Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Carousel Ride
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
Suresh said:
Yes, life is a carousel
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
June 6th, 2019 12:56
The Carousel Ride
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
dusk arising said:
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds too.
Make readers think between the lines.
June 6th, 2019 08:15
Troubles
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We al have our problems but we need to get over them and move on into a better place in our lives, we can do it.
June 5th, 2019 15:21
Troubles
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
....and that\'s the way it is, troubles don\'t fade away, they stay. Why is it that they are like a never ending freight train? Why can\'t happiness be like a never ending passenger train,
Well, that\'s all folks.....
Loved the subject and the poem
June 5th, 2019 11:21
Troubles
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
Michael Edwards said:
If this was what was floating at the top of your head I look forward to reading what was floating beneath it - it may be off the cuff but it\'s still inspired.
June 5th, 2019 10:26
Troubles
dusk arising said:
THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently though.
June 5th, 2019 08:15
dusk arising said:
THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently though.
June 5th, 2019 08:15
Troubles
Neville said:
we all have them, but ya gotta keep on smilin...
I was only playing Mona Bone Jakon yesterday.... Neville
June 5th, 2019 07:48
Neville said:
we all have them, but ya gotta keep on smilin...
I was only playing Mona Bone Jakon yesterday.... Neville
June 5th, 2019 07:48
Troubles
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Wow...you just hit the nail on the head with your poem! That’s exactly what I was referring to the other day! Thank you for sharing what I couldn’t! ....
...and you’re spot on with...
“Just the way it is.............”
~Laura~
June 5th, 2019 07:22
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Wow...you just hit the nail on the head with your poem! That’s exactly what I was referring to the other day! Thank you for sharing what I couldn’t! ....
...and you’re spot on with...
“Just the way it is.............”
~Laura~
June 5th, 2019 07:22
Troubles
Poetic Dan said:
Rum d mc taught me how to walk this way! And that\'s the ways it is ;)
Fantastic words and song
Thank you
June 5th, 2019 07:18
Poetic Dan said:
Rum d mc taught me how to walk this way! And that\'s the ways it is ;)
Fantastic words and song
Thank you
June 5th, 2019 07:18
The Evening Ball
Goldfinch60 said:
May I have the next dance, I know where my tuxedo is.
June 4th, 2019 15:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May I have the next dance, I know where my tuxedo is.
June 4th, 2019 15:17
The Evening Ball
Suresh said:
Their artistry unmatched
Their fluidity untouched
Your poem, serenity
June 4th, 2019 13:34
Suresh said:
Their artistry unmatched
Their fluidity untouched
Your poem, serenity
June 4th, 2019 13:34
The Evening Ball
dusk arising said:
Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger.
The evening ball i grew up with was a football game we played with all that youthful energy we had as kids. It went on till bad light stopped play.
June 4th, 2019 07:59
dusk arising said:
Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger.
The evening ball i grew up with was a football game we played with all that youthful energy we had as kids. It went on till bad light stopped play.
June 4th, 2019 07:59
The Evening Ball
Neville said:
and they moved like tigers on Vaseline.... yes indeed, a sight to behold..... Neville
June 4th, 2019 07:07
Neville said:
and they moved like tigers on Vaseline.... yes indeed, a sight to behold..... Neville
June 4th, 2019 07:07
The Evening Ball
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear friend.
June 4th, 2019 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - such a charming piece of imagery-full linguistic delight dear friend.
June 4th, 2019 06:02
A Time for Everything
dusk arising said:
yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there.
Does this mean we can expect to see more frequent posts from you? I hope so.
June 3rd, 2019 16:21
dusk arising said:
yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there.
Does this mean we can expect to see more frequent posts from you? I hope so.
June 3rd, 2019 16:21
A Time for Everything
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve missed your writes over the last couple of weeks - and some write to return with.
June 3rd, 2019 15:53
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve missed your writes over the last couple of weeks - and some write to return with.
June 3rd, 2019 15:53
A Time for Everything
Neville said:
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the first time round, hop on board the next time its passing near.... you just nailed it my friend.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 12:47
Neville said:
there certainly is an optimum time for everything, and if ya miss it the first time round, hop on board the next time its passing near.... you just nailed it my friend.... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 12:47
A Time for Everything
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
An emotional read...to say the least!
Your poem along with the video gripped my heart! It’s so hard! Just yesterday I had one of those melancholy days! I couldn’t let go of what was...but, I know I have to! It hurts!
A super poem and video! Thank you for sharing! I’ll certainly refer to them when another burst of melancholy makes its appearance!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 11:42
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
An emotional read...to say the least!
Your poem along with the video gripped my heart! It’s so hard! Just yesterday I had one of those melancholy days! I couldn’t let go of what was...but, I know I have to! It hurts!
A super poem and video! Thank you for sharing! I’ll certainly refer to them when another burst of melancholy makes its appearance!
~Laura~
June 3rd, 2019 11:42
A Time for Everything
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Good morning I\'ve read it 3 times already and I\'ll do it once more out loud, this really speaks to me thank you so much sharing!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 3rd, 2019 09:59
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Good morning I\'ve read it 3 times already and I\'ll do it once more out loud, this really speaks to me thank you so much sharing!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
June 3rd, 2019 09:59
A Time for Everything
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna. Epiphany - that\'ll be Jan/Feb. lol.
June 3rd, 2019 09:35
orchidee said:
Good write Lorna. Epiphany - that\'ll be Jan/Feb. lol.
June 3rd, 2019 09:35
A Time for Everything
kevin browne said:
I certainly have the message you have so perfectly crafted that I was stunned as I read each line. 10 out of 10 for this one.
June 3rd, 2019 06:50
kevin browne said:
I certainly have the message you have so perfectly crafted that I was stunned as I read each line. 10 out of 10 for this one.
June 3rd, 2019 06:50
If They Dare!
Suresh said:
The pic really paints your image of your macho bro indeed
June 2nd, 2019 12:27
Suresh said:
The pic really paints your image of your macho bro indeed
June 2nd, 2019 12:27
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