Comments received on poems by dusk arising
anxious
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Dusk.
I can see you writing the poem over breakfast with the phone by the orange juice. Love to you from my breakfast.
July 18th, 2021 07:10
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Dusk.
I can see you writing the poem over breakfast with the phone by the orange juice. Love to you from my breakfast.
July 18th, 2021 07:10
anxious
Neville said:
I have the distinct feeling this is not just the product of your poetic imagination ..
that anxiety you refer to is therefore understandable and can be related to ..
my fingers are crossed and I sincerely hope that when you hear that bell ring you are up n out of your corner and greeted with some positive news ... I shall be thinking of you ..
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:04
Neville said:
I have the distinct feeling this is not just the product of your poetic imagination ..
that anxiety you refer to is therefore understandable and can be related to ..
my fingers are crossed and I sincerely hope that when you hear that bell ring you are up n out of your corner and greeted with some positive news ... I shall be thinking of you ..
Neville
July 18th, 2021 07:04
anxious
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Has that phone rung yet!?…
“The future is suspended before me
its positive glow warms me.”
Once that phone has rung,
I sincerely hope you’ll
feel the warm fuzzies.
I can relate to your well written poem.
All the best to you,
dear Dusky.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 06:43
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
Has that phone rung yet!?…
“The future is suspended before me
its positive glow warms me.”
Once that phone has rung,
I sincerely hope you’ll
feel the warm fuzzies.
I can relate to your well written poem.
All the best to you,
dear Dusky.
Laura🌻
July 18th, 2021 06:43
anxious
Poetic Dan said:
Captured the moment well. Come I\'m nodding, ring a well.
I deserve good news my friend, thoughts are with you.
July 18th, 2021 04:25
Poetic Dan said:
Captured the moment well. Come I\'m nodding, ring a well.
I deserve good news my friend, thoughts are with you.
July 18th, 2021 04:25
if I could stay
Orison said:
Could view every picture that you painted with these words..what more can I say...thank you :)
July 18th, 2021 02:21
Orison said:
Could view every picture that you painted with these words..what more can I say...thank you :)
July 18th, 2021 02:21
if I could stay
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
“And in the eye, your eye
which sees the love
in this beautiful world.”
These three lines are gripping and have held my interest so much so that I’ve read your wonderful poem more than once.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 17th, 2021 19:38
Laura🌻 said:
DA,
“And in the eye, your eye
which sees the love
in this beautiful world.”
These three lines are gripping and have held my interest so much so that I’ve read your wonderful poem more than once.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
July 17th, 2021 19:38
if I could stay
Neville said:
and who am I to argue .. bravo .. a real poetic treat sir ................................................... Neville
July 17th, 2021 16:36
Neville said:
and who am I to argue .. bravo .. a real poetic treat sir ................................................... Neville
July 17th, 2021 16:36
if I could stay
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, that beautiful world is there for us all if only we would look at it.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb words d a, that beautiful world is there for us all if only we would look at it.
Andy
July 17th, 2021 01:21
if I could stay
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a lovely way with words , dusk arising 🙂 this is beautiful
July 17th, 2021 00:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a lovely way with words , dusk arising 🙂 this is beautiful
July 17th, 2021 00:53
dreamy blue cheese
Goldfinch60 said:
May those strange dreams take us to places of wonder not fear.
Andy
July 15th, 2021 14:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May those strange dreams take us to places of wonder not fear.
Andy
July 15th, 2021 14:48
dreamy blue cheese
Fay Slimm. said:
Never did like ripe cheese at bedtime my friend but as for your rhyming now I love that to bits and pieces.
July 15th, 2021 14:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Never did like ripe cheese at bedtime my friend but as for your rhyming now I love that to bits and pieces.
July 15th, 2021 14:18
dreamy blue cheese
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Rice, mushroom gravy, and biscuits for me. Will try the blue cheese on your recommendation.
July 15th, 2021 12:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dusk.
Rice, mushroom gravy, and biscuits for me. Will try the blue cheese on your recommendation.
July 15th, 2021 12:48
dreamy blue cheese
Neville said:
stinkin bishop\'s a bit of a fave when it comes to cheese, but there are so many aren\'t there ..
Never had the notorious effect one hears so often about tho .. but one certainly get\'s one\'s drift sir ... :)
July 15th, 2021 11:04
Neville said:
stinkin bishop\'s a bit of a fave when it comes to cheese, but there are so many aren\'t there ..
Never had the notorious effect one hears so often about tho .. but one certainly get\'s one\'s drift sir ... :)
July 15th, 2021 11:04
dreamy blue cheese
Saxon Crow said:
Lol. Just don\'t go for Epoisse de Bourgogne!
July 15th, 2021 08:21
Saxon Crow said:
Lol. Just don\'t go for Epoisse de Bourgogne!
July 15th, 2021 08:21
dreamy blue cheese
L. B. Mek said:
\'on a train journey home
beneath a quilt of amour
caught up in a web
laid on deja-vu pillows
frogs and princesse\'s
pass wind in the willows
tenderest finger tips
plunge a dagger to flesh
in a fresh opened coffin
they\'ve laid you to rest\'
such a great read
thanks for sharing dusk
July 15th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'on a train journey home
beneath a quilt of amour
caught up in a web
laid on deja-vu pillows
frogs and princesse\'s
pass wind in the willows
tenderest finger tips
plunge a dagger to flesh
in a fresh opened coffin
they\'ve laid you to rest\'
such a great read
thanks for sharing dusk
July 15th, 2021 05:49
something inside
Neville said:
although shit happens, I certainly hope it dont happen to you sir .. I guess there are shedloads of us who fully understand where you are coming from and can empathise fully .. I know that aint gonna help, but the thought is real enough ...............
form = 9 3/4 out of 10
expression = 11 out of 10
July 14th, 2021 03:46
Neville said:
although shit happens, I certainly hope it dont happen to you sir .. I guess there are shedloads of us who fully understand where you are coming from and can empathise fully .. I know that aint gonna help, but the thought is real enough ...............
form = 9 3/4 out of 10
expression = 11 out of 10
July 14th, 2021 03:46
something inside
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sorry to hear of your worry , dusk .
July 14th, 2021 01:30
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sorry to hear of your worry , dusk .
July 14th, 2021 01:30
something inside
Saxon Crow said:
Sounds about right Dusk. Good write. Hope tye news is good news!
July 14th, 2021 00:25
Saxon Crow said:
Sounds about right Dusk. Good write. Hope tye news is good news!
July 14th, 2021 00:25
something inside
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you will rise d a, you have done it before so no reason not to rise again.
Andy
July 14th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure you will rise d a, you have done it before so no reason not to rise again.
Andy
July 14th, 2021 00:22
time
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Dusk.
\"A millpond\'s patience\" very sharp.
July 13th, 2021 10:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Great write, Dusk.
\"A millpond\'s patience\" very sharp.
July 13th, 2021 10:03
time
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, truly
just wish I had the brain cells
to understand the millpond reference..
another of your insightful write\'s Dusk, thank you
July 13th, 2021 05:46
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, truly
just wish I had the brain cells
to understand the millpond reference..
another of your insightful write\'s Dusk, thank you
July 13th, 2021 05:46
time
Fay Slimm. said:
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly - - - nothing to stop time my dear friend.
July 13th, 2021 04:45
Fay Slimm. said:
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly - - - nothing to stop time my dear friend.
July 13th, 2021 04:45
time
Neville said:
... in the thankless race against it .. and with no chance of winning ..
... you sir, have just surpassed both my self and your pen ...
July 13th, 2021 02:45
Neville said:
... in the thankless race against it .. and with no chance of winning ..
... you sir, have just surpassed both my self and your pen ...
July 13th, 2021 02:45
time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is like that, it does not seem to have any constants in life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is like that, it does not seem to have any constants in life.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 01:12
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