Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Long Nights Moon - December
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Lorna, those long moon nights hold something very special in them.
December 11th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Lorna, those long moon nights hold something very special in them.
December 11th, 2018 01:14
The Long Nights Moon - December
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I was hoping you’d post a December Moon poem! Glad you did along with a great video! I enjoyed it very much!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 15:49
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I was hoping you’d post a December Moon poem! Glad you did along with a great video! I enjoyed it very much!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 15:49
The Long Nights Moon - December
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
How is it in the US. Our \'shortest days\' are 8am to 4pm daylight. I would hate it if it was not light until 9am.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
How is it in the US. Our \'shortest days\' are 8am to 4pm daylight. I would hate it if it was not light until 9am.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
The Long Nights Moon - December
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
The Last Night
Neville said:
A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the centenary to mark the last day of WW1.. I have a deep personal interest in that so called war to end all wars and have written on the subject many times... thank you Neville
December 10th, 2018 07:56
Neville said:
A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the centenary to mark the last day of WW1.. I have a deep personal interest in that so called war to end all wars and have written on the subject many times... thank you Neville
December 10th, 2018 07:56
The Long Nights Moon - December
Lorna said:
That\'s done it....... now I\'ll HAVE to make scones all carby and evil. To celebrate the first day of winter I\'m going to make a bread pudding - we line the baking mold with sugar cooked until it glazes the mold and then when the pudding is turned out, the melted glazed sugar (not too much) oozes into the pudding (with raisins of course) and you want to die while eating it and then you feel that you have after eating it .......
December 10th, 2018 06:54
Lorna said:
That\'s done it....... now I\'ll HAVE to make scones all carby and evil. To celebrate the first day of winter I\'m going to make a bread pudding - we line the baking mold with sugar cooked until it glazes the mold and then when the pudding is turned out, the melted glazed sugar (not too much) oozes into the pudding (with raisins of course) and you want to die while eating it and then you feel that you have after eating it .......
December 10th, 2018 06:54
The Long Nights Moon - December
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with them - and that coffee and scone hot from the oven - heaven. Will they mind? Fine write by the way.
December 10th, 2018 06:44
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with them - and that coffee and scone hot from the oven - heaven. Will they mind? Fine write by the way.
December 10th, 2018 06:44
The Prairie
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You home now, after trudging over them prairies?!
December 10th, 2018 02:57
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You home now, after trudging over them prairies?!
December 10th, 2018 02:57
The Prairie
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Lorna, those memories can be so wonderful, all it needs is a special moment to trigger them.
December 10th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Lorna, those memories can be so wonderful, all it needs is a special moment to trigger them.
December 10th, 2018 00:54
The Prairie
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Great metaphors to express
“The prairie of the life that was”!
We must do our best
to remember the best
of times!
A super write with an awesome song that brings tears to my eyes every time I hear it! A personal favorite of mine!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 9th, 2018 21:44
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Great metaphors to express
“The prairie of the life that was”!
We must do our best
to remember the best
of times!
A super write with an awesome song that brings tears to my eyes every time I hear it! A personal favorite of mine!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 9th, 2018 21:44
The Last Night
dusk arising said:
Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe.
Writing in first person is a very powerful way to get this obscene wasting of lifes and suffering across to your reader.
November 11th, 2018 11:38
dusk arising said:
Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe.
Writing in first person is a very powerful way to get this obscene wasting of lifes and suffering across to your reader.
November 11th, 2018 11:38
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Goldfinch60 said:
They may seem to be missing Lorna but their Spirit will always be there, with you, looking down upon you and guiding you with love.
November 11th, 2018 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
They may seem to be missing Lorna but their Spirit will always be there, with you, looking down upon you and guiding you with love.
November 11th, 2018 02:07
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Michael Edwards said:
A special write Lorna -
November 10th, 2018 13:14
Michael Edwards said:
A special write Lorna -
November 10th, 2018 13:14
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This has been a week of giving condolences and paying my respects to three families who have lost loved ones!
Just came back from the cemetery! Made myself some coffee and decided to visit MPS to read some postings while I was having my coffee. Yours was the first!
The song and pic brought tears to my eyes! Your poem is outstanding! It made me think of all my dearest relatives and friends who have all gone...especially my dad (whose gravesite I visited today) and my first love who left me when I was very young! When I go to Italy, I visit his gravesite!
You and Kurt Philip Behm have been my first reads today! The two postings that “blew me away”!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 10th, 2018 11:48
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
This has been a week of giving condolences and paying my respects to three families who have lost loved ones!
Just came back from the cemetery! Made myself some coffee and decided to visit MPS to read some postings while I was having my coffee. Yours was the first!
The song and pic brought tears to my eyes! Your poem is outstanding! It made me think of all my dearest relatives and friends who have all gone...especially my dad (whose gravesite I visited today) and my first love who left me when I was very young! When I go to Italy, I visit his gravesite!
You and Kurt Philip Behm have been my first reads today! The two postings that “blew me away”!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 10th, 2018 11:48
Heaven Is All Very Well But.......
orchidee said:
I left - to go to the shops! I came back - I always do, like a bad penny! heehee.
November 10th, 2018 10:59
orchidee said:
I left - to go to the shops! I came back - I always do, like a bad penny! heehee.
November 10th, 2018 10:59
Time\'s Bouquet
dusk arising said:
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me actually. This new now is a place i have never been before and mindfully acknowledging this makes your words all the more poignant.
Very deep meaningful writing from you.
November 9th, 2018 03:26
dusk arising said:
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me actually. This new now is a place i have never been before and mindfully acknowledging this makes your words all the more poignant.
Very deep meaningful writing from you.
November 9th, 2018 03:26
Time\'s Bouquet
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Time\'s Bouquet
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Autumn
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
Autumn
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
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