Comments received on poems by dusk arising
their sunday habit
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s a great little statement, dusk - paints a pretty accurate picture, from my experience and observation.
However I\'d vote for live and let live, unless their belief and/or activity interferes with me in some way........
October 31st, 2021 20:00
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s a great little statement, dusk - paints a pretty accurate picture, from my experience and observation.
However I\'d vote for live and let live, unless their belief and/or activity interferes with me in some way........
October 31st, 2021 20:00
their sunday habit
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the same habits that have dominated religion for centuries with this clever ensemble of ritual gatherings - bravo my friend for outing the reasons for many who attend these on-going Sundays.
October 31st, 2021 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture the same habits that have dominated religion for centuries with this clever ensemble of ritual gatherings - bravo my friend for outing the reasons for many who attend these on-going Sundays.
October 31st, 2021 11:38
their sunday habit
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful dear poet
The way you described the holy ritual of every weekend
Though it lands only in letters and misses sometimes in spirit
October 31st, 2021 11:29
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful dear poet
The way you described the holy ritual of every weekend
Though it lands only in letters and misses sometimes in spirit
October 31st, 2021 11:29
their sunday habit
Neville said:
Some habits are harder to break than others but I get your poetic drift mate and am happy to be carried along in its free flowing and furiously fast wake ..... N
October 31st, 2021 04:00
Neville said:
Some habits are harder to break than others but I get your poetic drift mate and am happy to be carried along in its free flowing and furiously fast wake ..... N
October 31st, 2021 04:00
their sunday habit
orchidee said:
I\'m sure it\'s not everyone though. Some may go just as a \'Club\', to meet friends, etc!
I\'m not giving to rebuild a Church Centre that\'s not even 60 years old. Some have committed 11 years of financial giving to it. Gasp! (not a \'proper\' big church with steeple).
I can\'t even give to Branson now. I gotta give it to this church. Doh!
October 31st, 2021 02:21
orchidee said:
I\'m sure it\'s not everyone though. Some may go just as a \'Club\', to meet friends, etc!
I\'m not giving to rebuild a Church Centre that\'s not even 60 years old. Some have committed 11 years of financial giving to it. Gasp! (not a \'proper\' big church with steeple).
I can\'t even give to Branson now. I gotta give it to this church. Doh!
October 31st, 2021 02:21
their sunday habit
Goldfinch60 said:
When I went to church in my younger days in the last century I came to realise that many went to church just to be SEEN going to church.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
When I went to church in my younger days in the last century I came to realise that many went to church just to be SEEN going to church.
Andy
October 31st, 2021 01:36
gain the future
SureshG said:
and if you slay the beast, make sure you inherit her spirit ….
October 30th, 2021 20:11
SureshG said:
and if you slay the beast, make sure you inherit her spirit ….
October 30th, 2021 20:11
gain the future
Doggerel Dave said:
Gain the future from deep in the past.... a creepy one dusk - but non the worse for that - atmosphere++
October 30th, 2021 07:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Gain the future from deep in the past.... a creepy one dusk - but non the worse for that - atmosphere++
October 30th, 2021 07:33
gain the future
spilleronsheet said:
Be brave and keep the fight
Good words used dear poet
October 30th, 2021 02:05
spilleronsheet said:
Be brave and keep the fight
Good words used dear poet
October 30th, 2021 02:05
gain the future
Goldfinch60 said:
May that future be gained with the love of life that should be within us all.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
May that future be gained with the love of life that should be within us all.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:32
a low life
L. B. Mek said:
I relate so well with your words
as a child, I was a sickly kid
and had to watch from the window
as other\'s enjoyed
their freedom of painless, breadth
PE classes
where seating was my only, contribution..
and so, I know how low
that bass tone of melancholy in your poetry hovers,
but I love the way, you still wax lyrical about that Nature
waiting, for when next you\'re well enough to visit
with the patience of a knowing, old friend..
a great write Dusk! judged that subtle emotiveness in your wording, wonderfully
October 29th, 2021 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
I relate so well with your words
as a child, I was a sickly kid
and had to watch from the window
as other\'s enjoyed
their freedom of painless, breadth
PE classes
where seating was my only, contribution..
and so, I know how low
that bass tone of melancholy in your poetry hovers,
but I love the way, you still wax lyrical about that Nature
waiting, for when next you\'re well enough to visit
with the patience of a knowing, old friend..
a great write Dusk! judged that subtle emotiveness in your wording, wonderfully
October 29th, 2021 05:38
a low life
spilleronsheet said:
Such a beautiful poetry dear poet
And the last lines were so hopeful, down with immune system waiting to be restored.Down with flu it gives courage here too.
October 29th, 2021 03:18
spilleronsheet said:
Such a beautiful poetry dear poet
And the last lines were so hopeful, down with immune system waiting to be restored.Down with flu it gives courage here too.
October 29th, 2021 03:18
a low life
Neville said:
what\'s a good metaphor good for, if it can\'t be put to good purpose like this .. exceptionally good stuff sir & am so glad you posted today ........... Neville
October 29th, 2021 02:08
Neville said:
what\'s a good metaphor good for, if it can\'t be put to good purpose like this .. exceptionally good stuff sir & am so glad you posted today ........... Neville
October 29th, 2021 02:08
a low life
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom come back to you soon d a and your walks with Nature fill your life once more.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom come back to you soon d a and your walks with Nature fill your life once more.
Andy
October 29th, 2021 02:02
i wonder
Neville said:
We all do mate, I imagine that not one of us hasn\'t at some time or another .. and most of us do all the time ... apart from that .. I would just like to point out that you my fine friend and poet have just penned and posted a cracker ..... N
October 28th, 2021 03:42
Neville said:
We all do mate, I imagine that not one of us hasn\'t at some time or another .. and most of us do all the time ... apart from that .. I would just like to point out that you my fine friend and poet have just penned and posted a cracker ..... N
October 28th, 2021 03:42
i wonder
Goldfinch60 said:
Your wonders will continue to roam d a after passing, I know mine will.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Your wonders will continue to roam d a after passing, I know mine will.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:33
i wonder
SureshG said:
Find heart, for this love story will come to pass, when it recalls your poetic words in life yet to come
October 27th, 2021 13:53
SureshG said:
Find heart, for this love story will come to pass, when it recalls your poetic words in life yet to come
October 27th, 2021 13:53
i wonder
Vamsi Sudha said:
Your poem surely left me to wonder !! Nice sparks of thought !!
October 27th, 2021 12:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
Your poem surely left me to wonder !! Nice sparks of thought !!
October 27th, 2021 12:02
i wonder
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
I will ponder this all day.
October 27th, 2021 09:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
I will ponder this all day.
October 27th, 2021 09:50
i wonder
Paul Bell said:
There are a lot of people I would like to meet, and a lot I would like to send to another place. Wonder if that\'s possible.
October 27th, 2021 04:55
Paul Bell said:
There are a lot of people I would like to meet, and a lot I would like to send to another place. Wonder if that\'s possible.
October 27th, 2021 04:55
i wonder
Michael Edwards said:
I wonder where they will roam. Being a non-believer in the after world I feel a bit cheated - never will I get the opportunity to say: \'I told you so!\' Great write dusk
.
October 27th, 2021 04:22
Michael Edwards said:
I wonder where they will roam. Being a non-believer in the after world I feel a bit cheated - never will I get the opportunity to say: \'I told you so!\' Great write dusk
.
October 27th, 2021 04:22
of Elspenore pt 2
Neville said:
.. Enjoyed just as much this time round as it was when originally aired ..
Has it really been two years .. blimey, where did that time go ...
I haven\'t checked back but I have no doubt that my previous comment was no less positive than I hope this one is .. and for what its worth, I think that the hallmark of a good if not great poetic work is its longevity and this particular one of yours, certainly stands the test of time ... Neville
October 23rd, 2021 12:59
Neville said:
.. Enjoyed just as much this time round as it was when originally aired ..
Has it really been two years .. blimey, where did that time go ...
I haven\'t checked back but I have no doubt that my previous comment was no less positive than I hope this one is .. and for what its worth, I think that the hallmark of a good if not great poetic work is its longevity and this particular one of yours, certainly stands the test of time ... Neville
October 23rd, 2021 12:59
of Elspenore pt 2
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling read and so expertly versed - cant say I remember this one D.A. but am so glad I caught it this time around. Favourite for sure.
October 23rd, 2021 12:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling read and so expertly versed - cant say I remember this one D.A. but am so glad I caught it this time around. Favourite for sure.
October 23rd, 2021 12:45
purple skies grumble
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
What a delightful read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. It has brightened my day.
Have a wonderful Saturday.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 02:03
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
What a delightful read. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. It has brightened my day.
Have a wonderful Saturday.
Laura🌻
October 23rd, 2021 02:03
purple skies grumble
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes autumn to a tee my friend. Great four liner.
October 22nd, 2021 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes autumn to a tee my friend. Great four liner.
October 22nd, 2021 11:38
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