Comments received on poems by dusk arising



play it again SLAM! {à¿á}
orchidee said:

Words never uttered by anyone: \'Sing it again, Orchi!\' lol.

September 11th, 2021 02:30

play it again SLAM! {à¿á}
Saxon Crow said:

Nicely penned poem Dusk. The good ole rock n roll days!

September 11th, 2021 00:21

play it again SLAM! {à¿á}
Goldfinch60 said:

\'Play it again Sam\' - words that were never said but still mean so much to those of us who have performed music.

Andy

September 11th, 2021 00:20

falling into autumn glory
Neville said:

You can beat an egg etc etc .. but this is hard to beat ....................... N

September 10th, 2021 12:14

falling into autumn glory
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

September 10th, 2021 04:39

maybe
L. B. Mek said:

ready for us to take a bite, every night
as we soar up, in our drunken hearts...
wonderful shorty, Dusk
(I have a feeling, next time I look up at the moon, I\'ll have a smile on my face
in advance - let me thank you, dear Poet)

September 10th, 2021 03:07

falling into autumn glory
Fay Slimm. said:

What an experience to hear romantic music while reading your tender and heart-touching words -- a winner here Dusk and must have this in my list of favourites. Love it.

September 10th, 2021 02:30

falling into autumn glory
orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

September 10th, 2021 01:56

falling into autumn glory
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words dusk ) loved the read

September 10th, 2021 00:31

falling into autumn glory
Saxon Crow said:

Ooooo check you out Mr Shakespeare with your masterfully penned piece. Very enjoyable read Dusk. Faved

September 10th, 2021 00:22

maybe
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

If only things were lovely more of the time . Nice piece of writing , dusk 🙂

September 9th, 2021 09:09

maybe
Saxon Crow said:

Brie amazing if it was Grommet. Lovely sentiment with very few words. Favourites you belong

September 9th, 2021 08:46

maybe
Fay Slimm. said:

Only a poet could fancy those changes in to peaceful living my friend - - the monkeys must have the life of Riley up in those trees - - and as for maybe seeing a moon made of cheese all the greedy would scoff it in no time methinks - thanks for the big smile reading your four-liner gave me today dear Dusk.

September 9th, 2021 07:38

maybe
dusk arising said:

You know what Teddy, You are just so refreshing and always so supportive of my scribblings... and I love it.
Saying thank you is easy. Thank you Teddy.

September 9th, 2021 07:05

pushing at luxury
HannahElisabeth said:

I hate to say that I\'m all too familiar with this sentiment, but you captured it so perfectly I had to add this to my favorites.

September 9th, 2021 02:24

pushing at luxury
Dove said:

I don’t know about luxury, but I never pass an opportunity to dream! ! Love this tid bit of poetic wonder

September 8th, 2021 09:18

pushing at luxury
Neville said:


sadly, I understand this only too well
but it buttered my bread for many a long year .. exceptionally well thought out and executed DA ... N

September 8th, 2021 07:48

pushing at luxury
Goldfinch60 said:

That must be so hard, I do so hope that the dream becomes reality.

Andy

September 8th, 2021 02:38

pushing at luxury
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I guess that would be difficult to escape from , I guess she wants to tho ...

It’s sometimes very difficult to get away from something that might be hurting us despite there being a part of us that wants to

good poem , dusk )



September 8th, 2021 02:28

hello
orchidee said:

Erm, hello! Good write dusk.

September 5th, 2021 01:52

hello
Goldfinch60 said:

Those feelings of yesteryear are always there and just need a trigger to bring them back.

Andy

September 5th, 2021 01:05

hello
Fay Slimm. said:

Unexpected a meeting after so long can rouse romantic feelings and it flows so appealingly from these short lines - -- closed hope can open again and I wonder what happened after that sudden \"hello\"

September 4th, 2021 15:57

shudders
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words d a.

Andy

September 4th, 2021 00:25

shudders
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - - your pen caught the moment when a pebble that meant treasure to a toddler of three was put neatly into your own hand and you heard the angels\' applause - well no wonder your shivered dear friend. - a moment to keep forever though shared with readers here for which I thank you muchly Dusk.

September 3rd, 2021 13:19

shudders
orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

September 3rd, 2021 11:53

shudders
Neville said:


in simple terms, this is simply divine ..
sent a tingle down my spine too sir

Neville

September 3rd, 2021 10:42

dawns cry
Coyote said:

You say so much in these few words Dusk. Favng this one.

September 2nd, 2021 15:13

dawns cry
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, Aurora\'s chariot must be Blazing!
a timely and important write, Dusk

September 2nd, 2021 04:10

dawns cry
ron parrish aka wordman said:

tragic move

September 2nd, 2021 00:49

dawns cry
Saxon Crow said:

A lamentable poem with depth Dusk. Faved

September 2nd, 2021 00:20



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