Comments received on poems by Lorna
Where We Still Meet
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Where We Still Meet
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
The Carousel Ride
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
Rainbows
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Birds
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
The Carousel Ride
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
The Carousel Ride
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
The Carousel Ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
The Carousel Ride
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
The Carousel Ride
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
The Carousel Ride
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
The Carousel Ride
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
Troubles
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Troubles
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Troubles
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
Troubles
dusk arising said:
THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently though.
June 5th, 2019 08:15
dusk arising said:
THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently though.
June 5th, 2019 08:15
Troubles
Neville said:
we all have them, but ya gotta keep on smilin...
I was only playing Mona Bone Jakon yesterday.... Neville
June 5th, 2019 07:48
Neville said:
we all have them, but ya gotta keep on smilin...
I was only playing Mona Bone Jakon yesterday.... Neville
June 5th, 2019 07:48
Troubles
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Wow...you just hit the nail on the head with your poem! That’s exactly what I was referring to the other day! Thank you for sharing what I couldn’t! ....
...and you’re spot on with...
“Just the way it is.............”
~Laura~
June 5th, 2019 07:22
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Wow...you just hit the nail on the head with your poem! That’s exactly what I was referring to the other day! Thank you for sharing what I couldn’t! ....
...and you’re spot on with...
“Just the way it is.............”
~Laura~
June 5th, 2019 07:22
Troubles
Poetic Dan said:
Rum d mc taught me how to walk this way! And that\'s the ways it is ;)
Fantastic words and song
Thank you
June 5th, 2019 07:18
Poetic Dan said:
Rum d mc taught me how to walk this way! And that\'s the ways it is ;)
Fantastic words and song
Thank you
June 5th, 2019 07:18
The Evening Ball
Goldfinch60 said:
May I have the next dance, I know where my tuxedo is.
June 4th, 2019 15:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May I have the next dance, I know where my tuxedo is.
June 4th, 2019 15:17
The Evening Ball
Suresh said:
Their artistry unmatched
Their fluidity untouched
Your poem, serenity
June 4th, 2019 13:34
Suresh said:
Their artistry unmatched
Their fluidity untouched
Your poem, serenity
June 4th, 2019 13:34
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