Comments received on poems by dusk arising
the lake of time
Goldfinch60 said:
That break in life is just for a moment, then we move on into a better world.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That break in life is just for a moment, then we move on into a better world.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:45
the lake of time
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene to read and ponder on my friend -- the final line was just a perfect ending.
August 31st, 2021 07:58
Fay Slimm. said:
A scene to read and ponder on my friend -- the final line was just a perfect ending.
August 31st, 2021 07:58
the lake of time
L. B. Mek said:
fish, can have that effect
well, until fished
then that romance, is all over with
but dinner was memorable, at least... lol
a wonderful edit
August 31st, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
fish, can have that effect
well, until fished
then that romance, is all over with
but dinner was memorable, at least... lol
a wonderful edit
August 31st, 2021 06:17
the lake of time
Neville said:
every now n zen summat comes along and it makes me smile big ... and it aint often a fish sir .........N :)
August 31st, 2021 04:32
Neville said:
every now n zen summat comes along and it makes me smile big ... and it aint often a fish sir .........N :)
August 31st, 2021 04:32
the lake of time
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words , dusk ) a good poem
August 31st, 2021 03:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting words , dusk ) a good poem
August 31st, 2021 03:20
a summer night
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes wonder is normal if we but stop and stare for a while at the glory of starlight that the summer night affords us at times dear D. - a beautifully peaceful feel to the read.
August 30th, 2021 15:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes wonder is normal if we but stop and stare for a while at the glory of starlight that the summer night affords us at times dear D. - a beautifully peaceful feel to the read.
August 30th, 2021 15:45
a summer night
Florence J said:
I love this poem! Beautifully written and truly though provoking 💛
August 30th, 2021 08:30
Florence J said:
I love this poem! Beautifully written and truly though provoking 💛
August 30th, 2021 08:30
shall we know peace
matthew jay said:
It is told so well. Violence brings more violence a never ending cycle leading to insanity. I hope for our children\'s sake we change.
August 30th, 2021 08:21
matthew jay said:
It is told so well. Violence brings more violence a never ending cycle leading to insanity. I hope for our children\'s sake we change.
August 30th, 2021 08:21
a summer night
Lorna said:
Yes it\'s lovely to be nobody I think.......... safer too.
August 30th, 2021 07:48
Lorna said:
Yes it\'s lovely to be nobody I think.......... safer too.
August 30th, 2021 07:48
a summer night
L. B. Mek said:
truly, subtle be the ways of the universe
our simple everyday, actions
tried and trusted routine pleasures, gifting
our wondrous memory mementos
of momentary, solace
because of the \'who\' - with
and not - the what, of our actions..
a brilliantly atmospheric treat of poetic brevity,
thanks Dusk, a wonderfully romantic
bank holiday morning, read
August 30th, 2021 07:16
L. B. Mek said:
truly, subtle be the ways of the universe
our simple everyday, actions
tried and trusted routine pleasures, gifting
our wondrous memory mementos
of momentary, solace
because of the \'who\' - with
and not - the what, of our actions..
a brilliantly atmospheric treat of poetic brevity,
thanks Dusk, a wonderfully romantic
bank holiday morning, read
August 30th, 2021 07:16
shall we know peace
Goldfinch60 said:
If only.... come to mind. I sincerely hope that tomorrows child will be able to see peace in all their world.
Andy
August 30th, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
If only.... come to mind. I sincerely hope that tomorrows child will be able to see peace in all their world.
Andy
August 30th, 2021 01:06
shall we know peace
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Dusk,
Your written words are so true! My heart is breaking for all those who are suffering through these horrific times in the Middle East…especially for the children.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Laura🌻
August 29th, 2021 11:30
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Dusk,
Your written words are so true! My heart is breaking for all those who are suffering through these horrific times in the Middle East…especially for the children.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Laura🌻
August 29th, 2021 11:30
shall we know peace
Saxon Crow said:
A very strong, relevant and honest poem here my friend. It\'s the sad lament of people who never learn
August 29th, 2021 06:59
Saxon Crow said:
A very strong, relevant and honest poem here my friend. It\'s the sad lament of people who never learn
August 29th, 2021 06:59
shall we know peace
Fay Slimm. said:
Those two first lines did it for me with their question \"shall we know peace
when she comes\" - oh the pathos of children seeing such things as they are growing and what a telling statement to end this powerful verse against hatred - --\"for tomorrows child is watching\" A heart rending read and one for my keeping dear Dusk.
August 29th, 2021 05:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Those two first lines did it for me with their question \"shall we know peace
when she comes\" - oh the pathos of children seeing such things as they are growing and what a telling statement to end this powerful verse against hatred - --\"for tomorrows child is watching\" A heart rending read and one for my keeping dear Dusk.
August 29th, 2021 05:48
shall we know peace
Neville said:
sent a shiver down my spine so ya did .. say it like it is sir .. ragged n real ..
not pretty but loved to the core ..
August 29th, 2021 04:52
Neville said:
sent a shiver down my spine so ya did .. say it like it is sir .. ragged n real ..
not pretty but loved to the core ..
August 29th, 2021 04:52
pulsing fluff
matthew jay said:
I like the words pulsing fluff to describe butterfly sound. All I could come up with was fluttering of wings on my butterfly poem.
August 28th, 2021 21:09
matthew jay said:
I like the words pulsing fluff to describe butterfly sound. All I could come up with was fluttering of wings on my butterfly poem.
August 28th, 2021 21:09
the owl and the puddy tat part 2
Neville said:
brilliant but with a capitol B .... and make no mistake .. Okay :)
August 28th, 2021 15:45
Neville said:
brilliant but with a capitol B .... and make no mistake .. Okay :)
August 28th, 2021 15:45
storm
matthew jay said:
I loved reading this. How it ended made me laugh. It was not what I expected. I love that.
August 28th, 2021 11:33
matthew jay said:
I loved reading this. How it ended made me laugh. It was not what I expected. I love that.
August 28th, 2021 11:33
the owl and the puddy tat part 2
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very nicely expressed , dusk 🙂 lovely piece of writing
August 27th, 2021 12:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very nicely expressed , dusk 🙂 lovely piece of writing
August 27th, 2021 12:22
storm
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. for the life of me I can not recall seeing/enjoying this epic bit o poetry before despite checking back through your portfolio several times ... apart from the fact the whole thing .. yes the whole bloomin thing is a giant work of art, it is impressive in so many other way too ... the overall naughticalness of it, the general storyline, language, formatting .. the final punch line are simply super and NO I aint kiddin ... N
August 27th, 2021 07:49
Neville said:
Cor blimey .. for the life of me I can not recall seeing/enjoying this epic bit o poetry before despite checking back through your portfolio several times ... apart from the fact the whole thing .. yes the whole bloomin thing is a giant work of art, it is impressive in so many other way too ... the overall naughticalness of it, the general storyline, language, formatting .. the final punch line are simply super and NO I aint kiddin ... N
August 27th, 2021 07:49
storm
Floreann said:
Powerfully written I felt like I was on that ship enjoyed reading your poem..
August 27th, 2021 07:10
Floreann said:
Powerfully written I felt like I was on that ship enjoyed reading your poem..
August 27th, 2021 07:10
storm
Trenz Pruca said:
Wow, great story. I would turn off the alarm and go right back to sleep. Thank you for this wonderful poem.
August 26th, 2021 13:34
Trenz Pruca said:
Wow, great story. I would turn off the alarm and go right back to sleep. Thank you for this wonderful poem.
August 26th, 2021 13:34
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