Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Transom Window
Lorna said:
ha ha - cute remark Neville! However after your poem today I think you ARE a naughty boy...... boys will be boys..........
February 6th, 2019 08:44
Lorna said:
ha ha - cute remark Neville! However after your poem today I think you ARE a naughty boy...... boys will be boys..........
February 6th, 2019 08:44
The Transom Window
Neville said:
what a delightful view you have tempted us to take a peek at through your beautiful transom window.. I feel like a naughty boy again.... thank you... Neville
February 6th, 2019 08:41
Neville said:
what a delightful view you have tempted us to take a peek at through your beautiful transom window.. I feel like a naughty boy again.... thank you... Neville
February 6th, 2019 08:41
The Transom Window
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Lorna. I thought you meant a handsome widow! lol.
February 6th, 2019 08:11
orchidee said:
A fine write and clip Lorna. I thought you meant a handsome widow! lol.
February 6th, 2019 08:11
Words
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve used the language to its best to express this gem of a write. Good on yer Lorna.
February 5th, 2019 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve used the language to its best to express this gem of a write. Good on yer Lorna.
February 5th, 2019 11:41
Words
Seek said:
How you pack so much truth in so few words! Thanks for sharing.
February 5th, 2019 10:36
Seek said:
How you pack so much truth in so few words! Thanks for sharing.
February 5th, 2019 10:36
Words
Neville said:
you have crafted a pearl of a poem, one of those special little gems that many will want to keep and refer back to from time to time.... Neville
February 5th, 2019 07:42
Neville said:
you have crafted a pearl of a poem, one of those special little gems that many will want to keep and refer back to from time to time.... Neville
February 5th, 2019 07:42
Words
orchidee said:
Ooh thanks Lorna. You mean me, and/or other MPS poets?! lol.
February 5th, 2019 07:12
orchidee said:
Ooh thanks Lorna. You mean me, and/or other MPS poets?! lol.
February 5th, 2019 07:12
Words
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for later -- such a poetic way too of describing the need for endearments my friend. A lovely read Lorna.
February 5th, 2019 07:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for later -- such a poetic way too of describing the need for endearments my friend. A lovely read Lorna.
February 5th, 2019 07:02
The End
Goldfinch60 said:
That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.
February 5th, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.
February 5th, 2019 01:34
The Prairie
Neville said:
you seem to have captured the very essence of the prairie here ... magic and seemingly timeless true... N
February 4th, 2019 17:55
Neville said:
you seem to have captured the very essence of the prairie here ... magic and seemingly timeless true... N
February 4th, 2019 17:55
The Letter
Neville said:
I imagine I would rather read about it than receive it..
a poem seemingly filled to the point of overflowing with losses and disappointment.. well crafted an very much enjoyed ... N
February 4th, 2019 17:50
Neville said:
I imagine I would rather read about it than receive it..
a poem seemingly filled to the point of overflowing with losses and disappointment.. well crafted an very much enjoyed ... N
February 4th, 2019 17:50
The End
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hold me in your thoughts
Take me to your dreams
Touch me as i fall into view
When the Winter comes .........
Keep me in yours heart for while !
Lovely song Lorna ~ thanks for sharing
Love the Poem ~ Fish expire without air & we expire witout love !
Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check \"Love me love my cat\" ~ Thanks
February 4th, 2019 11:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hold me in your thoughts
Take me to your dreams
Touch me as i fall into view
When the Winter comes .........
Keep me in yours heart for while !
Lovely song Lorna ~ thanks for sharing
Love the Poem ~ Fish expire without air & we expire witout love !
Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check \"Love me love my cat\" ~ Thanks
February 4th, 2019 11:37
The End
kevin browne said:
You see, we have missed you, and not forgotten about you either. Your poetic prose will endure the over whelming attention you so deserve. Writing such beautiful silent things. Gorgeous to see you back.
February 4th, 2019 11:24
kevin browne said:
You see, we have missed you, and not forgotten about you either. Your poetic prose will endure the over whelming attention you so deserve. Writing such beautiful silent things. Gorgeous to see you back.
February 4th, 2019 11:24
The End
Michael Edwards said:
Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great read.
February 4th, 2019 10:25
Michael Edwards said:
Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great read.
February 4th, 2019 10:25
The End
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So happy to see your posting!
Reading the poem and listening to the song brought tears to my eyes!
So many emotions tapping at the heart! I feel for you my dear poetic friend!
Sending much love your way!❤️
~Laura~
February 4th, 2019 09:20
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
So happy to see your posting!
Reading the poem and listening to the song brought tears to my eyes!
So many emotions tapping at the heart! I feel for you my dear poetic friend!
Sending much love your way!❤️
~Laura~
February 4th, 2019 09:20
Separations
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A separation poem? Hope it\'s not forever or it is for mutual happiness and necessity then it\'s not so sad. The poem does express in sighs and soulful tinge. Kudos for the poetry.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A separation poem? Hope it\'s not forever or it is for mutual happiness and necessity then it\'s not so sad. The poem does express in sighs and soulful tinge. Kudos for the poetry.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:19
Separations
Lorna said:
Aren\'t you kind - thanks L..... if you watch the video on Youtube there are comments and one is about more verses that JT left out and it\'s actually a much sadder song than we think it is..... she jilts him. I\'m having more trees cut down today - getting rid of potential weapons of mass destruction..... happy buzz saws going .... sounds like a swarm of bees .... would almost believe it is summer if I didn\'t step outside to 27 F......... hope you had wonderful holidays ....
January 11th, 2019 09:13
Lorna said:
Aren\'t you kind - thanks L..... if you watch the video on Youtube there are comments and one is about more verses that JT left out and it\'s actually a much sadder song than we think it is..... she jilts him. I\'m having more trees cut down today - getting rid of potential weapons of mass destruction..... happy buzz saws going .... sounds like a swarm of bees .... would almost believe it is summer if I didn\'t step outside to 27 F......... hope you had wonderful holidays ....
January 11th, 2019 09:13
Separations
Laura🌻 said:
Good morning, Lorna!
Glad to “see” you!
“Separations” are difficult and sad to bear...especially from a loved one!
You’ve superbly penned words that touch my heart along with James Taylor’s rendition of “The Water Is Wide”!
The following words from a different version of “The Water Is Wide” are for you...
“As I look out
across the sea
a Bright horizon beckons me
And I am called to do my best
and be the most
that I can be.”
With much love...
~Laura~
January 11th, 2019 09:07
Laura🌻 said:
Good morning, Lorna!
Glad to “see” you!
“Separations” are difficult and sad to bear...especially from a loved one!
You’ve superbly penned words that touch my heart along with James Taylor’s rendition of “The Water Is Wide”!
The following words from a different version of “The Water Is Wide” are for you...
“As I look out
across the sea
a Bright horizon beckons me
And I am called to do my best
and be the most
that I can be.”
With much love...
~Laura~
January 11th, 2019 09:07
Separations
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - - you have captured the essence of parting and its sad effect on each partner - - excellent work Lorna - and into my faves with this little gem.
January 11th, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - - you have captured the essence of parting and its sad effect on each partner - - excellent work Lorna - and into my faves with this little gem.
January 11th, 2019 03:19
Separations
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad. heehee.
January 11th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad. heehee.
January 11th, 2019 02:58
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