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betrayal
Neville said:
I am with you all the way my friend, only on one point would I beg to differ... these words, your ‘Betrayal’ are nothing short of a magnificent reminder, tribute, education and dedication to all those fellows who were clearly deceived and otherwise betrayed....
May 30th, 2020 15:05
Neville said:
I am with you all the way my friend, only on one point would I beg to differ... these words, your ‘Betrayal’ are nothing short of a magnificent reminder, tribute, education and dedication to all those fellows who were clearly deceived and otherwise betrayed....
May 30th, 2020 15:05
betrayal
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m afraid we were alas also guilty of \'war crimes\' (Dresden was another) but the good did outweigh the bad if that\'s any consolation.
May 30th, 2020 04:57
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m afraid we were alas also guilty of \'war crimes\' (Dresden was another) but the good did outweigh the bad if that\'s any consolation.
May 30th, 2020 04:57
betrayal
orchidee said:
My reply sometimes .
is \'I told you so - not to trust man/women completely\'.
Great men/women are not always wise, not even Einstein.
Churchill said \'I\'m ready to meet my Maker; I\'m not sure if my Maker is ready to meet me\'. He (his Maker) will be ready. We may not say anything much when we get there, just be overcome by His glory - like trying to look at the sun in its full strength.
May 30th, 2020 02:01
orchidee said:
My reply sometimes .
is \'I told you so - not to trust man/women completely\'.
Great men/women are not always wise, not even Einstein.
Churchill said \'I\'m ready to meet my Maker; I\'m not sure if my Maker is ready to meet me\'. He (his Maker) will be ready. We may not say anything much when we get there, just be overcome by His glory - like trying to look at the sun in its full strength.
May 30th, 2020 02:01
betrayal
Poetic Dan said:
I took that out of context and had to fav, I\'m sure you understand ;)
May 30th, 2020 01:19
Poetic Dan said:
I took that out of context and had to fav, I\'m sure you understand ;)
May 30th, 2020 01:19
betrayal
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, Churchill was guilty of getting so many people killed in ww2 and in battles previous to the war but they are never mentioned as he \'needs to be know\' as the saviour of this country from the Nazi\'s.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, Churchill was guilty of getting so many people killed in ww2 and in battles previous to the war but they are never mentioned as he \'needs to be know\' as the saviour of this country from the Nazi\'s.
Andy
May 30th, 2020 01:09
betrayal
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading your honest words gives tribute by drawing attention to their tragic position dear friend and I agree most wholeheartedly those heroes who drew fire away from souls caught at Dunkirk need far more recognition.
May 30th, 2020 00:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Reading your honest words gives tribute by drawing attention to their tragic position dear friend and I agree most wholeheartedly those heroes who drew fire away from souls caught at Dunkirk need far more recognition.
May 30th, 2020 00:58
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Goldfinch60 said:
The trust shown to some people can be easily broken at times, all we can do is move on.
Andy
May 27th, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
The trust shown to some people can be easily broken at times, all we can do is move on.
Andy
May 27th, 2020 00:10
amazed
Fay Slimm. said:
Great words and tune to help along times when memory takes us away to long-ago days - really enjoyed your posting dear friend.
May 13th, 2020 13:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Great words and tune to help along times when memory takes us away to long-ago days - really enjoyed your posting dear friend.
May 13th, 2020 13:19
Aware ? ? ?
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... We are all free to express and that you have truly done.....in the weeks of learning more biology than I\'ve ever done! The universe is nothing more to me but a virus in all manner of life, yet we still think we have the knowledge to know or make what is wrong or right...
I definitely take from this that it\'s all blowing in the wind and theses last few days mother nature agrees! As out of the blue life will always keep happening, just my dogs I\'ll keep trying to enjoying every bit!
Always appreciated, thanks again for the inspiration
May 13th, 2020 03:36
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.... We are all free to express and that you have truly done.....in the weeks of learning more biology than I\'ve ever done! The universe is nothing more to me but a virus in all manner of life, yet we still think we have the knowledge to know or make what is wrong or right...
I definitely take from this that it\'s all blowing in the wind and theses last few days mother nature agrees! As out of the blue life will always keep happening, just my dogs I\'ll keep trying to enjoying every bit!
Always appreciated, thanks again for the inspiration
May 13th, 2020 03:36
amazed
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for your kind words d a, a great simple song with much meaning.
Andy
May 13th, 2020 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for your kind words d a, a great simple song with much meaning.
Andy
May 13th, 2020 01:04
never ever
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is so special, mine was about the same time in the early sixties.
I even remember this record!
May 13th, 2020 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That first kiss is so special, mine was about the same time in the early sixties.
I even remember this record!
May 13th, 2020 00:51
never ever
myself and me said:
Is it possible to forget a moment like this. When you revisit the moment, your heart still beats faster.
May 12th, 2020 18:02
myself and me said:
Is it possible to forget a moment like this. When you revisit the moment, your heart still beats faster.
May 12th, 2020 18:02
never ever
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - love the somple meter - so effective.
May 12th, 2020 13:06
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - love the somple meter - so effective.
May 12th, 2020 13:06
never ever
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Ye olden days? Well, things from the 1980\'s appear in antiques shows now.
May 12th, 2020 11:06
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. Ye olden days? Well, things from the 1980\'s appear in antiques shows now.
May 12th, 2020 11:06
never ever
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DA ~ Rhythm & Beat in the 1964 SOUL MUSIC - before my time (b. 1983) and I was intrigued it was *Sans Lyriques* ! I guess it was the Rhythm & Beat that raised your aspirations & libido !
Love the MEMORY of your *First Real Kiss* & the location ! O Yes I remember mine well SADIE in 1990. I was 17 & she was 16 and it was Christmas !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN |& ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
May 12th, 2020 10:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DA ~ Rhythm & Beat in the 1964 SOUL MUSIC - before my time (b. 1983) and I was intrigued it was *Sans Lyriques* ! I guess it was the Rhythm & Beat that raised your aspirations & libido !
Love the MEMORY of your *First Real Kiss* & the location ! O Yes I remember mine well SADIE in 1990. I was 17 & she was 16 and it was Christmas !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN |& ANGELA 🧡🤍💜
May 12th, 2020 10:07
slowly, into a shadow
Neville said:
this is what I call poetry and why I fell in love with it....
May 12th, 2020 06:55
Neville said:
this is what I call poetry and why I fell in love with it....
May 12th, 2020 06:55
Aware ? ? ?
orchidee said:
If it was visible we would see it \'right under our noses\', as they say.
May 12th, 2020 02:02
orchidee said:
If it was visible we would see it \'right under our noses\', as they say.
May 12th, 2020 02:02
Aware ? ? ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intense dark words d a, worse than the others that come out at night seeking your blood, at least you can see them.
Interesting piece of music as well.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intense dark words d a, worse than the others that come out at night seeking your blood, at least you can see them.
Interesting piece of music as well.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 00:18
Aware ? ? ?
Neville said:
Frighteningly of the moment and a stark reminder of today’s surreal but otherwise sad reality ... Well crafted and despite the noir and somber message, enjoyed by me no end...
May 11th, 2020 12:43
Neville said:
Frighteningly of the moment and a stark reminder of today’s surreal but otherwise sad reality ... Well crafted and despite the noir and somber message, enjoyed by me no end...
May 11th, 2020 12:43
Aware ? ? ?
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - a first rate verse - The vile little virus has crept through your lines like a hidden hiatus and craftily swallows our pride. - - Great write D.A.
May 11th, 2020 12:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - a first rate verse - The vile little virus has crept through your lines like a hidden hiatus and craftily swallows our pride. - - Great write D.A.
May 11th, 2020 12:42
slowly, into a shadow
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely fabulous muse poem, beautifully written, recollecting and recalling poetically. Kudos.
May 8th, 2020 09:38
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely fabulous muse poem, beautifully written, recollecting and recalling poetically. Kudos.
May 8th, 2020 09:38
again
Neville said:
I loved this little offering sir, so I did.. write down to the core.....
May 8th, 2020 04:15
Neville said:
I loved this little offering sir, so I did.. write down to the core.....
May 8th, 2020 04:15
again
orchidee said:
We dunno if it was an apple for Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden - it doesn\'t say in the Good Book.
May have been a pear, orange, banana, whatever.....
May 8th, 2020 01:45
orchidee said:
We dunno if it was an apple for Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden - it doesn\'t say in the Good Book.
May have been a pear, orange, banana, whatever.....
May 8th, 2020 01:45
slowly, into a shadow
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I thought the title was gonna be about my singing. Some wish it would pass slowly into a shadow! lol.
May 7th, 2020 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Dusk. I thought the title was gonna be about my singing. Some wish it would pass slowly into a shadow! lol.
May 7th, 2020 01:47
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