Comments received on poems by Lorna



In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version)
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the flow in this gem of an ode to inclement weather . Great read Lorna dear friend.

September 7th, 2018 04:21

6 am Quandry
Poetic Dan said:

Don\'t think I have ever willingly stayed in bed. Great work, my inner child says be fearless and brave! With a little wave

September 7th, 2018 03:09

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Michael Edwards said:

A beautiful wee write Lorna

September 6th, 2018 08:29

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Goldfinch60 said:

Delightful write, we do not have humming birds in the UK they must be magic to watch.

September 6th, 2018 07:47

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

“Among the hyssops
Still standing in the fading garden “

“Off and away before the Harvest Moon”

A message beautifully delivered by your deliberate and thoughtful choice of words. I very much enjoyed this write and the clip that is accompanying your poem!

This has a sense of finality, but also the sense of a fragranced NEW BEGINNING!

~Laura~


September 6th, 2018 06:35

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

I luv hummingbirds so I admired this lil poem and you employed them so uniquely and awesomely in muse here wow. Luv your wording. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 06:10

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
orchidee said:

A delightful write Lorna.

September 6th, 2018 05:07

I Know You - I Hear You
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Aww, why they say to me \'Don\'t hurry back\' and \'We\'ll let you know\', when they have heard my singing?! lol

September 4th, 2018 12:10

I Know You - I Hear You
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Beautiful quote along with a great song by Emmylou Harris and Don Williams! It says a lot, but your poem says much more!
I am truly moved by your words!

~Laura~

September 4th, 2018 09:06

I Know You - I Hear You
Lorna said:

Thanks Andy....

September 4th, 2018 08:01

I Know You - I Hear You
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write Lorna.

September 4th, 2018 07:54

6 am Quandry
orchidee said:

What time is it? A quarter past Summer? or half past Autumn? or what?! Good write Lorna.

September 3rd, 2018 10:35

6 am Quandry
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ Love MORRISY always original ! Only once or twice in the last 20 years (16 to 35) have I woken up got out of bed and then ~ on impulse said \"DAMN IT\" and got back in again ~ and stayed there all day dozing & dreaming ~ Very Cathartic. Since I joined MPS I\'m up at 5:30 am (GMT) hoping to be in MPS Pole Position ~ only achieved it once ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN🧡 Please check our latest POEMS ~ Thanks B.

September 3rd, 2018 08:56

6 am Quandry
Lorna said:

Only kidding...... I\'m long up and \"at em\".............

September 3rd, 2018 08:06

6 am Quandry
Michael Edwards said:

Stay where you are - enjoy the rest - great lines Lorna

September 3rd, 2018 08:05

The Harvest Moon (September)
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully done and well chosen song
September is the month I came to this plane
Thank you for being perfectly you and writing to share your light.


September 2nd, 2018 06:09

The Harvest Moon (September)
Michael Edwards said:

Great scribe very atmospheric - good to see you back.

August 31st, 2018 09:39

The Harvest Moon (September)
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

How are you? Missed you!
Thank you for sharing your poem and video! Enjoyed them. Looking forward to Autumn 🍂!
This humid and hot August has been unbearable!

Sending love your way...

~Laura~



August 31st, 2018 09:16

The Harvest Moon (September)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see you back, the harvest moon bringing the wonder of autumn to us, my favourite time of the year.

August 31st, 2018 08:06

The Harvest Moon (September)
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

August 31st, 2018 06:50

The Harvest Moon (September)
Fay Slimm. said:

Whoops sorry about misspelling your name my friend - meant to type Lorna

August 31st, 2018 04:49

The Harvest Moon (September)
Fay Slimm. said:

Simply lovely these few lines of wonderful moon-metaphor Laura - a really enjoyable read.

August 31st, 2018 04:49

Girded for Battle
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day we put our armour on for the battle and I am sure you look wonderful in your armour.

August 4th, 2018 01:04

Invisible
Poetic Dan said:

Well expressed
But I\'m afraid I see you so much more than this, although happy for you to sit where you wish.

August 3rd, 2018 14:34

Girded for Battle
Michael Edwards said:

Brill Lorna - was only listening to the great DW the other night - love the choice.

August 3rd, 2018 14:14

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Poetic Dan said:

Tunnne! With a perfect write that I blessed to read at sun set.
Thank you for joining me

August 3rd, 2018 14:10

Girded for Battle
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Listening to Don Williams
made me forget all about
my bad hair day!

Along with that adorable little GIF,
I love these lines...

“I artfully arrange my presentation...”
“As I attitude my hair...”

Awesome 👏🏻

~Laura~


August 3rd, 2018 09:35

Girded for Battle
Fay Slimm. said:

Well done you for doing such good poetic battle with daily destructive arrows friend - - I love the example of both those videos.

August 3rd, 2018 09:17

Girded for Battle
orchidee said:

No bad hair days for you then?! heehee.

August 3rd, 2018 08:57

Girded for Battle
Heartwriter said:

Loved this and the song!!!!!!

August 3rd, 2018 07:48



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