Comments received on poems by Lorna
Entirely Gone
Neville said:
unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am sure many others will feel the same, there is nothing corny whatsoever here .. you have crafted a beautiful poem on an emotionally charged and personal issue/loss .. and .. if as I imagine based on an actual personal bereavement .. I offer my sincere condolences ...
On another note .. welcome back my friend,
... Neville
September 30th, 2020 13:54
Neville said:
unfortunately this is so very relatable and sad .. fortunately, and I am sure many others will feel the same, there is nothing corny whatsoever here .. you have crafted a beautiful poem on an emotionally charged and personal issue/loss .. and .. if as I imagine based on an actual personal bereavement .. I offer my sincere condolences ...
On another note .. welcome back my friend,
... Neville
September 30th, 2020 13:54
Entirely Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why loss of such a personal kind is the worst kind of challenge until time eases the grief - the final line in the read had me in tears.
September 30th, 2020 11:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Lorna - you have been missed and this sad posting tells why loss of such a personal kind is the worst kind of challenge until time eases the grief - the final line in the read had me in tears.
September 30th, 2020 11:31
Entirely Gone
Lorna said:
Sweet message thank you. And losing your Mom is losing a huge part of yourself isn\'t it. Anyway, at least I\'m not crying every other minute.... so boring for people! ha.......
September 30th, 2020 10:13
Lorna said:
Sweet message thank you. And losing your Mom is losing a huge part of yourself isn\'t it. Anyway, at least I\'m not crying every other minute.... so boring for people! ha.......
September 30th, 2020 10:13
Entirely Gone
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Welcome back!😄
I’m so happy to ‘see’ you.
I missed you very much!
“I will have to apply myself to try
Not looking for you
In the next room and the next“
Your words are so true...
I have the same sentiments about my mom.
Although it’s getting easier to accept that they’re gone, we will always miss them!
Warm Regards
Laura🌻
September 30th, 2020 10:07
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Welcome back!😄
I’m so happy to ‘see’ you.
I missed you very much!
“I will have to apply myself to try
Not looking for you
In the next room and the next“
Your words are so true...
I have the same sentiments about my mom.
Although it’s getting easier to accept that they’re gone, we will always miss them!
Warm Regards
Laura🌻
September 30th, 2020 10:07
His Old Hat
Goldfinch60 said:
Life must go on but the memories will always linger.
November 11th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Life must go on but the memories will always linger.
November 11th, 2019 01:37
His Old Hat
Michael Edwards said:
And life goes on - what a great shortie - love it.
November 10th, 2019 12:07
Michael Edwards said:
And life goes on - what a great shortie - love it.
November 10th, 2019 12:07
His Old Hat
Poetic Dan said:
Hats off, it definitely does!
Have a great day
November 10th, 2019 07:24
Poetic Dan said:
Hats off, it definitely does!
Have a great day
November 10th, 2019 07:24
Where We Still Meet
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words. Those loved ones who are gone are always with us.
November 10th, 2019 00:56
Where We Still Meet
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
Poetic Dan said:
Hello Indeed! what a beautiful song and a delicate read. Pulled on the heart stings ever so gently, much appreciated
November 9th, 2019 11:29
The Carousel Ride
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A great metaphorical poem, so sublime a comparison of life to a carousel and horses. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
July 17th, 2019 15:36
Rainbows
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Crystal Hope said:
I like that version of that song he sings. Enjoyed your poem.
June 18th, 2019 13:07
Birds
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
Suresh said:
With the passing of time, memories keep us company, and can be triggered with pleasant event like the birds singing.
Thou far, yet near - very well written
June 12th, 2019 13:37
The Carousel Ride
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great metaphor for life Lorna and I think of how we all spruce ourselves up for the new year/season only to fade and tire each winter
Every year gets tougher
Great write I liked this
June 9th, 2019 06:23
The Carousel Ride
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
FineB said:
Hello Lorna,
An enchanting and great write.
I love carousels. Everytime I see one I have to have a ride on one. Childhood nostalgia I dont care how old I am.
Keep writing FineB
June 7th, 2019 02:12
The Carousel Ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears are getting evermore prevalent in the world we are going round and round in.
June 7th, 2019 01:05
The Carousel Ride
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
DesertWords said:
Round and round. The circle of life carries us until the music stops. Thanks for the thoughtful reflection.
June 6th, 2019 14:03
The Carousel Ride
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Life\'s endless roundelay of trying not to fall and make mistakes your clever pen relates with good imagery which leaves a sound message to ponder - - a fine write again Lorna.
June 6th, 2019 13:01
The Carousel Ride
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
The Carousel Ride
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
Troubles
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Troubles
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Troubles
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
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