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once there was spring
Caring dove said:
A beautiful poem , dusk ... sweet words )
September 21st, 2021 00:49
Caring dove said:
A beautiful poem , dusk ... sweet words )
September 21st, 2021 00:49
spoils
Neville said:
this little gem is quite without a single flaw ....................................... N
September 20th, 2021 07:46
Neville said:
this little gem is quite without a single flaw ....................................... N
September 20th, 2021 07:46
it was easy
Jennifer Martin said:
Just love this beautifully written ode to the joy of the coming day and to the hope of better times! You shine!!! My well wishes to you!
September 19th, 2021 15:17
Jennifer Martin said:
Just love this beautifully written ode to the joy of the coming day and to the hope of better times! You shine!!! My well wishes to you!
September 19th, 2021 15:17
spoils
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on da - the shorties are often the best.
September 19th, 2021 07:55
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on da - the shorties are often the best.
September 19th, 2021 07:55
goodbye
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Neville. What do they put in those IV\'s over there?
September 18th, 2021 15:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Neville. What do they put in those IV\'s over there?
September 18th, 2021 15:38
goodbye
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Wow…
I was totally engrossed in reading your awesome write. I read it a few times to feel and envision the words with music. I felt it played very well.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 18th, 2021 09:42
Laura🌻 said:
D.A.,
Wow…
I was totally engrossed in reading your awesome write. I read it a few times to feel and envision the words with music. I felt it played very well.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 18th, 2021 09:42
it was easy
Neville said:
I sincerely hope it was as easy as you suggest .. not just for your good self mate, but for any and all of those who may be required to undertake a similar journey now or in the future ... Anyway, here\'s me seriously hoping it does the trick my friend ......... and not a bad bit o scribbling either I might add ..... N
September 18th, 2021 07:06
Neville said:
I sincerely hope it was as easy as you suggest .. not just for your good self mate, but for any and all of those who may be required to undertake a similar journey now or in the future ... Anyway, here\'s me seriously hoping it does the trick my friend ......... and not a bad bit o scribbling either I might add ..... N
September 18th, 2021 07:06
goodbye
Neville said:
if I were you sir, I would be bloody pleased with myself .. very pleased in fact ............................... Neville
September 18th, 2021 04:26
Neville said:
if I were you sir, I would be bloody pleased with myself .. very pleased in fact ............................... Neville
September 18th, 2021 04:26
goodbye
HannahElisabeth said:
Thank you for the recommendation!
I especially love the lines:
\"a burned out fire an old ash tree
the hollow cry of a third degree\"
I agree with Dave, this needs to be on YouTube lol
September 18th, 2021 04:01
HannahElisabeth said:
Thank you for the recommendation!
I especially love the lines:
\"a burned out fire an old ash tree
the hollow cry of a third degree\"
I agree with Dave, this needs to be on YouTube lol
September 18th, 2021 04:01
goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so well written.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words d a and so well written.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:48
goodbye
Caring dove said:
Very engaging are your words , dusk 🙂 great song
September 18th, 2021 00:47
Caring dove said:
Very engaging are your words , dusk 🙂 great song
September 18th, 2021 00:47
it was easy
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words d a, may those trips become less daunting and faster as you health gets better.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words d a, may those trips become less daunting and faster as you health gets better.
Andy
September 18th, 2021 00:32
goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
Massive work to get out in a day, dusk - Not pure imagination , you\'ve reworked an experience or two...
Anyway, well done - now I want to see it on youtube or wherever...
September 18th, 2021 00:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Massive work to get out in a day, dusk - Not pure imagination , you\'ve reworked an experience or two...
Anyway, well done - now I want to see it on youtube or wherever...
September 18th, 2021 00:19
it was easy
orchidee said:
Time to think, to meditate here, on the ward. it started off some of my first poems. Non-singing ones (phew?!).
September 17th, 2021 10:16
orchidee said:
Time to think, to meditate here, on the ward. it started off some of my first poems. Non-singing ones (phew?!).
September 17th, 2021 10:16
it was easy
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Thoughts go with you. Be well.
September 17th, 2021 09:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Thoughts go with you. Be well.
September 17th, 2021 09:02
it was easy
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words make those trips to watch tides spreading good fortune sound easy when surrounded by such ward-care D.A. - am with you in thought and spirit dear friend.
September 17th, 2021 08:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words make those trips to watch tides spreading good fortune sound easy when surrounded by such ward-care D.A. - am with you in thought and spirit dear friend.
September 17th, 2021 08:03
through a glass darkly
L. B. Mek said:
too much, for one life time..
such wise words, dear Poet
they just invade and overwhelm, invoking so many raw/repressed feeling\'s..
I really wish there was a universal way, to get across to people
just how futile it is, to waste your life
focusing on the negative..
we\'ll all be food for worms, so soon!
surely that bleak reality, must be enough to keep us focussed on the positives we can attain...
however little, or infrequent
we must treasure this experience of existence, desperately...
(that is what your brief words, conveyed to me Dusk
and for that, I thank you sincerely)
September 14th, 2021 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
too much, for one life time..
such wise words, dear Poet
they just invade and overwhelm, invoking so many raw/repressed feeling\'s..
I really wish there was a universal way, to get across to people
just how futile it is, to waste your life
focusing on the negative..
we\'ll all be food for worms, so soon!
surely that bleak reality, must be enough to keep us focussed on the positives we can attain...
however little, or infrequent
we must treasure this experience of existence, desperately...
(that is what your brief words, conveyed to me Dusk
and for that, I thank you sincerely)
September 14th, 2021 04:25
through a glass darkly
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for always sharing your wisdom my friend, many have been guided with your poetic pen!
September 14th, 2021 01:34
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for always sharing your wisdom my friend, many have been guided with your poetic pen!
September 14th, 2021 01:34
through a glass darkly
Goldfinch60 said:
Our Spirits will always move forward d a.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Our Spirits will always move forward d a.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 01:07
through a glass darkly
jarcher54 said:
You are so unpredictable. This is very nuanced, very intense... no fairy story this time! I hope you are close to right! At our ages we still feel we have much to prepare for, and that our long journey is just the beginning of something... thanks! My last read for the night on MPS.
September 14th, 2021 00:08
jarcher54 said:
You are so unpredictable. This is very nuanced, very intense... no fairy story this time! I hope you are close to right! At our ages we still feel we have much to prepare for, and that our long journey is just the beginning of something... thanks! My last read for the night on MPS.
September 14th, 2021 00:08
play it again SLAM! {à ¿á}
Neville said:
Unless you bin there and dunnit, a whole lotta peeps aint gonna have a clue ... this is very cleva sir and on so many levels ................ top notch DA .. N
September 11th, 2021 03:25
Neville said:
Unless you bin there and dunnit, a whole lotta peeps aint gonna have a clue ... this is very cleva sir and on so many levels ................ top notch DA .. N
September 11th, 2021 03:25
play it again SLAM! {à ¿á}
Caring dove said:
You have such a good way with words , dusk ) great engaging read
September 11th, 2021 02:57
Caring dove said:
You have such a good way with words , dusk ) great engaging read
September 11th, 2021 02:57
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