Comments received on poems by Lorna



Blue Silence
MaggieF said:

Lorna, your poem reinforces mindfulness, being in the moment, it will make me look more closely at my own flowers. Beautiful. Maggie

September 9th, 2018 14:22

Blue Silence
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Lorna, the fading of flowers can be so wonderful.

The Sound of Silence, and all of Simon and Garfunkel\'s recordings, is great. It is one of the numbers that is sung in the Community Choir of which I am a founder member.

September 9th, 2018 00:52

Blue Silence
onepauly said:

excellent!
it is very meaningful.
I have two cd\'s from
simon and garfunkle.
and when they play that song
I feel mellow.




September 9th, 2018 00:32

Blue Silence
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

September 8th, 2018 10:54

Blue Silence
Michael Edwards said:

We dry a bunch of hydrangeas every year - the colours are fantastic. And so is this gem of a write dear Lorna

September 8th, 2018 10:13

Blue Silence
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

You’ve written a gem! You’ve penned the most beautiful, meaningful poem with so much intended meaning...metaphorically stunning!
Love the pic...
and the song is one of my favorites!
You’ve assembled a great 🎁 with ❤️!

~Laura~



September 8th, 2018 09:16

Blue Silence
kevin browne said:

So Gentile, smooth and a relaxing little thought out poem. Quite beautiful, Lorna.

September 8th, 2018 09:05

In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, the light is always there.

The Flanders and Swann song is quite o a coincidence as I heard one on the radio this morning and gave written a poem about it which I will post tomorrow.

September 7th, 2018 07:56

In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version)
Michael Edwards said:

Just brilliant not only for the smile but also for the construction - love Lorna.

September 7th, 2018 05:11

In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version)
orchidee said:

That\'s a lot of weather there Lorna!

September 7th, 2018 04:22

In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version)
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the flow in this gem of an ode to inclement weather . Great read Lorna dear friend.

September 7th, 2018 04:21

6 am Quandry
Poetic Dan said:

Don\'t think I have ever willingly stayed in bed. Great work, my inner child says be fearless and brave! With a little wave

September 7th, 2018 03:09

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Michael Edwards said:

A beautiful wee write Lorna

September 6th, 2018 08:29

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Goldfinch60 said:

Delightful write, we do not have humming birds in the UK they must be magic to watch.

September 6th, 2018 07:47

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

“Among the hyssops
Still standing in the fading garden “

“Off and away before the Harvest Moon”

A message beautifully delivered by your deliberate and thoughtful choice of words. I very much enjoyed this write and the clip that is accompanying your poem!

This has a sense of finality, but also the sense of a fragranced NEW BEGINNING!

~Laura~


September 6th, 2018 06:35

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

I luv hummingbirds so I admired this lil poem and you employed them so uniquely and awesomely in muse here wow. Luv your wording. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 06:10

The Hummingbird\'s Farewell
orchidee said:

A delightful write Lorna.

September 6th, 2018 05:07

I Know You - I Hear You
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. Aww, why they say to me \'Don\'t hurry back\' and \'We\'ll let you know\', when they have heard my singing?! lol

September 4th, 2018 12:10

I Know You - I Hear You
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Beautiful quote along with a great song by Emmylou Harris and Don Williams! It says a lot, but your poem says much more!
I am truly moved by your words!

~Laura~

September 4th, 2018 09:06

I Know You - I Hear You
Lorna said:

Thanks Andy....

September 4th, 2018 08:01

I Know You - I Hear You
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write Lorna.

September 4th, 2018 07:54

6 am Quandry
orchidee said:

What time is it? A quarter past Summer? or half past Autumn? or what?! Good write Lorna.

September 3rd, 2018 10:35

6 am Quandry
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ Love MORRISY always original ! Only once or twice in the last 20 years (16 to 35) have I woken up got out of bed and then ~ on impulse said \"DAMN IT\" and got back in again ~ and stayed there all day dozing & dreaming ~ Very Cathartic. Since I joined MPS I\'m up at 5:30 am (GMT) hoping to be in MPS Pole Position ~ only achieved it once ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN🧡 Please check our latest POEMS ~ Thanks B.

September 3rd, 2018 08:56

6 am Quandry
Lorna said:

Only kidding...... I\'m long up and \"at em\".............

September 3rd, 2018 08:06

6 am Quandry
Michael Edwards said:

Stay where you are - enjoy the rest - great lines Lorna

September 3rd, 2018 08:05

The Harvest Moon (September)
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully done and well chosen song
September is the month I came to this plane
Thank you for being perfectly you and writing to share your light.


September 2nd, 2018 06:09

The Harvest Moon (September)
Michael Edwards said:

Great scribe very atmospheric - good to see you back.

August 31st, 2018 09:39

The Harvest Moon (September)
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

How are you? Missed you!
Thank you for sharing your poem and video! Enjoyed them. Looking forward to Autumn 🍂!
This humid and hot August has been unbearable!

Sending love your way...

~Laura~



August 31st, 2018 09:16

The Harvest Moon (September)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see you back, the harvest moon bringing the wonder of autumn to us, my favourite time of the year.

August 31st, 2018 08:06

The Harvest Moon (September)
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

August 31st, 2018 06:50



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