Comments received on poems by dusk arising
silence
Fay Slimm. said:
This special remembrance as your verse reveals must never be forgotten dear Dusk - those who went down then would abhor the times since when war has take so many more. Thank you for this
timely reminder of a moment\'s silence and all it means.
November 11th, 2021 09:29
Fay Slimm. said:
This special remembrance as your verse reveals must never be forgotten dear Dusk - those who went down then would abhor the times since when war has take so many more. Thank you for this
timely reminder of a moment\'s silence and all it means.
November 11th, 2021 09:29
silence
Thekkinkkattil said:
Oh DA someone remembers the lives that have been lost but what to do mankind never learns. A nice tribute
November 11th, 2021 06:41
Thekkinkkattil said:
Oh DA someone remembers the lives that have been lost but what to do mankind never learns. A nice tribute
November 11th, 2021 06:41
no fear for comforts company
Doggerel Dave said:
That got me where it hurts most, dusk. Yes, mine.
Beautiful piece of writing also...
November 10th, 2021 07:04
Doggerel Dave said:
That got me where it hurts most, dusk. Yes, mine.
Beautiful piece of writing also...
November 10th, 2021 07:04
no fear for comforts company
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad to have caught this sad and solemn re-post - full of atmospheric imagery and that final line brought such a lump to my throat - - a really compelling read Dusk.
November 10th, 2021 02:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad to have caught this sad and solemn re-post - full of atmospheric imagery and that final line brought such a lump to my throat - - a really compelling read Dusk.
November 10th, 2021 02:59
no fear for comforts company
Goldfinch60 said:
That new world without her can be such a strange place d a but one must move on until that day when you will meet her once more.
Andy
November 10th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That new world without her can be such a strange place d a but one must move on until that day when you will meet her once more.
Andy
November 10th, 2021 01:45
they never leave you
Doggerel Dave said:
Linger not, stranger; shed no tear.
Go back to those who sent us here.
We are the young they drafted out
To wars their folly brought about.
Go tell those old men, safe in bed,
We took their orders and are dead.
A.D. Hope: Inscription for War
November 10th, 2021 00:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Linger not, stranger; shed no tear.
Go back to those who sent us here.
We are the young they drafted out
To wars their folly brought about.
Go tell those old men, safe in bed,
We took their orders and are dead.
A.D. Hope: Inscription for War
November 10th, 2021 00:53
they never leave you
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words d a, we should remember them.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 15:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words d a, we should remember them.
Andy
November 9th, 2021 15:44
they never leave you
spilleronsheet said:
Very essential and crucial message you spoke
Irony lies when people think about peace by wars beside
To them why doesn’t all lives matter
I wish all could be loved and respected
Well crafted dear poet
November 9th, 2021 13:45
spilleronsheet said:
Very essential and crucial message you spoke
Irony lies when people think about peace by wars beside
To them why doesn’t all lives matter
I wish all could be loved and respected
Well crafted dear poet
November 9th, 2021 13:45
intimacy
Vamsi Sudha said:
Very Sensual , but conveyed awesomely !! Indeed your 4 lines speak 40 lines :)
November 8th, 2021 23:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Very Sensual , but conveyed awesomely !! Indeed your 4 lines speak 40 lines :)
November 8th, 2021 23:25
intimacy
Paul Bell said:
Four lines that speak volumes.
You just need someone beside you.
November 8th, 2021 13:06
Paul Bell said:
Four lines that speak volumes.
You just need someone beside you.
November 8th, 2021 13:06
intimacy
L. B. Mek said:
(after those few, nervous
first few time\'s
we soon forget, just how sacred
a gift
we experience, when we become close
to someone
whose proximity, is enough
to fulfil: our every desire...)
a succinct, but nuanced exposition of the true meaningful worth
in that universally shared concept
of intimacy;
and as-ever wonderfully penned, Dusk
a great shorty!
November 8th, 2021 07:13
L. B. Mek said:
(after those few, nervous
first few time\'s
we soon forget, just how sacred
a gift
we experience, when we become close
to someone
whose proximity, is enough
to fulfil: our every desire...)
a succinct, but nuanced exposition of the true meaningful worth
in that universally shared concept
of intimacy;
and as-ever wonderfully penned, Dusk
a great shorty!
November 8th, 2021 07:13
intimacy
Lorna said:
There is absolutely something so safe about the right body being close.....
November 8th, 2021 06:02
Lorna said:
There is absolutely something so safe about the right body being close.....
November 8th, 2021 06:02
intimacy
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun, if it\'s not me! lol. It brings on a swoon for me. heehee.
November 8th, 2021 05:29
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s having fun, if it\'s not me! lol. It brings on a swoon for me. heehee.
November 8th, 2021 05:29
grin and bear it
spilleronsheet said:
Great work dear poet
It’s sad and most difficult to go through
It’s unimaginable about the pains of the treatment and the pain a person goes through
You laid it in the words so appropriate
Not been through the same pain
But covid too was painful
Can’t match up to the pains you suffered
But I can understand
It’s painful for the patient and their closed ones
Strength to all those and Leah God help them to get over it soon with less pain
It’s not easy to endure
November 8th, 2021 04:55
spilleronsheet said:
Great work dear poet
It’s sad and most difficult to go through
It’s unimaginable about the pains of the treatment and the pain a person goes through
You laid it in the words so appropriate
Not been through the same pain
But covid too was painful
Can’t match up to the pains you suffered
But I can understand
It’s painful for the patient and their closed ones
Strength to all those and Leah God help them to get over it soon with less pain
It’s not easy to endure
November 8th, 2021 04:55
intimacy
spilleronsheet said:
So romantic dear poet
Few lines drew a lovely scene
I felt I was near a beach
November 8th, 2021 04:41
spilleronsheet said:
So romantic dear poet
Few lines drew a lovely scene
I felt I was near a beach
November 8th, 2021 04:41
intimacy
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Less is so much more at times. This poem proves it. Lush. Sensual. Simple. It\'s admirable.
November 8th, 2021 04:25
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Less is so much more at times. This poem proves it. Lush. Sensual. Simple. It\'s admirable.
November 8th, 2021 04:25
grin and bear it
Doggerel Dave said:
Unspeakable really dusk – though I’ll try.
A picture of a great health system under strain through inadequate funding – shocking suffering for you.
‘Tell you – very therapeutic would be to transfer your obvious writing skills into a complaint.
Worked for me – I progressed from the in-house complaints system to a Health Complaints Commissioner body to the appropriate MP (Minister of Health) to a full apology, an undertaking to clean up their practice from the CEO of the relevant health network. Took eight months , but was worth the effort. All after stuffed treatments resulted in a flu which became pneumonia followed by an opportunistic lung infection and an eight (coincidentally) week hospital stay.
November 7th, 2021 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Unspeakable really dusk – though I’ll try.
A picture of a great health system under strain through inadequate funding – shocking suffering for you.
‘Tell you – very therapeutic would be to transfer your obvious writing skills into a complaint.
Worked for me – I progressed from the in-house complaints system to a Health Complaints Commissioner body to the appropriate MP (Minister of Health) to a full apology, an undertaking to clean up their practice from the CEO of the relevant health network. Took eight months , but was worth the effort. All after stuffed treatments resulted in a flu which became pneumonia followed by an opportunistic lung infection and an eight (coincidentally) week hospital stay.
November 7th, 2021 19:32
grin and bear it
Paul Bell said:
Covid sure changed everything, and definitely not for the best. I notice now they don\'t even mention the dead and dying, as if it\'s an inconvenience.
Having watched the brother-in-law getting sent home because of different hospitals mixing up drugs, I can relate to your write.
November 7th, 2021 13:15
Paul Bell said:
Covid sure changed everything, and definitely not for the best. I notice now they don\'t even mention the dead and dying, as if it\'s an inconvenience.
Having watched the brother-in-law getting sent home because of different hospitals mixing up drugs, I can relate to your write.
November 7th, 2021 13:15
grin and bear it
Lorna said:
What - among other things - I would do if I were God.....
1. Fix Dusk
November 7th, 2021 09:21
Lorna said:
What - among other things - I would do if I were God.....
1. Fix Dusk
November 7th, 2021 09:21
grin and bear it
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read showing the painful complexities of understaffed health service to such as yourself Dusk - - your grinning and bearing the needed treatment is a shining example to us all of your extra-courageous fight against Neutropenia - -- sending cuddles galore to our M.P.S. hero.........
November 7th, 2021 04:00
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a read showing the painful complexities of understaffed health service to such as yourself Dusk - - your grinning and bearing the needed treatment is a shining example to us all of your extra-courageous fight against Neutropenia - -- sending cuddles galore to our M.P.S. hero.........
November 7th, 2021 04:00
grin and bear it
Saxon Crow said:
Powerful Dusk. I can relate on much less drastic level with that experience you\'ve just penned. Sadly, very true. Sadly.
November 7th, 2021 03:53
Saxon Crow said:
Powerful Dusk. I can relate on much less drastic level with that experience you\'ve just penned. Sadly, very true. Sadly.
November 7th, 2021 03:53
so quickly
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words move slowly to capture the experience of \"reality\'s harbinger\" and touch the heart of this reader with such courage as you face the lash of another days\' coping with treatment - -- hats off and big hugs to you dear Dusk.
November 7th, 2021 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words move slowly to capture the experience of \"reality\'s harbinger\" and touch the heart of this reader with such courage as you face the lash of another days\' coping with treatment - -- hats off and big hugs to you dear Dusk.
November 7th, 2021 03:47
so quickly
jarcher54 said:
Your range continues to surprise. This is what MPS is for!
November 7th, 2021 02:56
jarcher54 said:
Your range continues to surprise. This is what MPS is for!
November 7th, 2021 02:56
grin and bear it
orchidee said:
I sympathise, though unable to empathise (deeper than sympathy), thankfully not having been in said situation.
Medicines and prayers (Christian healing ministry) going together? The latter seems less painful. Or as some say \'Give anything a try\'.
November 7th, 2021 02:53
orchidee said:
I sympathise, though unable to empathise (deeper than sympathy), thankfully not having been in said situation.
Medicines and prayers (Christian healing ministry) going together? The latter seems less painful. Or as some say \'Give anything a try\'.
November 7th, 2021 02:53
grin and bear it
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words showing how hard it is in the NHS nowadays, the politicians could fix this but show no inclination of so doing.
Andy
November 7th, 2021 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive words showing how hard it is in the NHS nowadays, the politicians could fix this but show no inclination of so doing.
Andy
November 7th, 2021 02:36
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