Comments received on poems by Lorna



The Surgeon Moon (August)
dusk arising said:

Lovely mind pictures accompany your words today. Thank you for light moments.

August 1st, 2018 07:13

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Heartwriter said:

Such a beauty in write and view!

August 1st, 2018 06:09

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully magical scene your pen painted today Lorna - - could imagine so easily I was there on the night August moon made her lake-ballet by here own light. - - a thrilling read

August 1st, 2018 05:48

What Breezes Bring
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,

Great quote and song!

With my eyes closed, Iā€™m enjoying those breezes and gentle kisses! Thank you for sharing your great poem with such beautiful words!

One of my favorite lines...
ā€œAnd sewn a patchwork of love
Out of the nothingness of airā€...

~Laura~




July 31st, 2018 12:02

What Breezes Bring
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Lorna, may that breeze always kiss your face.

July 31st, 2018 07:58

Delightful Disconnect
sylviasearcher said:

I have images of kate bush doing ballet in the moors!

It\'s such a wild and wonderful image!

July 31st, 2018 07:30

What Breezes Bring
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Afternoon! lol.

July 31st, 2018 06:53

What Breezes Bring
Heartwriter said:

Very lovely Lorna. Comforting. Thank you.

July 31st, 2018 05:44

What Breezes Bring
sylviasearcher said:

That is a really beautiful poem.


July 31st, 2018 05:04

What Breezes Bring
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely read Lorna - a good start to my reading time. Great number too.

July 31st, 2018 04:56

Alone Together
Poetic Dan said:

I remember these moments
Wonderfully expressed
Keep on dreaming
You deserve happiness

July 31st, 2018 02:37

Alone Together
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and can be so true. Glad you found the right way.

July 31st, 2018 01:18

Alone Together
Michael Edwards said:

Great little write Lorna - love it.

July 30th, 2018 10:51

Alone Together
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

July 30th, 2018 10:00

Alone Together
dusk arising said:

Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially when a feeling of freedom descends upon us after a failed pairing.
Such strong writing from you today.

July 30th, 2018 08:29

Alone Together
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,

Sentiments to behold!
Concise and precise!
Sad but beautifully stated!

~Laura~


July 30th, 2018 06:55

Delightful Disconnect
Poetic Dan said:

I will sing thoses notes
With the depth of my lungs
Thank you for a wonderful writing
With a well needed song
For a Monday morning

July 30th, 2018 04:40

Delightful Disconnect
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, those fields of time will always be there and waiting for us to dance with the wind all over them.

July 30th, 2018 00:21

Delightful Disconnect
Heartwriter said:

This was such a calming beautiful read. Adored it.

July 29th, 2018 20:39

Delightful Disconnect
orchidee said:

You flying? You got wings?!

July 29th, 2018 07:09

Delightful Disconnect
dusk arising said:

Beautiful ... like a dream.
You actually took my minds eye an a lovely daydream with this and it was pure pleasure.
Re-read. This is so beautiful its really reached into me like no other piece ever has on MPS.
This has to be my favourite of favourites.
I\'m going to show it to people, i hope you don\'t mind.

Big thank you for a wonderful piece of your creative mind today.

July 29th, 2018 06:35

Delightful Disconnect
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,

Sing to your heartā€™s content!
Let the music play!

Like that Simon & Garfunkel song.

Anytime I see that Parsley, Sage, Rosemary and Thyme album cover, it reminds me of roast pork and potatoes!
That reminds me to put down the iPhone and start cooking!


~Laura~

July 29th, 2018 05:41

Delightful Disconnect
Michael Edwards said:

Sounds like bliss -

July 29th, 2018 05:02

Delightful Disconnect
Lorna said:

It\'s harder than it sounds Hodge!

July 29th, 2018 04:59

Mourn Not
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write.
Good to see you back Lorna.

July 29th, 2018 00:52

Mourn Not
poetboy123 said:

Short and simple yet very powerful

July 28th, 2018 21:53

Mourn Not
Poetic Dan said:

This song was so beautiful and reading your words a few times, everything just felt as it should be.
I so glad to of met you on this wonderful journey

July 28th, 2018 17:43

Mourn Not
dusk arising said:

In my collection of poems are several which recall very happy times with lovers who broke my heart in the end. All were written recently, long after heartaches ceased. They are a reminder of pure joy and love in the happiest days of my life. Reading them brings it all back. I do hope that when i am much older and my memory does its floundering thing, reading them will still bring back the memories.
Why do i write all this, well they are my settings in a \'jewel like ring\' and tho they are not many, they are the \'songs i do sing\'. They are set free nonetheless.
Lovely flow to your poem.

July 28th, 2018 12:12

Mourn Not
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Lorna,

Not good to be sad...
for too long!
We have to let go and
remember the happy
and joyous times we
shared together!

Loved the video! She
was so inspirational...
and she still inspires
through her music!

~Laura~


July 28th, 2018 09:46

Mourn Not
Michael Edwards said:

You\'ve been missed - back with a good one.

July 28th, 2018 08:41



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