Comments received on poems by dusk arising
all in a dream
Goldfinch60 said:
May that worthy pleasure never ever leave you d a.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
May that worthy pleasure never ever leave you d a.
Andy
December 9th, 2021 02:14
yeardrops
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with emotion this reflection of how need can be resurrected strikes home dear Dusk - \"scared to be hurt again\" is the scourge of those waiting too long to begin again loving again. A penning to save in my faves - and by the way I love the word \"yeardrops\"
December 8th, 2021 16:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with emotion this reflection of how need can be resurrected strikes home dear Dusk - \"scared to be hurt again\" is the scourge of those waiting too long to begin again loving again. A penning to save in my faves - and by the way I love the word \"yeardrops\"
December 8th, 2021 16:08
yeardrops
woundedheart said:
Very heart felt poem emotional and moving boxed up memories for another day but remember tomorrow never comes live life and love, love life and live.
December 8th, 2021 09:50
woundedheart said:
Very heart felt poem emotional and moving boxed up memories for another day but remember tomorrow never comes live life and love, love life and live.
December 8th, 2021 09:50
yeardrops
Paul Bell said:
The mind never forgets, and as you say, things just pop into your head.
Might be a message to embrace life and get back out there.
December 8th, 2021 09:05
Paul Bell said:
The mind never forgets, and as you say, things just pop into your head.
Might be a message to embrace life and get back out there.
December 8th, 2021 09:05
yeardrops
spilleronsheet said:
A lovely read Dusk
Another magnificent work
Where you capture the emotions of every soul
That’s the feel when you get
One day you realise is it too late
Good one dear dusk
December 8th, 2021 02:31
spilleronsheet said:
A lovely read Dusk
Another magnificent work
Where you capture the emotions of every soul
That’s the feel when you get
One day you realise is it too late
Good one dear dusk
December 8th, 2021 02:31
the only love she held on to
Goldfinch60 said:
That sunset in our lives is always a moment of wonder and glory and always will be.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That sunset in our lives is always a moment of wonder and glory and always will be.
Andy
December 8th, 2021 02:20
yeardrops
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) maybe you could also comfort yourself with your caring arms ( self love ) but yes , everyone needs someone else’s loving arms , at times
December 8th, 2021 02:13
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) maybe you could also comfort yourself with your caring arms ( self love ) but yes , everyone needs someone else’s loving arms , at times
December 8th, 2021 02:13
the only love she held on to
Rozina said:
This is lovely. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2021 01:46
Rozina said:
This is lovely. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2021 01:46
yeardrops
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice expression Dusk !! Don\'t wait for those arms, embrace yourself with new talents and new thoughts !! :)
December 8th, 2021 00:30
Vamsi Sudha said:
Nice expression Dusk !! Don\'t wait for those arms, embrace yourself with new talents and new thoughts !! :)
December 8th, 2021 00:30
the only love she held on to
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed the memories that evoked of some fine sunsets and the circumstances surrounding at the time.
\'the only love she held onto\' ? Sad and troubling, dusk.
December 7th, 2021 21:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoyed the memories that evoked of some fine sunsets and the circumstances surrounding at the time.
\'the only love she held onto\' ? Sad and troubling, dusk.
December 7th, 2021 21:19
the only love she held on to
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , dusk , 🙂
December 7th, 2021 12:48
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , dusk , 🙂
December 7th, 2021 12:48
the only love she held on to
Neville said:
How perfectly poetically ponderous sir ... I shall no doubt be back once pondered have I ...................... N
December 7th, 2021 12:25
Neville said:
How perfectly poetically ponderous sir ... I shall no doubt be back once pondered have I ...................... N
December 7th, 2021 12:25
the only love she held on to
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of intrigue in these lines is astoundingly strong dear Dusk - I must put this one away to read again - - and again - first class writing my friend.
December 7th, 2021 12:11
Fay Slimm. said:
The power of intrigue in these lines is astoundingly strong dear Dusk - I must put this one away to read again - - and again - first class writing my friend.
December 7th, 2021 12:11
the only love she held on to
Lorna said:
I think I really like her and her perspective! Although the velvet teatimes get me too.
December 7th, 2021 11:18
Lorna said:
I think I really like her and her perspective! Although the velvet teatimes get me too.
December 7th, 2021 11:18
what castle
SureshG said:
Every line truly moving, to be reread again and again
December 5th, 2021 08:50
SureshG said:
Every line truly moving, to be reread again and again
December 5th, 2021 08:50
what castle
Goldfinch60 said:
My lover\'s flower is still with me for me to give her when I meet her again.
Andy
December 5th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
My lover\'s flower is still with me for me to give her when I meet her again.
Andy
December 5th, 2021 01:30
my body part
Rozina said:
Hehehe I guessed wrongly! Thank you for this funny clever poem!
December 3rd, 2021 21:47
Rozina said:
Hehehe I guessed wrongly! Thank you for this funny clever poem!
December 3rd, 2021 21:47
global warning
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
Nature will clean up the mess.
December 3rd, 2021 16:34
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
Nature will clean up the mess.
December 3rd, 2021 16:34
global warning
Paul Bell said:
Well, I see from the comments, the words of. You will be struck down, haven\'t appeared yet. Mind you, at some point we\'re all going to be struck down when Mother nature finally loses patience.
December 3rd, 2021 11:51
Paul Bell said:
Well, I see from the comments, the words of. You will be struck down, haven\'t appeared yet. Mind you, at some point we\'re all going to be struck down when Mother nature finally loses patience.
December 3rd, 2021 11:51
global warning
Saxon Crow said:
The world will go on no matter what. We, however, are f***ed!
December 3rd, 2021 11:35
Saxon Crow said:
The world will go on no matter what. We, however, are f***ed!
December 3rd, 2021 11:35
global warning
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember and shudder at the foreboding title and you nailed it for me Dusk with those few last lines. -
December 3rd, 2021 11:23
Fay Slimm. said:
A read to remember and shudder at the foreboding title and you nailed it for me Dusk with those few last lines. -
December 3rd, 2021 11:23
global warning
SureshG said:
The arrogance of man to think that now his intelligence crowns him as the ‘creator’ while he is blindly surging ahead to becoming the ultimate ‘destroyer’. Nature can heal all, if man would only get out of the way.
Thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 10:57
SureshG said:
The arrogance of man to think that now his intelligence crowns him as the ‘creator’ while he is blindly surging ahead to becoming the ultimate ‘destroyer’. Nature can heal all, if man would only get out of the way.
Thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 10:57
global warning
Dove said:
All things come to and end! The Earth is not immune!
Interesting Write !
December 3rd, 2021 10:47
Dove said:
All things come to and end! The Earth is not immune!
Interesting Write !
December 3rd, 2021 10:47
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