Comments received on poems by dusk arising
spelling
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - and then more - - yu nailed that bad spellin lark Dusky - -- gud an\' proppa.................
November 16th, 2021 08:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - and then more - - yu nailed that bad spellin lark Dusky - -- gud an\' proppa.................
November 16th, 2021 08:17
spelling
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'spell check, ruined it for all of us\'
ahh the regression, imbedded
in our technological: progression...!
November 16th, 2021 07:24
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'spell check, ruined it for all of us\'
ahh the regression, imbedded
in our technological: progression...!
November 16th, 2021 07:24
spelling
Neville said:
2 write sur .. UR indeed n eloquent gent n then sum .......................... N
November 16th, 2021 07:09
Neville said:
2 write sur .. UR indeed n eloquent gent n then sum .......................... N
November 16th, 2021 07:09
spelling
Doggerel Dave said:
\' got a feeung s gettn o y\'re wok us mu8ch us et doosd min, dusk.....Noothin rong wid guvin a twond reed bfore postin....
A decent spell checker and \'OneLook\' to the fore please...
November 16th, 2021 06:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\' got a feeung s gettn o y\'re wok us mu8ch us et doosd min, dusk.....Noothin rong wid guvin a twond reed bfore postin....
A decent spell checker and \'OneLook\' to the fore please...
November 16th, 2021 06:19
dark august days
Neville said:
very much enjoyed DA .. and for loadsa very personal seasonal reasons as well as its own intrinsic poetic merit .. which I might add is bloomin considerable sir ..
..... Neville
November 16th, 2021 03:26
Neville said:
very much enjoyed DA .. and for loadsa very personal seasonal reasons as well as its own intrinsic poetic merit .. which I might add is bloomin considerable sir ..
..... Neville
November 16th, 2021 03:26
dark august days
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams of wonderful times passed will always be there d a.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams of wonderful times passed will always be there d a.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:36
dark august days
myself and me said:
Lovely memories to revisit in dark august days.
November 15th, 2021 20:59
myself and me said:
Lovely memories to revisit in dark august days.
November 15th, 2021 20:59
dark august days
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Now for me next poem, inspired by you: \'Ye dark November days of rain!\'
November 15th, 2021 06:08
orchidee said:
Good write dusk. Now for me next poem, inspired by you: \'Ye dark November days of rain!\'
November 15th, 2021 06:08
dark august days
Paul Bell said:
Bloody old people getting in the way of the young. Don\'t you just hate the young now?
November 15th, 2021 05:33
Paul Bell said:
Bloody old people getting in the way of the young. Don\'t you just hate the young now?
November 15th, 2021 05:33
Lies to kill for
SureshG said:
“in the name of religion “ blasphemes creation itself
In absolute concurrence
November 14th, 2021 17:32
SureshG said:
“in the name of religion “ blasphemes creation itself
In absolute concurrence
November 14th, 2021 17:32
Lies to kill for
spilleronsheet said:
Thought provoking
I don’t know if any religion can be called wrong
Or we were wrong to misinterpret it….
November 14th, 2021 12:23
spilleronsheet said:
Thought provoking
I don’t know if any religion can be called wrong
Or we were wrong to misinterpret it….
November 14th, 2021 12:23
Lies to kill for
Nicholas Browning said:
Gotta say those last three line drove the nail in the coffin. Simply marvelous. For the record, criticism is a wondrous thing. Two thumbs up.
November 14th, 2021 08:17
Nicholas Browning said:
Gotta say those last three line drove the nail in the coffin. Simply marvelous. For the record, criticism is a wondrous thing. Two thumbs up.
November 14th, 2021 08:17
Lies to kill for
orchidee said:
It is \'religion\' that is often the problem, but not true Christianity. Though I know that is one religion.
November 14th, 2021 02:40
orchidee said:
It is \'religion\' that is often the problem, but not true Christianity. Though I know that is one religion.
November 14th, 2021 02:40
Lies to kill for
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know d a, I completely agree with you nowadays having seen the farce that is organised religion that I used to believe in. We each have our own god/Spirit within us.
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know d a, I completely agree with you nowadays having seen the farce that is organised religion that I used to believe in. We each have our own god/Spirit within us.
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:52
Those years
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, may those meadows become a permanent part of your life.
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, may those meadows become a permanent part of your life.
Andy
November 14th, 2021 01:36
Lies to kill for
Crowns4Christ said:
Interesting piece dusk, interesting point of view.not my view but I respect your opinion.
November 14th, 2021 01:32
Crowns4Christ said:
Interesting piece dusk, interesting point of view.not my view but I respect your opinion.
November 14th, 2021 01:32
Those years
Paul Bell said:
Where did the years go, where did they go? It is great to go back, though sometimes the past really does become the present.
November 13th, 2021 14:06
Paul Bell said:
Where did the years go, where did they go? It is great to go back, though sometimes the past really does become the present.
November 13th, 2021 14:06
Those years
myself and me said:
Oh, these years that past and those that will come. The good and bad, happiness and sadness, lost and gain, seems matters but not really. Love the last stanza. A wonderful read.
November 13th, 2021 12:48
myself and me said:
Oh, these years that past and those that will come. The good and bad, happiness and sadness, lost and gain, seems matters but not really. Love the last stanza. A wonderful read.
November 13th, 2021 12:48
Those years
orchidee said:
Ya can\'t beat things like a stroll in the meadows! :)
November 13th, 2021 11:30
orchidee said:
Ya can\'t beat things like a stroll in the meadows! :)
November 13th, 2021 11:30
Those years
Neville said:
yes indeed DA .. quite simply beautiful in a mournful, yearning kinda way .. you got full marks from yours truly .. ..... N
November 13th, 2021 08:23
Neville said:
yes indeed DA .. quite simply beautiful in a mournful, yearning kinda way .. you got full marks from yours truly .. ..... N
November 13th, 2021 08:23
Those years
spilleronsheet said:
Life was beautiful back then
When their were opportunities and further more when I didn’t miss them
Life should be beautiful today as well but I feel I lack the curiosity to find lovely today
Those were the days which I wish could go back again
Great one dear poet
You sent me on a journey of time travelling, making me nostalgic of the past
November 13th, 2021 05:49
spilleronsheet said:
Life was beautiful back then
When their were opportunities and further more when I didn’t miss them
Life should be beautiful today as well but I feel I lack the curiosity to find lovely today
Those were the days which I wish could go back again
Great one dear poet
You sent me on a journey of time travelling, making me nostalgic of the past
November 13th, 2021 05:49
Those years
Fay Slimm. said:
Poignant and oh so beautiful dear Dusk - your pen captures the vulnerable position of remembering when things felt good and life soared with potential -- this goes to my favourities.
November 13th, 2021 05:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Poignant and oh so beautiful dear Dusk - your pen captures the vulnerable position of remembering when things felt good and life soared with potential -- this goes to my favourities.
November 13th, 2021 05:04
so quickly
Jeremy Leach said:
Very nice indeed. Splashing words on the mental canvas that resonate and effortlessly paint imagery. Just my kind of poetry.
November 12th, 2021 12:55
Jeremy Leach said:
Very nice indeed. Splashing words on the mental canvas that resonate and effortlessly paint imagery. Just my kind of poetry.
November 12th, 2021 12:55
silence
spilleronsheet said:
So true and noble words..a much needed moment of silence
November 12th, 2021 12:42
spilleronsheet said:
So true and noble words..a much needed moment of silence
November 12th, 2021 12:42
silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, the Coffee Shop where I was did take two minutes silence respected by all.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words d a, the Coffee Shop where I was did take two minutes silence respected by all.
Andy
November 12th, 2021 01:35
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