Comments received on poems by dusk arising
it was as if
kitty the naughty poet said:
Wow, I love it. What a talented writer. This poem is fantastic. Thank you for sharing.
November 29th, 2021 11:22
kitty the naughty poet said:
Wow, I love it. What a talented writer. This poem is fantastic. Thank you for sharing.
November 29th, 2021 11:22
it was as if
Dove said:
Beautifully Written! Why aren\'t all my dreams
as beautiful as yours!
Chances are it will be a greedy leprechaun
November 29th, 2021 08:13
Dove said:
Beautifully Written! Why aren\'t all my dreams
as beautiful as yours!
Chances are it will be a greedy leprechaun
November 29th, 2021 08:13
it was as if
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully imagined
eloquently weaved
simply a joy, to read
thanks for sharing, Dusk
November 29th, 2021 07:22
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully imagined
eloquently weaved
simply a joy, to read
thanks for sharing, Dusk
November 29th, 2021 07:22
it was as if
Nicholas Browning said:
Chasing a nymph through an enchanted forest sounds pretty fun.
November 29th, 2021 06:01
Nicholas Browning said:
Chasing a nymph through an enchanted forest sounds pretty fun.
November 29th, 2021 06:01
it was as if
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a wonder of romance your dreaming gives you my dear friend -- I cannot remember a thing as soon as shut-eye appears. What are they putting in your cocoa I wonder - great wrte again Dusk.
November 29th, 2021 05:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a wonder of romance your dreaming gives you my dear friend -- I cannot remember a thing as soon as shut-eye appears. What are they putting in your cocoa I wonder - great wrte again Dusk.
November 29th, 2021 05:57
it was as if
Neville said:
You and me both my friend ..
I just love the way your mind and your pen work wonders sometimes .. N
November 29th, 2021 05:43
Neville said:
You and me both my friend ..
I just love the way your mind and your pen work wonders sometimes .. N
November 29th, 2021 05:43
bear faced lies
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write d a, thoroughly enjoyed it.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write d a, thoroughly enjoyed it.
Andy
November 29th, 2021 01:55
bear faced lies
Neville said:
this is nothing like I thought it might be from the title .. it was however something else entirely .. a story poem for big uns .. am glad the little girl was let off the hook so to speak ... and anyway, I have always found they get stuck in the teeth ............................ N :)
November 28th, 2021 14:06
Neville said:
this is nothing like I thought it might be from the title .. it was however something else entirely .. a story poem for big uns .. am glad the little girl was let off the hook so to speak ... and anyway, I have always found they get stuck in the teeth ............................ N :)
November 28th, 2021 14:06
bear faced lies
Fay Slimm. said:
A great Sunday tale about bear behaviour in places I\'ve never been - - your way with getting into the bear skin tickled me pink Dusk - - loverly story and cant BEAR to wait for the next episode.
November 28th, 2021 13:54
Fay Slimm. said:
A great Sunday tale about bear behaviour in places I\'ve never been - - your way with getting into the bear skin tickled me pink Dusk - - loverly story and cant BEAR to wait for the next episode.
November 28th, 2021 13:54
bear faced lies
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The creativity angle is so pleasantly unexpected. For some reason I do think if a bear could speak that\'s exactly what it would say. Very authentic DA. Well done to you!
November 28th, 2021 13:39
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The creativity angle is so pleasantly unexpected. For some reason I do think if a bear could speak that\'s exactly what it would say. Very authentic DA. Well done to you!
November 28th, 2021 13:39
johannes sabastian WOOF
spilleronsheet said:
Hilarious it was
When the words flew
By the typing on a piano side
Well humour did find its air …
November 28th, 2021 12:05
spilleronsheet said:
Hilarious it was
When the words flew
By the typing on a piano side
Well humour did find its air …
November 28th, 2021 12:05
bear faced lies
spilleronsheet said:
Really liked it
Though a bear, I found them adorable
The cartoons showed them cute
And the memories of Winnie, the pooh played
Yet the bears are huge
And I don’t know if I spot one outside the zoo, then what I would do
Hilarious thought provoked by the poetry of yours
November 28th, 2021 12:03
spilleronsheet said:
Really liked it
Though a bear, I found them adorable
The cartoons showed them cute
And the memories of Winnie, the pooh played
Yet the bears are huge
And I don’t know if I spot one outside the zoo, then what I would do
Hilarious thought provoked by the poetry of yours
November 28th, 2021 12:03
johannes sabastian WOOF
SureshG said:
Fido can really chime, but my god you can really rhyme. What a kicker, this is surely worth more than ten knickers
November 28th, 2021 11:02
SureshG said:
Fido can really chime, but my god you can really rhyme. What a kicker, this is surely worth more than ten knickers
November 28th, 2021 11:02
bear faced lies
kitty the naughty poet said:
lol loved it really great write
November 28th, 2021 07:10
kitty the naughty poet said:
lol loved it really great write
November 28th, 2021 07:10
bear faced lies
Paul Bell said:
Little bears grow into big bears.
Little girls grow into big girls.
I\'ve got a feeling bears are cheaper in the long run. I bet you don\'t even need to wait 14 hours for a bear to get ready. Yip, you\'ve made up my mind.
November 28th, 2021 06:05
Paul Bell said:
Little bears grow into big bears.
Little girls grow into big girls.
I\'ve got a feeling bears are cheaper in the long run. I bet you don\'t even need to wait 14 hours for a bear to get ready. Yip, you\'ve made up my mind.
November 28th, 2021 06:05
bear faced lies
Lorna said:
You\'re a real card Dusk..... loved this.... a great laugh to start thee day - - but I have to add bears are on my list of scary things... Bill Bryson, A Walk in the Woods -
November 28th, 2021 06:04
Lorna said:
You\'re a real card Dusk..... loved this.... a great laugh to start thee day - - but I have to add bears are on my list of scary things... Bill Bryson, A Walk in the Woods -
November 28th, 2021 06:04
johannes sabastian WOOF
Goldfinch60 said:
I would only charge a fiver!
https://youtu.be/03Gn4loM7As
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I would only charge a fiver!
https://youtu.be/03Gn4loM7As
Andy
November 28th, 2021 01:49
johannes sabastian WOOF
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write dusk.
But when was this contractual arrangement actually initiated? (the Publicity Department of orchidee inc. all talk that kind of BS).
But be careful - his tentacles spread far and wide – I even hear of his activities (to clarify – Hymns) down here on the earth’s underside….
Still – if you are prepared to do it, sell your soul for some of his lucre, go for it….
November 27th, 2021 19:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Great write dusk.
But when was this contractual arrangement actually initiated? (the Publicity Department of orchidee inc. all talk that kind of BS).
But be careful - his tentacles spread far and wide – I even hear of his activities (to clarify – Hymns) down here on the earth’s underside….
Still – if you are prepared to do it, sell your soul for some of his lucre, go for it….
November 27th, 2021 19:52
upon midnight
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It leaves a residue hey. It does, in its mystery of sorts. I am moved, writer. I felt it.
November 27th, 2021 13:35
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It leaves a residue hey. It does, in its mystery of sorts. I am moved, writer. I felt it.
November 27th, 2021 13:35
johannes sabastian WOOF
Neville said:
the whole worlds gone crazy ......... maybe I can start making some real money for a change ........... :)
November 27th, 2021 12:31
Neville said:
the whole worlds gone crazy ......... maybe I can start making some real money for a change ........... :)
November 27th, 2021 12:31
johannes sabastian WOOF
Lorna said:
Oh so THAT\'S how he does it! So much fun.
November 27th, 2021 12:30
Lorna said:
Oh so THAT\'S how he does it! So much fun.
November 27th, 2021 12:30
johannes sabastian WOOF
Fay Slimm. said:
Laughed me cotton socks off at this clever ditty - hope Orchi can write a literary answer --great stuff dear Dusk
November 27th, 2021 08:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Laughed me cotton socks off at this clever ditty - hope Orchi can write a literary answer --great stuff dear Dusk
November 27th, 2021 08:45
upon midnight
Fay Slimm. said:
yes such a tale of meeting sorrow with slow steps of short-line tempo this has to be one of your best my friend.
November 26th, 2021 16:18
Fay Slimm. said:
yes such a tale of meeting sorrow with slow steps of short-line tempo this has to be one of your best my friend.
November 26th, 2021 16:18
upon midnight
spilleronsheet said:
To me it sounds as if an abandoned person
One who despite all opposition stands up to walk against the winds
Facing the storm in his own excursion
He walks despite covered in wounds
It’s kind of inspiring in a way
Though he is sad but his courage holds strong
Very strong and emotive poetry
Well played with the words
November 26th, 2021 15:08
spilleronsheet said:
To me it sounds as if an abandoned person
One who despite all opposition stands up to walk against the winds
Facing the storm in his own excursion
He walks despite covered in wounds
It’s kind of inspiring in a way
Though he is sad but his courage holds strong
Very strong and emotive poetry
Well played with the words
November 26th, 2021 15:08
upon midnight
Neville said:
sadly ... they just dont get much better than this .. N
November 26th, 2021 15:06
Neville said:
sadly ... they just dont get much better than this .. N
November 26th, 2021 15:06
upon midnight
Nicholas Browning said:
I got the image of a run-down shack in the middle of a distant dirt path somewhere in Japan. A lonely traveler with a mission on his mind leaves its sanctuary and presses onward, clutching his sword with a purpose.
Sign of a good read. Nicely done, Dusk.
November 26th, 2021 12:29
Nicholas Browning said:
I got the image of a run-down shack in the middle of a distant dirt path somewhere in Japan. A lonely traveler with a mission on his mind leaves its sanctuary and presses onward, clutching his sword with a purpose.
Sign of a good read. Nicely done, Dusk.
November 26th, 2021 12:29
a little of England
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful d a, I was there in the wonder of Nature\'s glory.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful d a, I was there in the wonder of Nature\'s glory.
Andy
November 26th, 2021 01:36
the great healer
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry once again
Time is surely a healer
But I guess it’s a slow healer
To some scars it takes loads of time to heal
To some Deeps it takes a lifetime to bridge across
Imagery on point
November 25th, 2021 15:28
spilleronsheet said:
A wonderful poetry once again
Time is surely a healer
But I guess it’s a slow healer
To some scars it takes loads of time to heal
To some Deeps it takes a lifetime to bridge across
Imagery on point
November 25th, 2021 15:28
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