Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Evening Ball
dusk arising said:
Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger.
The evening ball i grew up with was a football game we played with all that youthful energy we had as kids. It went on till bad light stopped play.
June 4th, 2019 07:59
dusk arising said:
Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger.
The evening ball i grew up with was a football game we played with all that youthful energy we had as kids. It went on till bad light stopped play.
June 4th, 2019 07:59
The Evening Ball
Neville said:
and they moved like tigers on Vaseline.... yes indeed, a sight to behold..... Neville
June 4th, 2019 07:07
Neville said:
and they moved like tigers on Vaseline.... yes indeed, a sight to behold..... Neville
June 4th, 2019 07:07
The Evening Ball
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear friend.
June 4th, 2019 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear friend.
June 4th, 2019 06:02
A Time for Everything
dusk arising said:
yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there.
Does this mean we can expect to see more frequent posts from you? I hope so.
June 3rd, 2019 16:21
dusk arising said:
yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there.
Does this mean we can expect to see more frequent posts from you? I hope so.
June 3rd, 2019 16:21
A Time for Everything
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve missed your writes over the last couple of weeks - and some write to return with.
June 3rd, 2019 15:53
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve missed your writes over the last couple of weeks - and some write to return with.
June 3rd, 2019 15:53
A Time for Everything
Neville said:
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the first time round, hop on board the next time its passing near.... you just nailed it my friend.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 12:47
Neville said:
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the first time round, hop on board the next time its passing near.... you just nailed it my friend.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 12:47
A Time for Everything
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
An emotional read...to say the least!
Your poem along with the video gripped my heart! It’s so hard! Just yesterday I had one of those melancholy days! I couldn’t let go of what was...but, I know I have to! It hurts!
A super poem and video! Thank you for sharing! I’ll certainly refer to them when another burst of melancholy makes its appearance!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 11:42
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
An emotional read...to say the least!
Your poem along with the video gripped my heart! It’s so hard! Just yesterday I had one of those melancholy days! I couldn’t let go of what was...but, I know I have to! It hurts!
A super poem and video! Thank you for sharing! I’ll certainly refer to them when another burst of melancholy makes its appearance!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 11:42
A Time for Everything
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Good morning I\'ve read it 3 times already and I\'ll do it once more out loud, this really speaks to me thank you so much sharing!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 3rd, 2019 09:59
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Good morning I\'ve read it 3 times already and I\'ll do it once more out loud, this really speaks to me thank you so much sharing!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 3rd, 2019 09:59
A Time for Everything
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna. Epiphany - that\'ll be Jan/Feb. lol.
June 3rd, 2019 09:35
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna. Epiphany - that\'ll be Jan/Feb. lol.
June 3rd, 2019 09:35
A Time for Everything
kevin browne said:
I certainly have the message you have so perfectly crafted that I was stunned as I read each line. 10 out of 10 for this one.
June 3rd, 2019 06:50
kevin browne said:
I certainly have the message you have so perfectly crafted that I was stunned as I read each line. 10 out of 10 for this one.
June 3rd, 2019 06:50
If They Dare!
Suresh said:
The pic really paints your image of your macho bro indeed
June 2nd, 2019 12:27
Suresh said:
The pic really paints your image of your macho bro indeed
June 2nd, 2019 12:27
Evening of Our Great Content
DesertWords said:
You paint such lovely pictures. Thank you for sharing your wordscapes.
May 23rd, 2019 14:32
DesertWords said:
You paint such lovely pictures. Thank you for sharing your wordscapes.
May 23rd, 2019 14:32
Separations
DesertWords said:
For many years I said away on a ship. I\'ve stood at the rail with damp eyes and watch the pier disappear. Goodbyes are hard. Hellos are wonderful. Thank you.
May 23rd, 2019 14:29
DesertWords said:
For many years I said away on a ship. I\'ve stood at the rail with damp eyes and watch the pier disappear. Goodbyes are hard. Hellos are wonderful. Thank you.
May 23rd, 2019 14:29
Someone to Watch Over You
DesertWords said:
Reading \"Someone...\" made me sit back and think of very important gatekeepers in my life, and the times
that I\'ve been a minder of the gate. Thank you for guiding me down that path.
May 23rd, 2019 14:23
DesertWords said:
Reading \"Someone...\" made me sit back and think of very important gatekeepers in my life, and the times
that I\'ve been a minder of the gate. Thank you for guiding me down that path.
May 23rd, 2019 14:23
Someone to Watch Over You
Goldfinch60 said:
May your gate lead to the wonderful life that you deserve Lorna.
Glad the sun is out at last - Andy.
May 17th, 2019 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May your gate lead to the wonderful life that you deserve Lorna.
Glad the sun is out at last - Andy.
May 17th, 2019 00:24
Someone to Watch Over You
Michael Edwards said:
Beaytiful write Lorna - no I don\'t see checkpoints of any political persuasion - just hope for the future.
May 16th, 2019 12:57
Michael Edwards said:
Beaytiful write Lorna - no I don\'t see checkpoints of any political persuasion - just hope for the future.
May 16th, 2019 12:57
Someone to Watch Over You
Suresh said:
Poems are like an abstract painting. Each sees a different nuance - and the more the merrier, for then the artist has achieved the goal, as have you.
May 16th, 2019 11:58
Suresh said:
Poems are like an abstract painting. Each sees a different nuance - and the more the merrier, for then the artist has achieved the goal, as have you.
May 16th, 2019 11:58
Someone to Watch Over You
dusk arising said:
Like watching your Baby learning to walk. Every encouragement is there from you but there comes a day when the baby walks across the room to you. Golden moments. Such moments are there throughout our lives. We can hope for a certain outcome/chain of events... and seeing something near to it is a WIN.
May 16th, 2019 07:17
dusk arising said:
Like watching your Baby learning to walk. Every encouragement is there from you but there comes a day when the baby walks across the room to you. Golden moments. Such moments are there throughout our lives. We can hope for a certain outcome/chain of events... and seeing something near to it is a WIN.
May 16th, 2019 07:17
Someone to Watch Over You
Poetic Dan said:
It was perfectly for my mind!
Thank you
May 16th, 2019 05:59
Poetic Dan said:
It was perfectly for my mind!
Thank you
May 16th, 2019 05:59
Someone to Watch Over You
Fay Slimm. said:
A charming and delightful look at what a good gatekeeper can and does do for those needing direction in life......... very poetically expressed too - thanks for sharing it dear Lorna and so pleased the sun is shining at last in your neck of the woods.
May 16th, 2019 05:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A charming and delightful look at what a good gatekeeper can and does do for those needing direction in life......... very poetically expressed too - thanks for sharing it dear Lorna and so pleased the sun is shining at last in your neck of the woods.
May 16th, 2019 05:40
Flowers Musing on Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I do hope that you will be able to dress in colours very soon.
May 16th, 2019 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I do hope that you will be able to dress in colours very soon.
May 16th, 2019 00:25
Flowers Musing on Rain
Michael Edwards said:
Rain brings life
life brings hope
Hope brings colour
The weather has been hot and sunny here in middle England for some time now and is set to continue. Just to make you jealous !!
😉😉
May 15th, 2019 15:11
Michael Edwards said:
Rain brings life
life brings hope
Hope brings colour
The weather has been hot and sunny here in middle England for some time now and is set to continue. Just to make you jealous !!
😉😉
May 15th, 2019 15:11
Flowers Musing on Rain
MendedFences27 said:
Its a mild Winter we are having this Spring. If any hope remains, or if you need a bit of weather news from the bright side, birds were flooding our tree today, cardinals, orioles, chickadees, etc.
Let the flowers scream for Sun, maybe Nature will listen. Your poem makes their case elegantly Clever to have given them a voice. Great imagery. Springtime emotions from our flowery friends. terrific write. - Phil A.
May 15th, 2019 14:12
MendedFences27 said:
Its a mild Winter we are having this Spring. If any hope remains, or if you need a bit of weather news from the bright side, birds were flooding our tree today, cardinals, orioles, chickadees, etc.
Let the flowers scream for Sun, maybe Nature will listen. Your poem makes their case elegantly Clever to have given them a voice. Great imagery. Springtime emotions from our flowery friends. terrific write. - Phil A.
May 15th, 2019 14:12
Flowers Musing on Rain
dusk arising said:
You look to the sky and all you see is grey
Whats Trump doing to the weather over US of A
He thinks global warming is a kinda a myth
False news he says, is he taking the piss?
Your grandkids amd mine will reap the wirlwind
To neglect it now is a mortal sin
May 15th, 2019 12:51
dusk arising said:
You look to the sky and all you see is grey
Whats Trump doing to the weather over US of A
He thinks global warming is a kinda a myth
False news he says, is he taking the piss?
Your grandkids amd mine will reap the wirlwind
To neglect it now is a mortal sin
May 15th, 2019 12:51
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