Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Last Night
dusk arising said:
Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe.
Writing in first person is a very powerful way to get this obscene wasting of lifes and suffering across to your reader.
November 11th, 2018 11:38
dusk arising said:
Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe.
Writing in first person is a very powerful way to get this obscene wasting of lifes and suffering across to your reader.
November 11th, 2018 11:38
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Goldfinch60 said:
They may seem to be missing Lorna but their Spirit will always be there, with you, looking down upon you and guiding you with love.
November 11th, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
They may seem to be missing Lorna but their Spirit will always be there, with you, looking down upon you and guiding you with love.
November 11th, 2018 02:07
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Michael Edwards said:
A special write Lorna -
November 10th, 2018 13:14
Michael Edwards said:
A special write Lorna -
November 10th, 2018 13:14
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This has been a week of giving condolences and paying my respects to three families who have lost loved ones!
Just came back from the cemetery! Made myself some coffee and decided to visit MPS to read some postings while I was having my coffee. Yours was the first!
The song and pic brought tears to my eyes! Your poem is outstanding! It made me think of all my dearest relatives and friends who have all gone...especially my dad (whose gravesite I visited today) and my first love who left me when I was very young! When I go to Italy, I visit his gravesite!
You and Kurt Philip Behm have been my first reads today! The two postings that “blew me away”!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 10th, 2018 11:48
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This has been a week of giving condolences and paying my respects to three families who have lost loved ones!
Just came back from the cemetery! Made myself some coffee and decided to visit MPS to read some postings while I was having my coffee. Yours was the first!
The song and pic brought tears to my eyes! Your poem is outstanding! It made me think of all my dearest relatives and friends who have all gone...especially my dad (whose gravesite I visited today) and my first love who left me when I was very young! When I go to Italy, I visit his gravesite!
You and Kurt Philip Behm have been my first reads today! The two postings that “blew me away”!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 10th, 2018 11:48
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
orchidee said:
I left - to go to the shops! I came back - I always do, like a bad penny! heehee.
November 10th, 2018 10:59
orchidee said:
I left - to go to the shops! I came back - I always do, like a bad penny! heehee.
November 10th, 2018 10:59
Time\'s Bouquet
dusk arising said:
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me actually. This new now is a place i have never been before and mindfully acknowledging this makes your words all the more poignant.
Very deep meaningful writing from you.
November 9th, 2018 03:26
dusk arising said:
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me actually. This new now is a place i have never been before and mindfully acknowledging this makes your words all the more poignant.
Very deep meaningful writing from you.
November 9th, 2018 03:26
Time\'s Bouquet
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Time\'s Bouquet
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Autumn
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
Autumn
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
Where I Find You
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know this would be about me! heehee. A fine write Lorna.
November 6th, 2018 11:16
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know this would be about me! heehee. A fine write Lorna.
November 6th, 2018 11:16
Where I Find You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so lovely SISTER LORNA because your Poems share the love in your heart with us all ! We love the SEEKERS and this song : A great symbiosis of FOLK & COUNTRY. MPS is a great site for finding each other and sharing & caring through POETRY. We are so pleased YOU have found US Lorna and equally pleased WE have found YOU : AMEN : LOVE in the SPIRIT : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so lovely SISTER LORNA because your Poems share the love in your heart with us all ! We love the SEEKERS and this song : A great symbiosis of FOLK & COUNTRY. MPS is a great site for finding each other and sharing & caring through POETRY. We are so pleased YOU have found US Lorna and equally pleased WE have found YOU : AMEN : LOVE in the SPIRIT : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:31
Where I Find You
Classicmister said:
Lorna
That\'s a beautiful poem penned totally from the heart. Well done.
November 6th, 2018 04:56
Classicmister said:
Lorna
That\'s a beautiful poem penned totally from the heart. Well done.
November 6th, 2018 04:56
Time Unacknowledged
Goldfinch60 said:
Time never stands still so we must grab every moment.
November 5th, 2018 09:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Time never stands still so we must grab every moment.
November 5th, 2018 09:05
Time Unacknowledged
orchidee said:
When will she know it? (Do shut up, Orchi. lol). A good write L.
November 5th, 2018 07:25
orchidee said:
When will she know it? (Do shut up, Orchi. lol). A good write L.
November 5th, 2018 07:25
Time Unacknowledged
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - short but says it all - great write Lorna
November 5th, 2018 06:56
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - short but says it all - great write Lorna
November 5th, 2018 06:56
Remember When
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, life is full of experiences that we learn, some are hard but most are wonderful.
November 5th, 2018 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, life is full of experiences that we learn, some are hard but most are wonderful.
November 5th, 2018 01:01
Remember When
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your fine poem rings so true! Life did throw curves along the way with many ups and downs! Inspite of it all, we made it!
Great video! Alan Jackson is one of my favorites and the memorable and candid lyrics of this nostalgic song give me the goosebumps!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 15:43
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your fine poem rings so true! Life did throw curves along the way with many ups and downs! Inspite of it all, we made it!
Great video! Alan Jackson is one of my favorites and the memorable and candid lyrics of this nostalgic song give me the goosebumps!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 15:43
Remember When
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I best not write a poem called \'I remember when...\' I been around since 1066 at least. I would never get to the end of the poem! I would waffle and elaborate and drone on in dull monologue for ever. heehee.
November 4th, 2018 06:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I best not write a poem called \'I remember when...\' I been around since 1066 at least. I would never get to the end of the poem! I would waffle and elaborate and drone on in dull monologue for ever. heehee.
November 4th, 2018 06:48
Bring Spring To the World
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Beautiful pic and video!
I love the poem! It’s short but packed with love and beauty!
Awesome 😎
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 00:01
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Beautiful pic and video!
I love the poem! It’s short but packed with love and beauty!
Awesome 😎
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 00:01
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