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Neville said:
I stand firmly in thy corner squire ...
.. something has got to give dunnit .. it can\'t just be take, take, take ...
December 3rd, 2021 08:01
Neville said:
I stand firmly in thy corner squire ...
.. something has got to give dunnit .. it can\'t just be take, take, take ...
December 3rd, 2021 08:01
my body part
Goldfinch60 said:
That taste is so wonderful in our lives d a.
Andy
December 3rd, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That taste is so wonderful in our lives d a.
Andy
December 3rd, 2021 01:37
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Doggerel Dave said:
All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....
December 2nd, 2021 19:35
Doggerel Dave said:
All that fur.... You do keep it well trimmed for easy access, I hope....
December 2nd, 2021 19:35
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Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Dusk !! hahahahaaa
This is a really teasing poetry, leaving us in suspense...
Did chuckle thinking all the possibilities..:)
December 2nd, 2021 12:18
Vamsi Sudha said:
Hey Dusk !! hahahahaaa
This is a really teasing poetry, leaving us in suspense...
Did chuckle thinking all the possibilities..:)
December 2nd, 2021 12:18
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spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear Dusk
Now I am feeling hungry and saliva keeps running, thinking about so many delicacies
Chocolates, Nutella and so much more
I guess I am a glutton
December 2nd, 2021 11:32
spilleronsheet said:
Great one dear Dusk
Now I am feeling hungry and saliva keeps running, thinking about so many delicacies
Chocolates, Nutella and so much more
I guess I am a glutton
December 2nd, 2021 11:32
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Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn\'t possibly repeat what I took your favourite bod-part to be Dusky you tease........
December 2nd, 2021 10:25
Fay Slimm. said:
ha ha ha -- ever bin fooled - cos I just have - - hhhhmmm couldn\'t possibly repeat what I took your favourite bod-part to be Dusky you tease........
December 2nd, 2021 10:25
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Lorna said:
Oh Dusk Orchi will be swoooonning. But oh yes, nothing beats eating for unconditional pleasure......
December 2nd, 2021 09:48
Lorna said:
Oh Dusk Orchi will be swoooonning. But oh yes, nothing beats eating for unconditional pleasure......
December 2nd, 2021 09:48
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Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
A morning coffee winner.
December 2nd, 2021 09:37
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
A morning coffee winner.
December 2nd, 2021 09:37
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Garth Rakumakoe said:
A story of lives shattered from pain, trauma, and loss, told achingly too well. Top marks DA. A vividly emotional canvass.
December 2nd, 2021 07:06
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A story of lives shattered from pain, trauma, and loss, told achingly too well. Top marks DA. A vividly emotional canvass.
December 2nd, 2021 07:06
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spilleronsheet said:
Truly put
It’s emotional and devastating to those victims of the drink
They speed thrills, but kills
Wonder this drink which can make one speed
How can it be thrilling
A drink I never support
What can it elevate
The sadness or happiness
It’s just a beginner
A door for miseries
You surely lighted the one of the most crucial matches, shedding light upon an important issue
Thanks a lot dear Dusk for this heartfelt piece
December 2nd, 2021 00:10
spilleronsheet said:
Truly put
It’s emotional and devastating to those victims of the drink
They speed thrills, but kills
Wonder this drink which can make one speed
How can it be thrilling
A drink I never support
What can it elevate
The sadness or happiness
It’s just a beginner
A door for miseries
You surely lighted the one of the most crucial matches, shedding light upon an important issue
Thanks a lot dear Dusk for this heartfelt piece
December 2nd, 2021 00:10
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mdrogers said:
Sometimes daddy don\'t come home and sometimes he never showed up at all. Just a thought
December 1st, 2021 14:07
mdrogers said:
Sometimes daddy don\'t come home and sometimes he never showed up at all. Just a thought
December 1st, 2021 14:07
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SureshG said:
I know in my youth I did the stupidest of things but thank the almighty that I never hurt anyone.
Sometime ago I concluded that any substance, alcohol or drugs, that impair our ability to act coherently is to deprive ourselves of memorable moments.
Loss of any life is tragic but to stupidity is abhorrent.
Thanks for sharing
December 1st, 2021 11:59
SureshG said:
I know in my youth I did the stupidest of things but thank the almighty that I never hurt anyone.
Sometime ago I concluded that any substance, alcohol or drugs, that impair our ability to act coherently is to deprive ourselves of memorable moments.
Loss of any life is tragic but to stupidity is abhorrent.
Thanks for sharing
December 1st, 2021 11:59
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Neville said:
I remember this from maybe the first round ... who could possibly forget it ..
Sadly quite brilliant sir & of course timely given that the silly season has already hit ................ cheers N
December 1st, 2021 04:15
Neville said:
I remember this from maybe the first round ... who could possibly forget it ..
Sadly quite brilliant sir & of course timely given that the silly season has already hit ................ cheers N
December 1st, 2021 04:15
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Nicholas Browning said:
Reading this felt like I just stood in front of a freight train and waited for it to hit me. And boy did it hurt.
A good read, and no I\'m not crying. \"Sniff\"
December 1st, 2021 02:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Reading this felt like I just stood in front of a freight train and waited for it to hit me. And boy did it hurt.
A good read, and no I\'m not crying. \"Sniff\"
December 1st, 2021 02:37
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Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words d a, to lose a loved one, especially a mum in this way is devastating.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such strong words d a, to lose a loved one, especially a mum in this way is devastating.
Andy
December 1st, 2021 01:49
still warm sands
L. B. Mek said:
for me, it a Tree
in a park..
thank you, Dusk
for inspiring and gifting me
a quick journey
through, one of my most treasured memories..
a Great write!
November 30th, 2021 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
for me, it a Tree
in a park..
thank you, Dusk
for inspiring and gifting me
a quick journey
through, one of my most treasured memories..
a Great write!
November 30th, 2021 06:39
still warm sands
Eugene S. said:
There\'s a lot to say about life when it\'s lived on the edge of the world. It really comes through in this poem. Can totally relate. 👍
November 30th, 2021 06:09
Eugene S. said:
There\'s a lot to say about life when it\'s lived on the edge of the world. It really comes through in this poem. Can totally relate. 👍
November 30th, 2021 06:09
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Lorna said:
Memories are all there are Dusk so this is forever.....
November 30th, 2021 05:15
Lorna said:
Memories are all there are Dusk so this is forever.....
November 30th, 2021 05:15
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spilleronsheet said:
Some memories lie deep seated
So well spoke dear poet
The lines mesmerised about those sceneries of togetherness
The person may or may not be today with us but those memories are cherished as they are gilded inside us
It’s a lovely poetry
November 30th, 2021 04:13
spilleronsheet said:
Some memories lie deep seated
So well spoke dear poet
The lines mesmerised about those sceneries of togetherness
The person may or may not be today with us but those memories are cherished as they are gilded inside us
It’s a lovely poetry
November 30th, 2021 04:13
still warm sands
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words da, that heart will be there forever.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words da, that heart will be there forever.
Andy
November 30th, 2021 02:50
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Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem … dusk 🙂. I really like your words , and it has a lovely flow to it
November 30th, 2021 02:22
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem … dusk 🙂. I really like your words , and it has a lovely flow to it
November 30th, 2021 02:22
it was as if
spilleronsheet said:
Wow what a wonderful imagery
Your hand played magic dear Dusk
With sparkles of wanderlust you carried to a beautiful journey
So beautiful and charming
Loved the last lines of yours
“ Turning now beneath a quilt
of softening comfort,
peace eases me again
into the depths of slumber.
The reassurance of passion
becalmed my beating wings.
As jealously the forest waits.”
Such endearing emotions rings inside my heart
So true connecting the reality of me
And what finishing lines
Marvellous
“As jealousy the forest awaits”
November 30th, 2021 00:31
spilleronsheet said:
Wow what a wonderful imagery
Your hand played magic dear Dusk
With sparkles of wanderlust you carried to a beautiful journey
So beautiful and charming
Loved the last lines of yours
“ Turning now beneath a quilt
of softening comfort,
peace eases me again
into the depths of slumber.
The reassurance of passion
becalmed my beating wings.
As jealously the forest waits.”
Such endearing emotions rings inside my heart
So true connecting the reality of me
And what finishing lines
Marvellous
“As jealousy the forest awaits”
November 30th, 2021 00:31
it was as if
SureshG said:
I would like to believe that you are just recalling a reality from a parallel universe and have brought us along on an immensely romantic journey
November 29th, 2021 21:58
SureshG said:
I would like to believe that you are just recalling a reality from a parallel universe and have brought us along on an immensely romantic journey
November 29th, 2021 21:58
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Lorna said:
Hey Dusk... who\'s to say the dreams aren\'t real and life is? I\'m never sure...... good one.
November 29th, 2021 12:27
Lorna said:
Hey Dusk... who\'s to say the dreams aren\'t real and life is? I\'m never sure...... good one.
November 29th, 2021 12:27
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