Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
Fay Slimm. said:
The art of leaving behind things of the past put so succinctly in this lovely verse - thank you for sharing both image and words with us Lorna.
February 23rd, 2018 07:32
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
Lorna said:
Sadly that\'s true isn\'t it............
February 23rd, 2018 07:10
The Sailor\'s Farewell
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Nicholas Browning said:
Strangely calming, as if it\'s saying that no matter what happens or where you go in life, you must move on.
Nice.
February 23rd, 2018 07:04
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, I was sailing with you.
February 23rd, 2018 01:34
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Michael Edwards said:
Great write Lorna - the worst part of travel is always returning to reality.
February 22nd, 2018 09:10
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Christina8 said:
That\'s a very good poem! Great imagination. Love the rhymes.
February 22nd, 2018 07:20
Aye! That\'s Us Away!
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
orchidee said:
Aww, and then it was all over. Too soon?! Good write L.
February 22nd, 2018 06:54
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Laura🌻 said:
A great write for a
fun read, Lorna!
A good way to start
the day..and I don’t
mean yoga!😂
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 11:20
Laura🌻 said:
A great write for a
fun read, Lorna!
A good way to start
the day..and I don’t
mean yoga!😂
~Laura~
February 21st, 2018 11:20
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FredPeyer said:
Lorna, you just made my day! While all stanzas are good, I especially like nos. 5 & 6! I think yoga was invented by skinny masorchists!
February 21st, 2018 10:32
FredPeyer said:
Lorna, you just made my day! While all stanzas are good, I especially like nos. 5 & 6! I think yoga was invented by skinny masorchists!
February 21st, 2018 10:32
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FineB said:
Thank you Lorna!
What a charming poem!
Lovely!
I walk as a hobby!
My way of de-stressing!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:10
FineB said:
Thank you Lorna!
What a charming poem!
Lovely!
I walk as a hobby!
My way of de-stressing!
Keep writing
FineB
February 21st, 2018 10:10
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Michael Edwards said:
This is a real hoot with a touch of Pam Ayres but decidedly your own - loved it.
February 21st, 2018 07:14
Michael Edwards said:
This is a real hoot with a touch of Pam Ayres but decidedly your own - loved it.
February 21st, 2018 07:14
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Goldfinch60 said:
What position did you use to write this poem.
Good fun write Laura.
February 21st, 2018 04:08
Goldfinch60 said:
What position did you use to write this poem.
Good fun write Laura.
February 21st, 2018 04:08
I\'ll Read the Clouds
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic great write!
February 20th, 2018 12:57
olivergreenwood19 said:
This is fantastic great write!
February 20th, 2018 12:57
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
Clouds always fascinated
me! One of my favorite
units in our school science
curriculum to teach seven
year olds! They were in awe! The names fascinated them! I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 10:00
Laura🌻 said:
A great write, Lorna!
Clouds always fascinated
me! One of my favorite
units in our school science
curriculum to teach seven
year olds! They were in awe! The names fascinated them! I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 20th, 2018 10:00
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in the clouds.
February 20th, 2018 08:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in the clouds.
February 20th, 2018 08:45
I\'ll Read the Clouds
Michael Edwards said:
A superb write - love every word and into favs - first for a long time.
February 20th, 2018 06:58
Michael Edwards said:
A superb write - love every word and into favs - first for a long time.
February 20th, 2018 06:58
I\'ll Read the Clouds
orchidee said:
You read those clouds, Lorna? I tried to, but it was a cloudless sky. I wondered why I didn\'t get very far with it, doh! heehee. A fine write there.
February 20th, 2018 05:23
orchidee said:
You read those clouds, Lorna? I tried to, but it was a cloudless sky. I wondered why I didn\'t get very far with it, doh! heehee. A fine write there.
February 20th, 2018 05:23
The Last Rail Ticket
Lorna said:
Thanks for all your much appreciated comments......
February 20th, 2018 04:48
Lorna said:
Thanks for all your much appreciated comments......
February 20th, 2018 04:48
The Last Rail Ticket
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Laura and great imagery.
February 20th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Laura and great imagery.
February 20th, 2018 01:19
The Last Rail Ticket
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s in a realm where perfection can be and is a respite from such days as midwinter brings. I\'m sure we all have these places and we daydream.
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if when we daydreamed our imaginations could actually meet up and play like the children we\'ve forgotten we really still are!
Hope this cheered you up.
February 19th, 2018 08:12
dusk arising said:
I\'m sure there\'s a place in your mind you visit quite regularly. It\'s in a realm where perfection can be and is a respite from such days as midwinter brings. I\'m sure we all have these places and we daydream.
Wouldn\'t it be wonderful if when we daydreamed our imaginations could actually meet up and play like the children we\'ve forgotten we really still are!
Hope this cheered you up.
February 19th, 2018 08:12
The Last Rail Ticket
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the flow and formation of this verse Lorna. An excellent read.
February 19th, 2018 08:06
The Last Rail Ticket
Michael Edwards said:
This brought the picture right into my mind - a great work Lorna
February 19th, 2018 07:19
Michael Edwards said:
This brought the picture right into my mind - a great work Lorna
February 19th, 2018 07:19
The Last Rail Ticket
orchidee said:
Where ya going? So ya are not coming back, then? it is a one-way ticket? heehee. oohhh.
February 19th, 2018 06:17
orchidee said:
Where ya going? So ya are not coming back, then? it is a one-way ticket? heehee. oohhh.
February 19th, 2018 06:17
The Last Rail Ticket
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Change and decay
In all around I see !
O Thou who changes not
Abide with Me !
Yes indeed LAURA all \"living things ~ change and decay ~ including ourselves and our Loved ones. But GOD never changes and I have FAITH when my last Train comes I am assured of a place in GLORY ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 06:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Change and decay
In all around I see !
O Thou who changes not
Abide with Me !
Yes indeed LAURA all \"living things ~ change and decay ~ including ourselves and our Loved ones. But GOD never changes and I have FAITH when my last Train comes I am assured of a place in GLORY ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing BRIAN
February 19th, 2018 06:13
God\'s Mistake
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
February 19th, 2018 01:06
God\'s Mistake
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
dusk arising said:
I really am a big fan of the \'less is more\' school of poetry and yours here today is a gem Lorna. Goes into my favs
February 18th, 2018 21:37
God\'s Mistake
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
Michael Edwards said:
I am so sorry to have to agree with you Lorna - sadly the evil in this world has been driven by man and his mistaken beliefs and ego - and I guess it will ever be thus. Great poem.
February 18th, 2018 10:43
God\'s Mistake
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
There is a lot of TRUTH in what you say . We are fortunate to live on Planet Earth which is the only LIVING PLANET in the Solar System ~ and possibly the MILKY WAY. Life on Earth is kept in EQUALIBRIUM by Natural Cycles ~ Powered by the SUN. Water Cycle ~ Nitrogen Cycle ~ Carbon Cycle ~ Oxygen cycle etc. The Flora & Fauna are part of these cycles and before the Industrial Revolution ~ Nature mined the CO2 content of the Atmosphere at 250ppm it is now 400ppm (and rising !) This has caused the ambient temperature to rise from 15 to 16C and sea level to rise by 6 inches due to melting of the ice caps etc and the oceans are polluted by PLASTIC to the detriment of Marine Life. The \"Vicious Little Virus with the Big Ego\" is only a minute fraction of \"Life on Earth\" but the damage He causes is a billion times more ! Not content to live as a \"BUSHMAN\" ~ in harmony with Nature ~ he morphed into \"HITECHMAN\" and is slowly killing Planet Earth and there is nowhere else for us to GO ! MAN has increased CO2 ~Ambient Temperature ~ Cut down Forests ~ Increased Desserts ~ Concreted over arable land ~ and reversibly polluted the ~ atmosphere ~ the hydrosphere and the biosphere ! If you have GREAT-GRANDCHILDREN ~ CRY FOR THEM NOW ~ because by 2100 most of Planet Earth will not be fit for the projected Human Population of 16 Billion ~ I rest my case ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 18th, 2018 08:54
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