Comments received on poems by dusk arising



the great healer
Neville said:

We should meet one day my friend... if indeed there is yet still time... we might exchange notes perhaps.... I do mean that....

This is certainly among your finest.... and true. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Neville

June 8th, 2020 15:32

bear faced lies
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun write d a. Bears are such wonderful creatures as are all except some homo sapiens.

Andy

June 7th, 2020 23:56

it matters
AwHec8 said:

Sometimes late but always on the side of being better than we are, by way of rising up to understand another person. Period.

June 7th, 2020 09:09

it matters
AwHec8 said:

YES!

June 7th, 2020 09:07

apathy begat genocide
AwHec8 said:

Love Your Poem!
Yes to me also it is 1 thing to be just plain evil.
A whole level of being worse to be Apathetic. Just a thought

June 7th, 2020 09:05

bear faced lies
Fay Slimm. said:

You bring that critta alive with your banter of lighthearted facts and how campers in places where bears live are asking for food to be eaten - -minds so intelligent as those of bears are now working out worldwide how to live nearer communities so they can eat leftovers from bins - -- how clever is that !

June 7th, 2020 04:47

bear faced lies
Neville said:


Ha... very good.. and yes.. we could all do with a little light hearted relief methinks.... ….

and why the long pause, you may ask...…..

Coz I\'m a grizzly came the reply...

Neville :)

June 7th, 2020 04:17

apathy begat genocide
GON said:

Eh, I think it\'s unfair to judge like that.

June 6th, 2020 12:56

it matters
Neville said:



YES

June 6th, 2020 04:37

apathy begat genocide
Neville said:


We clearly missed each other on the day in question.. but you now have a very big YES from me

June 6th, 2020 04:34

it matters
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

YES JA NA\'AM Hām̐ Hěi V-v
Da Ano Jah Kyllä Oui Nai ʻAe Ken

And yes in every language... we have banned racism by law,,, now it\'s time to banish it in our hearts and minds (Aaron Sorkin)

June 6th, 2020 02:03

apathy begat genocide
orchidee said:

Yet I suppose it\'s like any poems on here - we may pick and choose poems, and authors. But, as you say, 18 views, and only 7 commented, seems poor.

June 6th, 2020 02:01

apathy begat genocide
Goldfinch60 said:

It was such a shame d a and shows that there are many who just do not care.

Andy

June 6th, 2020 01:30

apathy begat genocide
Michael Edwards said:

Didn\'t visit the site on Thursday but I\'ve read it now and commented.
It was a big yes from me

June 6th, 2020 01:10

it matters
Michael Edwards said:

Only just read this and it\'s a big YES from me too.

I married my wife 66 years ago and I got abuse from other whites - thankfully only in the very early years and neither of us have witnessed it since - SO - All LIVES matter

June 6th, 2020 01:06

it matters
Goldfinch60 said:

YES.

Super music as well.

Andy

June 5th, 2020 00:50

it matters
Poetic Dan said:

Great tune too but then I\'d expect nothing less!

Much peace and respect

June 4th, 2020 08:07

it matters
Poetic Dan said:

Indeed the last part of our history we need to undo, black lives matter too. Even sad that we need to continue this tune but we can\'t stop adapting it until the next generation see the mistakes made!

Brilliantly done!

June 4th, 2020 08:06

it matters
orchidee said:

You want 4 yeses - or as many as possible? YES from me!
Aww, but I got 4 No\'s on BGT! lol.

June 4th, 2020 05:40

it matters
Fay Slimm. said:

YES from me too. - Black lives certainly matter and should matter to all.

June 4th, 2020 05:23

it matters
Laura🌻 said:

YES

June 4th, 2020 04:42

it was as if
Neville said:

The goldfinch got it write sir so he did.....

Neville

June 3rd, 2020 13:55

it was as if
Fay Slimm. said:

This wonderful verse of personified nymphs as they meet and mate on the wing left me whispering sighs of imagined joy at their delight - you have such a way with tales my friend.

June 3rd, 2020 04:53

it was as if
orchidee said:

Good write d a.

June 3rd, 2020 01:52

it was as if
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words d a, the calmness in your world radiates the wonder of nature.

Andy

June 3rd, 2020 00:50

alive in life
Neville said:


a very much enjoyed poem DA..

Not sure how I managed to miss it till just now.. Neville

June 2nd, 2020 06:33

the haunting fifty fives
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a moving write d a, so many losing their lives and so many people having to deal with the deaths.

Andy

June 2nd, 2020 00:47

the haunting fifty fives
ron parrish aka wordman said:

we never know what may fall on us,a clear message that you have penned

June 1st, 2020 18:51

the haunting fifty fives
orchidee said:

A sensitive write dusk.

June 1st, 2020 10:52

the haunting fifty fives
Fay Slimm. said:

An account to store and remember - heroes are all around now and in need of our tributes. A heart-rending read D.A,

June 1st, 2020 07:46



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