Comments received on poems by Lorna
Palette of the Day
Neville said:
....... If I half close my eyes and focus .. I can see the picture you paint .. perfectly clear ... it seems the pond aint so wide after all .....
October 2nd, 2020 06:52
Neville said:
....... If I half close my eyes and focus .. I can see the picture you paint .. perfectly clear ... it seems the pond aint so wide after all .....
October 2nd, 2020 06:52
Carolyn
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully penned scene and sung so invitingly by a favourite song-bird --- thank you for sharing the peace of valued friendship dear Lorna.
October 1st, 2020 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully penned scene and sung so invitingly by a favourite song-bird --- thank you for sharing the peace of valued friendship dear Lorna.
October 1st, 2020 03:44
Carolyn
orchidee said:
A poignant write Lorna. Time does heal, though we know it\'s not just \'time\' in itself - it\'s other people, support, our faith, etc.
October 1st, 2020 01:50
orchidee said:
A poignant write Lorna. Time does heal, though we know it\'s not just \'time\' in itself - it\'s other people, support, our faith, etc.
October 1st, 2020 01:50
Carolyn
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and a great track - love this kind of music.
October 1st, 2020 01:21
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and a great track - love this kind of music.
October 1st, 2020 01:21
Carolyn
Neville said:
a little bird just got it write .. perfectly poemed Lorna .. and what a lovely way to be remembered ...
spice and tea and flowers eh\' .. lovely...
October 1st, 2020 00:53
Neville said:
a little bird just got it write .. perfectly poemed Lorna .. and what a lovely way to be remembered ...
spice and tea and flowers eh\' .. lovely...
October 1st, 2020 00:53
Carolyn
Goldfinch60 said:
The warmth of her heart shines through you words Lorna.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
The warmth of her heart shines through you words Lorna.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:21
Entirely Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome back Lorna, it is great to see you here again.
I know exactly how you feel, my wife passed away at the end of December last year. Words have helped me with my loss but one set of words has helped so much.
\"When we lose someone we love, we must learn not to live without them, but to live with the love they left behind.\"
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome back Lorna, it is great to see you here again.
I know exactly how you feel, my wife passed away at the end of December last year. Words have helped me with my loss but one set of words has helped so much.
\"When we lose someone we love, we must learn not to live without them, but to live with the love they left behind.\"
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:07
Entirely Gone
Neville said:
unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am sure many others will feel the same, there is nothing corny whatsoever here .. you have crafted a beautiful poem on an emotionally charged and personal issue/loss .. and .. if as I imagine based on an actual personal bereavement .. I offer my sincere condolences ...
On another note .. welcome back my friend,
... Neville
September 30th, 2020 13:54
Neville said:
unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am sure many others will feel the same, there is nothing corny whatsoever here .. you have crafted a beautiful poem on an emotionally charged and personal issue/loss .. and .. if as I imagine based on an actual personal bereavement .. I offer my sincere condolences ...
On another note .. welcome back my friend,
... Neville
September 30th, 2020 13:54
Entirely Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why loss of such a personal kind is the worst kind of challenge until time eases the grief - the final line in the read had me in tears.
September 30th, 2020 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why loss of such a personal kind is the worst kind of challenge until time eases the grief - the final line in the read had me in tears.
September 30th, 2020 11:31
Entirely Gone
Lorna said:
Sweet message thank you. And losing your Mom is losing a huge part of yourself isn\'t it. Anyway, at least I\'m not crying every other minute.... so boring for people! ha.......
September 30th, 2020 10:13
Lorna said:
Sweet message thank you. And losing your Mom is losing a huge part of yourself isn\'t it. Anyway, at least I\'m not crying every other minute.... so boring for people! ha.......
September 30th, 2020 10:13
Entirely Gone
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Welcome back!😄
I’m so happy to ‘see’ you.
I missed you very much!
“I will have to apply myself to try
Not looking for you
In the next room and the next“
Your words are so true...
I have the same sentiments about my mom.
Although it’s getting easier to accept that they’re gone, we will always miss them!
Warm Regards
Laura🌻
September 30th, 2020 10:07
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Welcome back!😄
I’m so happy to ‘see’ you.
I missed you very much!
“I will have to apply myself to try
Not looking for you
In the next room and the next“
Your words are so true...
I have the same sentiments about my mom.
Although it’s getting easier to accept that they’re gone, we will always miss them!
Warm Regards
Laura🌻
September 30th, 2020 10:07
His Old Hat
Goldfinch60 said:
Life must go on but the memories will always linger.
November 11th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Life must go on but the memories will always linger.
November 11th, 2019 01:37
His Old Hat
Michael Edwards said:
And life goes on - what a great shortie - love it.
November 10th, 2019 12:07
Michael Edwards said:
And life goes on - what a great shortie - love it.
November 10th, 2019 12:07
His Old Hat
Poetic Dan said:
Hats off, it definitely does!
Have a great day
November 10th, 2019 07:24
Poetic Dan said:
Hats off, it definitely does!
Have a great day
November 10th, 2019 07:24
Where We Still Meet
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Where We Still Meet
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
The Carousel Ride
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
Rainbows
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Birds
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
The Carousel Ride
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
The Carousel Ride
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
The Carousel Ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
The Carousel Ride
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
The Carousel Ride
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
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