Comments received on poems by dusk arising
storm
myself and me said:
What a dream and an adventure. Waiting for the night to come sooner, so that you may continue your dream.
August 26th, 2021 13:21
myself and me said:
What a dream and an adventure. Waiting for the night to come sooner, so that you may continue your dream.
August 26th, 2021 13:21
storm
L. B. Mek said:
\'morning dawned like a vanquished beast
waking from a duel
across the beach a small gathering
picked its way through newfound debris
crushed upon the rocks in the now falling tide
a small sailing vessel of yesterday\'..
this has many layers from a metaphorical perspective
could be published as a stand alone poem
in my humble opinion,
really liked the pacing to highlight the fun and adventure
a wonderful short story in that dreamscape universe
of all-thing\'s: possibility...
I laud your poetic ambition in this write
thanks for reposting Dusk
August 26th, 2021 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'morning dawned like a vanquished beast
waking from a duel
across the beach a small gathering
picked its way through newfound debris
crushed upon the rocks in the now falling tide
a small sailing vessel of yesterday\'..
this has many layers from a metaphorical perspective
could be published as a stand alone poem
in my humble opinion,
really liked the pacing to highlight the fun and adventure
a wonderful short story in that dreamscape universe
of all-thing\'s: possibility...
I laud your poetic ambition in this write
thanks for reposting Dusk
August 26th, 2021 04:16
storm
Fay Slimm. said:
What a story - it gripped my attention all the way through and the end line surprise made me gasp for more - a veritable sage which would need a sequel you captured the thrill of a good tale and so very well told - - fist class read Dusk and hats off to the choice of image too.
August 26th, 2021 03:28
Fay Slimm. said:
What a story - it gripped my attention all the way through and the end line surprise made me gasp for more - a veritable sage which would need a sequel you captured the thrill of a good tale and so very well told - - fist class read Dusk and hats off to the choice of image too.
August 26th, 2021 03:28
storm
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, I wonder what would have happened if the alarm clock had not woken you.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, I wonder what would have happened if the alarm clock had not woken you.
Andy
August 26th, 2021 01:02
nightime blue
Coyote said:
\'The soft voice of fallen memories\'. That\'s brilliant my friend.
August 25th, 2021 11:19
Coyote said:
\'The soft voice of fallen memories\'. That\'s brilliant my friend.
August 25th, 2021 11:19
nightime blue
Neville said:
every now and then I come across something exceptionally beautiful in a poem .. this just happens to be one of those occasions ................ N
August 22nd, 2021 15:14
Neville said:
every now and then I come across something exceptionally beautiful in a poem .. this just happens to be one of those occasions ................ N
August 22nd, 2021 15:14
nightime blue
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with a pathos the words strike home as familiar to those who like me need the same rescue at time my dear friend. A soul-touching write.
August 22nd, 2021 12:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with a pathos the words strike home as familiar to those who like me need the same rescue at time my dear friend. A soul-touching write.
August 22nd, 2021 12:38
nightime blue
Dove said:
A sentimental write, whatever ails you DA, I hope some memories provide you comfort! Whatever need , aside from sleep, I hope they get fulfilled
August 22nd, 2021 09:09
Dove said:
A sentimental write, whatever ails you DA, I hope some memories provide you comfort! Whatever need , aside from sleep, I hope they get fulfilled
August 22nd, 2021 09:09
nightime blue
Goldfinch60 said:
May that need be fulfilled with your open heart and mind d a.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 03:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that need be fulfilled with your open heart and mind d a.
Andy
August 22nd, 2021 03:37
yellow bird
Dove said:
Lol, a Rose by any other color, would still be sweet! Cute poem! Loved it
August 18th, 2021 13:53
Dove said:
Lol, a Rose by any other color, would still be sweet! Cute poem! Loved it
August 18th, 2021 13:53
lies to kill for
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s my kind of cuppa but I\'m sure it will be a few generations yet to really come out of that dark place we\'re coming from.
Sadly fantastic work my friend
August 18th, 2021 07:14
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s my kind of cuppa but I\'m sure it will be a few generations yet to really come out of that dark place we\'re coming from.
Sadly fantastic work my friend
August 18th, 2021 07:14
yellow bird
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
If it’s been influenced by writings ... then Thankyou 🙂
Your poems lovely .
August 18th, 2021 02:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
If it’s been influenced by writings ... then Thankyou 🙂
Your poems lovely .
August 18th, 2021 02:25
yellow bird
Goldfinch60 said:
That little yellow bird will return with a happy song for you d a.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
That little yellow bird will return with a happy song for you d a.
Andy
August 18th, 2021 01:53
yellow bird
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , dusk 🙂 beautiful poem . Glad you sent happiness to the yellow bird .
August 18th, 2021 00:49
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , dusk 🙂 beautiful poem . Glad you sent happiness to the yellow bird .
August 18th, 2021 00:49
lies to kill for
Goldfinch60 said:
That religious fabrication has so many untruths in it, we need to be at one with our own Spirit (God) to be at true peace within ourselves.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That religious fabrication has so many untruths in it, we need to be at one with our own Spirit (God) to be at true peace within ourselves.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:41
lies to kill for
Neville said:
this is quite possibly one of the finest examples of leaning into the punch with the shoulder and not pulling back ..
and without doubt, now one of my favourites DA ............................. N
August 16th, 2021 14:05
Neville said:
this is quite possibly one of the finest examples of leaning into the punch with the shoulder and not pulling back ..
and without doubt, now one of my favourites DA ............................. N
August 16th, 2021 14:05
lies to kill for
Coyote said:
YES! You say it so perfectly in this fine piece of writing. Organized religion is the real enemy of humanity and yes, some practitioners have good intentions but there\'s an old saying about the paving of the road to Hell that justly applies. Again, an excellent write sir!
August 16th, 2021 12:47
Coyote said:
YES! You say it so perfectly in this fine piece of writing. Organized religion is the real enemy of humanity and yes, some practitioners have good intentions but there\'s an old saying about the paving of the road to Hell that justly applies. Again, an excellent write sir!
August 16th, 2021 12:47
lies to kill for
L. B. Mek said:
for me, just knowing for myself is enough
its 2021
when at a click of a google search
anyone can find out the true history
of so many trusted organisations in our community
its bordering on wilful negligence
for anyone to pretend they don\'t know,
so I can only assume, they already know
but choose to invest in their faith anyway,
in which case, all I can do
is hope them the best,
but feel its completely pointless to try and
\'open peoples eyes\'
when they\'ve chosen to self-blockade
their minds...
August 16th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
for me, just knowing for myself is enough
its 2021
when at a click of a google search
anyone can find out the true history
of so many trusted organisations in our community
its bordering on wilful negligence
for anyone to pretend they don\'t know,
so I can only assume, they already know
but choose to invest in their faith anyway,
in which case, all I can do
is hope them the best,
but feel its completely pointless to try and
\'open peoples eyes\'
when they\'ve chosen to self-blockade
their minds...
August 16th, 2021 04:49
pulsing fluff
Dove said:
One of my favorites from you! Glad you reposted it! Ethereal and heavenly, to see a little one through your eyes!
August 14th, 2021 18:04
Dove said:
One of my favorites from you! Glad you reposted it! Ethereal and heavenly, to see a little one through your eyes!
August 14th, 2021 18:04
pulsing fluff
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
\"Butterfly dreams\" is something to work with.
August 14th, 2021 16:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
\"Butterfly dreams\" is something to work with.
August 14th, 2021 16:58
pulsing fluff
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read that conjours all sorts of tender feelings - -= a wonderfully tender verse dear friend.
August 14th, 2021 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a read that conjours all sorts of tender feelings - -= a wonderfully tender verse dear friend.
August 14th, 2021 07:01
pulsing fluff
Neville said:
yellowrose just stole my thunder so she did .......................................... :)
August 14th, 2021 04:03
Neville said:
yellowrose just stole my thunder so she did .......................................... :)
August 14th, 2021 04:03
pulsing fluff
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words . I Love this )
August 14th, 2021 03:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful words . I Love this )
August 14th, 2021 03:16
easy
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Having just survived another truck load of muck myself DA I can totally empthise with where you are coming from
They say \"It\'s not the falling down... It\'s how you get back up\"
Keep on getting up tomorrow is another day,,, and \"Beauty need only be a whisper\"
Thank you for toady\'s it was epic
Take care
Andrew
August 13th, 2021 11:03
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Having just survived another truck load of muck myself DA I can totally empthise with where you are coming from
They say \"It\'s not the falling down... It\'s how you get back up\"
Keep on getting up tomorrow is another day,,, and \"Beauty need only be a whisper\"
Thank you for toady\'s it was epic
Take care
Andrew
August 13th, 2021 11:03
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