Comments received on poems by dusk arising



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Coyote said:

Wow! I\'m just overwhelmed here Dusk. So much sadness but never without hope and optimism. I\'ll say it again, wow!

August 12th, 2021 14:25

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Dove said:

Lovely! It’s great to still see beauty in life

August 12th, 2021 11:04

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L. B. Mek said:

\'I\'m encouraged\'
and now, you\'ve encouraged us too
brave Poet,
for me this read, was a cathartic experience
what a gift, you\'ve worded so succinct Dusk
humbly, I thank you

August 12th, 2021 06:01

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orchidee said:

\'Liked\' it, dusk!

August 12th, 2021 05:38

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Lorna said:

I like brave matter of factness of these thoughts Dusk.......

August 12th, 2021 05:04

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Fay Slimm. said:

A mark of excellence for this fine and flowing example of walking life\'s way and not giving in to the stinky truckloads which slam into intentions from time to time - - hats off to you Dusk to outlining your plan to beat whatever - into my faves with piece of wisdom ( and please do feel free to broach the outdoors this month despite my posting today - \'twas all made up by yours truly anyway)

August 12th, 2021 05:03

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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great way with words dusk πŸ™‚ I love how this flows with such ease .

You are good at poetry and I like reading your words ...

August 12th, 2021 04:18

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Saxon Crow said:

Oh yes definitely relate to this one Dusk

August 12th, 2021 00:59

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Goldfinch60 said:

Your guardian angel will always be with you d a, as will mine.

Andy

August 12th, 2021 00:55

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Fay Slimm. said:

The power of the unseen shines through each line in your inspiring write dear Dusk and I wholly agree that guiding lights are there to help humans find peace on this earth. A great read and love the title too.

August 11th, 2021 15:58

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Coyote said:

I have sometimes felt the same. Expressed beautifully.

August 11th, 2021 15:30

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Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I completely believe in angels . Lovely poem

August 11th, 2021 10:00

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Neville said:


as Rodders would say Triffic ...
and me too, but spelled correctly of course .. pure magic DA ... N

August 11th, 2021 09:52

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orchidee said:

Good write dusk.

August 11th, 2021 09:40

you cant cry anymore
Neville said:


so bloomin sad .. such a waste and such a tragedy captured so bloomin well ..

August 10th, 2021 16:39

you cant cry anymore
Saxon Crow said:

Reads like a song Dusk. Nice one

August 10th, 2021 09:00

you cant cry anymore
L. B. Mek said:

a haunting read
thanks for sharing Dusk

August 10th, 2021 05:20

to dream as an innocent
L. B. Mek said:

\'I\'m relaxed amid forest sprites
sipping honeyed leaf dew
from serving buttercup blossoms.
So, so gently my excited entrance
into wonderland\'s childlike dream\'..
how enticingly fantastical and vivid
you\'ve worded that journey, dear Poet
thank you!
for sharing such a comforting read, Dusk

August 10th, 2021 04:06

you cant cry anymore
Goldfinch60 said:

Such sad words d a portraying an awful situation.

Andy

August 10th, 2021 00:55

to dream as an innocent
Goldfinch60 said:

May that contentment be forever with you d a.

Andy

August 10th, 2021 00:50

to dream as an innocent
jarcher54 said:

I think what I like most about what you write is how unselfconscious you are about sharing. I can\'t help think you are a little girl when you pen something this. You can go anywhere. So fun!

August 9th, 2021 22:45

to dream as an innocent
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautiful, Dusk.
I agree with Fay saving this one to read over,

August 9th, 2021 14:57

to dream as an innocent
Michael Edwards said:

A treat indeed dusk - great flow.

August 9th, 2021 14:11

to dream as an innocent
Neville said:


the reader leaves this page contented

Yes .. a real treat DA this kind of mixed up sunny rainy day ........... cheers N

August 9th, 2021 12:01

to dream as an innocent
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely dusk πŸ™‚ such a lovely way with words ... flows so nicely !

August 9th, 2021 11:52

to dream as an innocent
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - a bouquet of persuasive vocabulary to set any mind at rest - this cascade of lyrical imagery has to one of your best and must be included in my list to be read over and over again........ really great stuff Dusk.

August 9th, 2021 11:07

bedtime for tiny tots
L. B. Mek said:

\' ooh....
now up and away to cheers from below
as her fluffy wings flutter
who knows where we shall go

weee....
above all the woodmice waving up at you
squirrels on their branches chirp
and the cuckoo calls out cuck cuck-koo\'
I was ooh\'ing\' and weee\'ing\' along, gratefully
what a fun poetic treat Dusk
thank you!

August 9th, 2021 04:19

bedtime for tiny tots
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day is so special d a.

Andy

August 9th, 2021 00:29

bedtime for tiny tots
The elder poet said:

A very sweet poem. I enjoyed it very much.


August 8th, 2021 10:43

living in the past
Goldfinch60 said:

Music is so powerful as we both know d a, it can bring back all sorts of emotions within us.

Andy

August 8th, 2021 02:18



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