Comments received on poems by dusk arising
every now and again
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful way of expressing this feeling of missing someone.
April 23rd, 2022 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful way of expressing this feeling of missing someone.
April 23rd, 2022 08:29
every now and again
Distant View said:
Oh yes, I have been there too! Some old broken loves still linger in our hearts and minds forever! We may try to forget, but... as you say: \"every now and again.\"
April 23rd, 2022 06:26
Distant View said:
Oh yes, I have been there too! Some old broken loves still linger in our hearts and minds forever! We may try to forget, but... as you say: \"every now and again.\"
April 23rd, 2022 06:26
looking forward
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words d a, it is such a shame that the powers that be cannot see the problems they are causing for the future generations.
At our age I feel we have been very fortunate.
Andy
April 23rd, 2022 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words d a, it is such a shame that the powers that be cannot see the problems they are causing for the future generations.
At our age I feel we have been very fortunate.
Andy
April 23rd, 2022 00:35
looking forward
Bella Shepard said:
For me your poem expresses so well the uncertainty of life. What can we really expect? A very thought provoking write, well said.
April 22nd, 2022 16:46
Bella Shepard said:
For me your poem expresses so well the uncertainty of life. What can we really expect? A very thought provoking write, well said.
April 22nd, 2022 16:46
looking forward
Michael Edwards said:
A melancholic read with which I can empathise - good write dusk.
April 22nd, 2022 14:14
Michael Edwards said:
A melancholic read with which I can empathise - good write dusk.
April 22nd, 2022 14:14
looking forward
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Dusk !! Sad state, hope the come out this darkness. Great one indeed !!
April 22nd, 2022 12:35
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Dusk !! Sad state, hope the come out this darkness. Great one indeed !!
April 22nd, 2022 12:35
looking forward
Paul Bell said:
It\'s always the children in every conflict. They\'re always left to pick up the pieces from madmen who are allowed loose in the world.
April 22nd, 2022 10:39
Paul Bell said:
It\'s always the children in every conflict. They\'re always left to pick up the pieces from madmen who are allowed loose in the world.
April 22nd, 2022 10:39
looking forward
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is a message for our generation and all the ones to come. I feel that although there\'s a prominent sense of moving forward and not living in the past. I feel this also speaks to the chaos going on in life and the actions we make today that\'ll negatively affect the ones to come. Deep write.
April 22nd, 2022 07:48
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This is a message for our generation and all the ones to come. I feel that although there\'s a prominent sense of moving forward and not living in the past. I feel this also speaks to the chaos going on in life and the actions we make today that\'ll negatively affect the ones to come. Deep write.
April 22nd, 2022 07:48
looking forward
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of where we are in humanity. Sad but true. Well expressed.
April 22nd, 2022 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A statement of where we are in humanity. Sad but true. Well expressed.
April 22nd, 2022 06:26
offers of nonsense
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean it kept me entertained! Sometimes we just need to write some \"nonsense\" here and there, it keeps the peppiness!
April 21st, 2022 08:46
Rocky Lagou said:
I mean it kept me entertained! Sometimes we just need to write some \"nonsense\" here and there, it keeps the peppiness!
April 21st, 2022 08:46
offers of nonsense
SureshG said:
Nonsense! You say, nonsense
I must declare
I found it to be pure entertainment
The sweetest of eclair!
April 21st, 2022 06:01
SureshG said:
Nonsense! You say, nonsense
I must declare
I found it to be pure entertainment
The sweetest of eclair!
April 21st, 2022 06:01
offers of nonsense
Rozina said:
Delightful nonsense poem! I would love to read this to a class of young children. And I can imagine the drawings that accompany this poem.
April 20th, 2022 17:58
Rozina said:
Delightful nonsense poem! I would love to read this to a class of young children. And I can imagine the drawings that accompany this poem.
April 20th, 2022 17:58
offers of nonsense
Saxon Crow said:
Well it made me chuckle and that\'s always a good thing. Great poem Dusk
April 20th, 2022 09:13
Saxon Crow said:
Well it made me chuckle and that\'s always a good thing. Great poem Dusk
April 20th, 2022 09:13
offers of nonsense
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved nursery rhymes and your rendition put a smile on my face. Well done dusk.
April 20th, 2022 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved nursery rhymes and your rendition put a smile on my face. Well done dusk.
April 20th, 2022 05:57
offers of nonsense
Neville said:
In all seriousness, take my word for it sir .. this is indeed the very best kind of absolute nonsense .... Neville :)
April 20th, 2022 03:31
Neville said:
In all seriousness, take my word for it sir .. this is indeed the very best kind of absolute nonsense .... Neville :)
April 20th, 2022 03:31
offers of nonsense
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And a great one too ! Maybe I should try writing one ))
April 20th, 2022 02:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
And a great one too ! Maybe I should try writing one ))
April 20th, 2022 02:40
within a picture in my mind
Neville said:
sadly you raise some of the self same questions I find myself repeatedly asking ... perfectly poemed nevertheless ........ N
April 19th, 2022 13:19
Neville said:
sadly you raise some of the self same questions I find myself repeatedly asking ... perfectly poemed nevertheless ........ N
April 19th, 2022 13:19
within a picture in my mind
sorenbarrett said:
dusk such a great poem with the first half contrasting with the second half. Unfortunately we have progressed technologically far beyond our social progress. Until we see a revolution for ethical and moral progress equal to our technological one peace is far away.
April 19th, 2022 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
dusk such a great poem with the first half contrasting with the second half. Unfortunately we have progressed technologically far beyond our social progress. Until we see a revolution for ethical and moral progress equal to our technological one peace is far away.
April 19th, 2022 13:00
within a picture in my mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a, those who can find the solutions will not put a single penny on that proffered plate.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words d a, those who can find the solutions will not put a single penny on that proffered plate.
Andy
April 19th, 2022 00:30
within a picture in my mind
Rozina said:
Ego, to control, to be the winner always, bulldozing anything along the path.
April 18th, 2022 18:24
Rozina said:
Ego, to control, to be the winner always, bulldozing anything along the path.
April 18th, 2022 18:24
beautiful pastime
dusk arising said:
Well if you could find me a few ladies upon whom to experiment, I\'d like to try out your supposition LOL thank you Teddy.
April 18th, 2022 09:20
dusk arising said:
Well if you could find me a few ladies upon whom to experiment, I\'d like to try out your supposition LOL thank you Teddy.
April 18th, 2022 09:20
in dark woodland
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes and WOW Dusk. I love this sensation of connecting to one\'s self via nature, and then reflecting on our inconsequential nature. We can truly feel like a star among the many, but what matters is that we all shine in our own unique way. Beautiful.
April 18th, 2022 08:41
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes and WOW Dusk. I love this sensation of connecting to one\'s self via nature, and then reflecting on our inconsequential nature. We can truly feel like a star among the many, but what matters is that we all shine in our own unique way. Beautiful.
April 18th, 2022 08:41
within a picture in my mind
Paul Bell said:
Peace will come through British and American weaponry, which in any other world would sound mad, but mad dictators can only be beaten by force.
April 18th, 2022 06:18
Paul Bell said:
Peace will come through British and American weaponry, which in any other world would sound mad, but mad dictators can only be beaten by force.
April 18th, 2022 06:18
within a picture in my mind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing dusk .. I think there will be more peace in the future but that is just a feeling I have .. hopefully it will be .
There’s no need for cruelty
April 18th, 2022 06:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing dusk .. I think there will be more peace in the future but that is just a feeling I have .. hopefully it will be .
There’s no need for cruelty
April 18th, 2022 06:10
in dark woodland
Rozina said:
I am just imagining this scene - it\'s so real. Great lines!
April 17th, 2022 18:03
Rozina said:
I am just imagining this scene - it\'s so real. Great lines!
April 17th, 2022 18:03
in dark woodland
sorenbarrett said:
Dusk this write registered as few do. I believe this to be one of your better writes. It is full of wonderful images. It carries such wisdom of how little we know of nature. I loved the lines all the way through, but one of my favorites is \"carried on the wind through shapeless darkness.\"
April 17th, 2022 14:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dusk this write registered as few do. I believe this to be one of your better writes. It is full of wonderful images. It carries such wisdom of how little we know of nature. I loved the lines all the way through, but one of my favorites is \"carried on the wind through shapeless darkness.\"
April 17th, 2022 14:49
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