Comments received on poems by Lorna
Time\'s Bouquet
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Debsspot said:
Beautiful Lorna. An outlook we should all have.
The song gave me a tear.
November 8th, 2018 07:09
Time\'s Bouquet
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old memories dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of the read.
November 8th, 2018 05:46
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful.
Is that you in that gorgeous dress Laura.
November 8th, 2018 01:33
Autumn
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well done and first rate writing my friend.
November 7th, 2018 15:46
Autumn
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
orchidee said:
A fine write Laura. Now, shall we call it Fall or Autumn? But what rhymes with \'Autumn\'? Tum-tum. lol. Now how on earth can we do a rhymed poem out of that?! lol.
Try this:
It was a day of Autumn
And I was hungry, with a rumbling tum-tum!
(I talk some rubbish, I know!). lol.
November 7th, 2018 11:05
Autumn
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your poem, video, and pic are magical! Fall colors are a sight to behold! 🍂🍁I very much enjoyed your posting !🍁🍂
~Laura~
November 7th, 2018 10:02
Where I Find You
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know this would be about me! heehee. A fine write Lorna.
November 6th, 2018 11:16
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know this would be about me! heehee. A fine write Lorna.
November 6th, 2018 11:16
Where I Find You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so lovely SISTER LORNA because your Poems share the love in your heart with us all ! We love the SEEKERS and this song : A great symbiosis of FOLK & COUNTRY. MPS is a great site for finding each other and sharing & caring through POETRY. We are so pleased YOU have found US Lorna and equally pleased WE have found YOU : AMEN : LOVE in the SPIRIT : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so lovely SISTER LORNA because your Poems share the love in your heart with us all ! We love the SEEKERS and this song : A great symbiosis of FOLK & COUNTRY. MPS is a great site for finding each other and sharing & caring through POETRY. We are so pleased YOU have found US Lorna and equally pleased WE have found YOU : AMEN : LOVE in the SPIRIT : BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 6th, 2018 07:31
Where I Find You
Classicmister said:
Lorna
That\'s a beautiful poem penned totally from the heart. Well done.
November 6th, 2018 04:56
Classicmister said:
Lorna
That\'s a beautiful poem penned totally from the heart. Well done.
November 6th, 2018 04:56
Time Unacknowledged
Goldfinch60 said:
Time never stands still so we must grab every moment.
November 5th, 2018 09:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Time never stands still so we must grab every moment.
November 5th, 2018 09:05
Time Unacknowledged
orchidee said:
When will she know it? (Do shut up, Orchi. lol). A good write L.
November 5th, 2018 07:25
orchidee said:
When will she know it? (Do shut up, Orchi. lol). A good write L.
November 5th, 2018 07:25
Time Unacknowledged
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - short but says it all - great write Lorna
November 5th, 2018 06:56
Michael Edwards said:
My kind of poem - short but says it all - great write Lorna
November 5th, 2018 06:56
Remember When
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, life is full of experiences that we learn, some are hard but most are wonderful.
November 5th, 2018 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, life is full of experiences that we learn, some are hard but most are wonderful.
November 5th, 2018 01:01
Remember When
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your fine poem rings so true! Life did throw curves along the way with many ups and downs! Inspite of it all, we made it!
Great video! Alan Jackson is one of my favorites and the memorable and candid lyrics of this nostalgic song give me the goosebumps!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 15:43
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Your fine poem rings so true! Life did throw curves along the way with many ups and downs! Inspite of it all, we made it!
Great video! Alan Jackson is one of my favorites and the memorable and candid lyrics of this nostalgic song give me the goosebumps!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 15:43
Remember When
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I best not write a poem called \'I remember when...\' I been around since 1066 at least. I would never get to the end of the poem! I would waffle and elaborate and drone on in dull monologue for ever. heehee.
November 4th, 2018 06:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I best not write a poem called \'I remember when...\' I been around since 1066 at least. I would never get to the end of the poem! I would waffle and elaborate and drone on in dull monologue for ever. heehee.
November 4th, 2018 06:48
Bring Spring To the World
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Beautiful pic and video!
I love the poem! It’s short but packed with love and beauty!
Awesome 😎
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 00:01
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Beautiful pic and video!
I love the poem! It’s short but packed with love and beauty!
Awesome 😎
~Laura~
November 4th, 2018 00:01
Bring Spring To the World
sylviasearcher said:
Aww I think the fusion expired. I love your verse.. glad you shared 😊
November 3rd, 2018 17:25
sylviasearcher said:
Aww I think the fusion expired. I love your verse.. glad you shared 😊
November 3rd, 2018 17:25
Bring Spring To the World
w c said:
Thanks, Lorna. Spring is always nice to celebrate.
November 3rd, 2018 16:58
w c said:
Thanks, Lorna. Spring is always nice to celebrate.
November 3rd, 2018 16:58
Bring Spring To the World
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA : Love PB : He has such a soothing voice contrasting with todays harsher Hit Parade ! Its funny you should write about SPRING because in Auckland NZ (where I am) SPRING is Sept : Oct : Nov so it is just in FULL BLOOM ! The day time temperature reaches 65F ! On DECEMBER 1st it will be SUMMER and we have our Christmas Lunch on the BEACH ! Wherever you live in the World SPRING is always the best SEASON : especially JAPAN ! Its already Sunday Morning here : just off to Church Thanks for caring & sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 BRIAN & I both love Fusions : Our latest one is about \'Attituds towards CHRISTMAS : ANGELA
November 3rd, 2018 15:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA : Love PB : He has such a soothing voice contrasting with todays harsher Hit Parade ! Its funny you should write about SPRING because in Auckland NZ (where I am) SPRING is Sept : Oct : Nov so it is just in FULL BLOOM ! The day time temperature reaches 65F ! On DECEMBER 1st it will be SUMMER and we have our Christmas Lunch on the BEACH ! Wherever you live in the World SPRING is always the best SEASON : especially JAPAN ! Its already Sunday Morning here : just off to Church Thanks for caring & sharing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 BRIAN & I both love Fusions : Our latest one is about \'Attituds towards CHRISTMAS : ANGELA
November 3rd, 2018 15:57
Bring Spring To the World
dusk arising said:
Lovely joyous piece from you. Evokes the electric feelings a special person brings as you begin to fall in love.
November 3rd, 2018 13:31
dusk arising said:
Lovely joyous piece from you. Evokes the electric feelings a special person brings as you begin to fall in love.
November 3rd, 2018 13:31
Bring Spring To the World
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Only one thing will spoil Spring - if I sing! lol.
November 3rd, 2018 07:29
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Only one thing will spoil Spring - if I sing! lol.
November 3rd, 2018 07:29
Bring Spring To the World
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s fusions loss. Mind you I do post my fusion offerings here as well - seems a shame not to inflict them on a wider audience. lol
November 3rd, 2018 04:28
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s fusions loss. Mind you I do post my fusion offerings here as well - seems a shame not to inflict them on a wider audience. lol
November 3rd, 2018 04:28
You Will Search
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light always shine for you Lorna as your words bring light to us all.
November 2nd, 2018 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light always shine for you Lorna as your words bring light to us all.
November 2nd, 2018 09:00
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