Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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Paul Bell said:
The world is going nuts, yet nature still continues doing what she does best. Hopefully aided by Cop26, but I won\'t hold my breath.
November 6th, 2021 04:58
Paul Bell said:
The world is going nuts, yet nature still continues doing what she does best. Hopefully aided by Cop26, but I won\'t hold my breath.
November 6th, 2021 04:58
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Garth Rakumakoe said:
Unfolds petal by petal. A beautiful offering of nature. The beauty of well penned poetry, you know. :-)
November 6th, 2021 03:20
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Unfolds petal by petal. A beautiful offering of nature. The beauty of well penned poetry, you know. :-)
November 6th, 2021 03:20
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spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear poet
Captured the emotions of winters and the radio so well
Words on point
Well knit and delivered dear poet
November 6th, 2021 03:13
spilleronsheet said:
Good one dear poet
Captured the emotions of winters and the radio so well
Words on point
Well knit and delivered dear poet
November 6th, 2021 03:13
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orchidee said:
That\'s the leaves fell off (or falling off) the trees then. Won\'t see them again until about Spring time.
The leaves fall later than expected maybe - not usually early October, but later.
Waste of time sweeping them up until they have all fallen, unless they are wet and slippery.
November 6th, 2021 03:00
orchidee said:
That\'s the leaves fell off (or falling off) the trees then. Won\'t see them again until about Spring time.
The leaves fall later than expected maybe - not usually early October, but later.
Waste of time sweeping them up until they have all fallen, unless they are wet and slippery.
November 6th, 2021 03:00
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Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words d a.
I don\'t say this very often but this must go into my favourites.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words d a.
I don\'t say this very often but this must go into my favourites.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:55
cutting the mustard
Goldfinch60 said:
Many need to start writing and fine their way into creating words that are meaningful. Time is a great healer and many will be better in time.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Many need to start writing and fine their way into creating words that are meaningful. Time is a great healer and many will be better in time.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:28
cutting the mustard
Doggerel Dave said:
Is \'tongue in cheek\' a get out clause with respect to your criticism, Dusk?
I find myself in total agreement with the sentiments expressed therein and make no apology for this.
Perhaps these \'poets\' should practice the art of lucid grammatical prose before they embark on a poetic journey.
Let\'s start with one issue you mention: the placement of \'to\' and \'too\' in their rightful positions. (I am available for a modest fee...)
November 5th, 2021 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Is \'tongue in cheek\' a get out clause with respect to your criticism, Dusk?
I find myself in total agreement with the sentiments expressed therein and make no apology for this.
Perhaps these \'poets\' should practice the art of lucid grammatical prose before they embark on a poetic journey.
Let\'s start with one issue you mention: the placement of \'to\' and \'too\' in their rightful positions. (I am available for a modest fee...)
November 5th, 2021 18:51
cutting the mustard
spilleronsheet said:
How straight you laid the words
It may appear as a scolding
But your true
I agree I have made many a mistakes
Kindly excuse me and guide the way
I hope we can nurture and grow together
Poetry is about emotions and inspirations
At times words can’t define them
Thanks dear poet for this thought provoking note
I shall try to be better in future
November 5th, 2021 17:29
spilleronsheet said:
How straight you laid the words
It may appear as a scolding
But your true
I agree I have made many a mistakes
Kindly excuse me and guide the way
I hope we can nurture and grow together
Poetry is about emotions and inspirations
At times words can’t define them
Thanks dear poet for this thought provoking note
I shall try to be better in future
November 5th, 2021 17:29
cutting the mustard
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve noticed a lot of poets will tell you to ignore the grammar.
Strangely enough, one word out of place can murder a poem.
November 5th, 2021 12:26
Paul Bell said:
I\'ve noticed a lot of poets will tell you to ignore the grammar.
Strangely enough, one word out of place can murder a poem.
November 5th, 2021 12:26
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orchidee said:
Sometimes whole poems appear in foreign wording, e.g. Greek. But it\'s blips in the system. And sometimes the text appears normal to those who have posted the poems.
November 5th, 2021 11:36
orchidee said:
Sometimes whole poems appear in foreign wording, e.g. Greek. But it\'s blips in the system. And sometimes the text appears normal to those who have posted the poems.
November 5th, 2021 11:36
cutting the mustard
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes serious poetry freaks like me find an absorbing amount of time reading other poetic work makes for a fuller understanding of things pertaining to writing i.e. syntax and correct spelling which we all need for success with expression and can be found here on M.P. S.with plenty of tips seen on posts from experienced writers and can help on any chosen subject - -- - thanks dear Dusk for sharing your own feelings and thoughts on postings left minus the editing that I find I myself so often need.
November 5th, 2021 11:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes serious poetry freaks like me find an absorbing amount of time reading other poetic work makes for a fuller understanding of things pertaining to writing i.e. syntax and correct spelling which we all need for success with expression and can be found here on M.P. S.with plenty of tips seen on posts from experienced writers and can help on any chosen subject - -- - thanks dear Dusk for sharing your own feelings and thoughts on postings left minus the editing that I find I myself so often need.
November 5th, 2021 11:02
cutting the mustard
Caring dove said:
I guess sometimes people make mistakes in their writings , but I understand that it’s sometimes difficult to read poems with a lot of errors . Although I can’t say I’ve read many poems on here with a lot of those .
A good poem tho , dusk . I guess sometimes we may need to look at our writings again to see if we need to edit it
November 5th, 2021 07:24
Caring dove said:
I guess sometimes people make mistakes in their writings , but I understand that it’s sometimes difficult to read poems with a lot of errors . Although I can’t say I’ve read many poems on here with a lot of those .
A good poem tho , dusk . I guess sometimes we may need to look at our writings again to see if we need to edit it
November 5th, 2021 07:24
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Goldfinch60 said:
So often those memories of the past keep coming back to haunt us d a.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
So often those memories of the past keep coming back to haunt us d a.
Andy
November 5th, 2021 01:37
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Neville said:
if you have not done so already, I would urge you to write the musical score ......... foot tappingly good in my humble opinion sir ...................... N
November 4th, 2021 12:51
Neville said:
if you have not done so already, I would urge you to write the musical score ......... foot tappingly good in my humble opinion sir ...................... N
November 4th, 2021 12:51
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Fay Slimm. said:
Agree that this reads like a love song and one that can never end despite all the niggles neither can say goodbye.
November 4th, 2021 10:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree that this reads like a love song and one that can never end despite all the niggles neither can say goodbye.
November 4th, 2021 10:10
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orchidee said:
\'l\'ll sing it\' as Robert says. It\'s a threat. I\'m on the verge of singing! lol.
November 4th, 2021 09:21
orchidee said:
\'l\'ll sing it\' as Robert says. It\'s a threat. I\'m on the verge of singing! lol.
November 4th, 2021 09:21
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Paul Bell said:
There must be a moral in this story.
Which actually might be another poem. Bet he wished he\'d married her sister instead.
November 4th, 2021 09:20
Paul Bell said:
There must be a moral in this story.
Which actually might be another poem. Bet he wished he\'d married her sister instead.
November 4th, 2021 09:20
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Saxon Crow said:
Niveky written Dusk and somehow pertinent for me at present.
November 4th, 2021 08:25
Saxon Crow said:
Niveky written Dusk and somehow pertinent for me at present.
November 4th, 2021 08:25
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L. B. Mek said:
\'Watched a film last nite where a robbers wife shot him dead which made me all goooey and romantic\'..
and they say Cynicism\'s wit, is a dying Art...
No! not over
imagine the bleak future of humour without it...
(thanks for sharing Dusk
and reminding us
of Poetry\'s capacity for keeping things light and fun)
November 4th, 2021 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'Watched a film last nite where a robbers wife shot him dead which made me all goooey and romantic\'..
and they say Cynicism\'s wit, is a dying Art...
No! not over
imagine the bleak future of humour without it...
(thanks for sharing Dusk
and reminding us
of Poetry\'s capacity for keeping things light and fun)
November 4th, 2021 06:05
somewhere else
Paul Bell said:
If people don\'t realise now, then they never will. Time isn\'t in our hands.
November 2nd, 2021 13:01
Paul Bell said:
If people don\'t realise now, then they never will. Time isn\'t in our hands.
November 2nd, 2021 13:01
somewhere else
Mermaid said:
Superb penning in this thought provoking piece.
Love:
\"...So roll over,
back to sleep,
buy more plastic,
travel more miles,
consume more energy
luxuriate....
complacency only
kills people
somewhere else
on my TV screen
why bother me ?...\"
November 1st, 2021 13:02
Mermaid said:
Superb penning in this thought provoking piece.
Love:
\"...So roll over,
back to sleep,
buy more plastic,
travel more miles,
consume more energy
luxuriate....
complacency only
kills people
somewhere else
on my TV screen
why bother me ?...\"
November 1st, 2021 13:02
somewhere else
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for that, dusk - your piece that is, not the situation it describes so eloquently.
November 1st, 2021 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll vote for that, dusk - your piece that is, not the situation it describes so eloquently.
November 1st, 2021 07:19
somewhere else
L. B. Mek said:
indeed,
its only indifference
if we first admit - our awareness;
until then
its all deemed: \'Ignorance\'
right?
\'Wilful: ignorance!\' that is...
(important and Essential words, Dusk!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
November 1st, 2021 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
indeed,
its only indifference
if we first admit - our awareness;
until then
its all deemed: \'Ignorance\'
right?
\'Wilful: ignorance!\' that is...
(important and Essential words, Dusk!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
November 1st, 2021 06:44
somewhere else
Neville said:
outstanding in more ways than one my friend ... this is just another from your portfolio that I would personally have very muchly liked to have poemed .......... nowt short of brill you old soothsayer you ...
Neville :)
November 1st, 2021 06:35
Neville said:
outstanding in more ways than one my friend ... this is just another from your portfolio that I would personally have very muchly liked to have poemed .......... nowt short of brill you old soothsayer you ...
Neville :)
November 1st, 2021 06:35
somewhere else
Fay Slimm. said:
A dire warning set in your talented words dear Dusk - we all need to read this verse over and over to realize that we as individuals can change habits and help reverse what is unthinkable.
November 1st, 2021 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A dire warning set in your talented words dear Dusk - we all need to read this verse over and over to realize that we as individuals can change habits and help reverse what is unthinkable.
November 1st, 2021 05:30
somewhere else
spilleronsheet said:
A very good write dear poet….what ought to be and what are we doing…looks like we are distancing ourselves from solutions and creating more problems…
November 1st, 2021 03:03
spilleronsheet said:
A very good write dear poet….what ought to be and what are we doing…looks like we are distancing ourselves from solutions and creating more problems…
November 1st, 2021 03:03
somewhere else
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I suppose it\'s easy to forget if it\'s happening \'somewhere else\', and just go back to sleep.
November 1st, 2021 02:27
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. I suppose it\'s easy to forget if it\'s happening \'somewhere else\', and just go back to sleep.
November 1st, 2021 02:27
somewhere else
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words d a, if only people would listen to the truth, if only those in power would tell the truth.
If only - the most challenging words in life.
Andy
November 1st, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong words d a, if only people would listen to the truth, if only those in power would tell the truth.
If only - the most challenging words in life.
Andy
November 1st, 2021 01:06
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