Comments received on poems by Lorna



Invisible
orchidee said:

Yes, we see you, and see the fine poem too!

August 2nd, 2018 11:24

Invisible
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Great video with a great message as is your fine ā€œlittleā€ penned poem! Enjoyed it!

~Laura~

August 2nd, 2018 07:41

Invisible
Michael Edwards said:

And so it should be - it\'s not who you are but what you are - great work Lorna

August 2nd, 2018 07:41

Invisible
dusk arising said:

Small as you wish to be, you reach out big to us readers.
Why does the fine writer wish invisibility? I know you not, but from words you place here, chinks of you appear. They are not frightening or ugly, and i keep looking.

August 2nd, 2018 06:41

Invisible
Heartwriter said:

I see you too. Nothing wrong with being small. Sometimes that\'s the best of all!

August 2nd, 2018 04:43

Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

I too can see you Lorna.

It amused me to see the ink and quill as I have just come back in with some fresh calligraphy inks.

August 2nd, 2018 03:40

The Surgeon Moon (August)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

JULY ~ She passes us by
AUGUST ~ Come she must

Thanks LORNA for an elegant POEM \'n PIC and a cool video. Love the tune and the lyrics !

AUGUST NIGHTS will \"light up\" for ANGELA & I because \"I\'m leavin\' on a Jet Plane ~ pity I\'ve got to come back again !\" On 14 August I\'m going to New Zealand to be with ANGELA for two weeks ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN & ANGELA XXXX

August 1st, 2018 10:57

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Michael Edwards said:

invokes great visions - much enjoyed Lorna.

August 1st, 2018 10:12

The Surgeon Moon (August)
orchidee said:

Surgeon or Sturgeon?! A fine write Lorna.

August 1st, 2018 07:58

The Surgeon Moon (August)
dusk arising said:

Lovely mind pictures accompany your words today. Thank you for light moments.

August 1st, 2018 07:13

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Heartwriter said:

Such a beauty in write and view!

August 1st, 2018 06:09

The Surgeon Moon (August)
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully magical scene your pen painted today Lorna - - could imagine so easily I was there on the night August moon made her lake-ballet by here own light. - - a thrilling read

August 1st, 2018 05:48

What Breezes Bring
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Great quote and song!

With my eyes closed, I’m enjoying those breezes and gentle kisses! Thank you for sharing your great poem with such beautiful words!

One of my favorite lines...
ā€œAnd sewn a patchwork of love
Out of the nothingness of airā€...

~Laura~




July 31st, 2018 12:02

What Breezes Bring
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Lorna, may that breeze always kiss your face.

July 31st, 2018 07:58

Delightful Disconnect
sylviasearcher said:

I have images of kate bush doing ballet in the moors!

It\'s such a wild and wonderful image!

July 31st, 2018 07:30

What Breezes Bring
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Afternoon! lol.

July 31st, 2018 06:53

What Breezes Bring
Heartwriter said:

Very lovely Lorna. Comforting. Thank you.

July 31st, 2018 05:44

What Breezes Bring
sylviasearcher said:

That is a really beautiful poem.


July 31st, 2018 05:04

What Breezes Bring
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely read Lorna - a good start to my reading time. Great number too.

July 31st, 2018 04:56

Alone Together
Poetic Dan said:

I remember these moments
Wonderfully expressed
Keep on dreaming
You deserve happiness

July 31st, 2018 02:37

Alone Together
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and can be so true. Glad you found the right way.

July 31st, 2018 01:18

Alone Together
Michael Edwards said:

Great little write Lorna - love it.

July 30th, 2018 10:51

Alone Together
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

July 30th, 2018 10:00

Alone Together
dusk arising said:

Romances and pairings can teach us such a lot about ourselves. Especially when a feeling of freedom descends upon us after a failed pairing.
Such strong writing from you today.

July 30th, 2018 08:29

Alone Together
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Sentiments to behold!
Concise and precise!
Sad but beautifully stated!

~Laura~


July 30th, 2018 06:55

Delightful Disconnect
Poetic Dan said:

I will sing thoses notes
With the depth of my lungs
Thank you for a wonderful writing
With a well needed song
For a Monday morning

July 30th, 2018 04:40

Delightful Disconnect
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, those fields of time will always be there and waiting for us to dance with the wind all over them.

July 30th, 2018 00:21

Delightful Disconnect
Heartwriter said:

This was such a calming beautiful read. Adored it.

July 29th, 2018 20:39

Delightful Disconnect
orchidee said:

You flying? You got wings?!

July 29th, 2018 07:09

Delightful Disconnect
dusk arising said:

Beautiful ... like a dream.
You actually took my minds eye an a lovely daydream with this and it was pure pleasure.
Re-read. This is so beautiful its really reached into me like no other piece ever has on MPS.
This has to be my favourite of favourites.
I\'m going to show it to people, i hope you don\'t mind.

Big thank you for a wonderful piece of your creative mind today.

July 29th, 2018 06:35



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