Comments received on poems by Lorna



The Harvest Moon (September)
Fay Slimm. said:

Whoops sorry about misspelling your name my friend - meant to type Lorna

August 31st, 2018 04:49

The Harvest Moon (September)
Fay Slimm. said:

Simply lovely these few lines of wonderful moon-metaphor Laura - a really enjoyable read.

August 31st, 2018 04:49

Girded for Battle
Goldfinch60 said:

Every day we put our armour on for the battle and I am sure you look wonderful in your armour.

August 4th, 2018 01:04

Invisible
Poetic Dan said:

Well expressed
But I\'m afraid I see you so much more than this, although happy for you to sit where you wish.

August 3rd, 2018 14:34

Girded for Battle
Michael Edwards said:

Brill Lorna - was only listening to the great DW the other night - love the choice.

August 3rd, 2018 14:14

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Poetic Dan said:

Tunnne! With a perfect write that I blessed to read at sun set.
Thank you for joining me

August 3rd, 2018 14:10

Girded for Battle
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Listening to Don Williams
made me forget all about
my bad hair day!

Along with that adorable little GIF,
I love these lines...

“I artfully arrange my presentation...”
“As I attitude my hair...”

Awesome 👏🏻

~Laura~


August 3rd, 2018 09:35

Girded for Battle
Fay Slimm. said:

Well done you for doing such good poetic battle with daily destructive arrows friend - - I love the example of both those videos.

August 3rd, 2018 09:17

Girded for Battle
orchidee said:

No bad hair days for you then?! heehee.

August 3rd, 2018 08:57

Girded for Battle
Heartwriter said:

Loved this and the song!!!!!!

August 3rd, 2018 07:48

Invisible
orchidee said:

Yes, we see you, and see the fine poem too!

August 2nd, 2018 11:24

Invisible
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Great video with a great message as is your fine “little” penned poem! Enjoyed it!

~Laura~

August 2nd, 2018 07:41

Invisible
Michael Edwards said:

And so it should be - it\'s not who you are but what you are - great work Lorna

August 2nd, 2018 07:41

Invisible
dusk arising said:

Small as you wish to be, you reach out big to us readers.
Why does the fine writer wish invisibility? I know you not, but from words you place here, chinks of you appear. They are not frightening or ugly, and i keep looking.

August 2nd, 2018 06:41

Invisible
Heartwriter said:

I see you too. Nothing wrong with being small. Sometimes that\'s the best of all!

August 2nd, 2018 04:43

Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

I too can see you Lorna.

It amused me to see the ink and quill as I have just come back in with some fresh calligraphy inks.

August 2nd, 2018 03:40

The Surgeon Moon (August)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

JULY ~ She passes us by
AUGUST ~ Come she must

Thanks LORNA for an elegant POEM \'n PIC and a cool video. Love the tune and the lyrics !

AUGUST NIGHTS will \"light up\" for ANGELA & I because \"I\'m leavin\' on a Jet Plane ~ pity I\'ve got to come back again !\" On 14 August I\'m going to New Zealand to be with ANGELA for two weeks ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA XXXX

August 1st, 2018 10:57

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Michael Edwards said:

invokes great visions - much enjoyed Lorna.

August 1st, 2018 10:12

The Surgeon Moon (August)
orchidee said:

Surgeon or Sturgeon?! A fine write Lorna.

August 1st, 2018 07:58

The Surgeon Moon (August)
dusk arising said:

Lovely mind pictures accompany your words today. Thank you for light moments.

August 1st, 2018 07:13

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Heartwriter said:

Such a beauty in write and view!

August 1st, 2018 06:09

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully magical scene your pen painted today Lorna - - could imagine so easily I was there on the night August moon made her lake-ballet by here own light. - - a thrilling read

August 1st, 2018 05:48

What Breezes Bring
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Great quote and song!

With my eyes closed, I’m enjoying those breezes and gentle kisses! Thank you for sharing your great poem with such beautiful words!

One of my favorite lines...
“And sewn a patchwork of love
Out of the nothingness of air”...

~Laura~




July 31st, 2018 12:02

What Breezes Bring
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Lorna, may that breeze always kiss your face.

July 31st, 2018 07:58

Delightful Disconnect
sylviasearcher said:

I have images of kate bush doing ballet in the moors!

It\'s such a wild and wonderful image!

July 31st, 2018 07:30

What Breezes Bring
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Afternoon! lol.

July 31st, 2018 06:53

What Breezes Bring
Heartwriter said:

Very lovely Lorna. Comforting. Thank you.

July 31st, 2018 05:44

What Breezes Bring
sylviasearcher said:

That is a really beautiful poem.


July 31st, 2018 05:04

What Breezes Bring
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely read Lorna - a good start to my reading time. Great number too.

July 31st, 2018 04:56

Alone Together
Poetic Dan said:

I remember these moments
Wonderfully expressed
Keep on dreaming
You deserve happiness

July 31st, 2018 02:37



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