Comments received on poems by Lorna
Having To Let You Go
dusk arising said:
Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the beauty we encounter as we travel onward to who knows where. Loving the world around us and those here who we love today enrich our lives and build our loving personality. People along the way say goodbye to us too.
February 24th, 2018 15:18
dusk arising said:
Letting go of such small wonders as you list enables us to greet the beauty we encounter as we travel onward to who knows where. Loving the world around us and those here who we love today enrich our lives and build our loving personality. People along the way say goodbye to us too.
February 24th, 2018 15:18
Having To Let You Go
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, your poem is a gem. It is filled with gentleness, love, and regret. The emotions come through between the lines. It says, yes, we have to say goodbye, but we have the memories, we have experienced something beautiful, like that flower, that smile, that moon. Even though we will walk alone, the memories will be with us every step. Beautiful poem!
February 24th, 2018 14:06
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, your poem is a gem. It is filled with gentleness, love, and regret. The emotions come through between the lines. It says, yes, we have to say goodbye, but we have the memories, we have experienced something beautiful, like that flower, that smile, that moon. Even though we will walk alone, the memories will be with us every step. Beautiful poem!
February 24th, 2018 14:06
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Accidental Poet said:
This is a fantastic poem Lorna. Felt like I was on that ship with you.
February 24th, 2018 08:03
Accidental Poet said:
This is a fantastic poem Lorna. Felt like I was on that ship with you.
February 24th, 2018 08:03
Having To Let You Go
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy to watch a loved one pass. I was there when my adoptive mother past on as she slowly slipped away. I\'m guessing this poem is for your Dad. Please know our thoughts are with you and your family. He lives on in you.
February 24th, 2018 07:59
Accidental Poet said:
Not easy to watch a loved one pass. I was there when my adoptive mother past on as she slowly slipped away. I\'m guessing this poem is for your Dad. Please know our thoughts are with you and your family. He lives on in you.
February 24th, 2018 07:59
Having To Let You Go
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a lovely work and so is your addition to Kat\'s Fusion poem - great work.
February 24th, 2018 07:15
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a lovely work and so is your addition to Kat\'s Fusion poem - great work.
February 24th, 2018 07:15
Having To Let You Go
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Lorna.
Meanwhile - you mean me? You saying goodbye to me! I\'m not going. I\'ll stay for ever, but I\'ll sing for ever too! Can ya bear it?! You\'ll be wishing you had said goodbye to me! heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:12
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Lorna.
Meanwhile - you mean me? You saying goodbye to me! I\'m not going. I\'ll stay for ever, but I\'ll sing for ever too! Can ya bear it?! You\'ll be wishing you had said goodbye to me! heehee.
February 24th, 2018 07:12
Having To Let You Go
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so deeply - - hoping this sad verse is not from experience Lorna
February 24th, 2018 05:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with anguish of heart as loss gets nearer these words sink so deeply - - hoping this sad verse is not from experience Lorna
February 24th, 2018 05:48
Having To Let You Go
Wallace said:
Love the poem and love the drawing.
So mystical.
February 24th, 2018 05:44
Wallace said:
Love the poem and love the drawing.
So mystical.
February 24th, 2018 05:44
Having To Let You Go
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
just a beautiful piece about loss, with a subtle flow that threads a heart-felt message
much warmth
Michael :)
February 24th, 2018 05:29
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
just a beautiful piece about loss, with a subtle flow that threads a heart-felt message
much warmth
Michael :)
February 24th, 2018 05:29
Having To Let You Go
Laura🌻 said:
A sad but beautiful write, Lorna!
I am with her every day. I see the clock that tics and tocs. She says she’s ready, but I am not!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 04:57
Laura🌻 said:
A sad but beautiful write, Lorna!
I am with her every day. I see the clock that tics and tocs. She says she’s ready, but I am not!
~Laura~
February 24th, 2018 04:57
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
February 24th, 2018 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with great imagery.
February 24th, 2018 01:22
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful sailor\'s farewell Lorna.
Aye Captain, let the sails fill with adventure our hearts with love.
February 23rd, 2018 12:08
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful sailor\'s farewell Lorna.
Aye Captain, let the sails fill with adventure our hearts with love.
February 23rd, 2018 12:08
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A beautiful nostalgic(for me)visual and write!
A bit sad, but also hopeful!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:55
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A beautiful nostalgic(for me)visual and write!
A bit sad, but also hopeful!
~Laura~
February 23rd, 2018 11:55
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Jamie said:
Very imageful (c. M.E.) indeed. Speaks of the sailor in all of us and the many voyages we must take. Thanks for sharing this, Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 11:03
Jamie said:
Very imageful (c. M.E.) indeed. Speaks of the sailor in all of us and the many voyages we must take. Thanks for sharing this, Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 11:03
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Michael Edwards said:
Very imageful (just invented that word (c) ) and a fine write Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 10:44
Michael Edwards said:
Very imageful (just invented that word (c) ) and a fine write Lorna
February 23rd, 2018 10:44
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
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Laura🌻 said:
A great write for a
fun read, Lorna!
A good way to start
the day..and I don’t
mean yoga!😂
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 11:20
Laura🌻 said:
A great write for a
fun read, Lorna!
A good way to start
the day..and I don’t
mean yoga!😂
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 11:20
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FredPeyer said:
Lorna, you just made my day! While all stanzas are good, I especially like nos. 5 & 6! I think yoga was invented by skinny masorchists!
February 21st, 2018 10:32
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, you just made my day! While all stanzas are good, I especially like nos. 5 & 6! I think yoga was invented by skinny masorchists!
February 21st, 2018 10:32
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FineB said:
Thank you Lorna!
What a charming poem!
Lovely!
I walk as a hobby!
My way of de-stressing!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:10
FineB said:
Thank you Lorna!
What a charming poem!
Lovely!
I walk as a hobby!
My way of de-stressing!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:10
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Michael Edwards said:
This is a real hoot with a touch of Pam Ayres but decidedly your own - loved it.
February 21st, 2018 07:14
Michael Edwards said:
This is a real hoot with a touch of Pam Ayres but decidedly your own - loved it.
February 21st, 2018 07:14
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Goldfinch60 said:
What position did you use to write this poem.
Good fun write Laura.
February 21st, 2018 04:08
Goldfinch60 said:
What position did you use to write this poem.
Good fun write Laura.
February 21st, 2018 04:08
I\'ll Read the Clouds
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic great write!
February 20th, 2018 12:57
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic great write!
February 20th, 2018 12:57
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