch with personal insights and knowing ..................
Top notch DA ... Neville
November 19th, 2021 07:53
dont ask me why
spilleronsheet said:
Poetry of yours is always intriguing
So many questions haunt
But there are answers unknown
Well put dear Dusk
No
I won’t ask you
Cause some of your questions are mine
And I haven’t found answers of those still in my life
November 19th, 2021 07:16
spilleronsheet said:
Poetry of yours is always intriguing
So many questions haunt
But there are answers unknown
Well put dear Dusk
No
I won’t ask you
Cause some of your questions are mine
And I haven’t found answers of those still in my life
November 19th, 2021 07:16
dont ask me why
Fay Slimm. said:
The why never seems to make known the reasons to a child that has never known self-love or respect - - a compelling read that many will relate to.my friend.
November 19th, 2021 06:58
Fay Slimm. said:
The why never seems to make known the reasons to a child that has never known self-love or respect - - a compelling read that many will relate to.my friend.
November 19th, 2021 06:58
dont ask me why
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Why? Oops, you just said not to ask you why!
November 19th, 2021 06:08
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
Why? Oops, you just said not to ask you why!
November 19th, 2021 06:08
there
Eugene S. said:
Awesome, awesome, awesome. Great flow, profound in its simplicity & can totally relate.
November 18th, 2021 21:02
Eugene S. said:
Awesome, awesome, awesome. Great flow, profound in its simplicity & can totally relate.
November 18th, 2021 21:02
there
orchidee said:
Good write Dusk.
Now for me next poem - \'Here\'! About when I call Fido - \'Here, boy!\'
I might do a series - Who, What, Where, everywhere, When, Why,...... heehee
November 18th, 2021 09:37
orchidee said:
Good write Dusk.
Now for me next poem - \'Here\'! About when I call Fido - \'Here, boy!\'
I might do a series - Who, What, Where, everywhere, When, Why,...... heehee
November 18th, 2021 09:37
there
spilleronsheet said:
The words laid beautifully in context
Adorn the eyes that you lay
I wish I could find the place that you found
It’s a place worth to stay
Well crafted dear poet
November 18th, 2021 09:28
spilleronsheet said:
The words laid beautifully in context
Adorn the eyes that you lay
I wish I could find the place that you found
It’s a place worth to stay
Well crafted dear poet
November 18th, 2021 09:28
there
Fay Slimm. said:
Got to be one of your best and has to be one of my favourities. Great read my dear poet-friend.
November 18th, 2021 07:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Got to be one of your best and has to be one of my favourities. Great read my dear poet-friend.
November 18th, 2021 07:07
there
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I admire the creativity
of your aesthetically pleasing layout
especially as it adds
a symbolic meaning
to your poetry\'s choice wording,
and then, I just love the wordplay
in your lines:
\' i found a place
where the dunes
fall to the beach\'..
that whole thing, where
both are made of sand
and yet
by the perspective we\'re granted
one, is aligned with that feeling
of a seaside escape;
while the other
unless confronted, shall-ever remain
a mountainous obstacle
in our minds...
(really clever
and wonderfully weaved
showcasing
your poetic creativity, at its subtle Best
thanks for sharing Dusk)
November 18th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I admire the creativity
of your aesthetically pleasing layout
especially as it adds
a symbolic meaning
to your poetry\'s choice wording,
and then, I just love the wordplay
in your lines:
\' i found a place
where the dunes
fall to the beach\'..
that whole thing, where
both are made of sand
and yet
by the perspective we\'re granted
one, is aligned with that feeling
of a seaside escape;
while the other
unless confronted, shall-ever remain
a mountainous obstacle
in our minds...
(really clever
and wonderfully weaved
showcasing
your poetic creativity, at its subtle Best
thanks for sharing Dusk)
November 18th, 2021 06:23
there
Goldfinch60 said:
Why? - the most unanswered question that exists. I wonder why?
Andy
November 18th, 2021 05:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Why? - the most unanswered question that exists. I wonder why?
Andy
November 18th, 2021 05:16
there
Neville said:
... I reckon, you are rapidly becoming a force to be reckoned with my mighty poetic friend ................... tis lovely no less ............... and near perfect ... Neville
November 18th, 2021 04:33
Neville said:
... I reckon, you are rapidly becoming a force to be reckoned with my mighty poetic friend ................... tis lovely no less ............... and near perfect ... Neville
November 18th, 2021 04:33
bloody tower
cbdave said:
The content is great, but it isn’t my cup of tea.
November 18th, 2021 03:42
cbdave said:
The content is great, but it isn’t my cup of tea.
November 18th, 2021 03:42
bloody tower
Neville said:
Try as hard as I might, I simply could find absolutely nothing not to like about this entire page .. form, flow, font & even that mystical mauve helped to captivate this reader throughout .. of course the wording & language helped of course ........................ bloody bravo N
November 17th, 2021 08:26
Neville said:
Try as hard as I might, I simply could find absolutely nothing not to like about this entire page .. form, flow, font & even that mystical mauve helped to captivate this reader throughout .. of course the wording & language helped of course ........................ bloody bravo N
November 17th, 2021 08:26
bloody tower
Doggerel Dave said:
A medi-evil tale vividly painted with a skilled hand and his word-brush.
Apologies if I have this wrong - I thought the white witch sorted it in the end...
November 17th, 2021 06:13
Doggerel Dave said:
A medi-evil tale vividly painted with a skilled hand and his word-brush.
Apologies if I have this wrong - I thought the white witch sorted it in the end...
November 17th, 2021 06:13
spelling
Goldfinch60 said:
Sew vary tru unerstandin is al miss inderstod.
Nayd.
November 17th, 2021 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Sew vary tru unerstandin is al miss inderstod.
Nayd.
November 17th, 2021 01:31
spelling
Paul Bell said:
Defo, I say that to the taxman every year, what is it with those zeroes.
November 16th, 2021 11:28
Paul Bell said:
Defo, I say that to the taxman every year, what is it with those zeroes.
November 16th, 2021 11:28
spelling
Fay Slimm. said:
Taken five minutes to decipher these wordlings but they sure left me agiggle and agree with your message dear witty Dusk
November 16th, 2021 11:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Taken five minutes to decipher these wordlings but they sure left me agiggle and agree with your message dear witty Dusk
November 16th, 2021 11:08
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