Comments received on poems by dusk arising
living in the past
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
I was young - millions of years ago! heehee.
August 8th, 2021 01:46
orchidee said:
Good write dusk.
I was young - millions of years ago! heehee.
August 8th, 2021 01:46
living in the past
Coyote said:
Absolutely love Jethro Tull and this poem! Fantastically penned Sir🙂
August 7th, 2021 11:46
Coyote said:
Absolutely love Jethro Tull and this poem! Fantastically penned Sir🙂
August 7th, 2021 11:46
living in the past
Fay Slimm. said:
Music has magic to take us to times when youth was exciting Dusk - - I too love Gloucestershire and lived there in a village called Winchcombe for several years --- the place has many mem\'ries for me - on Cleve Hill for instance and saying no more................
August 7th, 2021 11:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Music has magic to take us to times when youth was exciting Dusk - - I too love Gloucestershire and lived there in a village called Winchcombe for several years --- the place has many mem\'ries for me - on Cleve Hill for instance and saying no more................
August 7th, 2021 11:24
living in the past
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
Music is a conduit through time for sure.
August 7th, 2021 11:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dusk.
Music is a conduit through time for sure.
August 7th, 2021 11:08
beyond the silent doorbell
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned Dusk. Great first line as well. You ickle genius you
August 4th, 2021 14:51
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely penned Dusk. Great first line as well. You ickle genius you
August 4th, 2021 14:51
beyond the silent doorbell
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate penning of how wet affects us in summer when promised a dry day ahead. -- Dusk this has to be one of those favourites I love to read over again so into the list it goes.
August 4th, 2021 07:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate penning of how wet affects us in summer when promised a dry day ahead. -- Dusk this has to be one of those favourites I love to read over again so into the list it goes.
August 4th, 2021 07:37
the owl and the.....
L. B. Mek said:
sublime!
a wonderful dedication
captured the playfulness and wholesome message
of the original, while adding your distinct quality
as a poet Dusk,
(really liked the last verse)
thank you!
July 29th, 2021 02:44
L. B. Mek said:
sublime!
a wonderful dedication
captured the playfulness and wholesome message
of the original, while adding your distinct quality
as a poet Dusk,
(really liked the last verse)
thank you!
July 29th, 2021 02:44
the owl and the.....
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh dozens of readers will be taken back to their owl and puddy cat days after reading this tale of new adventures dear Dusk.........set me agiggling it did and loved it to bits.
July 28th, 2021 12:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh dozens of readers will be taken back to their owl and puddy cat days after reading this tale of new adventures dear Dusk.........set me agiggling it did and loved it to bits.
July 28th, 2021 12:55
the owl and the.....
Neville said:
Nobody .. not no one aint gonna love this DA ...
Read on me phone in the garden while picking blackberries and the sweetest goose-gogs I\'ve ever tasted .......
Made me chuckle into me truckle so ya did squire ...... :)
July 28th, 2021 11:03
Neville said:
Nobody .. not no one aint gonna love this DA ...
Read on me phone in the garden while picking blackberries and the sweetest goose-gogs I\'ve ever tasted .......
Made me chuckle into me truckle so ya did squire ...... :)
July 28th, 2021 11:03
the owl and the.....
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine write, Dusk.
Best coffee read of the day.
July 28th, 2021 08:05
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fine write, Dusk.
Best coffee read of the day.
July 28th, 2021 08:05
the owl and the.....
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant writing , dusk 🙂 I enjoyed the fun read .,
You are good at poetry ..
Nicely expressed !
July 28th, 2021 07:00
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Brilliant writing , dusk 🙂 I enjoyed the fun read .,
You are good at poetry ..
Nicely expressed !
July 28th, 2021 07:00
the bright side of the coin
Saxon Crow said:
Where indeed. Great we\'ve got it though. It gives me the ex ci tations
July 26th, 2021 14:19
Saxon Crow said:
Where indeed. Great we\'ve got it though. It gives me the ex ci tations
July 26th, 2021 14:19
the bright side of the coin
Neville said:
heads you win .. tails you win more .. ya just gotta keep on flippin :)
July 26th, 2021 10:06
Neville said:
heads you win .. tails you win more .. ya just gotta keep on flippin :)
July 26th, 2021 10:06
the bright side of the coin
Jerry Reynolds said:
Inspiring write for uncertain times, Dusk.
July 26th, 2021 08:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Inspiring write for uncertain times, Dusk.
July 26th, 2021 08:33
the bright side of the coin
L. B. Mek said:
because we brave and foolish - few
keep flicking, that penny of hope
imbuing each of its flailing, flights
with every ounce of belief
we have left to spare, to insure
when we catch - our own, final flight
we\'ll be floating, as light
as those beaming clouds
cos we\'ve spent it all, in every breath
of our selfish fight
to make the best, of this: our one
and only taste, of life...
(a great shorty Dusk
thanks for sharing)
July 26th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
because we brave and foolish - few
keep flicking, that penny of hope
imbuing each of its flailing, flights
with every ounce of belief
we have left to spare, to insure
when we catch - our own, final flight
we\'ll be floating, as light
as those beaming clouds
cos we\'ve spent it all, in every breath
of our selfish fight
to make the best, of this: our one
and only taste, of life...
(a great shorty Dusk
thanks for sharing)
July 26th, 2021 06:16
the bright side of the coin
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sure it’s difficult to remain positive ... maybe you are stronger than you believe . sad piece of writing , dusk ... how do you find the sunshine ?
I’ve found it so hard to be positive when going through difficult things .
July 26th, 2021 03:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sure it’s difficult to remain positive ... maybe you are stronger than you believe . sad piece of writing , dusk ... how do you find the sunshine ?
I’ve found it so hard to be positive when going through difficult things .
July 26th, 2021 03:21
the bright side of the coin
Poetic Dan said:
If people knew it would be made and sold, its why it can only be found within your soul!
Oooo I\'m keeping that and posting it to remember myself lol! And pass it on, thanks for the morning buzz my friend!
Much peace and respect
July 26th, 2021 02:27
Poetic Dan said:
If people knew it would be made and sold, its why it can only be found within your soul!
Oooo I\'m keeping that and posting it to remember myself lol! And pass it on, thanks for the morning buzz my friend!
Much peace and respect
July 26th, 2021 02:27
the bright side of the coin
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know there is always sunshine within us d a.
Fabulous piece of music taking me back to those wonderful days of the sixties - thank you.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
As you know there is always sunshine within us d a.
Fabulous piece of music taking me back to those wonderful days of the sixties - thank you.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:37
other side of a coin
Goldfinch60 said:
If you get up in the morning everything is fine d a.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
If you get up in the morning everything is fine d a.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 00:51
other side of a coin
Neville said:
if you happen to get wind of a light breeze when you take that call, or word comes your way .. that might just be me keeping an eye on ya ..
Keeping my fingers tightly crossed for the result you yourself wish for in those darker moment my friend ..
Neville
July 25th, 2021 11:32
Neville said:
if you happen to get wind of a light breeze when you take that call, or word comes your way .. that might just be me keeping an eye on ya ..
Keeping my fingers tightly crossed for the result you yourself wish for in those darker moment my friend ..
Neville
July 25th, 2021 11:32
other side of a coin
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry your so sad , dusk ...
July 25th, 2021 08:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I’m sorry your so sad , dusk ...
July 25th, 2021 08:05
other side of a coin
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully expressed and hope its all of your chest my friend!
July 25th, 2021 07:07
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully expressed and hope its all of your chest my friend!
July 25th, 2021 07:07
other side of a coin
Saxon Crow said:
Oooo a little bit depressing here Dusk. But, I like it
July 25th, 2021 06:41
Saxon Crow said:
Oooo a little bit depressing here Dusk. But, I like it
July 25th, 2021 06:41
anxious
Saxon Crow said:
Did it ring Dusk? Our minds can be our very own torture devices sometimes. Nice poem
July 18th, 2021 16:11
Saxon Crow said:
Did it ring Dusk? Our minds can be our very own torture devices sometimes. Nice poem
July 18th, 2021 16:11
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