Comments received on poems by dusk arising
a little of England
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful Dusk
Such strong imagery
The dull winters subsided when you painted with poetry
The flowers shall bloom in hope of melting snow
The greenery shall spread across after witnessing the bloom
Well crafted dear poet
November 25th, 2021 15:15
spilleronsheet said:
So beautiful Dusk
Such strong imagery
The dull winters subsided when you painted with poetry
The flowers shall bloom in hope of melting snow
The greenery shall spread across after witnessing the bloom
Well crafted dear poet
November 25th, 2021 15:15
a little of England
orchidee said:
\'Good write dusk.
\'Now to be in England, now that April\'s there\'. That\'s the correct wording, I think.
November 25th, 2021 09:20
orchidee said:
\'Good write dusk.
\'Now to be in England, now that April\'s there\'. That\'s the correct wording, I think.
November 25th, 2021 09:20
a little of England
L. B. Mek said:
a celebration of all-things
majestically Green
in our beloved, Blighty!
and a lovely read, Dusk
thanks for sharing
I just love, those last two stanzas
November 25th, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
a celebration of all-things
majestically Green
in our beloved, Blighty!
and a lovely read, Dusk
thanks for sharing
I just love, those last two stanzas
November 25th, 2021 06:00
a little of England
Neville said:
yep .. that\'s got me all seasonally nostalgified ... roll over winter and make some room for me and my mistress spring ...................... N
November 25th, 2021 05:13
Neville said:
yep .. that\'s got me all seasonally nostalgified ... roll over winter and make some room for me and my mistress spring ...................... N
November 25th, 2021 05:13
a little of England
Paul Bell said:
Just looking outside to the ice.
Springtime when I unhibernate sounds fantastic.
November 25th, 2021 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Just looking outside to the ice.
Springtime when I unhibernate sounds fantastic.
November 25th, 2021 04:16
a little of England
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , dusk … truly lovely words and flow 🙂🙂
November 25th, 2021 03:40
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem , dusk … truly lovely words and flow 🙂🙂
November 25th, 2021 03:40
the great healer
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just can\'t compete with the past, and I don\'t even think time matters.
November 24th, 2021 15:34
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just can\'t compete with the past, and I don\'t even think time matters.
November 24th, 2021 15:34
the great healer
Neville said:
let the muse rest a while longer and recuperate .. I like what\'s going on write now .................................... N
November 24th, 2021 04:09
Neville said:
let the muse rest a while longer and recuperate .. I like what\'s going on write now .................................... N
November 24th, 2021 04:09
the great healer
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , dusk ) I especially like the last few lines of this poem . Great flow to this
November 24th, 2021 03:45
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , dusk ) I especially like the last few lines of this poem . Great flow to this
November 24th, 2021 03:45
four and counting
Goldfinch60 said:
Good memories d a, being the elder child of two my younger brother could always get away with more than I could.
We get on very well though.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good memories d a, being the elder child of two my younger brother could always get away with more than I could.
We get on very well though.
Andy
November 24th, 2021 02:30
four and counting
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly convinced me kiddo - you conquered the old one two three and I could almost recall myself there. Now then, settle down and tell me how you larned to rite..... 😊
November 24th, 2021 01:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly convinced me kiddo - you conquered the old one two three and I could almost recall myself there. Now then, settle down and tell me how you larned to rite..... 😊
November 24th, 2021 01:03
four and counting
kitty the naughty poet said:
this is a beautiful poem really made me smile
November 23rd, 2021 15:31
kitty the naughty poet said:
this is a beautiful poem really made me smile
November 23rd, 2021 15:31
four and counting
spilleronsheet said:
Such a beautiful poetry
Brought a smile
Made me remember me and my sibling\'s childhood
Where we played under the tree
And we laughed when we forgot how to count up after three
Well penned dear Dusk
November 23rd, 2021 15:10
spilleronsheet said:
Such a beautiful poetry
Brought a smile
Made me remember me and my sibling\'s childhood
Where we played under the tree
And we laughed when we forgot how to count up after three
Well penned dear Dusk
November 23rd, 2021 15:10
four and counting
Neville said:
way to go sir .. and ever since then, there has been no stopping you has there ... tis truly delightful DA ..
November 23rd, 2021 07:59
Neville said:
way to go sir .. and ever since then, there has been no stopping you has there ... tis truly delightful DA ..
November 23rd, 2021 07:59
four and counting
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, Poetry
is beyond Artistry
its just, chemistry
of intuitive relatability;
I relate
and so: I Rate..
simple, as One, two
and I so: Agree...!
November 23rd, 2021 06:27
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, Poetry
is beyond Artistry
its just, chemistry
of intuitive relatability;
I relate
and so: I Rate..
simple, as One, two
and I so: Agree...!
November 23rd, 2021 06:27
somehow something
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, that glue will never fail.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, that glue will never fail.
Andy
November 23rd, 2021 02:18
somehow something
Caring dove said:
Very engaging poem , dusk 🙂 loved the read
November 22nd, 2021 09:34
Caring dove said:
Very engaging poem , dusk 🙂 loved the read
November 22nd, 2021 09:34
somehow something
Neville said:
I am so very impressed with the way you have worded this .. and the way it fits perfectly on the page ..
November 22nd, 2021 08:34
Neville said:
I am so very impressed with the way you have worded this .. and the way it fits perfectly on the page ..
November 22nd, 2021 08:34
somehow something
spilleronsheet said:
Firstly I appreciate how aesthetically the lines have been arranged
Secondly the poetry has such a depth
I am hooked along the lines
Somehow something makes me move across different experiences of my life
Somehow something my mind scans the people around
The lines I wrote
Priceless earlier it was
Why do they sound absurd today
Dear dusk I resonate with every line of yours
November 22nd, 2021 08:04
spilleronsheet said:
Firstly I appreciate how aesthetically the lines have been arranged
Secondly the poetry has such a depth
I am hooked along the lines
Somehow something makes me move across different experiences of my life
Somehow something my mind scans the people around
The lines I wrote
Priceless earlier it was
Why do they sound absurd today
Dear dusk I resonate with every line of yours
November 22nd, 2021 08:04
somehow something
L. B. Mek said:
somehow Dusk, something in your
choice wording
has me agreeable to all the things
you\'re, relating..
(a write, worth rereading
to insure nothings lost
in a rushed, interpretation)
November 22nd, 2021 07:50
L. B. Mek said:
somehow Dusk, something in your
choice wording
has me agreeable to all the things
you\'re, relating..
(a write, worth rereading
to insure nothings lost
in a rushed, interpretation)
November 22nd, 2021 07:50
somehow something
orchidee said:
Somehow something is inspiring me to somewhat (or more than somewhat) some time (i.e. now) to like this poem!
November 22nd, 2021 06:55
orchidee said:
Somehow something is inspiring me to somewhat (or more than somewhat) some time (i.e. now) to like this poem!
November 22nd, 2021 06:55
somehow something
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in the mind long after the read - - first class poetry Dusk and will be in my faves immediately.
November 22nd, 2021 06:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply compellingly good this example of excellent wording that stays in the mind long after the read - - first class poetry Dusk and will be in my faves immediately.
November 22nd, 2021 06:51
afraid
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Those words just erase everything, and question whether anything was real to start off with.
November 22nd, 2021 02:45
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Those words just erase everything, and question whether anything was real to start off with.
November 22nd, 2021 02:45
afraid
spilleronsheet said:
Well the lines measure the rise and fall of falling in love
Love has its own tricks
I find it never plays fair and square
Wish it could be fair
Alas at times it’s more hurtful than serene
November 21st, 2021 09:33
spilleronsheet said:
Well the lines measure the rise and fall of falling in love
Love has its own tricks
I find it never plays fair and square
Wish it could be fair
Alas at times it’s more hurtful than serene
November 21st, 2021 09:33
afraid
Neville said:
... sheesh, the first cut aint always the deepest, is it .. outstanding poetry mate ... Neville
November 21st, 2021 07:19
Neville said:
... sheesh, the first cut aint always the deepest, is it .. outstanding poetry mate ... Neville
November 21st, 2021 07:19
afraid
Caring dove said:
Painful when someone tells you they never believed your words .
A good writing , dusk 🙂
November 21st, 2021 06:06
Caring dove said:
Painful when someone tells you they never believed your words .
A good writing , dusk 🙂
November 21st, 2021 06:06
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