Comments received on poems by dusk arising
slowly, into a shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, you have taken me to that place where my angel is waiting.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words d a, you have taken me to that place where my angel is waiting.
Andy
May 7th, 2020 00:11
slowly, into a shadow
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a plaintive feeling of passing time in this slow lament for lost youth and all its innocent pleasures - those last lines make this mind sigh as I read of that a long ago angelic kiss. First rate writing my friend.
May 6th, 2020 14:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a plaintive feeling of passing time in this slow lament for lost youth and all its innocent pleasures - those last lines make this mind sigh as I read of that a long ago angelic kiss. First rate writing my friend.
May 6th, 2020 14:55
2020 May day blues
myself and me said:
We might never imagine that we could experience another pandemic in our life, and here it is, right there. Can\'t do anything about it. What will we learn? I guess nothing. Soon those who survived, will forget about it as if nothing happened. A fine writing.
May 2nd, 2020 01:09
myself and me said:
We might never imagine that we could experience another pandemic in our life, and here it is, right there. Can\'t do anything about it. What will we learn? I guess nothing. Soon those who survived, will forget about it as if nothing happened. A fine writing.
May 2nd, 2020 01:09
2020 May day blues
Fay Slimm. said:
Boredom was never better described in this appeal for a bit more freedom my friend. A powerful read.
May 1st, 2020 06:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Boredom was never better described in this appeal for a bit more freedom my friend. A powerful read.
May 1st, 2020 06:33
2020 May day blues
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I\'m having fun. See me in me back garden, dancing round me May pole? And see my Morris dancer costume too? Is it fetching?!
May 1st, 2020 02:03
orchidee said:
Oohh I dunno - I\'m having fun. See me in me back garden, dancing round me May pole? And see my Morris dancer costume too? Is it fetching?!
May 1st, 2020 02:03
conformity
orchidee said:
This box is too big. I can\'t get out of it. How will I ever think outside of it, and be un-conforming?! heehee.
April 30th, 2020 01:59
orchidee said:
This box is too big. I can\'t get out of it. How will I ever think outside of it, and be un-conforming?! heehee.
April 30th, 2020 01:59
conformity
Fay Slimm. said:
A long time since I heard Cat - - thanks for sharing him Dusk - your verse echoes the finality of bruised relationships - - your prose makes an intriguing read.
April 30th, 2020 01:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A long time since I heard Cat - - thanks for sharing him Dusk - your verse echoes the finality of bruised relationships - - your prose makes an intriguing read.
April 30th, 2020 01:56
conformity
Goldfinch60 said:
Conformity is all very well but stepping \'outside the box\' brings wonderful unplanned times for us all.
Always liked Cat Stevens/Yusuf Islam.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Conformity is all very well but stepping \'outside the box\' brings wonderful unplanned times for us all.
Always liked Cat Stevens/Yusuf Islam.
Andy
April 30th, 2020 00:24
alive in life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for your comment DA ~ I guess I should have been more abstract in my Comment. YES We are borh in love with life ~ BUT been married make our lives infinitely better and hopefully in the not too distant future will will produce that NEW LIFE you poem talks about. It was just our personal interpretation of the POEM ~ OK
Love - Life & Joy this fine day !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 29th, 2020 02:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for your comment DA ~ I guess I should have been more abstract in my Comment. YES We are borh in love with life ~ BUT been married make our lives infinitely better and hopefully in the not too distant future will will produce that NEW LIFE you poem talks about. It was just our personal interpretation of the POEM ~ OK
Love - Life & Joy this fine day !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 29th, 2020 02:10
alive in life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks DA for sharing a Poem of Total Committment to ones LOVER ! I hope & pray that in 2045 (Silver Wedding) Angela & I will be able to say that about each oher ! Love the VIDEO - Very haunting !
Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela 💜💜💜
April 28th, 2020 17:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks DA for sharing a Poem of Total Committment to ones LOVER ! I hope & pray that in 2045 (Silver Wedding) Angela & I will be able to say that about each oher ! Love the VIDEO - Very haunting !
Love & Peace & Joy
Brian & Angela 💜💜💜
April 28th, 2020 17:08
alive in life
Michael Edwards said:
A strong write and a compelling read great work dusk
April 28th, 2020 13:59
Michael Edwards said:
A strong write and a compelling read great work dusk
April 28th, 2020 13:59
alive in life
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Alive? Ain\'t no one alive in EastEnders. They\'re all made of wood! lol.
April 28th, 2020 07:13
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk.
Alive? Ain\'t no one alive in EastEnders. They\'re all made of wood! lol.
April 28th, 2020 07:13
alive in life
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong emotive write d a, it resonates.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 04:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a strong emotive write d a, it resonates.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 04:30
dreams
SureshG said:
I strongly believe dreams to be an ‘alternate reality’ or maybe I am living my alter egos dream, but neither match up to your poetic essence.
April 27th, 2020 14:52
SureshG said:
I strongly believe dreams to be an ‘alternate reality’ or maybe I am living my alter egos dream, but neither match up to your poetic essence.
April 27th, 2020 14:52
Captain Tom
Fay Slimm. said:
He and his brave determination will live in our hearts forever - the nation and world have heard and responded - what a hero !! - - a wonderful read.
April 27th, 2020 06:42
Fay Slimm. said:
He and his brave determination will live in our hearts forever - the nation and world have heard and responded - what a hero !! - - a wonderful read.
April 27th, 2020 06:42
Captain Tom
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Morning DA ! I had thought of doing similar but you cant improve on Perfection ! Love the VIDEO VERSION you chose its very dynamic. Your Poetic tribute to Captain Tom (they should promote him to Major Tom) is very grahic & covers all aspects - Angela & I will sing a Duet to it tonight ! Captain Tom has inspired us all to stop grumbelling about COVID 19 & LOCKDOWN and get out there & do something for the NHS. I have raised a modest sum (in a Collecting Box labelled NHS = Nice Helpful Souls) by shopping & pruning for Pensioners etc. For me as a Scouse exiled in Essex - The recording of *You*ll never walk Alone* with MB & the Nurses Choir - was the icing on Toms 100th Birthday Cake - when it reached *TOP of the POPS* - and still will be on THURSDAY ! Tom has two Guiness Records 1. Highest Sum (£30+ M) raised by an Individual 2. Oldest Person (100) to be *Top of the Pops* beating Tom Jones 68 by 32 years. Capptain Tom still keeps on Walking !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 27th, 2020 03:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE - Good Morning DA ! I had thought of doing similar but you cant improve on Perfection ! Love the VIDEO VERSION you chose its very dynamic. Your Poetic tribute to Captain Tom (they should promote him to Major Tom) is very grahic & covers all aspects - Angela & I will sing a Duet to it tonight ! Captain Tom has inspired us all to stop grumbelling about COVID 19 & LOCKDOWN and get out there & do something for the NHS. I have raised a modest sum (in a Collecting Box labelled NHS = Nice Helpful Souls) by shopping & pruning for Pensioners etc. For me as a Scouse exiled in Essex - The recording of *You*ll never walk Alone* with MB & the Nurses Choir - was the icing on Toms 100th Birthday Cake - when it reached *TOP of the POPS* - and still will be on THURSDAY ! Tom has two Guiness Records 1. Highest Sum (£30+ M) raised by an Individual 2. Oldest Person (100) to be *Top of the Pops* beating Tom Jones 68 by 32 years. Capptain Tom still keeps on Walking !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 27th, 2020 03:55
Captain Tom
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine tribute Dusk.
You sure you want me to sing it? You\'ll bear with my singing just this once?! heehee. Hope it don\'t frighten away everyone else.
April 27th, 2020 01:53
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine tribute Dusk.
You sure you want me to sing it? You\'ll bear with my singing just this once?! heehee. Hope it don\'t frighten away everyone else.
April 27th, 2020 01:53
Captain Tom
Michael Edwards said:
We all salute him. And a magnificent tribute write.
April 27th, 2020 00:35
Michael Edwards said:
We all salute him. And a magnificent tribute write.
April 27th, 2020 00:35
dreams
Eugene S. said:
As elusive and unfathomable dreams are, do artists and poets not always try to capture them in words and paint? To make them true? I think they help us to see.
April 26th, 2020 07:52
Eugene S. said:
As elusive and unfathomable dreams are, do artists and poets not always try to capture them in words and paint? To make them true? I think they help us to see.
April 26th, 2020 07:52
covid-19 solidarity
Neville said:
say it like ya mean it why dont ya.. when dealing with something like covid-19 that has no good intention\'s whatsoever, one has to choose one\'s words carefully.. and I would say you did just that sir …
Oh\' and I\'m in your corner,
Neville
April 26th, 2020 05:34
Neville said:
say it like ya mean it why dont ya.. when dealing with something like covid-19 that has no good intention\'s whatsoever, one has to choose one\'s words carefully.. and I would say you did just that sir …
Oh\' and I\'m in your corner,
Neville
April 26th, 2020 05:34
dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreams are the joys that we wish for in our awakened lives.
Love the video, great group.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreams are the joys that we wish for in our awakened lives.
Love the video, great group.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:13
dreams
Neville said:
you pose a very interesting question in todays fine offering..
You also have a fine taste in music sir.. Fotheringay were a great band and what a voice Sandy Denny had.. I actually saw her play the evening she fell down the stairs... we were in fact neighbours …
April 25th, 2020 13:25
Neville said:
you pose a very interesting question in todays fine offering..
You also have a fine taste in music sir.. Fotheringay were a great band and what a voice Sandy Denny had.. I actually saw her play the evening she fell down the stairs... we were in fact neighbours …
April 25th, 2020 13:25
dreams
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON ~ DA Brian Here. Thanks for reaturing Fotheringay (1970 -71) ~ Great period for Folk-Pop - Simon & Funkel The Byrds - Fairport Covention - Bob Dylan - Joan Baez Everly brothers etc etc. Oddly enough the Fotheringays reformed in 2015 - 16.
Dreams I guess are due the sub-conscious becoming the conscious while we sleep. My dreams are primarily focussed on a distorted view of the Past featuring people & Places I remember but I always wake up short of my destinations etc. However I would rather Dream than not Dream. Angela works so hard in the Day she seems to sleep at peace with herself & the World. We werre born in the 80s but our Parents tell us that music was less frenetic as the Rock & Roll 50s & 60s morphed into the 70s & 80s apart from PUNK ROCK ! In retrospect We prefer the Ballad Singers like Dean Martin - NKC - Jim Reeves - Elvis etc. There is only Tony Bennet left ! Great Tunes and you can both hear & understnd the lyrics. We love Jazz & Classical - but RAP leaves us a little confused ! Thnaks for sharing.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 25th, 2020 08:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON ~ DA Brian Here. Thanks for reaturing Fotheringay (1970 -71) ~ Great period for Folk-Pop - Simon & Funkel The Byrds - Fairport Covention - Bob Dylan - Joan Baez Everly brothers etc etc. Oddly enough the Fotheringays reformed in 2015 - 16.
Dreams I guess are due the sub-conscious becoming the conscious while we sleep. My dreams are primarily focussed on a distorted view of the Past featuring people & Places I remember but I always wake up short of my destinations etc. However I would rather Dream than not Dream. Angela works so hard in the Day she seems to sleep at peace with herself & the World. We werre born in the 80s but our Parents tell us that music was less frenetic as the Rock & Roll 50s & 60s morphed into the 70s & 80s apart from PUNK ROCK ! In retrospect We prefer the Ballad Singers like Dean Martin - NKC - Jim Reeves - Elvis etc. There is only Tony Bennet left ! Great Tunes and you can both hear & understnd the lyrics. We love Jazz & Classical - but RAP leaves us a little confused ! Thnaks for sharing.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
April 25th, 2020 08:48
dreams
orchidee said:
The dreams that never come true - dreaming I\'m not singing! lol.
April 25th, 2020 05:34
orchidee said:
The dreams that never come true - dreaming I\'m not singing! lol.
April 25th, 2020 05:34
this special springtime
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I amd sorry that you have to stay in at this time, I feel I am fortunate in that I can walk briefly in the countryside and am able to see some of Spring in all its glory.
That young girl is super, she will go a long way.
Andy
April 23rd, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write d a, I amd sorry that you have to stay in at this time, I feel I am fortunate in that I can walk briefly in the countryside and am able to see some of Spring in all its glory.
That young girl is super, she will go a long way.
Andy
April 23rd, 2020 01:08
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