Comments received on poems by Lorna
Separations
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A separation poem? Hope it\'s not forever or it is for mutual happiness and necessity then it\'s not so sad. The poem does express in sighs and soulful tinge. Kudos for the poetry.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A separation poem? Hope it\'s not forever or it is for mutual happiness and necessity then it\'s not so sad. The poem does express in sighs and soulful tinge. Kudos for the poetry.
Nice to read from u again,
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too . Best wishes,
January 28th, 2019 09:19
Separations
Lorna said:
Aren\'t you kind - thanks L..... if you watch the video on Youtube there are comments and one is about more verses that JT left out and it\'s actually a much sadder song than we think it is..... she jilts him. I\'m having more trees cut down today - getting rid of potential weapons of mass destruction..... happy buzz saws going .... sounds like a swarm of bees .... would almost believe it is summer if I didn\'t step outside to 27 F......... hope you had wonderful holidays ....
January 11th, 2019 09:13
Lorna said:
Aren\'t you kind - thanks L..... if you watch the video on Youtube there are comments and one is about more verses that JT left out and it\'s actually a much sadder song than we think it is..... she jilts him. I\'m having more trees cut down today - getting rid of potential weapons of mass destruction..... happy buzz saws going .... sounds like a swarm of bees .... would almost believe it is summer if I didn\'t step outside to 27 F......... hope you had wonderful holidays ....
January 11th, 2019 09:13
Separations
Laura🌻 said:
Good morning, Lorna!
Glad to “see” you!
“Separations” are difficult and sad to bear...especially from a loved one!
You’ve superbly penned words that touch my heart along with James Taylor’s rendition of “The Water Is Wide”!
The following words from a different version of “The Water Is Wide” are for you...
“As I look out
across the sea
a Bright horizon beckons me
And I am called to do my best
and be the most
that I can be.”
With much love...
~Laura~
January 11th, 2019 09:07
Laura🌻 said:
Good morning, Lorna!
Glad to “see” you!
“Separations” are difficult and sad to bear...especially from a loved one!
You’ve superbly penned words that touch my heart along with James Taylor’s rendition of “The Water Is Wide”!
The following words from a different version of “The Water Is Wide” are for you...
“As I look out
across the sea
a Bright horizon beckons me
And I am called to do my best
and be the most
that I can be.”
With much love...
~Laura~
January 11th, 2019 09:07
Separations
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - - you have captured the essence of parting and its sad effect on each partner - - excellent work Lorna - and into my faves with this little gem.
January 11th, 2019 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - - you have captured the essence of parting and its sad effect on each partner - - excellent work Lorna - and into my faves with this little gem.
January 11th, 2019 03:19
Separations
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad. heehee.
January 11th, 2019 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Ok, I\'ll stay. I won\'t go. You won\'t be sad. heehee.
January 11th, 2019 02:58
Separations
psychofemale said:
loved the rhyme patten here :) it painted a lovely picture for me :)
January 10th, 2019 21:57
psychofemale said:
loved the rhyme patten here :) it painted a lovely picture for me :)
January 10th, 2019 21:57
The Letter
Lorna said:
Didn\'t think woman or man....... guess it doesn\'t matter if someone\'s heart was broken!
December 11th, 2018 15:53
Lorna said:
Didn\'t think woman or man....... guess it doesn\'t matter if someone\'s heart was broken!
December 11th, 2018 15:53
The Letter
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING LORNA : ANGELA here ! Love the visual & the video : thanks for directing us to the LYRIC. Lovely to follow while Mean Mary sang the elegant Lyric. I enjoyed your take in the Poem : that the letter was from a LADY ? !
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our latest FUSION and BRIAN\'S poem \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE\" Thanks A & B !
December 11th, 2018 15:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING LORNA : ANGELA here ! Love the visual & the video : thanks for directing us to the LYRIC. Lovely to follow while Mean Mary sang the elegant Lyric. I enjoyed your take in the Poem : that the letter was from a LADY ? !
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our latest FUSION and BRIAN\'S poem \"I LOVE YOU BECAUSE\" Thanks A & B !
December 11th, 2018 15:50
The Letter
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I love your great poem. It’s an amazing read!
Thank you for sharing the link.
I listened to the song as I was looking at the lyrics. It was beautiful indeed!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 09:19
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I love your great poem. It’s an amazing read!
Thank you for sharing the link.
I listened to the song as I was looking at the lyrics. It was beautiful indeed!
~Laura~
December 11th, 2018 09:19
The Letter
Neville said:
be proud of these words my friend, I am for you.. N
December 11th, 2018 09:08
Neville said:
be proud of these words my friend, I am for you.. N
December 11th, 2018 09:08
The Letter
orchidee said:
A good write Lorna. I thought ya \'tossed aside\' my singing?! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 07:11
orchidee said:
A good write Lorna. I thought ya \'tossed aside\' my singing?! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 07:11
The Long Nights Moon - December
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Lorna, those long moon nights hold something very special in them.
December 11th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Lorna, those long moon nights hold something very special in them.
December 11th, 2018 01:14
The Long Nights Moon - December
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I was hoping you’d post a December Moon poem! Glad you did along with a great video! I enjoyed it very much!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 15:49
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I was hoping you’d post a December Moon poem! Glad you did along with a great video! I enjoyed it very much!
~Laura~
December 10th, 2018 15:49
The Long Nights Moon - December
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
How is it in the US. Our \'shortest days\' are 8am to 4pm daylight. I would hate it if it was not light until 9am.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
How is it in the US. Our \'shortest days\' are 8am to 4pm daylight. I would hate it if it was not light until 9am.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
The Long Nights Moon - December
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
orchidee said:
Strangely, after the first day of Winter (taking it as Dec 21st), things get lighter a minute or two each day.
Let\'s not only say \'The nights are drawing in\' but also say \'It will gradually start getting lighter again soon\'.
December 10th, 2018 15:15
The Last Night
Neville said:
A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the centenary to mark the last day of WW1.. I have a deep personal interest in that so called war to end all wars and have written on the subject many times... thank you Neville
December 10th, 2018 07:56
Neville said:
A great little war poem my fine literary friend, and posted on the centenary to mark the last day of WW1.. I have a deep personal interest in that so called war to end all wars and have written on the subject many times... thank you Neville
December 10th, 2018 07:56
The Long Nights Moon - December
Lorna said:
That\'s done it....... now I\'ll HAVE to make scones all carby and evil. To celebrate the first day of winter I\'m going to make a bread pudding - we line the baking mold with sugar cooked until it glazes the mold and then when the pudding is turned out, the melted glazed sugar (not too much) oozes into the pudding (with raisins of course) and you want to die while eating it and then you feel that you have after eating it .......
December 10th, 2018 06:54
Lorna said:
That\'s done it....... now I\'ll HAVE to make scones all carby and evil. To celebrate the first day of winter I\'m going to make a bread pudding - we line the baking mold with sugar cooked until it glazes the mold and then when the pudding is turned out, the melted glazed sugar (not too much) oozes into the pudding (with raisins of course) and you want to die while eating it and then you feel that you have after eating it .......
December 10th, 2018 06:54
The Long Nights Moon - December
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with them - and that coffee and scone hot from the oven - heaven. Will they mind? Fine write by the way.
December 10th, 2018 06:44
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with them - and that coffee and scone hot from the oven - heaven. Will they mind? Fine write by the way.
December 10th, 2018 06:44
The Prairie
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You home now, after trudging over them prairies?!
December 10th, 2018 02:57
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You home now, after trudging over them prairies?!
December 10th, 2018 02:57
The Prairie
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Lorna, those memories can be so wonderful, all it needs is a special moment to trigger them.
December 10th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Lorna, those memories can be so wonderful, all it needs is a special moment to trigger them.
December 10th, 2018 00:54
The Prairie
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Great metaphors to express
“The prairie of the life that was”!
We must do our best
to remember the best
of times!
A super write with an awesome song that brings tears to my eyes every time I hear it! A personal favorite of mine!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 9th, 2018 21:44
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Great metaphors to express
“The prairie of the life that was”!
We must do our best
to remember the best
of times!
A super write with an awesome song that brings tears to my eyes every time I hear it! A personal favorite of mine!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
December 9th, 2018 21:44
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