Comments received on poems by Lorna
Bucket List Senryu
Fay Slimm. said:
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
October 8th, 2020 03:43
Fay Slimm. said:
What better to tick off than Lurve dear Lorna......... fun read.
October 8th, 2020 03:43
Ode to a Sticky D Key
L. B. Mek said:
lol, if this wasn\'t written by someone with your subtle touch for razor sharp witty humour, it would need to be age restricted material,
great fun
October 8th, 2020 03:01
L. B. Mek said:
lol, if this wasn\'t written by someone with your subtle touch for razor sharp witty humour, it would need to be age restricted material,
great fun
October 8th, 2020 03:01
Bucket List Senryu
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely written Lorna. What else is on the list...?
October 8th, 2020 02:19
Saxon Crow said:
Nicely written Lorna. What else is on the list...?
October 8th, 2020 02:19
Bucket List Senryu
L. B. Mek said:
innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:
Haiku - by Benjamin Zephaniah
Writing a poem
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic...
October 8th, 2020 02:12
L. B. Mek said:
innovatively witty, remind me of one by Benjamin Zephaniah:
Haiku - by Benjamin Zephaniah
Writing a poem
In seventeen syllables
Is very diffic...
October 8th, 2020 02:12
Bucket List Senryu
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna.
I want 100 buckets, that\'s all! (do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 8th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna.
I want 100 buckets, that\'s all! (do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 8th, 2020 01:51
Bucket List Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Lorna, it was on my list as well and I had it for nearly forty years.
Andy
October 8th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Lorna, it was on my list as well and I had it for nearly forty years.
Andy
October 8th, 2020 01:37
Ode to a Sticky D Key
Michael Edwards said:
All the \'Ds\' have been used up in the past tense of infinitives.We could get them back by only speaking in the present tense like football commentators.
October 7th, 2020 14:52
Michael Edwards said:
All the \'Ds\' have been used up in the past tense of infinitives.We could get them back by only speaking in the present tense like football commentators.
October 7th, 2020 14:52
Ode to a Sticky D Key
Dove said:
Cutenesses! I just get the dust blues! Have to get one of those dust blowers, actually they have dust brushes, lucky my I pad keyboard it on the screen,
Best to u
October 7th, 2020 10:41
Dove said:
Cutenesses! I just get the dust blues! Have to get one of those dust blowers, actually they have dust brushes, lucky my I pad keyboard it on the screen,
Best to u
October 7th, 2020 10:41
Ode to a Sticky D Key
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi Lorna thanks for a Great Video ~ Great song to dance to @ a Wedding ! We*ve been to some *LOCKDOWN WEDDINGS* including our own in March but its not the same without the 100 Guests & Feast & Dancing etc ~ Perhaps in 2021 ? You can drop a Computer off the desk & it still works # But liquid is ANTHEMA ! My Coffee generally goes straight down the MIDDLE so I lose N M J K U I! I have a plug-in keyboard which works til it drys out ! You can always use a *b* for a *d* ~ OK ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours !
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
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October 7th, 2020 08:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi Lorna thanks for a Great Video ~ Great song to dance to @ a Wedding ! We*ve been to some *LOCKDOWN WEDDINGS* including our own in March but its not the same without the 100 Guests & Feast & Dancing etc ~ Perhaps in 2021 ? You can drop a Computer off the desk & it still works # But liquid is ANTHEMA ! My Coffee generally goes straight down the MIDDLE so I lose N M J K U I! I have a plug-in keyboard which works til it drys out ! You can always use a *b* for a *d* ~ OK ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours !
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
Please check our latest FUSION (click on DEVELOPING)
*HOW IS YOUR LEADER COPING WITH COVID 19 ?*
October 7th, 2020 08:56
Ode to a Sticky D Key
Neville said:
I have a missing G string & Key on my bloomin uitar and PC .. now I\'m in bi trouble ...
October 7th, 2020 08:27
Neville said:
I have a missing G string & Key on my bloomin uitar and PC .. now I\'m in bi trouble ...
October 7th, 2020 08:27
Ode to a Sticky D Key
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Please find that ‘d’
‘my little chickadee’.
I couldn’t resist writing this comment.
The first thing that popped in my head when I read your ode was the rhyming of
‘d’ with ‘chickadee’.
It reminded me of Mae West and W.C. Fields in that great movie “My Little Chickadee”
“...My pretty little chickadee
Everything is gonna be all right
Yes it will, yes it will now...”
...so please find that ‘d’!
Today I’m going to download the movie and watch it. I need a good laugh on this particular day.
Laura 🌻
October 7th, 2020 07:00
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Please find that ‘d’
‘my little chickadee’.
I couldn’t resist writing this comment.
The first thing that popped in my head when I read your ode was the rhyming of
‘d’ with ‘chickadee’.
It reminded me of Mae West and W.C. Fields in that great movie “My Little Chickadee”
“...My pretty little chickadee
Everything is gonna be all right
Yes it will, yes it will now...”
...so please find that ‘d’!
Today I’m going to download the movie and watch it. I need a good laugh on this particular day.
Laura 🌻
October 7th, 2020 07:00
Ode to a Sticky D Key
orchidee said:
I\'m missing th* ....k*y from min* - can ya gu*ss which on*?
A stickety-dee key ya have! lol. Oops, now I\'ve found the key again!
October 7th, 2020 06:13
orchidee said:
I\'m missing th* ....k*y from min* - can ya gu*ss which on*?
A stickety-dee key ya have! lol. Oops, now I\'ve found the key again!
October 7th, 2020 06:13
Ode to a Sticky D Key
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to work in computing and I had a ‘phone call from one of the staff asking me to come and sort out her computer. She had split a Cuppa Soup over her keyboard!
Andy
October 7th, 2020 05:02
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to work in computing and I had a ‘phone call from one of the staff asking me to come and sort out her computer. She had split a Cuppa Soup over her keyboard!
Andy
October 7th, 2020 05:02
Ode to a Sticky D Key
dusk arising said:
d\'s are a few of my favourite things.
October 7th, 2020 04:59
dusk arising said:
d\'s are a few of my favourite things.
October 7th, 2020 04:59
For A While
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Such a heart-rending piece of writing.
If I understand what you’re saying, I’m going to say something that I hope it’ll make you smile...I’m glad you couldn’t climb that hill—not just yet.
Laura🌻
October 6th, 2020 20:41
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Such a heart-rending piece of writing.
If I understand what you’re saying, I’m going to say something that I hope it’ll make you smile...I’m glad you couldn’t climb that hill—not just yet.
Laura🌻
October 6th, 2020 20:41
For A While
peto said:
Love how you wrote this one
Full of emotion
Won\'t go all cliche on you
Was a bit alarmed by your reply to Goldfinch but that could just be my muddled head
Respect
October 6th, 2020 08:30
peto said:
Love how you wrote this one
Full of emotion
Won\'t go all cliche on you
Was a bit alarmed by your reply to Goldfinch but that could just be my muddled head
Respect
October 6th, 2020 08:30
For A While
orchidee said:
Ohhh, let\'s leave it then! What\'s the point going up the hill, if we gotta come down it again? lol.
\"Erm, cos it\'s there, \'tis why we climb it\"as some mountain-climbers said.
October 6th, 2020 06:18
orchidee said:
Ohhh, let\'s leave it then! What\'s the point going up the hill, if we gotta come down it again? lol.
\"Erm, cos it\'s there, \'tis why we climb it\"as some mountain-climbers said.
October 6th, 2020 06:18
For A While
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - - must be read over again and now in my list of faves.
October 6th, 2020 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
The feel of sad parting oozes through these poignant lines my friend - - must be read over again and now in my list of faves.
October 6th, 2020 05:28
For A While
Neville said:
this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ...
filled to the point of overflowing with a timeless ache ...
that which I understand and know ...
... Neville
October 6th, 2020 04:40
Neville said:
this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ...
filled to the point of overflowing with a timeless ache ...
that which I understand and know ...
... Neville
October 6th, 2020 04:40
For A While
Goldfinch60 said:
That hill may be a challenge but after your rest it will be easy to climb.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 04:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That hill may be a challenge but after your rest it will be easy to climb.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 04:28
Wild Company
Goldfinch60 said:
That is wonderful Lorna, the wildlife that is around you must be so wonderful. I just have the birds come to me and it is great.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That is wonderful Lorna, the wildlife that is around you must be so wonderful. I just have the birds come to me and it is great.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 00:15
Wild Company
Suresh said:
As food attracts the wild live, so does love attract friendships.
So you shall be rich, in company and words
October 5th, 2020 15:23
Suresh said:
As food attracts the wild live, so does love attract friendships.
So you shall be rich, in company and words
October 5th, 2020 15:23
Wild Company
Michael Edwards said:
And here\'s me setting humane mouse traps - super write Lorna.
October 5th, 2020 10:05
Michael Edwards said:
And here\'s me setting humane mouse traps - super write Lorna.
October 5th, 2020 10:05
Wild Company
dusk arising said:
You shame us here in UK for most us can only relate to spiders as a visit from the wild.
Im joking of course for foxes now have become nocturnal urban visitors to our gardens along with hedgehogs and if you\'re very lucky, badgers.
I envy you your closeness to the wildlife around you.
October 5th, 2020 06:55
dusk arising said:
You shame us here in UK for most us can only relate to spiders as a visit from the wild.
Im joking of course for foxes now have become nocturnal urban visitors to our gardens along with hedgehogs and if you\'re very lucky, badgers.
I envy you your closeness to the wildlife around you.
October 5th, 2020 06:55
Wild Company
orchidee said:
I saw a pigeon. Doh! Well, in UK it might be a wild one - who knows?! lol
We\'re very English (well, I am). We can\'t have too much wildness! lol.
October 5th, 2020 05:35
orchidee said:
I saw a pigeon. Doh! Well, in UK it might be a wild one - who knows?! lol
We\'re very English (well, I am). We can\'t have too much wildness! lol.
October 5th, 2020 05:35
Kites
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Lorna, I used to have kites to fly until fairly recently when I gave them to my great-nephew.
Andy
October 4th, 2020 23:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Lorna, I used to have kites to fly until fairly recently when I gave them to my great-nephew.
Andy
October 4th, 2020 23:43
Kites
Neville said:
this is more than just a little Sunday whimsey .... this is the making of me
... this is my very own first Nevsey ... loopin the loop at the end of a string .......
tis more than smileworthy too ...
October 4th, 2020 12:21
Neville said:
this is more than just a little Sunday whimsey .... this is the making of me
... this is my very own first Nevsey ... loopin the loop at the end of a string .......
tis more than smileworthy too ...
October 4th, 2020 12:21
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