Comments received on poems by Lorna



Words
Neville said:

you have crafted a pearl of a poem, one of those special little gems that many will want to keep and refer back to from time to time.... Neville

February 5th, 2019 07:42

Words
orchidee said:

Ooh thanks Lorna. You mean me, and/or other MPS poets?! lol.

February 5th, 2019 07:12

Words
Lorna said:

So are your comments Fay........ ta!

February 5th, 2019 07:05

Words
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for later -- such a poetic way too of describing the need for endearments my friend. A lovely read Lorna.

February 5th, 2019 07:02

The End
Goldfinch60 said:

That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.

February 5th, 2019 01:34

The End
psychofemale said:

amazing, ty for sharing with us :)

February 4th, 2019 22:23

The Prairie
Neville said:

you seem to have captured the very essence of the prairie here ... magic and seemingly timeless true... N

February 4th, 2019 17:55

The Letter
Neville said:

I imagine I would rather read about it than receive it..
a poem seemingly filled to the point of overflowing with losses and disappointment.. well crafted an very much enjoyed ... N

February 4th, 2019 17:50

The End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Hold me in your thoughts
Take me to your dreams
Touch me as i fall into view
When the Winter comes .........
Keep me in yours heart for while !
Lovely song Lorna ~ thanks for sharing

Love the Poem ~ Fish expire without air & we expire witout love !
Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check \"Love me love my cat\" ~ Thanks

February 4th, 2019 11:37

The End
kevin browne said:

You see, we have missed you, and not forgotten about you either. Your poetic prose will endure the over whelming attention you so deserve. Writing such beautiful silent things. Gorgeous to see you back.

February 4th, 2019 11:24

The End
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

February 4th, 2019 10:51

The End
Michael Edwards said:

Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great read.

February 4th, 2019 10:25

The End
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

So happy to see your posting!
Reading the poem and listening to the song brought tears to my eyes!
So many emotions tapping at the heart! I feel for you my dear poetic friend!

Sending much love your way!❤️

~Laura~

February 4th, 2019 09:20

The End
Neville said:

seriously good

February 4th, 2019 08:53

The End
sylviasearcher said:

Simply beautiful

February 4th, 2019 07:58

Separations
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A separation poem? Hope it\'s not forever or it is for mutual happiness and necessity then it\'s not so sad. The poem does express in sighs and soulful tinge. Kudos for the poetry.

Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,

January 28th, 2019 09:19

Separations
Lorna said:

Aren\'t you kind - thanks L..... if you watch the video on Youtube there are comments and one is about more verses that JT left out and it\'s actually a much sadder song than we think it is..... she jilts him. I\'m having more trees cut down today - getting rid of potential weapons of mass destruction..... happy buzz saws going .... sounds like a swarm of bees .... would almost believe it is summer if I didn\'t step outside to 27 F......... hope you had wonderful holidays ....

January 11th, 2019 09:13

Separations
Laura🌻 said:

Good morning, Lorna!

Glad to “see” you!
“Separations” are difficult and sad to bear...especially from a loved one!
You’ve superbly penned words that touch my heart along with James Taylor’s rendition of “The Water Is Wide”!

The following words from a different version of “The Water Is Wide” are for you...

“As I look out
across the sea
a Bright horizon beckons me
And I am called to do my best
and be the most
that I can be.”

With much love...

~Laura~


January 11th, 2019 09:07

Separations
Fay Slimm. said:

The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - - you have captured the essence of parting and its sad effect on each partner - - excellent work Lorna - and into my faves with this little gem.

January 11th, 2019 03:19

Separations
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad. heehee.

January 11th, 2019 02:58

Separations
Goldfinch60 said:

Great emotive write Lorna.

January 11th, 2019 01:44

Separations
psychofemale said:

loved the rhyme patten here :) it painted a lovely picture for me :)

January 10th, 2019 21:57

Autumn
Crystal Hope said:

Wow! really beautiful!

January 10th, 2019 14:31

The Letter
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Lorna.

December 12th, 2018 01:19

The Letter
Lorna said:

Didn\'t think woman or man....... guess it doesn\'t matter if someone\'s heart was broken!

December 11th, 2018 15:53

The Letter
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING LORNA : ANGELA here ! Love the visual & the video : thanks for directing us to the LYRIC. Lovely to follow while Mean Mary sang the elegant Lyric. I enjoyed your take in the Poem : that the letter was from a LADY ? !
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our latest FUSION and BRIAN\'S poem \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE\" Thanks A & B !






December 11th, 2018 15:50

The Letter
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

I love your great poem. It’s an amazing read!
Thank you for sharing the link.
I listened to the song as I was looking at the lyrics. It was beautiful indeed!

~Laura~


December 11th, 2018 09:19

The Letter
Neville said:

be proud of these words my friend, I am for you.. N

December 11th, 2018 09:08

The Letter
orchidee said:

A good write Lorna. I thought ya \'tossed aside\' my singing?! heehee.

December 11th, 2018 07:11

The Letter
Michael Edwards said:

Great lyrics Lorna.

December 11th, 2018 05:04



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